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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

*edited* ME... First Again!!! wooo...good going dear πŸ˜ƒTell Me sumthng.. WHY ARE YOU GONNA STOP WRITING FFs??? Pls Di.. DONT DO THAT.. yaar it takes lot of time to write... I dont mind if u take time.. But Pls di... PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE.. I will start😭 ...yarr don't cry...all for good πŸ˜†I loved the cute Komal. ShaRo dancing..thanks πŸ˜ƒ When will we get to see KriYa dancing like dat.. soon...πŸ˜ƒPls make him alright soon..yep πŸ˜ƒ Thank U for the double Updt. u r welcome πŸ˜ƒ. Well done di..πŸ‘πŸΌ thank u dear 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shumi diiii......
im back agn!!!!!!
first of all,i must say,u r sooo lucky for me!wenevr u wish me all the best,my test goes wellπŸ˜ƒ
nw coming to the updates......
Chap 23
wowwww!wat an opening!!!😍😍😍😍....im actually imagining it nw...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
but the next part made me...😭😊😭😊..wat a touching one!
esp...
krishna:'you always want me to get what i wish.not only today,from the day we met accidentally.even that day as you said,you could have fought with me.but you did not because you want me to have what i wish.you don't want to let me down...some times you go below your dignity to satisfy me...to cheer me😭... 'he cried with broken words.he cried and cried.

pratigya:😭

krishna:'you did not care about your life, rather you cared about me and my desire...why pratigya...say why..😭?'he wiped her running tears on her cheek.

krishna:'i always degraded you.hamesha tumai duk thi ya...😭'

krishna:'par tum...?you respected my feelings...😭'
pratigya:😭

krishna:'i slapped you for no reason....😭'he looked in to his right palm and tightly clenched his fist.

pratigya:😭..she hold his fist and winced

krishna:'tum ne uff thak nahi kiya...😭'

krishna:'bhagwan ko bhi bardash nahi hua...mere gunahonka saza tabhi ka tabi day thiya😭....par tum!...muchay maaf kiya aur meri sewa ki.mere leyeh tum hi bagwaan ho...tum hi.....😭'tears spill from his eyes on her hand.
now he has understood his sin n is constantly repenting for that.then wat r u waiting for?jaldi se Krishna ko teek karva dho.....😭.yaa,Pratigya is truly a pari..no girl can forgive a person hu raped her...but here the situation if different.....krishna needs her...
pratigya shud wear burkha for sure.......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....too dangerous until krishna gets fine...ShaRo story moving forward lyk rocket!giving a tight competition to KriYa.but na na,noone can beat Krishna..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...Krishna feeling jealous of nitin...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†........karna tho padega na?at last he has to face him
Chap 24 n 25
jz read both the chapsim lyking this Komal..so sweet,so cute,so luvly......Amma hating Pratigya as in the show?but she is so smart too...understanding everything so quickly...
poor Krishna,getting too insecure na?komal is the true sis..so much lub for her bros na?i thot Komal wil opposse KriYa relationship..butshe doesnt seem so..or am i wrong?..
plzzzzz update sooon di.....wanna knw wen Krishna will be alryt..wanna see some more...erm....😳..
n for the super duper updates......πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
lub u loads
urs azikutty

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

Can't Believe You will stop writing Shumi Ji😲 ...it pains me a lot when you said last ff .. i will miss you Shumi Ji😭😭😭..aw...so sweet of you...i love you πŸ˜ƒPlease do continue with your great stories!..You are such an amazing and talented writer!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ i really enjoy your storiesπŸ˜ƒ... makes me feel happy when i read them please i will be heartbroken! You can take a break and you don't even need to update regularly but..Please Shumi Ji do write more stories!...aw...i just find no words to say...me too will miss u and all other sweet readers...let us see what can i do for u πŸ˜ƒSee... the last 2 parts were Whoa! Very well written!πŸ‘...hats off to you and your great stories! .thank u sooooo much shehnazπŸ˜ƒ.. I absolutely love Kriya and the last paragraph was great! so much emotion and feeling!😳...thanks again πŸ˜ƒ Love Komal she is too cute...yep she is...πŸ˜ƒ hope she will understand Krish's feelings! sure πŸ˜ƒI'm sure a big storm is coming ahead! VERY TRUE 😲...how do you know!...going to bring yet another twist in the tale...πŸ˜‰Can't wait for the next update.. will be waiting eagerly...try to update soon 😊!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ASAK Shumi

frsit tell me that u wud continue writing FF here.!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: premprem1

OMG. krishna old komal.. he said when was drunk..shooo cuute wen h sed i love you !!! thanks πŸ˜ƒupdate soon yaar!!! sure πŸ˜ƒand thanx for the pm...u r welcome πŸ˜ƒ btw im fron new zealand oh ! 😍 and my name is rosey.. aw....lovey name πŸ˜›where r yu from??? i am from canada πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

ASAK Shumi walikum salm hamiπŸ€—

frsit tell me that u wud continue writing FF here.!! πŸ˜†...i love the way u people are getting mad at me when i said this my last ff....πŸ˜†...i lub u all πŸ€—...as of now in the serial krishna is fit for nothing😑....fighting for a glass of milk that too with his own brother....ewww.... i can not imagine my hero like that......so it is very difficult to get motivation from this serial wala krishna to write another ff......but ...but...i lub u all na....i will think about itπŸ˜ƒ ....just for my sweet readers like you...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eden_luvsKriya

Hi! di hi edenπŸ˜ƒ,both chaps were very nice...thanksπŸ˜ƒ .Komal is so cute jus like Krish..trueπŸ˜ƒ.hopefully Krishna will start walking soon.......😊😊 sure πŸ˜ƒ...but before that i would like to bring a twist....πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

shumi....
pls do continue writing......yaar!
u take ur won time for updates..never mind..but pls continue writing FFs.

sure i will try πŸ˜ƒ....thank you so much for your love and supportπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshna1020

why shumi dii last f.f..😭😭😭plz dont stop writtng.😭😭😭 i am gr888 fan of urs f.f.... πŸ€— so sweet of you

wonderful chps...πŸ‘πŸΌ thanks πŸ˜ƒloved komal she s very bubbly...true πŸ˜ƒ..amg hate tis amma....me too...no worry soon she will have a lessonπŸ˜‰...the most funny part was wen komal prounced roo lii nmeπŸ˜† lolπŸ˜‰
i was really feeling sad for krishπŸ˜’aap ab jaldi se krish ko teek kardo..😊..sure...soon after a twist he will be normal πŸ˜ƒlooking forward for the next chp...will update soon😊... lov u ..lub u 2πŸ˜ƒ...tke care πŸ€— u 2πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

sure i will try πŸ˜ƒ....thank you so much for your love and supportπŸ˜ƒ



Do it...shumi..u can..
K is still funny n nice....now its the pahse they srre showing his flaws....in the show. thats MKAP n its diff.
u allow ur imagination run wild....n give us ur FFs.

love u yaar....n i love n enjoy ur story telling as well. :-)

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