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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmi.friends03

gr8 update...love it...so krishna won't find the lost ghungroo...but i think he will...so he is going to attend sangeet...love it how they r fighting with themself...they r impatient to c each other...😳 unknowingly why...
so beautician help pratigya to covered up...

nice update waiting for next update...and what happen to chandu' plan...lets c what he will watch this time...he must set his eyes on every moment...as Krishna is now busy with prats...



Agree with u simmi...Chandu has to be hawk eyes now...as his bro...& Prats r surrounding by enemies...& he has doubt in his mind...😕.than what he is waiting for ..disaster to happen.. 😡why not he bribe some of Shailender or Durjjan's men to find out the truth...not full truth but he can find out that Pratigya is under so much pressure from all of them including his father...& her mother's life is in danger...
i think only one person who has the answer...Dhanya pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: creative.bawa



😃 feeling so relived to hear that that Kriya's FF/os will cont...even after their new show...
i read all the update...Dhanya its really a awesome FF...pls cont it...👏



Agree...even i m as excited to watch AB; new show...my heart was sinking on thought that what happen to mkap forum..to me its my home...can't live without mkapian,Arjans...

Really dhanya i m too happy & as @creative.bawa says feeling relax that that journey with Kriyans/Arjans will cont...😃 👏 ...
missing Arja...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: creative.bawa



Agree with u simmi...Chandu has to be hawk eyes now...as his bro...& Prats r surrounding by enemies...& he has doubt in his mind...😕.than what he is waiting for ..disaster to happen.. 😡why not he bribe some of Shailender or Durjjan's men to find out the truth...not full truth but he can find out that Pratigya is under so much pressure from all of them including his father...& her mother's life is in danger...
i think only one person who has the answer...Dhanya pls...



@bold...Agree..she has all the answer afterall she is the our cv of this show...creator,director,producer...⭐️ 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww fabulous update Dii 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for next how kriya will meet will c each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhakarn

hi,

its ur appreciation that's inspiring me to write the FF 😃 😳 hope this will continue even if AB n PG r busy with other shows 😃



Dhanya your FF is fantastic and I look forward towards your updates, it allows me to continue enjoying my favorite jodi of all times. I think all of us will cherish it and continue to read even if AB and PG star in new shows.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi, Thanks all... 😃 decided to lengthen the kriya sequence 😃 😛
Part 2

Krishna sat at the back seat, his eyes distant as he gazed outside , as Chandu drove the Rover behind the Lamborgini …………..media had tried desperately to snap his pics but no success…… Chandu thought back of the few secs while when the cars blasted out of the gates , the way geetha was trying to catch his eye , mouthing 'pls….' he found himself smiling n caught himself…………. He glanced at Krishna through the mirror………….. krishna seemed lost…… Chandu sighed ….he needs to talk to Pratigya soon…………. He decided…. He is going to find a way….. either tonight or tmw morning………… he needs to know why she is doing this? n if she is doing all this for money n power he will make sure that she suffers………! He thought angrily ………….

Krishna could feel soft fingers gliding across his palm n entwine with his fingers on the hand which rested on the seat…………..he looked around , startled …………… there she was , sitting beside him, smiling innocently at him……she was wearing a simple salwaar…….. he looked down to their entwined fingers n then back at her , his eyes meeting hers…………. His confusion slowly turned to happiness as he smiled …………. He caressed her fingers , finding it pleasurable ………they were so soft…smooth….as if they were made to be held like this, in his hand……ah, the feeling…..more pleasurable than all his years of using things to find pleasure …………… may be bec he was feeling happiness too…………n not just pleasure….. he could feel a heavy but pleasurable feeling in…in his heart…..heart? he looked up to her eyes….. she had a mysterious smile in her eyes….. he wanted to know what is she hiding from him………..before he knew it he had pulled her to him , their thighs n chests colliding with each other, their faces inches apart…………….she had let out a squeak …..so sensual yet innocent ……the sound was music to his ears …… n it fanned the desire now flaring through his body……..he chuckled ……holding her close to him……… her hands clutched at his shoulders , as she smiled more broadly …………. He found his smile broadening too………… she released his shoulders n cupped his cheeks , now positively beaming , her eyes still locked to his….. 'why r u smiling?' he asked , feeling elated as her fingers caressed his stubbly cheeks…………. 'hmm hmm…nothing' she whispered….. n yet continued to smile……….. krishna looked at her incredulously…….'tell me..' he ordered , his one hand gripping her hair n the other forcing her chin up, so that their lips were mere inches from each other………..there was a challenge in her eyes which he had never seen ……….she shook her head no, playfully, still smiling …. The nerve of her! Nobody disobeyed Krishna singh Thakur……! Krishna could feel the anger rising….. he cupped her chin in his one hand n forced her to stop smiling as he said 'I am warning u…Pratigya…tell me why r u smiling?!'…… she moaned in pain n he let go of her immediately , a feeling of guilt n panic wrenching him………… 'oh, did it hurt? I …I didn't mean… ' he stopped abruptly as he saw her giggling this time, her fingers now playing with his collar…………….. really ? she has the audacity to play with him! Her n her little games! ……he thought angrily, but can't keep a straight face as he saw her innocent smile …. N her playfulness was actually turning him on!...n the girl is actually playing with his collar! …...

'oh…so u would rather learn the hard way then….'he asked , the threat in his voice not that pronounced as he was smiling too……. Why was he finding her adorable………? She leaned back a bit , her breath catching in her throat …………….as if she knew she was done for………. Now her smile was different ……it was innocent still………..but shy …to the core ………. He watched fascinatingly as the color rushed to her cheeks n she tried to move away from him, her hands forming fists as she let go of his collar , her whole body shying away from him………………oh, he had never seen such an amazingly beautiful creature in his life!... he pulled her to him, his hand gripping her hair across her left ear n lay her across his lap n chest , cradling her head over his left upper arm n shoulder ………… she looked up at him through her fluttering eyelids with a small gasp as their eyes met, her eyes widening innocently for a sec before drooping shyly, her hands mashing his shirt over his chest, nervous ……desire burned in him like molten lava at the mere sight…… Krishna moved his hand down her left cheek , his eyes searching her now red face…… she squirmed sensually over him as his fingers traced her jawline , her eyes fluttering shut, parting her lips as she sighed, giving him a general idea about what his touch was doing to her………. He suppressed a groan of desire as he caressed her bottom lip roughly with his thumb n watched her stiffen in his arms ……at first….. n then with an involuntarily gasp she tried to get up, coyly pushing his hand away, unable to take the torture more………. He held her down by her shoulders , chuckling 'ha! U r not going anywhere until I decide so…….' 'what? Did u say something , Krishna?' came chandu's voice front the front n Krishna blinked ……… he felt the void even before he knew she was gone……. She wasn't there, u r imagining things in ur head u fool!!!...get a grip!!!... 'what?' he snapped , anger n frustration mounting inside him…… 'did u say something……….do u want something? ' asked chandu confused , his eyes searching krishna's face in the mirror …………Her!... n he wants her now!...he never ever craved for even his next breath like this……….. 'nothing!' he said , looking out of the window , a muscle in his jaw pulsing as he bit down the desire surging down his veins…………

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Manjula eyed the beautician with dislike as Pratigya emerged out of her room behind her, a bit too much covered for her liking…….. but she looked breathtaking alright ……! She could see many girls ogling shamelessly at Pratigya n muttering jealously with each other…. The guests looked on mesmerized as Pratigya descended downstairs n manjula lead her to a big circular couch set at the center of the hall……… Pratigya's face was expressionless , but her heart beat with such ferocity that she was sure it will explode……anger, humiliation, pain n tension n anticipation filled her n she thought she would faint again……… the thought of evening ahead was making her head spin ……….. she sat down on the couch as many middle aged women climbed beside her , pulling the thaali of mehendi towards her……… Pratigya closed her eyes, to stop the tears from spilling as she remembered her mother …… it was her mother's only dream to see her marriage happen to a good , caring righteous man even though Pratigya was sure her heart will break when she will know about her resolution of never ever to marry in life………….N now she lay in her room as a prisoner, half conscious ………. Weak…… N here her daughter sat , forcefully being taken as a mistress , dressed up in the acceptable attire of a wife , by a hardcore criminal, a man who don't have any kindness n conscience …………. N a husband n a father, who , as always, was taking advantage of the opportunity to meet his selfish n cruel means ……….

'lets see how deep the color of love spreads on ur hand' she heard some one say to evoke stupid giggles around her…………..Pratigya opened her red eyes to find one of the women pulling her right hand n starting to put mehendi…………… pratigya looked on , her eyes fixed on the green paste now forming beautiful patterns over her palm………beautiful ? look again Pratigya………it looks like a mad ,criss cross , uneven lines ……………ugly………'poor girl, n poor renuka….. her daughter is getting married to 'the Thakur Family' n she has to be ill now…… she is so unfortunate that she can't watch the kind of glory n good fortune her daughter is having…..' sighed one woman………..Pratigya could see heads nodding in sympathy as she kept her eyes down , gritting her teeth in anger………….n oddly she felt relief n pity………..relief that her mother was not aware of the kind of life ahead of her ……… n pity at herself………… she felt him before she knew he was near her…… she suppressed a gasp as she felt his fingers slowly pulling her chin up, forcing her to look in his eyes……….. there he was , sitting in front of her , his eyes soft n warm , a pleasant smile on his lips… he caressed her chin with his thumb n let go, reluctantly , but he continued to look at her…... there was a twinkle in his eyes, but no trace of that maddening attitude n dominance n lust which usually filled his gaze…… his eyes were telling her not to feel self pity…… his gaze was just pleasant , endearing ………… n curious, as he dropped his gaze to her palm, his eyes sparkling as he watched mahendi filling her hand……… Pratigya blinked …………..

he was still there…….. watching with fascination n delight at her palms……he was genuinely happy n excited to see her beautiful hands…….n his smile was infectious ….n she was feeling relaxed…..calm.… Pratigya just gazed at him, a silly smile blossoming in her lips, which spread through her tear stained eyes ………….. why r u smiling? Silly….! …stop looking at him!... he is the root cause for ur sufferings! He is a killer! …womanizer !…. Cruel, Devil! ………….STOP looking at him…! He is going to rip u apart, physically n emotionally , in just a few hours……….! He is playing tricks with u…! Playing with his prey…!!! …. STOP looking at him…! …..Pratigya started , eying him with hatred n fear……n revulsion at herself , for continuing to let him invade her thoughts ! around her………everywhere……….No! go away…! She wanted to scream……….. but her voice died in her throat as he looked up at her , meeting her eyes…………… he had that naughty look in his eyes….. that look which stole her breath, as always ………… she tensed as he leaned forward , holding her elbows………….. he seemed wanting to say something to her…only to her……..she found herself tilting her face so that he could access her left ear as he leaned in , brushing her hair out of the way ……….. she blushed red, shivering deliciously , biting her lips as he murmured , deliberately brushing his lips over her lobe n snuggling his nose in her hair, his breath tickling her 'so…beautiful…….' She stifled a moan as he licked her lobe , drawing it to his mouth with a teasing suck , chuckling ' the mehendi, I mean…………' 'what?' she leaned back, pouting ….. he was not there where he was just a nanosec ago, leaning over her………….

voracious laughter n giggles met her ears …..Pratigya looked around , shocked ………… 'oh,god…look at her….! Even the morning sun isn't that red …………..!' she heard a woman say followed by a pinch over her thigh……everyone was watching her, giggling away…..oh, what did she do? Did she talk to herself ? ……..Pratigya looked down feeling her cheeks burn in embarrassment n anger……….she is making a fool of herself …all bec of him!...'hey come on, u didn't answer my question ! ' an elderly woman forced her chin up , giggling girlishly ….. 'I asked u, what will u do if he wants to sniff ur hands ? I think the question was pretty straight forward…!' she boomed into general laughs around her ….. Pratigya turned her face away in disgust …him! Sniffing her hands! She felt like vomiting …… she kept her head down as the woman said 'oh… she is so shy…' …..her eyes fell on her hands ….it was almost over….. n they looked…beautiful….. 'n we have hidden his name expertly in ur palm dear, ask him to seek it……' one woman said to her ……. Pratigya looked at her hands unable to stop herself from seeking out his name …… 'do u want him to do that now, or wish to engage him tmw night , when he has some other things on his mind' boomed another woman, to hooting giggles from all…….

Pratigya grimaced in disgust although she could feel her heart skipping a beat ….. ……suddenly she could feel her heart beating triple speed….oh! what if he wants to do that! No!... she won't let him..! ….. ha! Whom r u kidding ? Pratigya! ... but she knew even as she heard a servant urgently coming their way saying 'they r at the gate…', that she was fighting a loosing battle ….with herself…….. she had looked up , craning her neck , n she could feel her heart fluttering in anticipation…………. She could feel that treacherous part of her waiting excitedly n trying desperately to think of ways in which she could show him her hand …… to know what he felt about them, the pattern, the color….the scent…..Stop! …No!... 'hey sit down, he is coming here only….' A women nudged her on her shoulder n Pratigya realized that she had stood up……….Pratigya looked up in time to meet his eyes as Krishna entered the hall , Sajjan to his right n Chandu to his left……..followed by gayatri, pratap n angad…………….. Krishna n pratigya tried it really…really hard…..but they couldn't mask out the surge of an unknown relief n the culmination of a deep longing as their eyes met …………..

hope u liked it 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh loved it... Dhanya... it is never enough for me... how much ever u give... They r tht magical...Thank U Sweetheart... 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Dhanya beautifully written.👏

The way Kriya are imagining each other and the feelings are becoming stronger and the way that you wrote their inner emotions was so romantic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh lovely described just waiting their Eyes met
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful update dhanya...👏 love the way u r descibing their feelings...👍🏼

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