fF : iShQ hUa!-I:PaRt-54 pG-143

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girls...i am here with yet another fF iShQ hUa! 😊. it was also written for some other jodi.now i am going to modify it for KriYa.hope , aap log ko mere FF se Ishq Hoga!😃
 
 
this is the story of krishna a 26 year young and energetic, Delhi based business tycoon with full of attitude and arrogance. he is not going to be goody goody krishna as you all like to see...for some reason he forced himself on pratigya...
 
1.what was that reason?😕
2.do pratigya pardon him?
3.is he accepted to married her?
4.is he remorse for his sin?
5.is he was punished ?
 
along with kriya want to see ?????
new jodis,
shakti with....😉
komal with....😉
 
cutie and naughty kid lucky,
tour around God's own country kerala,
beautiful and suitable pics etc etc etc....
 
to experience the emotions of anger and violence, laughter and love , pyaar and passion,romance and relationship, sad and sorry,joy and jolly etc etc...to thrilled with all these emotions come with me and have a roller coaster ride in iShQ hUa!.specially for kriyans😃
 
NOTE:my other FF links
 
Thoda Sa Pyaar...
 
 
Kaisa Hai Yeh Bandhan!
 
 
Kar Le Mohabbath!
 
 
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iShQ hUa!.
part- 1 page-1
part- 2 page-3
part- 3 page-5
part- 4 page-8
part-5 page-10
part-6 page-14
part-7,8 page-17
part-9 page-19
part-10 page-23
part-11 page-25
part-12 page-28
part-13 page-29
part-14,15 page-33
part-16 page-38
part-17, 18 page-41
part-19 page-44
part-20 page-47
part-21 page-50
part-22 page-53
part-23 page-56
part-24,25 page-59
part-26 page-63
part-27 page-65
part-28 page-70
part-29 page-75
part-30 page-76
part-31 page-79
part-32 page-83
part-33 page-87
part-34 page-91
part-35 page-94
part-36 page-98
part-37 page-99
part-38 page-101
part-39 page-104
part-40, 41 page-107
part-42 page-109
part-43 page-111
part-44 page-114
part-45 page-120
part-46 page-123
part-47 page-125
part-48 page-129
part-49 page-131
part-50,51 page-134
part-52 page-137
part-53 page-141
part-54 page-143
 
for the rest of the parts check the following link:
 
 
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iShQ hUa!

PART-1

SGTB Khalsa College,University of Delhi,

examination hall:

students were busy writing their exams.pratigya was sitting along with M.Sc math second year students and writing 'real analysis' paper....it was one of the most difficult paper.all students were busy writing putting their heads down without even care to wipe their sweat.

invigilator:'10 minutes more.....ten to fiveApprove' he warned them.the exam was from 2pm to 5pm

pratigya revised her answer sheet in hurry.till the invigilator came and grab the paper she was checking the paper again and again.

pratigya:' ufff...'with a relief sigh she stuffed her pens,pencils,plastic scale , eraser, hall ticket, four folded question paper, student ID card etc etc...in her pouch and walked out of the examination hall.it was their last exam.out side the hall some of the students were discussing the questions.some of them were with smile on their face,some were with long and unsatisfied face.as soon as pratigya came out rolli came running to her.

rolli:'hi pratigyaSmile...how was the paper?...Ouch'

pratigya:'it was fineBig smile..i did well..Smile'she answered with full satisfaction.

rolli:'i knowSmile... for you every thing will be fine...Smile'

pratigya:'why ? what happened?Confused how did you do ?Ouch...'

rolli:'not that well...it is ok...Ouch'

rolli:'i am tired of these examsAngry.chalo we will go out today...Big smile'both of them walked out.
rolli and pratigya were staying in YMCA working women's hostel and sharing the same room for the past two years.not only room they share every thing with each other.there was no secret between them.they are best friends.

rolli was a brat child of a business magnet kabhir dhanraj. kabhir lives in delhi with his wife .rolli don't want to stay at home with her young step mother. even though she is a brat child heart wise she was too good and innocent.that is what made pratigya to stick to her.both of them are like sisters more than friends.

it was 6.30pm:
pratigya and rolli pass by a disco club.

rolli:'Smile...chalo...we will go for the disco...Tongue'she tried to enter in to the club.

pratigya:'Ouch...please roll...you know that i never went to this type of placesOuch...let us go to the hostel...Disapprove'
rolli:'come on pratigya...how long you are going to say this excuse.?..grow up dear!....Smile'
pratigya:Disapprove
rolli:'...just today... for my sake ...Tongue'she pulled her hand

pratigya don't want to go, she was hesitant but she can't say no to rolli.

rolli:'just for 10 min...Unhappy...pleaseSmile'

pratigya:'achcha teek hai...come...Approve'both entered in to the club.
night club!

pratigya unwillingly went in to entirely a different world,absolutely different atmosphere.

there was no bright light.every thing was dark and dim.soon rolli disappeared in the dark.pratigya could not see properly.she stood in one corner looking around.she can't differentiate from girls and boys.both were in the similar costume...drinking and dancing.

she was standing aside restlessly as odd man out.more than 20 minutes passed but no sign of rolli.pratigya started worrying.
pratigya:'where is she...?Confused'she slowly moved in to the club in search of rolli.

pratigya: 'excuse me' she said to those who are dancing around and went in.for her the club was smelling so yucky because of cigarette smoke and alcohol.she closed her nose and mouth together with her right hand.

pratigya:'...ro..lliii..Ouch'she slowly called her keeping her tone low, but there was no response.for more than 10 minutes she was searching rolli , moving here and there but could not find her.she became more scared and tensed.she went some more inside.scanned the surrounding.....finally from distance she saw rolli dancing with a man.she rushed towards rolli.

with tension pratiya went and stood beside rolli.rolli was holding that man's shoulder with her right hand and his left hand in to her left hand...closing her eyes enjoying the music and rocked with that man in slow movement.

pratigya:'..rolli...Disapprove'she stood beside them and keep calling.her voice could not reach rolli.pratigya was feeling awkward to stand beside a dancing couple in one another's arm.
the man:Angry...the man who holding and dancing with rolli turned towards pratigya.looked deep in to her her in that dim light.

pratigya was wearing white self embroidery cotton salwaar, over that apple green cotton duppatta.neatly combed and tied her hair in to a single pony tail.wearing big silver earrings with a small dangling in that.very fair.big black eyes.sharp nose ,thick short lips,well arranged pearl white shining teeth.every thing with in a small round face.
a thin flimsy chain around her neck with a small pendent in it.both the hands full of thin white silver bangles,hanging a long strap leather bag on her left shoulder.a typical allahabadi girl.she is 22 years old but looking very much younger, like a teenager.

the man who was swaying with rolli tried to scan pratigya with his sharp eyes, in that dim light he could not visualize her properly.he was slightly drunk, he gave a irritating and drunken look to her.

pratigya:'rolli...Ouch'she tried again.she did not care to look that man but worried about rolli. her continuousinterference provoke him... she was getting on his nerves.he got mad and stopped dancing.

man:'Angry...don't you have the manners? standing and staring at a dancing couple!...Angry...'his tone was harsh.

pratigya:'wo..meri dosth...Ouch'her voice teetered.she can't find words to continue.

man:' you illiterate lady! Angry...managerrrr...Angry'his sudden loud voice made rolli to come back to her conscious and others to stop dancing.the club employee mute the music and switched on the lights.

manager:'ji krishnaji...Smile'he stood for his service.

man aka krishna:'what the hell you people are doing here?Angry.....look at her!...and her dress! Angry'he pointed her and pierced her with his eyes.his loud angry voice brought few more service boys of the club for his help.
rolli:'krish...hna...Confused'she was drunk, could not speak properly.

krishna:'how come you allow this type of down market and illiterate people in to my club...?Angry'
pratigya:Ouch...'even though she was deeply hurt and insulted by his words she kept her temper under control for the sake of her friend rolli.

manager:'sorry sir...Ouch'

krishna:'this is singh's clubAngry....krishna singh's club!...people should have status to enter in .i don't want to see this type of cheap and down market people in my club...Angry'
pratigya:Disapprove Ouch... rolli...chalo...'she tried to hold rolli's hand.his harsh words made her weak ans sick.
rolli:Confused

krishna:'people need clause just to have a look at me...Angry...'
pratigya:Ouch...she looked around the club and found he was right. his so called people were all half naked and fully drunk.for sure she don't have that clause.
krishna:'Angry...out....send her out...right now...Angry'his face became red with anger.before rolli could say the club employees took pratigya away from rolli and pushed her out of the club.
pratigya:Cry ....stood out side the club with brimming tears.
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Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆🤗

Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooo
Your back😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃and I have the honour of posting first again😆😆😆
Wow......Krishna is different in this ff compared to the others....... i cant wait for next update😃.....
Poor Pratigya........feel like slapping ROlli......... how can she behave like that😡😡😡
AWESOME CHAPTER...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Update soon hun....... keep it up👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by aleena1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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helloooo....happy 2 c u back....😊 i feel bad 4 pratigya but anyways t was gud waitn 2 c wats gonna happen....tantu 4 giving us a new ff so soon....👏👏👏so sweet of u...luv u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start......krishna is a bad boy in it..bt me like it🤣......saw another ff of trs which i have never seen before...will read it in one go soon.....update soon n PM me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninita

helloooo....happy 2 c u back....😊 it is all my pleasure dear 😃i feel bad 4 pratigya ...yep...poor girl but anyways t was gud waitn 2 c wats gonna happen..wait for my next update 😃..tantu 4 giving us a new ff so soon....👏👏👏 u r welcome 😃so sweet of u..u 2....luv u. lub u 2 ..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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shumii diii ..neww ff ..wowwwwwww
i read itt ..it wsa awesumeeeee ...krishnaaaaaa is a bad boyyyyy ...angryy arroganttttttt ........but still i lubb himmmmmmmm ...............
poor pratigyaaa ........was tryingg to help rolli ........and krishna made her go out of the clubb but i m suree krishnaaa will lubb herr laterrrrr
nicee ff ....
updatee soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WelCome Back Shumi Di....

Thank you for starting another FF...




I just love your ff...

Jaldi se next part likhbo... pls..

I love the Arrogant, Angry Krishna...

Lubb you again...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Shumi!.... due to some problems could not read the first chap but very soon i'll comment... no worries!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆🤗

aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....🤗
Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooo
Your back😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃and I have the honour of posting first again😆😆😆...yep i too was honour by your first post...😃
thank you yaar...but infront of you i just rock where as you are mountain beta ( samii's bday FF😆)
Wow......Krishna is different in this ff compared to the others...not only krishna....every thing will be different.... zoor ka jhatka!😆.... i cant wait for next update😃.....shaanti rakkho babu😉
Poor Pratigya........feel like slapping ROlli.....exactly...😡.... how can she behave like that😡😡😡 wahi tho?😡😆
AWESOME CHAPTER...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ lub u 🤗
Update soon hun....hun ...hun😉... keep it up👍🏼👍🏼 teek hai😆

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