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Originally posted by: shruthiR
It was a very nice chp.Pls don't tell me that Pratigya's parents plan to get her married to Nitin😕Anyway,looking forward to the next chp😊
Nice chapter! but i want more kriya scenes especially when they are figthing it's so funny and of course much longer chapter but i can understand if you are busy so i'll be waiting for the next part eagerly. I enjoy reading your ff ..😊 infact you have such a style with the words... please keep it up!! Take Care!!!!! and Ramadan Mubarak.....
Originally posted by: mushirox
Great job muqi!!! 👍🏼 i read all ur chaps last night in a single go n after that i was like 🤣 n after sometime i was like [:D/] yeah finally i read all of them. i love ur ff. Very different 4m the othhers n o wonder i loved that CHAPAIR, though i cant see krish hurt but 🤣 🤣 i cant help it. Keep up the good work n i really like this kriya 😉 Well done 👍🏼 👏
Hey hun.... It was a lovely chapter...
It's NOT rubbish ok
what does rotlu mean?
Can't wai fo next chap... Keep it up :)
Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku
Hailaa!! Dev?!! Mujhe Laga Maan Tha Looool
Woww What An Answer By Pratigya Woooooooo!!!! In Your Face Jealous People Ha!! ROFLLLLLLLAmazingggg Chapterrrr Also Longgg :DUpdate Soon x
That was a nice chap.But pls pls bring kriya closer and make them fall in love as soon as possible.Looking forward to next chaps.And thanks for the pm.👍🏼
here is the long update lol
last chapter i introduced a new character...Dev Khurana, and by accident i wrote to different names down lol silly me😆it was nitin b4, but i decided to stick with Dev, you will find out soon why i decided that😳😉😆
Chapter 11
"Mere haath mein tera haath ho..saari jannatee mere saat ho...tuje paas ho, phir kya ye jahaaaa....tere pyar mein hojau fanaa" Pratigya sang while getting ready. She absolutely loved to sing and she actually had a damn good voice. She has been complimented on her talents a alot in London. She always wanted to be an singer/dancer, her moves were excellent as well.
Komal and Arushi bunked in her room last night on the floor...they had a girls night in! Gossiping, singing, dancing...acting stupid, eating junk...it was a mini sleepover and was major fun.
They had praised Pratigya's dancing and singing talent. She loved being praised about it because she was proud of what she can do. Arushi & Komal offered Pratigya a chance to be in their school dance program. She was chuffed; she couldn't believe that they had asked her to perform along with them. Oh how she missed performing on the stage and getting awarded. She had agreed immediately and they started deciding on songs, costumes, choreography, make up and the list went on. They finally fell asleep at 3am or so.
She was glad she had komal and arushi, otherwise she would have been bored out of her mind with no shreya. I should really call her soon, she might be worried. She picked up her new phone, the brand new Iphone 4, it was a going away present from Shreya, and dialed number but didn't go thorugh. Hmm ill leave a text, and try later on
She decided to wear churidaar suit today from what Naina brought her. It was a beautiful black colour with matching trouser and dupatta was very light worked, just how she liked it....simple!
Pratigya started fixing her hair which was wet...gave it a good blow dry, she didn't have to do much effort with her hair, as it was naturally healthy...has good amount of hair and volume...long in length, just about reached her waist and jet black in colour.
She decided to wear silver heels, not so high as she knew how hard it is to walk in some areas on this town, the roads were mashed up...broken and not made.
Se descended downstairs to find her family plus Komal sitting at the dining table..."good morning family members..how are you doing this fine morning😃" and she gave and over exaggerated bow. Her parents smiled at her bachpana, Komal & Arushi were up in cracks and dadi scowled.
"batameez aise baat karte he apne baro se...aur kyaa angreji me baatein karti he, muje samaj me nahii parti....thodi der baad to shaadi hojayegi pir kya karogi huh...."
OMG she has started again, Pratigya yawned🥱, signalling she was bored of her dadi's talks and sat down at te available chair on the table. She looked around to find greasy food all over the table and looked up at her mum, who was serving her dad. "maa, umm muje toast banao na"
Her mum nodded yes and was about to leave when dadi grabbed naina's hand, "nahii koi zaroorat nahi hai, use khud jaanedo...pratigya jaao tum khud toast banao😡"
"dadi... problem kya hai, hamesha mere peeche kyu padte ho...its annoying👎🏼"
Dadi let go of Naina's hand, but before she could speak her father said, "pratigya aisa baat karte hai bado ke saath, apne dadi ke saath😲"
Yea well she aint talking nice to me😒, she thought... "sorry papa, lekin me sirf puch rahi hu ke aakhir problem kya hai, kyu mum toast nahi bana sakti...kyu dadi hamesh mujpe hi daath thi rehti hai....me do din pehle aayi..."
"beta koi baat nahi me toast bana deti hu nah..." Naina interrupted, trying to stop all the commotion.
"no mum muje nahi chahiy....suddenly mera peth bhar gaya..🤢" She looked over at Komal and Arushi "come Komal Arushi...ill drop you home and you tuition"
They got up and followed her, but before leaving she heard dadi say, "is ki jald se jald shaadi kara deni chahiye, warna musibat aane wali he"
We will see about that😡, thought Pratigya before she left the house with the two teens.
They had gotten in to Pratigya's brand new car, a gift from her parents for graduation with flying colours. Arushi's tuition was taking place a few roads down, reached in two minutes to drop her off... "i will pick you up in two hours "
"ok..bye didi, bye komal, baad me phone kardena" Aru said, and walked off. Pratigya had bought a new mobile phone for Aru, apparently she never had one before, shocking😕, every teen should keep a mobile phone for emergencies and personal reasons.
"okay Komal, tumhara ghar kitni door hai?" Pratigya asked, she had no idea where her house was located but she silently hoped she sees a specefic someone there..did i really think that?😕
"bas 20-25 minutes door hai, shayad jald pochege, agar traffic na ho to.." and they set off.
Komal was right, they reached in about 15 minutes without traffic. She now knows where that duffer lives. Komal Takes of her seat belt and turns towards Pratigya, "di andar aaona...mein apne family se milati hu"
Should i go in, she seemed confused....double minded. "nahi komal, muje jana...."
"diii please, im sure bhai waha nahi hai...wo sau raha hoga room mein aur bahar aaye to keech ke tappad dena...." she seemed upset and desperate for some reason unknown to Pratigya.
Pratigya smiled and agreed to come in for a little while. She went ahead and parked her car on the side and got out of her car...She looked at the house for the first time, and she loved it. It was bigger than her parents house and was a beautiful structured.
"wow komal nice ghar..." and they entered the house. As soon as she went in, she saw a family sitting on a table eating. Hes not there! I wonder where he is, oh yes komal had said he was sleeping...too bad for me, i wanted to do some poll kholl...she silently laughed at her silly joke😆
"amma....papa...." komal said. Everyone looked up, confused seeing a random lady standing next to the daughter of the house.
Pratigya felt awkward, she didn't like it when everyone stares at her up and down wondering who she is. Komal must have realised because she added,
"ohh haa ye arushi ki behn he, London se aayi hai....di ne muje drop kiya.."
Pratigya smiled at them...Komal's dad nodded his head toward Pratigya and Komal, but she had no idea what that meant.
A slightly older looking lady, i geuss thats komal's mum, thought pratigya, came walking towards them. "acha to ye ha wo maydam London se aayi he..." Pratigya Komal's mum was checking her up and down😕, "komal sirf ek hi baat karti rehti hai...dii ye or dii woh...kya jadu kiya komal pe hah?" then she laughed, her tone sounded rude.😕
Komal embarrsed at her mother's tone said, "amma stop it, kya kar rahi ho...usse khaane pe to invite karo na...usne breakfast nahii kiya.."
Pratigya had a feeling she isn't going to be a big fan of Komal's mum. Her amma seemed shockd when komal asked such a simple request. there is something odd about her🤔
SS got up motioned all of them at the table, "ha bitwa khaana khao...aaoo tum bhi aao thakurayan...khana serve kardo hamare mehmaan ko..."
Pratigya thougt it was weird how the daughter in laws of the house were serving food and how the men and daughters of the house ate. Komal dragged her to the table and made her sit down. Her bhabhi started serving her food, there was toast.. YES! I was dying of hunger because of dadi..
"to beta zindagi London me bitayi....study bhi kiya, degree bhi hai, ab kya karne wali ho...shaadi?" SS asked Pratigya directly.
Why is he asking such personal questions?? confused, she said. "nahi me abhi shaadi nahi karne waali hu, jab taka accha ladka na mile tab tak...mein job dhoond rahi hu"
They all looked shocked beside Komal, "job? Aur ladki? Beta laundiyo ko job nahi karna chahiye...unhe shaadi, ghar sambhalna, pati ki seva karna and bacche peda karna cahiye..."
😲Ummm ok wayyyy to personal dude 😳 wtf laundiyo, so disrespecting😡. She didn't know what to say, was he going to plan her life out for her?
Before she could say anything Komal mentioned, "papa wo di muje aur aru ko dance seekhaane waali he...skool ke program me."
She was very happy, her father smiled as well. "bohot acha...."
He looked over at Shakti and said, "ab chalbo, kitna kaayega...3 plate to kaachuke, chaute pe ho...ab bas bhi karo...yaad nahi aaj bahar jaana hai😡"
He looked over at his wife and daughter in law and said "tum dono ko bhi chalna hoga hamre saath, family program he, to family jese dikna chahiye....Komal tum aur baba ghar pe hi rehna theek he aur is ka khiyaal rakhna, theek se khaana bitwa...namaste"
He got up to be followed by Shakti while the women of the house and the servants quickly cleared everything beside Pratigya and Komal's plates.
Amma looked over at komal and said, "hum raat taka a jayege to khayaal rakhna apna" She turned to me and gave me a weird look and didnt bother saying anything.
Okay can this family get any weirder.😕
She looked over at Komal, "sorry diii...my family is weird"
"ha wo to he, lekin meri dadi bi koi kam cheez nahi hai" 😆They laughed and talked.
They had decided to stay at Komal's place for a while since no one was here besides "baba". Then they will pick Arushi up and head to the dukaan to decide on costumes
Komal excused herself, she had some things to sort out. She told Pratigya to sit down and she will be back in abit or she could check out the house, since pratigya liked it alot.
Pratigya decided to check around the house, admiring its decor work. After a while, she came in front of a door that was open, thinking it was Komal's room she entered it. She looked around, doesn't look like a girl's roon, especially that of Komal's.
Pratigya walked around the room, it was very big and had an attached door to it, she could hear someone inside...must be komal in the washroom, I'll wait for her here, and she sat down on the bed, facing away from the washroom.
It had been 10 minutes already, why is she taking so long? Gosh im tired as hell, let me go back out and wait in the main area, watch some tv or something.
She walked out of the door and was half way across the hall, then realised that she had forgotten the phone on the bed. Oh god, i hate forgetting things, such a life ruiner.
She walked back again and entered the room, she looked up, stopped and was shocked to her wits. Omg, this is not komals room, its his ....😲
Pratigya started backing away, but she realised her phone was still on the bed.If he found it there then he would know it was her who was in the room and god knows what he would do to her precious phone.
She took off her sandals outside on the side, he still hadn't notice, he was too busy, she stopped and for the first time realised what he was, more like what he was not wearing... 😆
a white towel around his waist and thats it, he was spraying deodorant over his body. She admired his body😍, my god woman control yourself already and get the damn phone before he sees you.
She creeped over to te bed slowly, grabbed her phone and...
"TUM?"
She jumped, he scared her out of her wits and her phone fell further down the bed thank god not on the floor.He must have seen her reflection in the mirror. She was dumbfounded, out of words to say.
"tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?😕"
Pratigya stayed quiet, she didn't know what to say. How would she explain she came 2 drop Komal off and thought this was her room so decided to wait for her and she left and forgot her phone here so came back to find him in is your towel...half naked😍. It sounded so stupid if said aloud.
Doesnt he realise hes half naked, she was kind of embarresed but he didn't seem to notice. "oyyy behriii....im talking to you!!"
"i can hear you know, i just came for something..." and she went to grab her phone, but before she could, he beat her to it...
"oyee thats mine, give it to me.." she tried to get it back but he was just too tall to reach..she tip toed, she tried to jump and everything but nothing worked.
She went on top of the bed, put a hand on his shoulder and tried to grab it, he moved back and she fell of the bed and on to him leaning against him, he held her so she didnt fall to the ground. She looked up in to his eyes, and he was giving her a very intense look😳...she broke away from their connection and moved away What was that feeling?
"look can you please give it back, its mine... a gift from a friend.." he didn't seem to care. He looked bored
"first tell me why are you here...then ill decide to give your phone back or not" He started to check her phone..
"nooo don't check my phone, its personal" she tried to grab it again but this time he grabbed her arm, twisted her so she was leaning against his bare chest😳. She was shocked, damn maybe i could pull his towel down, omg wtf no i cant do that😕that would be embarrassing for him and me😳😆
He was going through everything, messages, pictures and evryting else, mobile phone in 1 hand and holding Pratigya on the other hand.😳
You wont find anything interesting huh 😆she laughed inside her head. It was a new phone and she didnt get time to put anything inside
He looked over at her, "well then are you going to tell me why you are here?"
Gosh she was tired of this, "umm ok so i dropped komal back home and i met ur family and then they went somehwere and komal went in her room and she told me to look around because i liked the house so much, so i did , so all other doors were locked besdied this room and i thought it was komal because she said she will be back from her room,i thought it was komal in washroom so i waited for 10 mins then left and forgot my phone here and came back to find it was you, half naked"😳😕😲
Has she really said that last bit out loud??😲
She said it with so much speed, she confused herself half of the time. He stared at er intently, like he was studyng her and she stared back. She felt a slight jolt, wondering what it is. He didn't say anything for few mintues us stared at her, is he trying to intimidate me to leave the room, not going to work mister...
"whats your name?" he asked suddenly so randomly.
She would hav thought Komal mentioned her name before, but i guess not.weird random question.
She craned her neck over so she was face to face with him, their faces were few inches away😳woah so close!😳
"ummm...why?😕" confused pratigya asked.
"tell me your name and ill give your phone back😉"
"How do i know you wont do what you did before"
He was thinking....then finally said "i give you my word...now tell me"
She was wondering what happend to him all of a sudden, a drastic change of character...should she say her name, he would find out eventually anyway.
might as well right?😕
"Pratigya" she said, looking down. wait why am i looking down, why am i acting all shy?😕
She looked up to find him staring at her, "umm can i have it back now"
"have what back?" he looked lyk he was being hypnotised, is he ill or what? Metally retarted?😕
"umm my iphone, what else😡" she said angrily..."why do u keep forget...."
She coudnt finish her sentence because he let go off her arm and slid it down her arm to her hand and placed her phone there.
"umm okay thank you😳," pratigya said sliglty shocked. I don't understand this man.
He nodded in understanding and kept staring at her...wow he really is trying to intimidate me, better leave before he has his mood swings again.
And she walked out, she turned again to put on her sandals, when she looked up he was back at the mirror fixing himself up.
I better go check for Komal she might be wondering where i am, we need to pick Aru up soon then head to the bazaar. And she left.
so how about it, im sure you enjoyed this long chapter😉
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