Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24

shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

great start dear👏....welcome to FF world...🤗

when i read "Arushi was Pratigya's young sister, who suffered mental health problems..' i was like...🤣

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kriya_sruthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: carisma2
Thankyou - sachi - did u like it?

yes very much didi... just like ur emotional athyachars n VMs... u are sooo talented... sorry nazar tho nayi lag raha hain... palke mein dua karthi hain ki aapke upar koi buri nazar na lage..😊..

bt seriously didi continue... i loved the last part especially, its the reverse of the first MKAP promo na...???

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shahbara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Cool Carisma! Very nice ff and quite filmy!👏 .... you have a bright future ahead!👍🏼..... plz continue.... am dying to read more about Krishna 😍....uffff.... thank God aroushi is mentally retarded! 😉 😆 Please update soon!

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Mili27

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Posted: 14 years ago

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👏👏👏 Simply superb. Loved your take on Arushi's condition.😉 So now what do I call you, 🤗Jill of all trades and queen of hearts!❤️

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dhakarn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

oh god.............very good start dear...............i loved P's last dialogue 😉 update soon 😊

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fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

OMG diii

u r good at everythng!!

Amazing..cant wait 2 read futher!!

luv ur work!!

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Azi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

diiiiiiiiii

superb!!!!!!!!!

i lubd the role reversal....😆😆

ladke ka naam puchna padega?😆😆im actually imagining it nw....😆😆good gng diiiii.........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!

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pragati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

gr88888888888.............willl b waiting 4 d next update......i loved that pratigya said ''isss laddke kaa naam zharoor pata karna padega''....like krishan said in d begning of d show.............

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