*...Aur Pyar Ho Gaya*(My 1st FF) CH16/PG27 UpDaTe - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: xmuqix



thnx hun, im a FF freak as well, n when i read some of them i thought leme try it out as well😛
umm didnt i put it 😆hehe, i was editing 2 much so must have deleted it by accident lol ill edit it agen...hes 25!😛
ill post the chapter soon!

Wohooooo Waiting For It😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

Pratigya looked up at the stage. She couldn't believe it, that day has finally come...her graduation...sitting here in black robes and cap...she waited for her name to be called...as soon as her grad finishes, she will have to go back India...

Omg i can't believe it, back to India...going to have to live my life there😳, Pratigya thought.
She didn't want to go back, not to a place filled with strangers.
If only I can stay here, if only papa didn't go back...we all could have stayed together as a family.
However, her Papa n family moved back to India, as he and her Dadi did not like the lifestyle of London. Dadi thought it was to modern, apparently she use to complain about how people lived here, that they were "jungli". She left London in the first year and has never met her dadi, but heard stories about her, she's very strict and old fashioned minded. Pratigya did not want to move back to India, unlike her family who moved back 7 years ago (when she was 15 years old).
Wow has it been that long since she hasn't seen her family...I wonder if.....
Someone started shaking her, it was her friend Shreya. "Pratz, there calling u, go up fastttt..."
Oops....And Pratigya ran for it....
After that the Graduation went breezily...They hang out after graduation, took pictures...Pratigya was going to miss this.
Shreya came up to her, "Do you really have to go India? How are you going to live your life there?? It's so different, I've been there last year"
Pratigya looked up at her sadly, "I really don't know, but I made a promise to my dad and you know I can't break it"
"But pratz..." Shreya tried to argue
"Just leave it....now tell me will u come to India to meet me😛"
"ummmm I don't know if I can make it to that place, u know I didn't like it there...."
Pratigya was shocked; she was never going to see her best friend again...
"gosh Pratz, you're so gullible, obviously I'm going to come, I have actually decided to take some time off before I go on to do my masters, got a few weddings coming up there, so I'll be visiting u very soon" She gave a wink and hugged Pratigya

At the Airport, Pratigya stood looking around; this is it then...the last time I'm going to visit this place anytime soon. She couldn't help but start crying😭. She had grown attached to this city, the people, her friend, her aunt, uncle and cousins. They all had come to drop her off.
Chacha ji walked up to her sad, "beta rona band karo...it's alright, tum apne family ke paas ja rahi ho" He tried to cheer here
Pratigya looked up "I know shiv chacha, but I haven't met them in 7 years, they could have changed...what if I can't stay there...and I have never been India...I know I was born there but I don't remember it at all"
Chachi came next to Pratigya, "Beta ye kesi baat hui, wo log tumhare family he..balah koi apne family ke paas kyu nahi jana chahta..tum bhi ajeeb ladki ho" Pratigya's chachi is very upfront and said anything she thought
"uff tum bhi nah"...chacha said.."kabhi bhi kuch bhi bakh thi ho, band kar bakwaas....dekh nahi sakti pratigya beti udaas he"
Chachi looked upset, she took pratigya's face in her hands and said "I'm sorry beta, tumhe to pata he me kesi hu..mene jo kaha sahi kaha, lekin bolne ka andaaz galat tha....socho tum ne apne family ko 7 saal se nahi dekha, they will be happy to see you....they are your family, kuch bura nahi hoga"
"Yeah maybe u r right"...Pratigya didn't want to argue, she knew she had no chance..She gave up....
"Ha beta, aur kuch bhi chahiye to hame phone kardena...ab chalo, flight thodi der me nikal ne wali he"
She met everyone one by one, crying silently....She couldn't take it, hoping that this torture ends quickly. Pratigya moved away from there going in to the security line, waving her hands like crazy and then.....she couldn't see them anymore...

She stopped and whispered some words of encouragement to herself
"Okay Pratz, let's get through this"...Sighed and walked on to get on to the plane.

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hows the 1st chapter? dont mind my crappy hindi😆😆
chapter 2 will be up soon😛
Edited by xmuqix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg!! Fabbbb!!!!
Your Hindi Is Good Too!! I Can Type It But I Cant Speak it Roflllllll
Hmm So She's Going India....Ooooooo Lets See What Happens Next . Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Omg!! Fabbbb!!!!

Your Hindi Is Good Too!! I Can Type It But I Cant Speak it Roflllllll
Hmm So She's Going India....Ooooooo Lets See What Happens Next . Update Soon x



lolll i cant speak that well as wel...im guju😆buh my guju kinda sux as well lol

yea...iv actually got quite few chapters written down, but need to fix them up and all...will try and update chp 2 by today😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 2

Krishna looked up at his ceiling then turned his head to the right to look at the time on his alarm clock... it read 1:30 pm....
Ughh 1:30pm, no one woke me up AGAIN!...typical😡
He got up and went to take a shower n got dressed...and went ahead to the Kitchen to grab something to eat. On his way, he saw his family sitting for lunch.
Oh god, hope they don't see me...He tried to creep in to the Kitchen quietly, but it was his bad luck his father Sajjan Singh had caught him...
"EH RUK 🤬...."
Krishna sighed and turned around, everyone was looking at him with serious looks, except his sister, Komal.... She was trying to stop herself from laughing and gestured something towards him...She got her hand and sliced it thru her neck, trying to show that Krishna is dead today😈
"Yea papa, me kitchen se kuch lena ja raha tha, ek minute me aata hu"....I will just climb through the kitchen window to get out of here...
But before he could move Sajjan Singh angrily gestured him to come closer and so he did.😡🤬
"kaa-be kya kar raha he tu huh?? sarre aam gunda gardi? Muje phirse phonee aaya uss behuda sasuri ka..naam kya he uska, wo shop wala jo har kisi pe nazar rakh ta he....Angad.." (note:no offence to angad fans, i jus couldnt think of a name, sry😊)
Krishna looked disgusted..."chee that orange lip freak"😆 😆Then started laughing really loudly,he coudnt help it.😆Angad, the town's gossip monger (can you believe it a guy? 😆Haha) He spreads gossip like wildfire, so he knew basically everything. God knows how he finds out these things😕
"Has kyu rahe ho behooda?" SS looked extremely angry, so Krishna stopped..
His dad continued..."Tumhe pata he ke wo sala ka muh machine gun ki tarah he, bas chalta hi rehta he..." He stopped for a second and looked at his wife..."Ye sab tumhari galti he, na tum use abroad behjti na ye sasuri lafanga nikalta" Krishna's Mum just stood there silently, taking all of SS's anger, She always did...it was no big deal, thought Krishna.
"ek baat batao, tum ne exam pass kese kiya, koi copy vopy kiya he baba maharaja??"😆
Krishna looked bored, "papa mene pehle bhi kaha tha ke koi cheating nahi ki, mene study......"
But SS didn't let him finish.."ok chordo, dekhyo beta Kisanwa, tum ye sab gunda gardi karte ho wo theek nahi he, tumhe nuksaan nahi hota, lekin muje hota he, hamare parivaar ka izzat or mere election bhi aa raha he....."
"Papa is me koi gunda gardi ki baat hi nahi thi, mene kisi kha jaan bachaya.pata nahi kyu khamaka mujse darte he...ab me kya karu, jab darte he to darne dyije nah?" Krishna said giving his famous smirks. 😉
SS jus looked at him, he knew Krishna was lying.."kisi ka jaan bacaya ha? Aur wo maram maari kiya tha wo...wo kisi ki jaan bacharahe the ya le rahe the??" 😡
Krishna tried to interrupt but SS held his hand up "no, ab nahi sunna he muje, bas! Jo hua so hua, bhul jao aur beth jao"
Komal burst out cracking up😆, "ufff tum dono ne to kamaal kardiya, har din aisa hi chalta he aur papa aap na hamesha end me sab bhul jaate ho"🤢
Amma ji looked at Komal and said "Komal bitiya chup kar, kyu kamakha ladai karwa rahi ho dono ko...rehne do"
Komal looked at her mum and tried to say something but Shakti spoke up for the first time, "theek hi to keh rahi he amma....jab me koi galat kaam karta hu to muje daat padta hai aur baba kuch kare to bhul gaye...ye kesi baat hui?"
Ammaji silently begged her eldest and youngest to be quiet....SS looked angry but decided to ignore them...
SS looking at Krishna said "Tumhe kal ek hafte ke liye London jaana he, kuch project ka maamla he...Shakti bhi ja raha he tumhare sath" Krishna tried 2 refuse "nahi tum business seekhlo to accha he, business join karna he ke nahi??....rehne do, uska jawaab mat dena...tum he business join karna hi padega, agar nahi kiya toh deklena"
Krishna looked at his brother, who was nodding his head and agreeing everything his dad said...huh chamcha kahi ka, don't know why Shakti Bhai does what dad wants him to..Krishna rolled his eyes. He was told he had to leave this evening...nice! At least I will be able to see good old London again!

In London:
Krishna being himself had not done much work with his brother in London, he use to go out and have a good time with his old friends from uni, he liked it here, but no one was scared of him here...forget that, they didn't even know who he was besides a few friends!

After a week .....At the Airport going back to India:
"pata nahi ye Shakti bhaiya jaldi India kyu gaye" Krishna muttered to himself...He didn't know the way around Heathrow Airport, it was big and different compared to India's Airport.
All of a sudden, he heard someone crying really loudly.." I know shiv chacha, but I haven't met them in 7 years, they could have changed...what if I can't stay there...and I have never been India...I know I was born there but I don't remember it at all"
Krishna looked on, listening to the conversation....He couldn't see the girl's face, she was tall about 5ft7, long jet black hair..Wearing jeans and a teal coloured top. He was trying to look at her face without being too obvious, so decided to go on the opposite side😉. As soon as he saw her face, he was gob smacked...
Wow she's so pretty...wait wait wait what?!😲 Me, Krishna Singh actually admitting a girl is pretty and that too while she's bawling her eyes out😕...ye London ka hawa baat kar raha he bachu, ab nikal yaha se warna plane chooth jayegi..
He listened to his conscious and moved away from there but his eyes never moved away from the beautiful crying girl...until he couldn't see her anymore


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end of chapter 2....wt do u think guys...did it get any better? lol
i will be busy working tomorrow but i might be able to update chapter 3 late night..lets see😛

Edited by xmuqix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Waiting For The Next Chapter :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww very nycc yarrr..very guddd hmm;)
aww she dosent wana go to indiaa haayee mujhe bhej do lol:p
arhaan is waitin dre 4 her go silly girl go happilyy
ehehe mai hotii tu bhaagg jaateeyy lol
do post d nxt chapter m lukin fwrd to it shweett:):)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter 2 updated on page 2 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Greattt :D :D
Hmmm I Was Getting A Feeling He'll See Her At The Airport Loolz
It Was Fab Overall
Update Soon x And Again Your Hindi Is Good =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was a lovely chapter hun👏👏👏
Very well written....👏👏👏Dont worry about your hindi......it was perfect..... much better than mine😊
Aaaahhhhhh Lub at first sight for Krish😊
Eagerly waiting for your next update... keep it up👍🏼

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