Written Update 19th July 2011...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Written Update
Stepping into day on a emergency call to do the written update... so grab your coffee's and relax.
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SS tells Pratigya off for bringing Amma in to his shrine for Ganga (meaning the bedroom). By now the whole khandaan have gathered and watch on in utter bismal shock.
Pratigya does her ban jayee.. A womans place is in her husbands house, room and life. Acha? phir Krishna tanki pe kyun chada tha? 😛
She exclaims that Amma is better now 100% burn free.. Jee lady doctorwa...tumo achey se janch ki na?
ss turns to a guilty and scared looking Amma and makes a statement about how this is the very girl Pratigya that Amma had turfed out of the haveli without any mercy. But he still refuses to stay in the same room as her and threatens to move into another house if he had to, to stay away from smelly.
BUT humraa baba grabs him and talks to him like a child who is on a tantrum mission... and explains let bygones be bygones and forgive and forget. (He clearly says this for the sake of Pratigya).
SS reminds him of the hurt that his mother Amma had bestowed upon her own son and how she had hurt him.
GD rings her tongue and orders SS to forgive Amma, as Pratz has done the same.
SS agrees on the basis that the beds are too be separated Amma should jump with joy - I say...
Amma is shattered, Shaktia is summoned to carry out the court os SS's orders. Pratigya tries to intervene but is stopped by krishna.. he tells her - You have done enough for her and it is upto Amma to get herself respect back and win SS over.
MMFG
Komal eats for 2, Dadi puts nazar..lol
Komal gets up and holds her tummy, Sax enwuires what happened. Komal explains her baby doesn't jump and kick like Kesars. Naina reassaures her it is early days. Arushi teases that Komal is in a hurry to get kicked in. Komal is still wondering.
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Ting a ling a ling - Diner Time!
SDS tries to attend her place at the table and is advised by SS, that this place is reserved for VIP Ganga. Amma defeated retreats to an empty space opposite Pratigya. Now from here Pratigya steals the show..
SS orderd his clan to rise and shine early tomorrow and attend Gurumai's ashram. After seating his beloved next to him.
He also informs them that he will not attend and stay at home, Amma offers to stay back to look after him. But he rejects her offer and informs Ganga will stay back to do the honours. pratigya's expressions here are a classic! Throughout the whole convo. he family begin to get suspicious. Amma's suspisions are given further ammunition too.
Ganga begs to be allowed to go with the family as she has not been out anywhere. SS refuses like a child. Krishna tells SS to go too otherwise they will be tired of answering Gurumai's questions regarding him.
Ganga wants to go, SS still refusing. Shaktia intervenes on her behalf - but SS hits him, Shaktia stumbles between embarrassement and anger.
Then he informs that he will be going too. They all understand his sudden change of heart.. Pratigya, Amma and Krishna all look on suspicious. )I think Amma and Pratigya exchange looks).
Kriya Sanctury.
An excited Krishna wanted to .. wanted to.. wanted to .. SLEEP EARLY, So that he can be all fresh for the next day. Pratigya sat on the
bed claiming that she will not be attending. Krishna asks her - I know something is spinning in your mind so just bolbo.
Pratigya extends her pearls of wisdom to him, that SS is acting embarrassingly, by insulting Amma on one hand and on the other hand he is dancing to the tunes of a 17 years old girl. Krishna justifies SS's actions to be of love towards Ganga as Komal. But Pratigya cuts him short and exclaims it would not be clever to weigh Komal and Ganga on the same scales.. the two are very different. (Indeed they are).
So Einstein tries again - with an example of Piyasiya this time.. But Pratigya again exclaims that Ganga is not Piyasiya and for the first time spells it out for him.. That Ganga is Amma's replacement. This needs to be stopped. Krishna states how can they stop this. Pratigya tells him, krishna must do omething and stops this before the haveli breaks down and the whole family breaks-up, and is then too late to stop anything. Krishna enters his thinking zone. Maybe this way he can channel in with Guruma telepathically - so that she can advise him what to do with this Sajan.
SS's bedroom
Amma stuffing the pillows like a christmas turkey...
Ganga stands in the doorway ready to enter and Amma stops her and warns her to step outside as she is not allowed to enetr this room and walks over and stands in the doorway. She also informs Ganga that she is just a servant and must behave like one only..
SS comes and stands infront of Amma too, He breaks her bubble and pricks her with the news that Ganga is free to do as and what she plesases in this very room. Ganga is ordered into the room by SS. Amma stands in her way, khabardharing her. SS chucks Amma out.
He then lies on the bed and orders his chahiti to come and sit next to him. He makes Amma furthermore jelous and asks Ganga sweetly to massage his legs. he catches Amma's diverting attention back with a nautanki cough. And looks on at her pleased at portraying the fact that he is a man who can do what he pleases. Amma leaves in a huff and puff.
SS excitedly tells Ganga that the Behoodi is gone. Ganga asks SS as to why Amma hates her so much, SS replies because she is a nirbhuddi. Ganga states I am only a servant... BUT SS tells her that she is a mmber of the family. Ganga states that all are scared of him in the house. SS declares that I am the man of the house, and this house is Ganga's as much as anyones. Ganga has a smile of innocence spread across her face - the end. Ganga you wouldn't be smiling if you knew the price you had to pay for it love.
CARISMA..XXX
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you Carisma dii for the lubly update🤗
off to read😃...nd forgot first again 😉😆

Episode much better than yesterday's😊
And the comments in red😆😆👍🏼
atleast SS's intentions are made crystal clear...so no more confusion😛though i hate the thought🤢

so we must wait for PBJ or KBJ😕...
Thanks once again dii🤗 lub u...and take care 🤗
Edited by ssweety007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Cari for the lovely update!! 😃😃..loved the way you wrote the update ..side comments incorporated...😛😆😆

Today was a really nice episode...😃
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Edited by ....Poojie.... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Carisma Di u've written an amazing update...Well done, Hatss off to u!! 👏 👏
Thank you Di for doing sooo much for us, It's really appreciating!! 😉 😉 😃
Keep up with the Lallantop, Lovely, Wonderful, Rocking and Fantastic work!! ⭐️ ⭐️ 👍🏼

Love u loads!! 🤗 😳
Edited by Fallen Star - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update Carisma 👍🏼 for a lovely episode. A lot happened today, story moved at the fast pace, things getting very clear now. Thanks a lot. 👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thankyou ma lovely people...
Just a quick update today... quick - long update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CARISMA DEAR ENJOED VERY MUCH
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you so much for da excellent update 👏 loved da red letter words(i mean da ones in english)...liked da convo betwn kriya...they should do tat more often...had a nice lol watchin sajan singh at da dinnin table...he is such a sly foX 😉 😃 all and all 2day epi was interesting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely updates carisma⭐️⭐️i like episode a lot seems like ss kaa dil wakiy bacchaa hay😆
Edited by Mitaly.. - 14 years ago
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Thanks for the wounderful update dii love ur comments episode was really very nice ad update tooo carry on

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