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Let me introduce myself, my name is Muqaddasa, aka muqi...
First of all want to mention that i am not a writer, i just decided to have a go at this after reading few Pratigya FF's in the forum. Sorry if anyone gets offended, didn't do it intentionally.
Everyone is welcome to give their comments, criticism...but no haters! I'm just doing this for fun; my Hindi is not all that good. And there's definitely grammer and punctuation problems, but everyone should understand lol😆😛
Saxena Family
Pratigya's family moved to London...Her dadi moved back in less than a year and the rest of her family moved when Pratigya was 16.... She loved it in London, she knew she had to go back to India eventually, but she didn't want to go now. She wanted to spend as much time as she can in London...So her family decided her 2 stay with her aunt n uncle and they moved back with the promise as soon as she finished her graduation she would move back to India. Reluctantly se had to say yes. She's 22 now, finished her studies and on her way back to India...Loves singing and dancing (has been praised by many people for her talent) .
Pratigya... Tall, fair, has curves any girl would die for, she's a typical Londoner girl, who hates the indian lifestyle, outspoken and stands for her rights, independent.
Shyam ji...kind, nice loving...loves his daughter to bits and gave her whatever she needed. Can get ovr protevtive sometimes (due to dadi's instigating commnts)
Naina - very soft spoken and emotional, tries not to go against dadi
Arushi - young, dynamic...talks a lot.Crazy like a young sis is suppose 2 be, best friends with Komal...16 yrs
Bro - Eldest kid of the house, not going to be mentioned a lot...26 yrs
Dadi - has 2 sides....she likes to taunt Pratigya a lot as she is educated and is a woman and likes to be independent (will be mentioned here and there)
Singh Family
Krishna's Family are very proud of their upbringing, status and lifestyle. They are not educated, beside himself & younger sis Komal. Krishna is very proud and finds himself lucky that he needs not to work & gets everything he wants. Even though his father wants him to work, he doesnt exactly force him. Everyone is scared of him, they think of him as a goon (and why not, he is one)...Gets in to fights...never goes to Jail because everyone knows who his father is (SS). He is smart and educated, has done his college/uni studying in London few years back...but never puts it in to use...He is now 25 years old!
Krishna ' Proud of who he is, loves to fight/argue. Everyone is scared of him because of his cruel character...not very serious in life, think he can get away with anything because of his father's status in the town.
Sajjan Singh (SS) - uneducated, acts like he knows everything...Politician and owns alot of lands/businesses & factories.
Ammaji - loves her family to bits, and is overprotective of her kids, especially Krishna
Komal - does whatever she wants, and gets away with it as she is the youngest, best friends with Arushi.she is very aggressive...16 years old
Shakti - in the family business, listens only to his dad.28 yrs (not to be mentioned a lot)
Kesar - sweet, shy n innocent...doesnt talk alot...25 yrs (not to be mentioned as much)
Others:
Shreya ' Pratigya's best friend in London
Tunna ' Krishna's slightly less educated friend, doesn't know when to keep his mouth closed
Chandu ' Krishna's friend, smart & educated
Both Families are rich, but are very different...
I will be posting up the first Chapter in abit
So tell me guys what do you think of the intro?😊hope it was clear😆
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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Sports
