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PART-7
the tension started reducing among guniya and saxena family while the guest tried to settled down .

both the pair komal-adarsh,krishna-pratigya sat in the middle of the mandap ,a sacred structure supported by four pillars, representing the four Vedas as well as the four goals of a fulfilled life Dharma, Artha, Kama, Moksha. beside the pillars sacred pots known as kalash containing a coconut surrounded by fresh mango leaves were kept.they were beautifully designed with paint on the outer portion of it. kalashs are the symbols of shagun for the marriage ceremony indicating the strong tie between the couple.

look at the traditionally and beautifully decorated mandap with four pillars,fresh flowers strings,elegantly hanging thin transparent screens, and array of kalash placed one over the other , beside the four pillars!!!

they sat in front of havan kund in which the sacred fire was lit and followed the rituals said by pandit.komal and adarsh were in traditional wedding dress where as krishna was in his blue jeans and lemon green plain lacoste Tee shirt , pratigya was in pink poodle skirt with an elastic waistband. a gold, sequin leash trailing down to a white, fluffy poodle in the left, bottom corner.the length of the skirt ended just below her knees.cream silk loose fitting top , cut-away and embroidery with scalloped edge and butterfly sleeves.

when adarsh and komal stood up and exchanged their garlands krishna and pratigya too did.when adarsh filled komal's maang krishna did the same to pratigya,when adarsh tied the mangalsuthr to komal krishna was left with no mangalsutr.

pandit:'yeh vadu var ko tho mangalsutr nahi hai!!!...😲
'he wondered.every one looked at each other and started gossiping.

pratigya:'doesn't matter. it is not important...'she said reluctantly

pandit:'issa nahi hosakta....😒'


naina:'pandit ji..ek minute...mai abhi aathi hoon...'she rushed to bride's/komal's room where in a suite case komal's left out jewels were kept, along with that naina's mangalsutr was also there.

'achcha hua mai nay komal kay zaywar polish karthay samai isko bhi polish karwadi...😊'she quickly grabbed it from the jewel box and ran back to the stage where krishna and pratigya were sitting and gave it to the pandit.pantit gave it to krishna to continue the marriage rituals.

krishna:'maa...yeh tho aap ka hai...😲he surprised

naina:'ab mere kaam ka nahi hai... shub muharth nikal jaraha hai...😊'she hurried the pandit.

when adarsh tied the mangalsutr to komal, krishna did so with pratigya.


pandit:'kanya ki maa gatbandhan kay leyeh aagay aayeh...😊'he called them.while guniya was making sacred wedlock knot with komal's ghunkat and adarsh sherwani dupatta naina looked at guniya with confusion because neither pratigya had ghunkat on her head nor krishna hand dupatta on his shoulder.

guniya:🤣.... giggled at naina.not only she few of the guest too notice that and tried to hide their laugh.

naina:'hasso maat...kuch karo...😔'

with a smile guniya ran to dressing room and brought two new dupatta's of hers and helped naina to make the gatbandhan.

pandit:'ab var aur vadu pheray kay leyeh khaday ho jawo...' he said.all four stood up.krishna and pratigya looked at each other.a second later krishna extended his right hand to her to hold,but pratigya stood hesitantly.

guniya:'haath tho...😊'she took her hand and gave in to krishna's. krishna's palm was as hot as fire because of his anger while pratigya's palm was as chill as ice because of her tension.both of them felt the difference in temperature!.while they stepping around the agni,pratigya felt uneasy and uncomfortable to hold his hand.she slowly tried to remove her hand from his hold.krishna felt her intention ,turned back quickly, gave a angry look...😡 sufficient engough to burn her and gripped his hold more tightly which made her angry too.

they took their saath pheray taking the joint vow in sanskrit following the panit as follows...you have become mine forever, i have become yours ....as the heavens are stable, as the earth is stable, as the mountains are stable, as the whole universe is stable, so may our unions be permanently settled.

pandit:'yeh shaadi poori reeti rewaaj say sambhandth huye.aaj kay baadth dtho no pathi pathni huway...😊'he concluded the marriage with a smile. finally krishna left her hand from his hold,a smile of satisfaction spread on everyone's face except krishna and pratigya.soon pratigya removed her garland and kept it in krishna's hand before anybody can say, think or speak she left the mandap.krishna stood still with her garland in his hand.

naina:'😲...
yeh ladki tho gaye!....😕'

krishna:' let her go to hellAngry...why should we care about her?Angry....komal ki shaasi hogaye...bas...'

naina:😲


soon after naina and krishna were busy engaged in komal's bidaai side lining pratigya.

around 8 pm krishna ,naina,guniya,rolli and few of their close relatives returned to their apartment from the marriage hall.

krishna went to his room and fall straight on the bed without even changing his dress. he cannot believe himself...he is married!!!!😲...that too with that arrogant lady!!!...am i dreaming...!!!Confused .while he was confusing himself naina entered her room.

naina:'thum yahaan kya kar rahay ho...?😊...'

krishna:'maa...i am tired.badly i need to rest myself...'he said comfortably lying on the bed.

naina:'krishna utto...'

krishna:'par kyun?...i am tired...komal ki shaadi tho achchi thar hase ho gaye hai...let me relax now...'


naina:'shaadi teri bhi tho ho gaye hai...😃'she went and sat beside him on the bed reminded him about his marriage.

krishna:'maa...😲
' he immediately got up from the bed.
krishna:' maa don't talk about that marriage.😡mai nahi jaan tha wo muchse shaadi kyun ki?. par yeh shaadi mai nahi maantha...yeh shaadi muchay kuch maine nahi rakthi...yeh srif ek natak tha komal ki shaadi bachanay kay leyeh bas...Angry'he burst with anger.

naina:'tho kay komal ki shaadi bhi natak hai...?😡'

krishna:'maa...yeh kya kayharahi ho?...Confused'

naina:' thum dhono ek saath agni ko shaashi maan kar saat pehere laeyeh hai.usskay maang mai snoor bhara hai, mangalsutr payhana ya hai agni deav ko shaashi maankar...komal aur adarsh ki shaadi kithna suchcha hai uthnahi thumara bhi...'


krishna:Confused...


naina:'try to understand.be practical.we are not celebrities.thum rockstar ya film star nahi ho.hum jaise middle class log ko yeh rassmai aur rishtae bahuth maine rakthay hai..'

krishna:'maa...muchay kuch samach nahi aaraha hai...Confused'he realized what naina said.

naina:'jao...jakar meri bhahu ko lao...'

krishna:'omg!😲...are you crazy?thumai kya laktha wo ghamandi yahaan aayeh ki?...highly impossible...'

naina:'i know...but at least try to go and meet her family,find about her...'

krishna:'wofo ma...yeh sab ithni aasaani ki baat nahi hai...'

naina:'thum try tho karo...'

krishna:'teek hai.thum kayhae rahi tho mai kal chalay jawoon ga...' he again fall on the bed to sleep

naina:'kal nahi...aaj ...abhi...nayk kaam mai thayri kyun?..' she insisted.

krishna:'maa...thumbhi na...' he got up from the bed.

roobie:'maa...muchay patha nahi wo kahaan raha thi hai...ek dtho baar mai madhura road par mila hun,thats it....'

naina:'aman uncle may be knowing .get the details from him...'

krishna:'teek hai...😔'

naina:' you are tired.fresh up ,change your dress before you go...'

krishna got down from the bed. took take a quick hot shower and dressed up neatly in a ironed full sleeve sky blue dress shirt and dark blue jeans.
krishna:'maa...i will be back soon....'he said before leaving. while leaving his house he remembered arushi and dicided to meet her first.

when he pressed the door bell arushi's mother parvati opened the door.

parvati:'krishna...achcha hua thum aagayeh...'

krishna:'wo...arushi...'

parvati:'yeh ladki bhi na..... ..😔..kuch bol thi hi nahi.usski dill ki baat muchay pehele hi patha chala hotha tho mai kissi bhi tharha naina ko mana lethi...mai haath jod le thi thumse 😭 'she folded her hands in front of him with tears.

krishna:'aunty issa maat bolo...please...'he hold her hands.

krishna:'kya mai arushise mil saktha hun?...'

parvati:''bed room mai hai. mai bula thi hun...'

krishna:'aap bura nahi maane tho mai chale jawoon?...'

parvati:'iss mai bura maane ki kya baat hai.thum hi usse samjaa sakthay...' with her permission krishna went to her room,it was his first visit to her bed room.arushi was lying upside down in the dark room.he switched on all the lights including fan.

krishna:'arushi...utto...'went and sat beside her on the bed.

arushi:🤢....but she did not, he can hear her crying sound.

krishna:'please utto...'


arushi:Cry....

krishna:'meri baat suno ge nahi...?' he gently touched her shoulder
arushi:🤢...

krishna:'arushi...'

she slowly turned stright got up and sat on the bed.her face and eyes were swellon and became red because of constant cry.krishna wondered what to say and how to start.

krishna:'arushi...please stop crying.i don't understand how to console you...'
arushi:Cry
krishna:....thum muchay bathuth achchi lagthi ho.meri achchi dost ho...maan tha hun pyaar aur dosti mai zeyaada doori nahi hai.hamai kudth patha nahi chaltha dosti kab pyaar mai balad jaatha hai...it is a very delicate change...'
arushi:'Cry...'

krishna:'par rishthay ooper wala banathahi...yeh rishto ko hum jhutla nahi sakthay...'

krishna:'i hope you can understand the situation ...you want me to live happily isn't it?...thum iss thar ha rothi raho ge,dhuki raho ge tho... do you think i will be happy?...'he wiped her tears from her cheeks.

arushi:😭 😊....she tried to smile.but it was not easy for her.

krishna:'chalo...i will wipe your nose too...😊' he tried to wipe her nose.

arushi:'😭 😊...'she pushed his hand and wiped her dripping nose by herself with her dupatta.

krishna:'🤣...'

krishna:'patha hai...mai abhi thak dinner nahi kiya hai...' he said to divert her,more over he want her to eat.

arushi:'mai lathi hun...😭 😊'she immediately got down from the bed keeping aside all her heart wrenching feelings.

after some time she came back with a plate served with daal, roti,sabji and chapati.
krishna:'thum baito...'he made her sit on the bed,went out and brought a empty plate from arushi's mom.

krishna:'thum bhi kuch khaye nahi hoge na?....'he shared the food in that empty plate and gave it to her.after arushi ate the food and felt bit better krishna left her and went to see pratigya singh.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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PART-8

around 9 pm

pratigya nivas:

security at the gate:'saab pratigya ma'am se milne koi ladka aaya hai...'he spoke to sajjan singh through intercom.

sajjan:'pratigya se milne???😲 ladka!!!...wo bhi iss waqth..??😕' he looked at the time and surprised.

sajjan:'teek hai andher bhayj tho...😕'

with the permission of the main gate security and sajjan singh krishna made his entry in to pratigya nivas!!

sajjan and nanima were sitting in the main hall.they were confused to see a young and hansome stranger walking in.

sajjan:'koon ho thum?😕 we have not seen you before...' he stood up from his seat with surprise.

krishna:' mai...pratigya ka pati hun...'he said with no expression.
sajjan:'kya!😲 😲 😲....thum kya kayha rahay ho...?! koi andhaza bhi hai thumai?😲...'

nanima:'shaayad iss ki dhimaagi haalat teek nahi hai.yeh security bhi na ! kaise kaise log ko andher chod thay tha hai...😔'

sajjan:'shaayad thum galath pathay pe aayeh ho...😲'he could not belive him.

krishna showed their visiting card to them which he got it from aman.

sajjan:'patha tho sahi hai...😲'he astonished.

krishna:'i want to talk to pratigya...'
sajjan:'iss waqth...!'
krishna:'...right now...' he was bold in his vice.

sajjan:'pratigyaaaa....'with no other choice he called her.

pratigya:'kya hai dad?....🥱'she came out from her room.

sajjan:'neechay awo...😡'
sajjan:'patha nahi yeh ladki kahaanse nayeh nayeh museebat doond laathi...😡' he said to nanima looking at krishna.
pratigya came down coolly.while she was half way stepping down, she saw krishna standing in the hall.she did not get panic.it was expected one,but not that soon.... she stopped on the steps itself.

sajjan:'kya thum iss ko jaanthi ho?...😲'

pratigya:'haan...aaj shubha maine isse shaadi ki hai...' she said as simple as that without any tension or hesitation.

sajjan:'pratigyaaa.....thum needth ya nashay mai tho nahi ho???😡'

pratigya:'bilkul nahi...' she was crystal clear.

nanima:'thum eysa kaise kar sakthi ho?😡...😲....'

pratigya:'wofo...nanima...mai shaadi nahi ki tho problem hai,ab shaadi karli hai tho bhi problem hai...thum log ka problem hi kya hai?...i cannot understand...😡'

sajjan:'why you did not tell us?...don't you think that you should have told us...!....hamai batha na chahe yeh tha na?....ithni bhi kya jalthi thi...😡...'

pratigya:'dad...it was purely an accidental and unexpected one...'she said reluctantly.

nanima:'lo... koi accidentally bhi shaadi karta?...wo bhi purely accidental....😲'

pratigya:'nanima,mai thum log ki '...shaadi karlo... shaadi karlo...shaadi karlo... ' slogan se thang aagaye...karli shaadi.....bas...'

sajjan:'these are all lame excuses...😡...shaadi karna koi mazaak nahi hai...'

pratigya:'come on dad...i feel sleepy🥱...we will talk about this tomorrow...'without waiting for their reply she went back to her room.

sajjan and nanima looked at each other and then to krishna for few second with confusion.finally nanima came forward...

nanima:'baito...'she told him to sit.along with krishna sajjan too sat.

sajjan:' naam kya hai..?'

krishna:'krishna saxena...'

nanima:'kya kar thay ho...?'

krishna:'mai electrical engineer hun.i have done my masters in IIT kanpur aur mai delhi railway work shop mai chief executive engineer hun...'

nanima:'thumare kharwale...'

krishna:'mere maa naina, behan komal and arushi...'

nanima:'aap kay pitha...'

krishna:'he is no more....' so far clear throat was stuck while saying that.

sajjan:'thum pratigya ko kabse jaan thay ho?...' he interfered to divert him.

krishna:'mai nahi jaan tha...'he said bluntly.

nanima:'kya?😲...ajeeb hai ! jaanthay nahi aur shaadi karli...😲'

krishna:'wo meri majboori thi...waise bhi ek dho baar madhura road par thay kha hun...'

nanima:'bahuth thayr hoga ye hai.baaki kal pooch lay na...'

krishna:'mai pratigyase...' he hesitated.

again sajjan and nanima looked at each other not knowing what to do further.

sajjan:'ab pratigya quth kayha rahi hai tho wo iss se shaadi ki hai...😕'

nanima:'waise bhi ladka ziyaada bura nahi lak tha...😕' she said by her experience.

they discussed with each other for a while, at the end,

sajjan:'pratigya ka kamra ooper left side mai pehla wala hai...😕'indirectly he gave the permission to meet her.

krishna:'thanks...' he went upstairs.

pratigya's bed room!!!!.

he pushed the big double doors and entered her bed room. pratigya was standing in front of the dressing table fixing her night dress.he closed the door loudly and bold it .

pratigya:'thum...😲' he heard the door locking sound and turned towards him. krishna stood leaning on the closed doors. he took deep breaths to calm down himself and stared at her.he felt as if the anger and the helplessness so for he kept under control was set free. his nerves and muscles became tight.he clenched his jaws tightly to keep himself under control but the anger which was eating him from the morning did not spare him.
it explode through his chest.

krishna:'thum nahi....aaapp...😡'he roared and with all his temper he moved in focusing her with his heavy steps, did not care to look around the room.his concentration was right on pratigya.

pratigya:' 😲 😲 😲...how dare to enter in to my bed room!...praigya singh kay bed room mai!?....'

krishna:' chupppp!😡...singh hoga thumara baap...thum aaj kay baad .....aaj kay baad kyun...
aaj se saxena ho...saxena...😡'

pratigya:' sucksena....ewww....'she twisted her nose.

krishna:'hey...you mannersless goose...😡...let me show you whom i am...😡'
he removed his belt from his hip with all his force.

pratigya:'what the heck you are doing...?😲 😡
'

krishna:' wahi...pati dharam nibha raha hun...😈...singh se saxena...'he said wickedly and released his shirt which was tuck in to his jeans ,while moving ahead.

pratigya:'why did you come here?😲 😡
'

krishna:' 😡...
suhaag raat kay leyeh...😈'

pratigya:'😲 😡
...she had no words.he undone his shirt button one by one from up to down.pratigya stepped backward .she under stood his intention.her heart galloped.she took short and quick breaths to gather her strength.

pratigya:'khareeb maat aana😲....aagae maat bado...stop right there...😲
'he did not cared her,removed his shirt and slide down.he was not wearing any baniyan.she moved behind and hit by her bed from back,struggled to balance and stand straight.krishna stood very close to her with shirtless.she could feel his heart beat and his wide chest's up and down movements.

pratigya:'thum...issa nahi...😲 😡
'she stammered.

krishna:'thum nahi aapp😡...thumai kay lag tha ? thum thumaari manmaani karogi?.nahi... 😡...
aaj kay baad meri manmaani chalage. mai jo chahun ga wo karunga... thumare saat?...'he pushed her on the bed by hitting her shoulder.she lost her balance ,went and fall flat on the bed.

pratigya:'...😲 😡...'she was lying on the bed like a inflated baloon with no strenth to argue.

krishna:'you know what?😡 mai chahun tho yeh bandth kamre mai thumai kuch bhi kar saktha hun...kuch bhi...suhaag raat bhi😡
....by marrying me you yourself have given me this right...aur thumare dad quth muchay iss kamre mai bhayja hai....' he took his right leg and kept it on the bed ,bend down and with his left hand touched her cheek,he was looking so wild not less than an villian. his wristwatch dial was very close to her face looked like a wall clock to her. the tick tick sound of the minute hand was sounding like loud drum beat to her.she felt the heat of his palm on her cheek and tried to push his hand away, but could not
pratigya:🤢
krishna:'jaise thum sooch thi ho waisai nahi hun mai....😡...mai ek number ka lafanga aur badmaash hun... 😡...thum mai kithna akad hai much mai dugni hai...mai chahun tho thumai...😡 abhi issi waqth...😡' he paused to increase her heart beat.
praigya:🤢...she swallowed the saliva like swallowing bitter pills

krishna:'thum apne aap ko kya samaj thi ho???😡...world beauty!!!! i am not at all interested in you even if you are a miss universe. i don't even like to see your face.muchay thum jaise ghamandi ladkiyon se sakth nafrat hai.i hate you...😡'
' he took back his hand from her cheek on his own,may be he respected her feeling!.

she was dumbfound,felt like she was paralyzed.no words to speak.her intention to marry him was different. one main reason is to safe guard herself from angad. par yeh tho angad se bhi bada badmaash aur katharnaat nikla 😲 . angad kay saath saath ab muchay issae bhi jheel na paday ga.my calculation never went wrong.but in his case mai kaisa khalath hogaye😲
?' she realized that she has invited more problems by doing this marriage.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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loved it...it was jus awesomeee:)
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I wish i was closed to you to give you a huge hug Shumi, you are the best! both chapters were impressive!!!!!!! Actually loved prats for her audacity!!! in fact she is not bad but needs someone to guide her towards the right path!!!! hopefully now she has 4 in 1 in krish... i like the scene when she calmly walk out after the wedding without a glance at her so called husband ...too cool.. a very unusual wedding! thanks for the lovely pictures. I laughted a lot while reading part 9 with krish being tough and when prat started trembling! never thought she would remember angad at that time ! 😉 it was too funny ...... can't wait to read the next part until then bye.... Shumi⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Excellent Beta!! :-) Enjoyed a lot!!
"tum rockstar to nahi" - how diferent he is here..he was one in thoda sa pyaar.. :-)
i loke the humour in ur dialogues...esp wen buzurg log talk :-)
"tum accidently shaadi kar li..aur woh bhi purely accidental"- :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
keep rocking :-))))
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Originally posted by: CBrocks

loved it...it was jus awesomeee:) thank you so much dear 😃

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shumi di.......................................... once again lovely chapters.....👏👏👏 very well written😊. you know what, i just loved the way you wrapped up the marriage thing. I mean i thought it'll take atleast 2 -3 chapters to finish off the marriage. i'm happy, its over without any drama...........😃
this is what i like about your ff. you dont drag the story................... 👏👏looking forward for lovely kriya scenes.now tell me who is going to shift? pratigya or krishna? just hope pratigya is forced to stay with krishna at his place. but i didnt knew krishna can become so aggressive. anyways i like that after all he is krishna......... and thats his nature.......... and we love him for this.

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Originally posted by: HamiSky

Excellent Beta!! :-) thanks hameeda 😃Enjoyed a lot!! glad you enjoyed it 😃 "tum rockstar to nahi" - how diferent he is here..he was one in thoda sa pyaar.. :-)..yep...different avatar of krishna...😉

i loke the humour in ur dialogues...thanks😃...keep reading my up dates ...hope you will enjoy it...esp wen buzurg log talk :-)
"tum accidently shaadi kar li..aur woh bhi purely accidental"- :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))...LOL😆
keep rocking :-)))) ummm...thanks hameed😃

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Originally posted by: shefads

I wish i was closed to you to give you a huge hug Shumi, aw...that is so sweet of you shehnaz😃 🤗 you are the best! thanks😃 both chapters were impressive!!!!!!! thanks again😃 Actually loved prats for her audacity!!! hahaha...😉in fact she is not bad but needs someone to guide her towards the right path!!!! hopefully now she has 4 in 1 in krish...exactly 😊 i like the scene when she calmly walk out after the wedding without a glance at her so called husband ...too cool.. 😆...what else she can do...already she created so much drama...😆 a very unusual wedding! heeeeee...😉 thanks for the lovely pictures. u r welcome dear 😃 I laughted a lot while reading part 9 with krish being tough and when prat started trembling! never thought she would remember angad at that time ! 😉 it was too funny .....hahaha...i hope you will laugh when you read my other up dates also.... can't wait to read the next part ...will post soon...😃until then bye.... bye bye 😃Shumi⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ aw...........muah!😛 i lub you 😃

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