*...Aur Pyar Ho Gaya*(My 1st FF) CH16/PG27 UpDaTe - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

This ff is really interesting and I really enjoyed reading Pratigya's and Krishna's first encounter😆.Do continue,your doing a great job.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved the 2 chps.Krish prats 1st meeting was really interesting.Loved that airhostess scene.Looking forward to next chaps.👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
hiii guys, sorry again but will be updating with a short chapter today..will put chapter 5 on now, and 6 later on in the night...have been busy..sorry


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Chapter 5

Krishna reached home in a foul mood, he was angry at that girl and her useless bakwaas. His father was glad to have him back in the house, he missed his son alot.
"arre bitwa....ka hua, itna tensionwa me kyu ho..kaunu baat hui ka?"

Krishna didn't bother with his dad much, replied to is dad and moved away and into his bedroom. He couldn't stop thinking about the girl.
He decided later to call Chandu and Tunna, his best friends and tell them evrything....

He told them about the girl. Tunna surprised him talking about a girl so much, "le, this is the first time I heard you talking about a girl so much, kya chakkar hai.......?" He asked, winking!
😉
Krishna looked mad "kya be, hamesha ulti baat kyu karta he?" 😡
Tunna was laughing, "sach hi to keh raha hu bhai...tum koi ladki ko itna interest nahi diya😉...aur aaj pehli baar itni saari baatein..."
Krishna was angry, mad, going crazy..how dare he say that?😡...He got up but Chandu came running to hold him back.

"Ab rehne bhi do Krishna bhai, tumhe to pata he ke tunna ka dimaag nahi chalta", Chandu interupeted. He knew how krishna's temper is, once it blew he goes crazy.
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Everyone noticed Krishna's behaviour; he didn't do anything properly, and wasn't concentrating on anything.
Amma ji decided to talk to him, "Baba, kya hua, kyu gumsum se rehte ho, koi ladki ka chakkar he kya?"😉
"maa, rehne do..aisi koi baat nahi😕...I'm not feeling well" He lied, but unsuccessfully... Amma caught him.
"dekho baba, mein tumhari maa hu, mene tumko janam diya, tumhe kya lagta he ke tumhari baat pe me yakeen kar lugi?, agar nahi batana chahte ho to saaf saaf kehdo, jhooth bolni ki zaroorat nahi" She looked upset, ughh how typical of her, emotional blackmail! GOD!
Krishna wasn't in the mood to deal with this... "amma....😡"
She didn't let him finish.. "dekho baba, jo bhi ho lekin sambhal ke rehna...theek he😊"
"Kyu, koi muje khaa jaayega kya😡?" Krishna said rudely. "Maa koi ladki vadki ka problem nahi....bala muje koi problem ho sakta hai kya...bhul gaye ke me SS ka beta hu...Krishna Singh" Now Krishna was back in his form😉
Amma looked at him closely, "yea baba, bilkul baap pe gaya na...."
Amma continued to talk while Krisna thought...i think she is trying to read what i think, she is good at that.
"Amma bas bhi karo...tumhe kuch kaam nahi karna he kya....kesar bhabhi kitchen me akele kaam kar rahi he...aur wo to pregnant hai...jao jaa kar help karo....babhi ko kuch hua to papa tumhare peeche aayege." He said quickly, so she goes as soon as possible.
She looks annoyed, well at least she's going to go now😆
"ab tu muje kahega ke me kya karu😡"......Krishna gave her a look, she knew what it meant...go otherwise I will tell dad😃... "Ha ha! theek he, jaa rahi hu...lekin ye tumhara gumsum sa hona band karo...tumhare papa ko shak hojayega ke kuch galat he...phir mera paas mat aana madad ke liye😡"
And like that Amma stalked off out of his room.
He fell back on his soft king size bed...gosh what has that girl done to me, I'm changing?!😕 Krishna questioned himself.

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will update with chapter 6 today, wont be that long.... thats why im updating two chapters a day.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Chapter 6

Pratigya reached home to see lots of people crowded around her parent's house. She guessed they were neighbours trying to peep at the new girl. She stopped and adored the house. Its beautiful😛. She didn't remember her old house, but seen it in pictures. This wasn't a house, it was a mansion.

She met dadi at the steps. She hugged her; dadi had gone old, wearing an off white sari and had a black long walking stick. Dadi was quite short compared to her, especially since she had to bend over slightly because of her bad back.
"Pratigya beta aagayi, accha hua....ab ghar ka sab kaam kar sakti ho, me to bechari buddi, kuch kar nahi sakti"
Wow Dadi was direct...no hi, hello, Namaste...seedhe kaam par...I thought is ghar pe naukar hai...oh ye dadi is a bit old school...she thinks the women of the house should work, while men earned the money. Times have changed now dadi.
"Ha Dadi me sab kaam kar lugi tum fikar mat karna" she smiled and invited me in
"jao ab pehle aaram karo, phir baad me baat karte he"
"Nahi ek minute"....her mum came from inside with a pooja ki thaali (note:i don't know if i got it right, i dont know what they call it..Sorry no offence to anyone). Pratigya wasn't very religious, and didn't like all this.
"Maa ye sab kya hai, rehne do😕" And she tried to step inside.
"Nahiii pratigya, ruko...Please" Her mum was begging her, looking sad.
The neighbours were peeking in whispering louder than ever, just because Pratigya refused the pooja ki thali. Omg so nosey , seriously? They are trespassing and no one is saying anything! Weird!😕
"Gosh mum, fine theek he...jaldi karo" Her mum then smiled and started doing what she was best at. Pratigya looked bored throughout
She entered the house, and was told her room was upstairs on the left. The house looks even beautiful inside. She entered her room and jumped in to the bed for a good night's sleep.
The past day has been the longest, with that idiot khadoos ladka...then everything else...if one day is like this how am I going to spend the rest of my life here?
And with that question on her mind Pratigya went to sleep, dreaming about a certain someone.

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Pratigya woke up next morning, thinking she was in her dorm room in London, "shreyaaaa, wake up.....oh oops!" 😳
She realised that she wasn't in her dorm room anymore, she was in fact back in India in her parent's house, in her own room, lying on her bed. It seems totally weird being here. This was her first night over here in her own parent's home. She felt like crying, but before she could, someone knocked on her door. She went to open it, it was her mum.
"Pratigya, uth gayi beta....jaldi se tayyaar hojao"
"Kyu mamma, kidhar jana hai?"
"Ha tumhare papa ne sab rishtedaro ko bulaya he shaam ko, to aaj shopping jana hai, kuch salwar kameez/sari dilane he...tumhare pasand ki"
Pratigya looked confused, "lekin kyu😕?" She didn't understand.
Naina looked at her closely at Pratigya, like she lost her common sense😳, "tumse milne, aur waja kya ho sakti he?...abhi 21 years me kisi se bhi nahi mili, to papa introduce karna chahte he, tumhare liye accha rahega future me😊"
Why?! Future?? Papa bhi na! Yaha pe akele hi rehna theek he😡...oh god I miss shreya😭! Pratigya thought!
However she didn't want to upset Naina, she smiled and said, "theek he me tayyaar ho kar aati hu"
Naina left and Pratigya closed the door and leaned against it...maybe it won't be that bad.......who am I kidding? Everything has changed



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So finally Pratigya has reached home? what did you think?
Watch out for tomorrow's next 2 chapters😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Great chapters hun xx👏
hmmmm pratigya may get hitched......wonder who the guy is.......
update soon plzzz😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awww nycc haaan..pratigya is new in india d world has changed ahaha d neighbours part was funnyy..n aww shes missin shriya n even i hatee wen i av to leave my beauty shleep for anything ehehe:p
shoppin hope she meets arhaan dre;)
ehehe update shoonn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Great chaps.Nicely written.Waiting for ur next chaps.Update soon.👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

excellent wrk.very well written👏.nw cmn 2 ur qstn..........hm.......fight?evn at d first meeting?w8n 2 c kaise gussa dheere dheere pyar ho jayenge(am i ryt?jz learng hindi.4giv me if its wrong)newys gud update.continue sooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



thanku sooo much😛
yess im sure u've seen many situations on tv, where they fight then eventually fall in love!😳
yes u are right, my title gives it away😆😛 and ur hindi was perfect there👏....
will continue soon, ill pm you when i update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: shruthiR

This ff is really interesting and I really enjoyed reading Pratigya's and Krishna's first encounter😆.Do continue,your doing a great job.Looking forward to the next chp😊



you will see more of it soon😉😆 will update very soon, ill let you know😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: aleena1

Great chapters hun xx👏

hmmmm pratigya may get hitched......wonder who the guy is.......
update soon plzzz😊



😆maybeee or maybe not😉
ill update by today, will let you know!😊


Edited by xmuqix - 15 years ago

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