Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 - Page 3

Originally posted by: shumi.

great start dear👏....welcome to FF world...🤗

when i read "Arushi was Pratigya's young sister, who suffered mental health problems..' i was like...🤣

Originally posted by: kriya_sruthi

yes very much didi... just like ur emotional athyachars n VMs... u are sooo talented... sorry nazar tho nayi lag raha hain... palke mein dua karthi hain ki aapke upar koi buri nazar na lage..😊..

bt seriously didi continue... i loved the last part especially, its the reverse of the first MKAP promo na...???

Originally posted by: shefads

Cool Carisma! Very nice ff and quite filmy!👏 .... you have a bright future ahead!👍🏼..... plz continue.... am dying to read more about Krishna 😍....uffff.... thank God aroushi is mentally retarded! 😉 😆 Please update soon!

Originally posted by: Mili97

👏👏👏 Simply superb. Loved your take on Arushi's condition.😉 So now what do I call you, 🤗Jill of all trades and queen of hearts!❤️

Originally posted by: dhakarn

oh god.............very good start dear...............i loved P's last dialogue 😉 update soon 😊

Originally posted by: coolfattin

OMG diii

u r good at everythng!!

Amazing..cant wait 2 read futher!!

luv ur work!!

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

diiiiiiiiii

superb!!!!!!!!!

i lubd the role reversal....😆😆

ladke ka naam puchna padega?😆😆im actually imagining it nw....😆😆good gng diiiii.........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!

Originally posted by: nisha2010

loved it....⭐️.............😆

naam toh poochna padega...................🤣 looks like ab ff ka naam toh sochna padega...........😆

making p do all d things that krishna did for her..👏............😉

and good that arushiya's mental status is clear..........🤣

Originally posted by: pragati.tankha

gr88888888888.............willl b waiting 4 d next update......i loved that pratigya said ''isss laddke kaa naam zharoor pata karna padega''....like krishan said in d begning of d show.............