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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

hiyaah!!! Hum FIRST!!! Clap ⭐️ Clap ⭐️Thank you di.. u r welcome dear 😃Actually I was in the college Library completing notes. Suddnly checked it to see the updt.. & it was there.lol....that was funny and interesting too 😃 I cum only to read Ur FF as Im busy preparing for exams. lol...u can keep aside my ff too till ur exams are over....cus they are more important 😃Only A week more for it.. oh...study well...all the best 👍🏼Updt soon ok Di..sure 😃 Lubb Ya.. lub y 2 😃I edited my post on PG 60.will check 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shumi PM me ur FB id....
missed it wen i deleted my mails....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sun7shine

Hiiii di. Read al d 3 chaps... good 😃Amazingly good...thanks 😃 Liked Komal's nature...thanks for liking that character...hope u will keep liking her. Sry for short comment but hav to go, u know na..yep i know ...no worry dear . Byeeee,bye😃 take care.... u 2 Update soon sure 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Shumi diiii......
im back agn!!!!!!
first of all,i must say,u r sooo lucky for me!wenevr u wish me all the best,my test goes well😃 aw...thank u dear...i was honoured 😃
nw coming to the updates......
Chap 23
wowwww!wat an opening!!!😍😍😍😍....im actually imagining it nw...😳😆
but the next part made me...😭😊😭😊..wat a touching one!
esp...

krishna:'you always want me to get what i wish.not only today,from the day we met accidentally.even that day as you said,you could have fought with me.but you did not because you want me to have what i wish.you don't want to let me down...some times you go below your dignity to satisfy me...to cheer me😭... 'he cried with broken words.he cried and cried.

pratigya:😭

krishna:'you did not care about your life, rather you cared about me and my desire...why pratigya...say why..😭?'he wiped her running tears on her cheek.

krishna:'i always degraded you.hamesha tumai duk thi ya...😭'

krishna:'par tum...?you respected my feelings...😭'
pratigya:😭

krishna:'i slapped you for no reason....😭'he looked in to his right palm and tightly clenched his fist.

pratigya:😭..she hold his fist and winced

krishna:'tum ne uff thak nahi kiya...😭'

krishna:'bhagwan ko bhi bardash nahi hua...mere gunahonka saza tabhi ka tabi day thiya😭....par tum!...muchay maaf kiya aur meri sewa ki.mere leyeh tum hi bagwaan ho...tum hi.....😭'tears spill from his eyes on her hand.
thanks azi for liking this part...😃
now he has understood his sin n is constantly repenting for that. exactly...😃then wat r u waiting for?jaldi se Krishna ko teek karva dho.....😭....yaar i am waiting to bring a small twist in the tale...😉yaa,Pratigya is truly a pari..no girl can forgive a person hu raped her...but here the situation if different.....krishna needs her...i agree...😊
pratigya shud wear burkha for sure.......😆😆😆😆😆😆....too dangerous until krishna gets fine...hai na ! 😉ShaRo story moving forward lyk rocket!...true...their wedding cards are on the way...lol giving a tight competition to KriYa.but na na,noone can beat Krishna..😉😆...wao tho...after all they r the lead na? Krishna feeling jealous of nitin...😆😆😆😆😆........karna tho padega na?at last he has to face him...soon he has to😉
Chap 24 n 25
jz read both the chapsim lyking this Komal..so sweet,so cute,so luvly...so true😃...Amma hating Pratigya as in the show?but she is so smart too...understanding everything so quickly...exactly...
poor Krishna,getting too insecure na? obviously...😃komal is the true sis..so much lub for her bros na? yep 😃i thot Komal wil opposse KriYa relationship..butshe doesnt seem so..or am i wrong?....not that wrong...😃
plzzzzz update sooon di....sure 😃.wanna knw wen Krishna will be alryt..soon he will be 😃wanna see some more...erm....😳..umm😉😆
n for the super duper updates......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
for all ur wonderful claps from me 😃

lub u loads
urs azikutty

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky



Do it...shumi..u can.. will try 😃K is still funny n nice....now its the pahse they srre showing his flaws....in the show. thats MKAP n its diff....oh! 😃u allow ur imagination run wild....n give us ur FFs....inshallah😃

love u yaar....n i love n enjoy ur story telling as well. :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Shumi PM me ur FB id....
missed it wen i deleted my mails....lol😆 no worry...here it is shumshad parveen...yaar we all IF friends are on the FB group...y don't u join with us ? 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
I know it takes time di.. Coz I too have my FF on the other forum.. I know it takes a lot of time to think & even worst is typing.. But Pls di.. Dnt stop writing.
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Posted: 14 years ago

part-26

next day evening around 5pm.

krishna's room.

pratigya:'thoda try karo...😊'she hold his hand and told him to get up from the wheel chair.she was trying to give practice for him to walk.

krishna:'pratigya...you are troubling me too much....😡...morning we went to the hospital for psychotherapy.i worked out a lot there.now i am tired...😒'he refused to get up.

pratigya:'please...Dr told you to practice in the evening too...😊'she requested with an adorable sweet smile so that he can accept her request.
krishna:'nahi😔...i can't...' he was strong enough to refuse her.

komal:'baba...zid maat karo...😊...' she made an entry in to his room.

krishna:'god!😲...komal daykho na yeh pratigya ko.....she is troubling me a lot...'he called her for support.
komal:'she is troubling you for your good...😃 kya tum tumari jaanu ki baat nahi maano gay?😃...'
krishna:😲...he was shocked with her words and looked at pratigya with the same shocking face.pratigya looked at him normally.

komal:'did you forget ? yesterday you were out of control....haan?😊'she came close to him .his wheel chair was beside the bed ,she sat on the bed facing to him and told pratigya to sit beside her.

komal:'baba...if you don't mind i would like to talk to you...😕'
krishna:say...😕...he knew she is going say some thing big , otherwise why she want his permission.
komal:'tum galat kar rahay ho baba....😔'she started in a warm way.
krishna:Confused... he did not understand what she was about to.

komal:'when you said pratigya is gold medalist i suspected....why you need a gold medalist to nurse you?😕...but still i was not sure about your relation...😕...last night you conformed it....😒'she paused.
krishna:...he looked at her with worry.

komal:'baba be practical...every thing doesn't happen how we think and how we want...'
pratigya:....she understood what komal was trying to tell.
komal:'the day amma come to know, or the day you start walking ,which ever is the earliest that day will be the last day of pratigya in this house.she will be shown the exit....😔' she said the bitter truth.
krishna:😲...her bitter truth pricked him.

komal:'will you be able to stand against amma...?😕'she raised her doubt.

krishna:'i will komal...i will...'he said strongly with full confident.

komal:'it is not going to be as easy as you said ' i will '.... tumai pata hai na...amma hamesha hum log kay leyeh ooncha socha hai...even in small things she want to give us the best...do you remember ? once you asked her for a bicycle, very next day she gifted you a brand new car...but your choice was bicycle and you were not interested in car...amma can not understand that...'
pratigya:😲...she was slowly getting the true picture of amma.
komal:'...it is not going to be easy task for you. do you thing she will accepted your paid nurse as her bahu! singh house bahu...? it is going to be next to impossible... you may lose your battle with amma...'
krishna:...💔...he realized she is right. her words smashed all his hopes.
komal:'tho fir tum pratigya ko jhoote womeed thay kyun rahay ho ? jhoote sapne kyun dikha rahe ho?...😕'
pratigya:😭...komal's words brought tears in her. it made her think ' kya komal such kaha rahi hai?...kya krishna muchay jhoote womeed thay raha hai?...kya krishna kay vaade ki koi neev nahi hai?...'she was shook by that thought.
krishna:😕😲 ....her words nailed him.

komal:'tell me why she should suffer along with you ? usse usski zindage jeene do...she is a gold medalist...she has a bright feature out side this singh house...'she tried to explain her thought.

krishna:'...so far he never thought about the other possibility, today komal made him to do so.
krishna:'...tum teek hi kahara hi ho komal.i became so selfish....💔'he felt sorry for his selfishness.he felt guilty deep down in his heart.

krishna:'you are right ...why she should suffer along with me ? that too how long? kya pata i may not get well at all...💔😭'while he was telling his heart wrench.he worried more about pratigya than himself.

pratigya:'..issa maat bolo....Cry aap zaroor teek hongay...'she got up from the bed and kneel down beside him as a physical and moral support.
krishna:'😭....par kya pata....meri poori zindage lag jayeh ge teek honemai...😭 ...💔'he placed his hand on her head with tears in his eyes.he felt as if his heart tore apart.
pratigya:😭...

krishna:'pratigya tum meri ek baat maano ge?😊😭 🥺'he asked with a constant pain in his heart.

pratigya:'...😭'she raised her head and looked at him with running tears.
krishna:'tum sarangpur chale jao🥺...i don't want you to suffer along with me.komal sahi kaha rahi hai...tumai tumari zinda ge jeena cha hi yeh...Cry'he bit his lower lip to control his pain.his teeth pierced his lower lip deep in and he felt the taste of his own blood.

pratigya:'😭 😡aap ne teek kaha...muchay mari zindage jeena chahi yeh...par mere zindage mai jeene kay leyeh bacha hi kya hai...😭Cry aap kay bina mere zindage wairaan hai...😭'she got up pushing his chair back and ran away crying to her room.her action broke krishna's heart in to fractions.
krishna:'god!💔...komal roko usse...wo naaras ho gaye...mai kai se samjhaoon...Cry'he burst in to tears.
komal:💔...she felt bad for both of them and felt sorry for her own words but at the same time she want to show the reality of their life. she want them to realise about the bitter possibility.

krishna:'komal muchay pratigya kay paas lejao...😭' with her twitching heart she took krishna to pratigya's room. pratigya was lying on the bed upside down burring her face in the pillow crying and sobbing loudly.komal took krishna close to her bed, left them alone and went out.

krishna:'pratigya ro maat..i am sorry...😭'he touched her back.

pratigya:'Cry...don't touch me...😭' she pushed his hand.

krishna:'please pratigya...😭'he touched her again.his heart squeezed with pain.
pratigya:Cry leave me alone...mere zindage muchay jeene do...😭'she repeated his words.

krishna:'please...utto pratigya...i don't know how to make you understand...😭'she got up and turned towards him.her eyes and face became red.her nose was dripping.

pratigya:'you are so mean ...Angry...😭'she wiped her nose.

krishna:' pratigya...Cry'

pratigya:'how come you say me to go away from you?😡😭...

krishna:'thodi dayer kay leyeh muchay laga komal sahi hai......😭'

pratigya:'komal uss ki jagah pe sahi hai...par hamara srif payaar ka rishta nahi pati patni ka bhi hai...yeh baat komal nahi jaanti...Cry' her words reminded him the painful day of his life.

krishna:'muchay maaf kardo...maaf kardo na...please...😭' he raised her face and wiped her tears.
pratigya:'issa nahi...😭'she said wiping her nose.
krishna:😕 tho kaise?😭'
pratigya:'kaan pakad kay...😭'
krishna:😭😊...he hold both his ear lobs...😭😃'
pratigya:'😭😃....and you owe me 100 sit ups....ok?...'she gently wiped his tears from his stubbled cheek.
krishna:😭😆....sure...'

pratigya:😭 😆.....while she was wiping his tears pratigya's cell ran.it was a good diversion for both of them.pratigya took the cell and attended.it is her brother adarsh.

pratigya:'ji bhaiya...😭😊'

adarsh:...

pratigya:'mai teek hun...😊😭'

adarsh:....

pratigya:'i have cold that is why my voice is different.....😊'

adarsh:...

pratigya:'kya???...Shocked 😲 😲 'she was taken aback.

adarsh:....

pratigya:'teek hai...😲 😲 😲 😲'she kept the cell down. she was still under shock.
krishna:😕
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

I know it takes time di.. Coz I too have my FF on the other forum..oh i see! which forum dear 😃 I know it takes a lot of time to think & even worst is typing.. more worst is some time all we tpyed goes out of our PC😡...then i have to re type again...OuchBut Pls di.. Dnt stop writing. let us see....😃

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