FF:Kar Le Mohabbath!NEW- pt-66,67,68,69 pg-94 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti4mehta

shumi di...............hi preeti😃........................... once again lovely chapters.....👏👏👏 very well written😊. thanks dear 😃you know what, i just loved the way you wrapped up the marriage thing. I mean i thought it'll take atleast 2 -3 chapters to finish off the marriage. i'm happy, its over without any drama...........😃....no dear don't worry i won't bore you lol
this is what i like about your ff. you dont drag the story................... 👏👏 thanks again dear...😃looking forward for lovely kriya scenes. kriya scene! so sooon? lol now tell me who is going to shift? pratigya or krishna? just hope pratigya is forced to stay with krishna at his place. wait for my up date dear 😊 but i didnt knew krishna can become so aggressive. obviously...koi zabarzasthi shaadi karli tho aggressive ho ga na? anyways i like that after all he is krishna......... and thats his nature......Do'h.... and we love him for this. wahi tho😛

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PART-9
pratigya stopped breathing and was literally shivering.looking at her condition his anger reduced a bit, he slowly moved back,moved away from her bed ,went and took his shirt from the floor,wore it and tried to put up his buttons, while doing so he remembered some thing and turned back.she was still lying on the bed strength less and sense less.as soon as he saw her his anger erupted and he again came to her angrily.

krishna:'thumne meri behan ki shaadi kyun rokne ki koshish ki?...😡
'

pratigya:...😔
krishna:'muchay thumse shaadi karne kay leyeh majboor kyun kiya?...😡'

pratigya:...😔'

krishna:'thumai ithna hi shaadi karne ka shook hai tho kisi thumarai hi type kay ladkay se karlay thi...😡
'

pratigya:'...😔'

krishna:'bolo...😡
' he hold her jaws with his fingers.

pratigya:'😭...along with fear tears appeared in her eyes but she did not speak.
krishna:'utto... ab chalo mere saath.... sasural...your in-laws are awaiting for you...😈...'he hold her wrist.
pratigya:'leave me...😡 😒..'she tried to get rid of his hold. while he was insisting her to come with him he got disturbed by his cell phone .he left her to attend the phone.it is his mother naina.

naina:'krishna thum teek tho hona?😕...'

krishna:'maa...thum meri chin tha chodo.i am perfect...'

naina:'kya thu wo ladki se mila...'

krishna:'haan...mai ussi kay hi room mai hun...'he said looking at her sarcastically.

naina:'ab bahuth thayr ho chuki hai.thu wahi ruk jaana...'

krishna:' don't worry maa...'he end the conversation with good night.

by that time pratigya got up from the bed,moved back ,went and sat in one corner of the bed so that krishna cannot reach her easily.

krishna went to the right side of the bed where there was a three seater couch.while going, without turning he noticed pratigya folding her legs up and sitting in one corner of the edge.

he removed his leather belt and leather strap watch and kept it on the tea table and sat relaxingly,leaning on the back of the sofa.his head started hurting.first time in his life he spoke so rudely, he was tired of himself. exhausted both physically and mentally.

the whole night she spent sleepless sitting in the corner of the bed.while krishna slept quietly on the sofa.involuntarily sleep embraced her around 5am.next day when pratigya woke up it was very very late around 10am,as soon as she woke up her eyes looked at the sofa in hurry and relaxed to found empty.without getting up she looked around the room.there was no sign of krishna's presence.she took a time being satisfactory breath and got up from the bed ,got ready in no time and rushed to office.

krishna's workshop:
krishna was back to his work direct from pratigya nivas!
look at the railway workshop where krishna works as chief executive engineer!!!


tunna:'yeh kya krishna bhaiya?... thumne hamai thumari behan ki shaadi mai invite kiya...par shaadi tho thumari hue!!!!...😉'his friend teased him.

krishna:'oh! common tunna...it is accidental...'

tunna:'haan haan samaj liya bhaiya.....kya lag rahay thay thum dono bridal dress mai😛...thum jeans aur Tee shirt mai aur wo poodle skirt mai...perfect couple ufff...very hot,no need to lit the havan agni...apnay aap jaljaa tha......😛'

krishna:'we have lot of pending work,stop nagging me ,go and continue your work...😡 😊'he tried to send him away.

tunna:'jaa raha hun...will be back soon to continue with you....🤣'

krishna:'unit 7 mai bogie S4 eastern railway coach should get ready to day.

tunna:'don't worry.will be done...👍🏼' he went to unit seven.

look at the unit seven for which krishna is in charge.

they work round the clock in shifts.first shift from 7am to 3pm ,second shift from 3pm to 11pm, and third shift from 11pm to 7am, three shifts per day.presently krishna's shift is working in first shift from 7am to 3pm.this schedule changes for all employees every fortnight.

after his shift was over he was back to his apartment.

naina:'krishna...chal haat moo dholay mai chai bana thay thi hun...😊'by the time he refreshed himself she was back with tea.both of them sat in the hall with tea

naina:'tell me now...kal kya hua...?😛' she asked curiously.

krishna:'kya hua mathlab...😉?' he teased her.

naina:'thu bhi na...chal jalthee se batha...😛'

krishna:'🤣 ...mai uss ko achchay se dhamka kay rakha hun...😆'

naina:'bathameez.....😲 '
krishna:'thaykho thumne bhi maan li mai bathameez hun...🤣'

naina:'badmaash...😡😊'she slightly hit him on his head

krishna:'🤣...nahi tho wo mera toast bana thay thi maa...'

naina:'beechari...😒'

krishna:'maa...wo beechari weechari nahi hai.blackmail karkay muchse shaadi ki hai...'
naina:'kya naam tha usska...'
krishna:'tha nahi hai...pratigya singh😆.....'
naina:' PRATIGYA....kithna pyaara naam hai...😛'
krishna:' pyaara naam!!!!...pratigya singh???....eewww...1940 ka model hai... lagtha hai kissi boodi aurath ka naam...🤣' he shrunk his eyes as an expression of dislike and laughed.
naina:'bathameez...kahin ka...😡...😊'
krishna:' such mai maa...look at my name! krishna !!! ...koibhi ladki ek baar mere naam legi tho theen baar echo hoga uss kay kaan mai"....krishna...krishna...krishna...." he raised his collar up.
naina:'ufff...thu ek dam badmaash hoga ya hai. thujse behass karna bekaar hai. tell me about her family ...😛'

krishna:'i don't know exactly.i just met her father and one senior citizen called nanima🤣...'he laughed thinking about yesterday,the way he acted with pratigya.

naina:issmai haasne ki kya baat hai?😡...'

krishna:'patanahi issehi...🤣'
naina:'thu pagal hogaya hai...😡😊'
krishna:'wo tho honahi tha.ajaanak meri shaadi jo hogaye...🤣'
naina:'omg! you are unbelievable'

krishna:'🤣...inn baatho ko chodo...and tell me how is komal?...'

naina:' thodi thayr mai wo aayeh gi pagpheray kay leyeh adarsh kay saath...muchay bahuth saara kaam hai...😊'she took the empty tea cups and went to kitchen.

when komal and adarsh visited, kriya marriage was the hot topic again.

adarsh:'thu kuch bhi bol kudi badi sony hai.....'he winked.

krishna:'🤣...'

komal:'😡
...

around 10pm after komal and adarsh left..

naina:'krishna...ab thu bhi nikal...'

krishna:'mai kahaa jaawoon?...😲..'

naina:'wahi jahaan pratigya ho...'

krishna:'maa...what are you saying?😡....kal aap ne kaha maine suna...par aaj nahi...if she wants let her come and stay with us.'

naina:'krishna...try to understand...hamai nahi pata yeh shaadi wo kissli yeh kihai. more over thumne kaha wo raeez kharaane ki hai.don't expect her to come here so soon...'

krishna:'i don't care about her...i am not going there any more...bas baat khatham...😡'he was determined.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-10

a week passed with out interaction between krishna and pratigya. both were back to their routine life.it was like almost they forget about their own marriage.

a week later:

it was thursday. around 6pm krishna was sitting in his room on the bed and helping rolli to do her home work.naina was in the kitchen preparing dinner.
'DING...DONG...!!!'their door bell rang...naina came out of the kitchen wiping her hands in her pallu and opened the door.she was surprised and confused to see a middle aged man in a coat suit and an senior citizen woman in long sleeve high neck blouse and silk saree .'namasthay' both of them said at the same time.

naina:'namasthay...😊mai aap ko pehachani nahi😕
...i don't recognize you...😕'she said without letting them in.

'yahaan pe krishna saxena...😊' one of them told a incomplete sentence.

naina:'haan...ek minute bulathi hun...'she made them stand outside and went in to call krishna.

naina:'krishna...koi aayeh hai...'

krishna:'who is that?😕...'he got down from the bed, came out with irritation.naina followed him.

krishna:'omg!!!!😲...aap...please come ...come in...😃'he was shocked to see sajjan singh and nanima.

'yeh pratigya kay dad aur nanima hai...😊'he bend towards naina and whispered.

naina:'😲...
sajjan and nanima looked around while sitting in the sofa as if they are estimating them.

sajjan:'mai sajjan singh... and she is my mother in law...pratigya is my daughter...'

naina:'i am sorry i don't know that you are...' she worried.

sajjan:'don't worry ...absolutely fine with us...aap log bhi baito...😊'he told them too to sit.

sajjan:'mai khumaa phira kay nahi bolna chaha tha hun...' he said looking at naina.

naina:😕...she looked at krishna.

sajjan:'...for the past one week i was learning about your son krishna saxena without his knowledge,i went to his work place and spoke with his co-workers,went to IIT pune and enquired about him, i spoke with aman, komal and adarsh too...'he paused.naina tried to find what he was about to say.

sajjan:'i found out that jaane anjaane mai hi sahi pratigya ne bilkul sahi jeevan saati chuna hai...i am glad about that and i feel proud of your son...'

naina:'thanks...😃'

sajjan:'trust me!i don't know the reason behind this unexpected marriage.it was a sudden shock to us.what is going on between krishna and pratigya....i have no clue...it is their problem.let them sort out on their own.i am not going to interfere'

naina: 😕.....was listening to him without interfering

sajjan:'but i sincerely wish, inn dono ka yeh rishta bane rahey'.

sajjan:'i know my daughter should come and live with you.this is what the culture we follow here...'
krishna:😕

sajjan:'but...in my daughter's case i request you to give some time for her.till then...

krishna:'till then...?😕 'he slightly got the clue what he is going to tell

sajjan:'i wish you to come and stay with us...till you get along with pratigya... hope you don't mind...'

krishna:'sorry sir.certainly i mind it... ' he refused bluntly.

sajjan:'it is a time being solution.....you stay with us as a guest...'he tried to be very polite with him.

sajjan:'aap samjaaye yeh na...'he requested naina.

sajjan:'thumai koi thakleef nahi hoge wahanpar...i assure you...'

naina:'krishna thum kyun...'

krishna:'maa...please...😡'
he stopped her.

krishna:'sir i am sorry to say...aap yeh baat aap ki beti ko samjaye yeh tho behather ho ga...if at all she is interested in this marriage let her come and stay with me.i have no problem....
'

sajjan and nanima's face became unhappy and upset.there exists a dreadful silence among them for few minutes.

sajjan:'teek hai...hum chalthay hai...😔...'he got up from the seat.

naina:'rukiyeh...mai chai lathi hun...'

sajjan:'no thanks...😔'they went out without further talk.

naina:' 😡... looked at krishna angrily.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shummmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆😆

Awesome update 👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Krishna did a right thing and not be a ghar jamai....... Why didnt Krishna tell SS the reason for this quick marriage???? it seemed like the perfect timing....... oh well.... he will find out soon enough...... I have a feeling SS might interefere and make Krishna stay at his house😡
Update soon hun..... keep it up👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Getting more n more interesting!!!
Watiiing for the next soooooooooooooooooon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Lovely Shumi...... but i am a little disappointed with prat she could at least say sorry to krish for being rude but i guess she didn't expect krish to react like this!.... but liked krish for his firm decision... no way i want him to be a ghar jamai! hope to see more kriya scene in the next part... already missing them😉.... do update soon!👏👏👏👏

I liked the conversation between krish and his mother it was sweet ! the way he shared his little secrets makes my heart melt , also he was making fun of prats name... that was the best part! Please hurry up Shumi with the update! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shumi...........👏 awesome chapters...........i love the way u depict each n every emotion.......krish was sooo aggressive in chap 8 but i think it was a lesson for pratz that she cant control everyone's life........pratz is not bad at heart n krishna will make her realize her mistake..........chap 9 n 10 what to say.......fabulous piece of writing.........n tunna's dialogues were really funny.........🤣loved the way he was teasing krish........😃 SS n nanima r doing the right thing this time...hope pratz come to stay with krish.........then the real fun will begin.........😉 without any if's n but's ur the BEST shumi.........⭐️ love u lots........🤗 waiting for the next chap eagerly............😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: HamiSky

Getting more n more interesting!!! thanks hameeda 😃Watiiing for the next soooooooooooooooooon!! will update soon...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆😆...hi....aleeeeeeeeeeeeena..😛

Awesome update 👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank you very much dear😃
Krishna did a right thing and not be a ghar jamai....ummm😃... Why didnt Krishna tell SS the reason for this quick marriage???? it seemed like the perfect timing....he himself doesn't know the exact reason behind this marriage...lol ... oh well.... he will find out soon enough...sure😊... I have a feeling SS might interefere and make Krishna stay at his house😡...not a bad feeling...you may be right😛😉
Update soon hun...han...han😛.. keep it up👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...thanks...😃

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