FF:Kar Le Mohabbath!NEW- pt-66,67,68,69 pg-94

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
beautyfull update dear thanks yaar😃
love there meeting...thanks for liking it 😃
everything was perfect...aw...i am impressed😛

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chhaya

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brilliant, wonderful and very gud ff diiiiiiiiiiii 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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aleena1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Shuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆

Awesome update yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Poor Krishna having to meet Prats under the same circumstances.......Angad is sooooo sickkk..🤢 he has no manners..... at least he should knock before entering a ladies bedroom🤢 such a creepo.....

Oh god.... I feel as though Prats is gonna make a fuss at the wedding.......somebody plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz slap her

This story reminds me of the film Laadla which stars Sridevi and Anil Kapoor.... Cant wait to see what happens next..... update soon plzzz

Thanx😊

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling
Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hi zashhhhhhhhhhh....😃
Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u r back wit yet anothr FF!!!!!!!!!im sooooooooooooooo happy.............glad to see you happy....and...me too happy that i am back to see and meet you all in my ff thread....Thoda sa Pyaar ws sooooo close to my heart dat i rlllllllllllllly ws so much disappointed wen u ended it.......that was best credit to my .ff...THANKS DEAR 😃bt u r back wit a BANG!!!!!!!!!this FF is so different frm ur other FFs....thanks again😃....hmmmmmm.......jagda at the beginning itself??bt im lyking dis nw avatar of Pratigya.....arrogant spoilt girl...thanks for liking their avatar...😃..usually it wil b Krishna........dats wat we say d Shumi di Magic!!!!...i am impressed 😳bt i must say dat i rlly dnt lyk Krishna Arushi lub story...no offence..shez so nice n caring.bt as im a behoodi n a gr8 KriYa shipper i cnt evn tolerate to see anything other dan KriYa..no worry i won't be writing any romance between krishna and arushi...i know kriya fans won't like it...😉.........im rlly getting my fingers crossed 4 KriYa confrontation in d Mehandi ceremony...wait and watch😆....Hope their MOTHAL wil turn to KATHAL soooooon!!!!!!!!!...sure😃
n Shumi di,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thnx 4 d PM n remembering me.....u r welcome dear 😃....im eagerly w8n 4 u nxt update...try to up date soon...😃....n Keep gng👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...bas...bas...bas...thanks for countless claping...i lub you for that 😛😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: chhaya007
brilliant, wonderful and very gud ff diiiiiiiiiiii thanks chaya for all your wonderful words 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ special thanks for your claps and stars,,,,😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: aleena1
Shuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆 ...aleeeeeeeeeeeeeen😛
Awesome update yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...thanks dear...lub u r 👏 and ⭐️

Poor Krishna having to meet Prats under the same circumstances...beechara......Angad is sooooo sickkk..🤢 he has no manners..... at least he should knock before entering a ladies bedroom🤢 such a creepo.....no doubt😡

Oh god.... I feel as though Prats is gonna make a fuss at the wedding...she is for sure....somebody plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz slap her...no worry krish is there to fix her😉

This story reminds me of the film Laadla which stars Sridevi and Anil Kapoor...oh i see! i did not see that film😃.. Cant wait to see what happens next..... update soon plzzz yep...soon i will😃

Thanx😊 u r welcome😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

PART-5

it was komal adarsh mehndi:

a middle class marriage hall was neatly decorated in a simple and traditional way with serial lights and flowers.

look at the marriage hall over crowed with relatives and friends!!!

children with their new and special dresses were running here and there and enjoying.elders were busy with the arrangements.

komal was sitting on the stage with her hands stretched while ladies were making mehndi design on her palm. she was wearing sea green silk, hand embroidery resham and sequins salwaar kurta.the top had heavily beaded floral patterns in yellow and green shades.sea green pure chiffon dupatta with lemon banarsi border was spread on both the side of her shoulder.the bottom was lemon synthetic without much decoration.she was looking absolutely fabulous!

it was around 7pm, the function was on. krishna came to the hall after checking the menu in the catering section.

friends:'krishna...where were you?...'his friends circled and started teasing and making fun of him.

krishna:'muchay chodo adarsh ko pakado.., dulha hai wo..mai nahi...😉'he tried to escape.

adarsh:'yaar muchay kyun fashaa rahe ho?...' while they were joking and laughing adarsh's father aman interrupted them.

aman:'adarsh come here for a second...'

adarsh:'excuse me...😊'he walked fast towards his father aman.

aman:'inn se milo...miss pratigya singh...hamare company kay MD hai..😃'krishna and his other friends followed him.krishna noticed her from distance itself...'this ghamandi lady????😲...' in no time he recognize her.

adarsh:'thanks for coming ma'am .it is our pleasure...😃'by that time his friends went close to them.

adarsh:' yeh mere dost hai...😊'he introduced them individually.when pratigya saw krishna,she too immediately recognize him.'Byson!!!...U...😡'before she could say some thing...

adarsh:' he is krishna saxena, my childhood friend, would be brother in law😊'he introduced him.

pratigya :'hi..😊'she smiled nervously puzzled to see his reaction!. 'krishna...krishna....krishna...'she tried to memorize his name instead she got mesmerized with that name.she swallowed the saliva and controlled herself.she was expecting him to say at least a sorry. but krishna did not give important to her, not even 'hi smile'.as soon as he got the chance he left from there.later he never tried to look at her not even in her direction, because he is from brid's side and she is from groom's side krishna want to be very very cautious about her.

pratigya was constantly looking at him ,continuously watching him while his name'... krishna...krishna....krishna...'was echoing in her mind.she noticed him in detail.he was wearing cream silk simple plain sharwani with very less zari work.looking as if he is the groom.he was standing with arushi smiling and talking with her.arushi was in her simple orange ghara choli with matching thin dupatta on one side of her shoulder.wearing simple neck and ear set and hand full of matching orange bangles.

friends:'wofo...krishna.eisse hi khade khade baat thay karthay rahogey?...aaj hamare dost ki shaadi hai...come and join with us...'they pulled him to dance with them.with no other go he joined them.

mehndi song...

copy paste and listen the song

http://www.dishant.com/jukebox.php?songid=19984

mere yaar ki shaadi hai
dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan
dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan

while stepping with his friends he invited arushi to dance with him. without much hesitation she too joined with them and did slight movements with embarrassment.

pratigya was sitting in one corner in a VIP seat and staring at them with evil eyes.'meri dunyaan bharki bay izzati kar kay yahaan kushee yaan manara ha hai!...😲 😡'she was burning inside.

ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
jahan bhi yeah jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai

mere yaar ki shaadi hai
mere yaar ki shaadi hai.....he swirled arushi, her slim body turned round gracefully, her hand full of bangles strike together made jingling melodic music, her lehenga puffed and formed wonderful umberla below her knee...krishna and arushi were looking amazing while swirling.their face were glowing with charm and cheer.

she could not withstand them any more.she got up from the seat to leave.aman came running to her.

aman:'abhi tho function shuru hua hai...😊'

pratigya :'i am getting late...' she said looking furiously at krishna dancing with overwhelmed joy.

aman:'have your dinner please...'

pratigya :'fir kabhi...' she said in short and went out without further talk.

the whole night pratigya could not sleep,' for the past fourteen days i was trying to find that Byson 😡.but could not.today he came on my way with out any try. how happy he was looking????😡,he gave the false news to the press and insulated me in front of the whole world, because of him i was degraded in front of my employees, because of him muchay dad se ithna saara sunna pada that too early in the morning...😡...' she was boiling inside.

'he slapped me! 😡 😲 ? how come he give such a false news to press? for the sake of money he gave such a dirty new to the press ! this middle class people paisoon kay leyeh kuch bhi karthay thay hai...'her anger blow up.

'slap tho ab mai karoon ki zinda gi bhar ki...😡...i am not going to leave him...'. finally after thinking million times she found a solid solution to 1) take revenge 2)to have free body guard 3)to get rid of angad's torture and 4) dad and nanima's continuous and constant slogan...'shaadi karlo! ' ..four in one!!!'

the whole night she spent restless, waiting for the sun to raise.

Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

PART-6

next day morning:

it was adarsh and komal's marriage day.most awaited day for saxena and guniya's family.for pratigya too...😉!

both adarsh and komal were in their wedding dress,sitting respectfully in the middle of the mandap in front of agni and the pandit.while krishna and arushi were helping the pandit pratigya entered the marriage hall.

pratigya 's sudden and unexpected storming entry in the mandap brought a wave of disturbance among the guest including the pandit, bride and the bride groom.aman walked quickly to receive her.

aman:'aayeh😃...i never expected you...😃'he was very much pleased with her presence.as yesterday she attended the mehndi he thought she will not be attending the marriage today.

he took her near the stage where komal and adarsh were sitting, krishna and arushi were standing.pratigya looked at krishna with a scornful facial expression by a slight raising of her one eye brow,krishna did not acknowledge her where as adarsh and komal stood up to wish her.

pratigya :'please sit and carry on...😊'she said to them extra politely and turned towards aman.he understood that she is about to say some thing.

aman:' ma'am kuch baat hai???😕...'he looked at her confusingly.

with a grin she bend close to aman and spoke in a very low voice for few minutes.while she was speaking aman's face turned weird with mixed emotions.

aman :'mai issa kaisa kar saktha?...😕'he refused in a very low tone.

pratigya :'aap ko karna paday ga...i hope you don't like to loose your job along with 30 years of work experience...'she said without any mercy.

aman :'ma'am issa kyun...?😔'

pratigya :'thumai yeh jaan ne ki zaroori nahi hai...😡'

aman was left with no alternation. hesitantly he went to krishna.

krishna:'kya hua uncle?😕...any thing wrong? Unhappy

' his sub conscious predicted some thing is wrong.

aman:'wo...wo...i am sorry Unhappy

...yeh shaadi ho nahi sakthi...😔'

krishna,naina,guniya,adarsh,komal ,arushi every one in the mandap were shocked.krishna immediately turned towards pratigya and saw her sanding with a smile of victory and self satisfaction on her face.he shook with shock.

krishna:' kyun...😲 😕?' he asked aman.his voice refused to come out.

pratigya :'...because i said so😈...mai nay kaha hai...😈' she interrupted with a evil smile.soon krishna's veins became stiff,blood rushed through it to his brain ,he clenched his fist to control him self,others had no word to speak.

krishna:😡 U....' he quickly reached her in two wide steps with huge erupted anger.very next moment he remembered adarsh introducing her as aman's MD, which make him to check his temper.

pratigya: 😈 ...she stood straight with the same evil smile and stubborn look at him and his reactions.in fact she enjoyed that moment.

krishna:' issa kyun kar rahi ho thum???...😕'his voice chocked. he brought his anger completely under control.

pratigya :'thum nahi...aapp kaho...😡'

krishna:'😲...aaa...aap ko kya chahi yeh?...' he stammered,tears bubbled in his eyes,.he tried hard not show up his unshead tears and his weakness.

pratigya :'yehi...😈'she said looking at his eyes filled with tears.

if the marriage doesn't happen he cannot think about the condition of naina and komal.naina was waiting for this day for the past twenty years. she was working hard day and night in a private company, and saving penny by penny to fulfill this day.komal who is in bridal dress with lots of dreams carrying in her eyes will crush down to earth. for a middle class girl if her marriage breaks at high time she has no life later.he cannot see them shattering like that.

krishna:' i want to know the reason...'

pratigya :'reason!!!...you should be knowing...😡

krishna:'i don't know😕...believe me...' he was confused.

pratigya :'it is not my problem...'she said reluctantly.

pandit:' shub muharh nikal raha hai...😕' he want to know whether he has to stay back or leave.

pratigya :'yeh shaadi hogi...par...'

aman:'par ...😕'he hold his breath.

pratigya :' par innki shaadi pehle ho gee tho...'she said looking at krishna.

krishna:'meri shaadi!!😲.....😲'

pratigya :'mujse 😈....'she said very clearly.

krishna:'😲... he could not speak.feeling of anger raised from his stomach like effervescence and stuck in to his throat.every one in the mandap were shocked.

naina:'krishna...yeh koon ladki hai?😕 😲...' she came forward to know about her.

krishna:'mai nahi jaantha maa...😡...hogi koi reyeez baap ki bigdihuye awlaat...😡'he said criticizingly looking at pratigya letting out his anger.

pratigya :'you...😡'

krishna:'shaadi koi bachchonka kehel nahi hai...'he refused.

pratigya:'muchay bhaashan sunne ki aadath nahi hai 😡.

krishna:'why should i marry you? i don't want to and don't like to...😡'he tried again.

pratigya :'it is up to you....soochlo....shaadi karni hai ya na?...thumari behan ki...😈' she stood stubborn counting the seconds.

krishna:'well...😔'without taking much time, failed to find alternative solution he quickly decided and agreed to save komal's marriage.

komal:'...😲...nahi bhaiya mujay yeh shaadi nahi karni. meri shaadi bachane aap kissi anjaan ladki se...we don't even know who is she ? what type of girl she?'

naina:😔...nahi krishna...adarsh why don't you say some thing...'she requested adarsh.

adarsh:'aunty mai kya karsak tha...😔'he was absolutely helpless.

krishna:'mera fikr maat karo, mujay pagal khoday ko khabu kar ne aatha hai...😡'he looked at pratigya with flaming anger in his eyes.

pratigya :'yeh tho waqth hi batha yehga...khabu hota hai ya khabu kar tha hai ...😈'she smirked.

finally in no time aman and others arranged for two more rose garlands.

arushi was watching every thing with no words.she became numb,senseless,stood still where as krishna completely forgot about arushi. that time his only focus was komal and adarsh marriage.he don't even care to bother about himself.

pandit:' shub muharh nikal raha hai...'he reminded them again.krishna and pratigya moved towards the stage.while climbing the stage krishna noticed arushi standing in one corner of the stage with tears.involuntarily.he stepped down from the stage and moved to her.

krishna:' arush! 😔 🤢...'

arushi:'😭...'all of a sudden arushi went in to his arms crying.for a second krishna did not understand any thing,already he was very much confused.

naina,guniya,komal, arushi's parents were stun! her action of suddenness shocked them all.

krishna was completely broke down with arushi's action.quickly he was back to his sense and realized the sensitivity of the atmosphere,for a nano moment he hugged her gently and rubbed her back.very next moment he separated her from him.

pratigya :'ummm...tho thumai girl friend bhi hai....ab tho aur bhi maza aayeh ga...😛...😈' she said with satisfaction.arushi ran away crying from the mandap.

krishna:'😡...without saying a single word he went to the stage to get married with pratigya singh....

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

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shahbara

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Wow what a twist ! poor krish such a big sacrifice! he should have at least protested but he loves his sister too much and after all it's there happiness and honour which is at stake! but in a way i am glad for him i think he was not really in love with aroushi maybe just a good friend well my p.o.v....anyway prat is so selfish and arrogant ... for her money is everything !...can't wait to see krish retribution after the wedding! at least it won't be boring 😉 looking forward to the upcoming parts soon! bye Shumi ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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