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Posted: 16 years ago
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Your Welcome buddy..yes of course dear have to like the next parts as well..after all u are the one who is writing it! 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello ppl here is u r new part 😉............i hav posted 2 back to parts back to back hope u ll enjoy it........
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The mission

Veer n gang stays in the outskirts of the jungle tht night. They lit the fire in bet n were leaning on the trees surrounding it.

Every one was thinking about tht encounter ''''..

Arjun: kitni sundar hain na vo''..

Veer: ignited : sundar'''.? '''..shayad thi lakin uspe use kitna ghamand hai'''''

Dharam: mmnhu'..ghamand???..tumnne dekha nahi veer ki vo kitna bhadak gayin thi 'jab maine unhe khuubsuurat kaha tha''..

Sanjum: hain.

Veer: acha , acha theek hai ''..(he didn't anybody praising her )

Chan: vayse ek baat toh maanni padegi''..yeh uski daen hai ki hum yahan hain'..

Veer: koi daen vaen nahi hai , agar vo nahi aati toh sab daakoon ka khaatmaa ho jaata'( shaking his head)

Dharam: veer ''.. , tumne dehka nahi tha kya wahan sirf use ladki ke peche pachaas log the aur agar sab log mila diya jaaye toh pata nahi kitne honge''.

Veer: lakin ''., use kya lagta hai''ke mai use chuna chahata tha''.mai toh use'.

Pundeer: veer tum galat samajh rahe ho '.

Sanjum: ladkiyaan aysi hi hoti hain'..agar unhe koi anjaan insaan aake use pakad le toh''

Veer: achaa .., lakin vo', vo jootikaa aysi nahi hai''..

Dharam: hain kyunki tum uske dost ho veer '''''aur saari ladkiyaan ek jayse nahi hoti hain''..

Veer: lakin, use thapad nahi maarna cahiye tha'''..

Every one smirked

Dharam : vo toh hai lakin tumhe usse aysa nahi kehna tha '

Pundeer: yeh tumhe ho kya gaya tha veer , tumhe itni jaldi gusa toh kabhi nahi aata '''.aur vo bhi ek ladki pe'''.

Veer: looking at the sky..: pata nahi, kyun itna gusa ho gaya tha mai''ke mera mujh pe kyun nahi chal raha tha,,,,,,,

Every one goes to sleep''''.

Veer n party reaches Raj mehal. Then they gets a call from Darbaar

There was a guptchar informing Maharaj Aryavardhan tht the lower caste ppl are going to revolt soon''..

Veer : aysa nahi, ho sakta hai mamaaji..( in a serious tone ), kyunki hamaare raajye mai toh hum sab ka khayaal rakhte hain,'.

Dharam: hain pitaji ''.( looking at the guptchar)

Lagta hai koi afvaah phalaai gayi hai,'''.

Guptchar : nahi rajkumaar khabhar bilkul pakki hai ''..aur yeh bhi sune mai aaya hai ki koteshwar mandir ki yatra mai is baar vo hatyaar yehan laya jaaye ga'.

MA: kya''''.aur'

JV: aur isiliye mai kehta hoon 'ki jise jahan rakhna hai vahi rakhna cahiye '.lakin aap is veer ki baate sunkar''..

Veer: fighting back: kyun ,kya (waving his hand) vo insaan nahi hote'..( in a sarcastic but serious tone looking straight into his eyes)'''.

MA: mai jaanta hoon beta '.aur abb aage kya soocha hai?

Veer: thinking hard :mujhe lagta hai ki yeh khabar sach hai ki yatra mai hatyaar laaye jaayenge '''''..lekin mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh aam log apne raja ke khilaaf khade honge '''''.(speaking more to himself) agar hum dusre raajayon ki baat kare toh alag baat hai'..lakin haamaare rajya mai'..

At last he says in his strong voice : mamaji 'mujhe lagta hai ke pehle humme is bare mai hamaare aavaam ko batana hoga ''..

JV: frustrated : yeh pagal ho gaya hai '''.

N very one looks angrily at him dharam opens his mouth but

AV: raises his hand to stops him:yeh baat hum har kisi ko toh bata nahi sakte hain na veer''.

Veer : looking straight into his eyes : hum unhe puuri baat nahi batayenge ''''' hain lakin ''''' isse logo ka apne raja ke leye aadar aur badega ki unke raja ko apne praja pe pura bharosa hai''..(n turning his back to them thinking hard) aur isse hamara duhman aagaah ho jayega''..aur jab choor saavdhaan ho kar saare sabuut mitaane ki koshish karta hai ,(turning to them) ,par galti se vo'.koi na koi sabuut chod kar zaroor jaata hai''''..

JV: koi samjhao ise'''''.yeh pagal'..

AV:theek kaha tumne veer ( impressed) '..hum logo ko apni praja par bharosa hona cahiye'''..hum logo ko abhi nikalte hain''.

Everyone goes to the territory '''' veer address the ppl n tells them tht they trust them n they wll sort this out very quickly very soon n ofcourse they do trust them''''''

Dharam stays in mehal only.

Then veer n gang hiding goes to meet a guptchar , to confirm the news of yatra''''.. wl'..it was confirmed'''.

N wen they were returning back ''''''''.

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Edited by junglli billi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here is u r next part guzs

J😛ab they met

And wen they were returning back. Veer had the same feeling and sense '''''.wen he met sumyukta ''but this time he avoided tht ''''''''''''.. he went away from the forest '.. something strong was pulling him back ''thn they heard a scream '''''''..

He quickly goes to the direction of the noise accompanied by his frds '. He saw a person in black clothes n the face was covered in only eyes were visible '.he was terrifying a merchant n his mouth was bleeding

( she was shera n had a sword in her hand ')

Veer got down off his horse so does others

Veer: shouts going near her pulling his sword out ''''''. He gets a familiar fragrance, but ignores it : chod do use'''

Sumy: looks at him n gets irritated at the sight of his:tum?(in a squeaking voice ) chale jao yahan se .yahan tumhara koi kaam nahi hai''

Veer: shudders: she was a girl :he looks at his frds'.

Arjun: mai jaata hoon'.. ( taking out his sword )

Sumy: blocks his every try of hurting her n at last wen he turned she him a scratch on his back ''''''''''''''.he falls down

Veer: shouts worst but deep in his heart he was impressed too '..she was really good''''''.

Sanjum: mai jaata hoon:she hurts his hand'

Sumy: turns to veer : bassss?( wit hatred in her voice )'

Chand: abb mai ise nahi chodunga''

Veer: nahi'.( he didn't want his frds to get hurt '''..)

Chand: lakin veer tum to '.

Veer: goes to her : tum'tum ek ladki hokar ek kipe,istarah se atyachaar kar rahi ho?

Sumy:tum se matlab?......kyun?'., kya yeh huqk sirf tum ladko ke pass hota hai?

Veer : calmly: tum kesi kamzoor par atyachar kar rahi ho'.

Sumy:irritated: bethar hoga, agar tum apne kaam se kaaam rakho''''.aur hain ,,,,,yeh kamzoor nahi hai''.. hum kisi kamzoor par atyaachaar nahi karte hain ,,,,,,,, samjhe???

Veer: vo to dekh hi raha hai''..

Sumy:toh lado humse

Veer: mai ladkiyon se nahi pe waar nahi karta ''''''''''.

Sumy: kyunki ''.,kyuki tum darte ho.

N wit this she charges on him wit her sword'.veer doges it ..

Veer: dekho',,,,chod do ise'.

Sumy: ignited: kabhi nahi '''.

Veer doges her sword again n again

She was really good he thinks ..and he flung aside'''''.

The merchant escaped''she notices tht n shouts .veer taking the opportunity '. Goes behind her taking her sword hand back of her wit his left hand n holding her neck wit his rt arm '..

Veer: dekho'..vo toh gaya'.isiliye yudh mai kabhi apne dhyan ko bhatak ne nahi dena chahiye'..( he says enthusiastically)

She was struggling unable catch hold of him'..

sumy: chodo do humme '..(she says weeping) humme dard ho rahahai'''''.

(as she was trying to break free from '.she gets hurt on her leg wit her sword only'..)

Veer: somtin flinched inside him , he lets her go n she turns n was about to fall 'he holds her in his arms bending close to her ''''''..and gets astonished she was the same girl but in different attire ' it seemed to him'''''''''. Probably he was unable to praise her beauty before properly'''

She was awesome , she had great hazel eyes but now they were misty,her cheeks flushed red , n her lips pink. But he suddenly felt tht her eyes had hatred in filled in her eyes for him'he tries to straighten her but she sits down clutching her leg ''in verge of tears ''.she didn't want to show it but her pain was beyond her tolerance '.

Then rampyarre comes calling for her she wipes her tears quickly n asks him to give his hand n she silently heads to the tree which had a dais '.

Veer watches her perplexed n looks down 'there was blood on the ground of her leg'( somthin hard falls in his stomach ''.. he feels he shouldn't hav hurt her '.)

Veer: heavily: dekho mujhe , mujhe '.maaf kado'mai tumhe chot'(turning to her)

Sumyukta: she turns to him furiously : screeches : bas '( showing her free hand to stop her voice trembling wit anger) bas''.. tumhe pata hai , hum usse kyun dara rahe the? 'Usne apne bhai ko,dhokha diya hai'..isliliye, hum uski saamaagri ( goods and things) leke uske bhai ko dene wale the,lakin tumhari , sirf tumhari vajaha se vo , bhag gaya'

Agli baar, agar tumne hamaare saath aysa- vaysa kuch kiya,toh'toh hum tumhari, jaan lelenge '''..aur haan '.humme tumse '., aur tumhaare chere se nafrat se ho gayi hai''.,,, samjhe tum????? Nafrat karte hain hum tumse'''.duur rehna humse 'samjhe????

She wipes her tears n goes to sit on the dais '..

Veer felt as though he was cut by some icy knife. First time in his life he hav judged a person wrong n give pain too. He was feeling strange ''he didn't lik wen he said tht she hates him'''''''.

She was trying to hide her tears ,she couldn't go back .the merchant took her horse''..as she cant walk back she asks rampyaare to bring palki for her . but they far in jungle from their point .

Rampyaare:lakin tum.

Sumy:takes her sword out n puts it on his neck (furiously):jaldi jao'.

Rampyaare: hain'.hain mai jaata hoon'.

Sumy: aur hain, dhayaan rahe, kesi ko pata nahi chalna cahiye'..aur mayaank(her best frd) se kehna '.ke us bevakuuf zamindaar ko,pakale, hum use nahi chodenge'.

He goes of ''''''.

Veer suggests her to drop her but she denies . so they decides to wait for her ppl to com'

They were sitting away. She didn't c them n thinking tht no one is there she weeps terribly with her legs folded to her chest n her hands around it burying her face on her knees '''

Veer goes to c her n feels damn guilty her leg was still bleeding so he makes lape n goes to her ..

Veer: vo'vo mujhe maaf kar do'.mujhe nahi pata nahi tha ''

Sumy: looks at him ,her face red shouts : tum?,'.,,,',,,tum yahan kya kar rahe ho'? Chale jao, yahan se ''..

Veer: givin her an evil look: mujhe'bhi koi shook nahi hai'., yahan aake, tumse baat karne ki,mai toh bas ,yeh lape( moving his hand forward n showin her)

Sumy: humme tumhari koi jaroorat nahi hai ''

Veer: dekh raha hai'..(smirks a lill) yeh lo lagana hai to lagalo varna nahi'aur hain..yahan se bhaag ne koshish mat karna '.pakdi jaogi''(he goes)

Sumy:shouts after him: tum pagal ho'.

Veer : turns at her wit his killing smile n blinks at her : jaanta hoon'.(n goes off)
she looks at him perplexed him while he goes off'.wat was tht she thinks. It was as though she went into some other world his world''''.

Veer goes to check on her a bit later again'n she was still sitting there but she didn't touch the lape so his decides to frds threaten her to apply the lape''''' she gets up wit the help of the tree '.

Sanjum: yeh lape lagalo'.

Sumy: coldly: nahi lagayenge'''''.

Pundeer:mat bhulo ke tum akeli ho ''aur hum che ''''''hum khud zabardasti lagadenge''''fir mat kehna ki hummne tumhe haath lagaya'.

Sumy: her eyes widens ,frustrated weeping: tum chahe, kuch bhi karlo ,hum nahi lagayenge '.'chale jaao hain se , akele chodo humme (she slips down the tree weeps again she wit her hands on her face)

Pundeer: opens his mouth: Sanjum stops him: ladkiyon se ayse baat nahi karten,,,,,,'''..

sanjum but he goes near to her unable to stop him self (soothingly) :dekho'vo'mai

Sumy: looks at him shrilly: tumhe samajh mai nahi'

Veer: goes close to hr :tum itni zidi kyun ho'.(searching her face wit his eyes) yeh ,lape lagalo''..dard kam ho jayega''..

Sumy:didn't had any choice , she bits her lower lip swearing she wil take the revenge for definite n apply a bit but screams: humme nahi lagana, bohut jalta hai'''..(giving it away''.)

Veers gang leaves both alone ''''

The cut was really deep'''..veer forcefully straightens her leg n applies it 'she screams a lil again but veer lovingly blows air to it n looks at her for a sec and lost some track of time,

then veer asks : Abb theek hai'''''

sumy: pulls her leg to herself wit her eyes down( knowing tht his eyes are on her) ( n wit a beautiful stiff smile on her face ) nods: hain'.( then looks at him)

He goes away'''..

She have had enough so she tried to escape, it was already eve n no one has come '' wen she was trying to sneak out she heard some voices n she goes near'''''..

Veer was striding up and down ''..

arjun: tumne dekha nahi ',vo apne aasuo ko humse chipa ki koshish kar rahi thi?????

Sanjum: Arjun tumhe us se iss tarah se baat nahi karni cahiye thi'.

Pundeer : bas veer''..,bas karo''.

Veer stops n turns :kitni ajeeb hai hai ,yeh ladki'..

Sanjum : hain vo to hai ,,,,daakoo hai ,lakin lagti nahi hai'.

Veer: mai uski baat nahi kar raha hoon'.., ( bit annoyed ,waving his hand ) kitni', kitni ziddi hai???....sirf apni, manmaani karna chah ti hai'.(Others smirks n sumy ignites) koi galti hoti nahi hai ,ki'.,ki use gusa aa jaata hai''.,gusa to ,jayse uske naak pe bytha hota hai'.(speaking more to himself)'' , kaali billi kahin ki''..

Sanjum : trying to be serious goes to him: tum usse kaali billi nahi keh sakte ho veer,'.vo to bilkul kaali nahi hai''

Veer : (smirks) n thinking hard: hain''', tum theek keh rahe ho'.,yeh ',yeh mujhe har baar jungle mai mili the'.,isiliye '..junglli billi''

Everyone laughs '..

Sumy: appears from no where''and was red frm anger : hain, hum junglli billi, (keeping a hand on her waist and wit another holding a tree trunk near by) ,,,,,aur tum'.,tum kya ho?.....ek'., ek bigda hua raise zaada '.(veer's frds were smirking at him '.n were very glad wit her reaction'),jo,'jo..koi bhi kaam nahi kar sakta ''.apne saath ,apne in(pointing them out wit her one hand'..their smirks disappears') chamho ke saath ghoomte ho'..bigde raise kahi'ke'..(teasing')

She turns to go'.

Veer: looking mad after a sec wen he cam back to his senses'.(as her reaction made him go into trance) : ruko'',mai abb bigda raaise kayse hua..???

Sumy: turns : tumhare naam , shakaal , aur kapdo se'''.(smiles slightly to her own surprise) bigde raise kahin ki she says ( as she turns n goes acting as though she was angry wit him)..

Veer: smiles at her intensity: n shouts after '.: bhagne ki koshish karna bekaar hai'..

Veer n others took turn to watch her actions'they ate fruits at night n made fire there only'n slept'.but sumy'was trying to sleep leaning on the tree trunk ''veer observes this n sits besides her .she leans on his shoulders n falls asleep comfortably''. Veer smiles'.she was looking more beautiful while sleeping '.. he also sleeps'..

Veer wakes up...every one was glaring him'''everyone was on there knees surrounding him and sumy very near to them'.

Sanjum: raised his eyebrows'every one laugh''.

Veer: dekho, ayse kuch nahi hai '., mai to bas'.(his cheeks went hot')

Sumy: opens her eyes lovingly (stilling leaning on his shoulders) (smiling''but her smile turns to grimace ..... n eyes widens' n shouts) yeh'., yeh kya rahe ho.., tum sab'.? (Terrified...)'. (n looks at veer )'Aur Tum'.tum yahan????

Ignited she tries to get up but falls on veer'..

He catches her ''. She was looking lovely he thought'.his frds do smirks 'she sits up' looking embarrassed '..

It was almost noon wen her men arrived wit her palki n her frds

Chamki: frightened: shera '.tum.. Theek to ho na???

Sumy tries to get up but couldn't veer n Sanjum gives her their hand '.she takes Sanjum's hand givin veer a sharp look ( as though saying 'don't u dare)

Sumy: to Chamki: tumhe kisne bataya?

Vashali: raampyaare ne'.

Sumy ignited : takes hold of rampyaare's collar : hummne , tumse mana kiya'.

Rudali: quickly: yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hai?...tum theek to ho na'?

Chamki: chodo ise'( trying to pull her hand off his collar )'ise maine hi draaya '

Sanjum; looks at her amused '.

Her frds helps her to get into her palki

Chand : hum logo ko maaf kar dejiye ga'.

Sumy : smiles at him '..but gets ignited at the sight of veer ( murmurs but veer heard it) maafi maang na bhi nahi aata,'. ( imitating veer ) dekho'..mujhe maaf kardo'.////'''''mujhe'hmmuh bigda raaise '.

Veer: widens his eyes : aur '.,tum 'tum junglli billi'.

She steals a glance on him again while going'.

Veer: yeh ladki hai yeh, koi tuufaan?....(asking to himself)

Sanjum : humme kya pata '.,abb tumhari junglli billi hai'.

Veer did not catch it he was looking in the direction of palki'.wen it vanished from sight'.turning to his frds'

Chalo''''''.

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i jst hope u enjoy it😉

Edited by junglli billi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😉 pls ppl do comment dying to get some😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was lovly and so romatic love ur update love to see there nok jok hope to see more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran99

it was lovly and so romatic love ur update love to see there nok jok hope to see more

😉 thank u yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😳 thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😃 thank u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Lovely sweetie...I really enjoyed reading it...keep it up! Would be waiting for the next part!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey huni, sorry for the late reply
wat an awesome update
kya baat hai,

a fabulous and a glorious update
jus loved it
do continue

intezaar aap ka
agli update ka

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