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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Aww tht was a sweet chp.Loved the basket ball session.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi Mina H love!!!!!! i hope u r doning very well 😊
i just wanted to that i love ur ff so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooon
i hope i'm not disturbing u too much


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 9
Recap: pratigya: 2-2... next one to score wins

krish: the next one is goin to be me

pratigya: v will c abou dat

just den 4om the princibals office a guy cums saying that praitgya needs to sign sum papers, and pratigya goes wid him

krish: wait a min - prats turns around, wot about this game?

pratigya: well my admission is more important them this game

krish: no ur a juz a chicken

pratigya: oh plz... i score 1st, we will countine this game later

krish: FI9

pratigya starts to go

krish: wait up i'll cum wid yew

pratigya: okay

krish and pratigya both go to the office and get her admission done

krish: where r u going?

pratigya: to my class, it room no. 4242

krish: omg, y da hell would u want to go to class??

pratigya: wot do u mean?

krish: like i mean lets go out... like u r already 2hours late

pratigya: yea, likan abhi bhi pura din para hai!

krish: oh god ur juz like komal and adrash, and if u will go ill get bored

praatigya: y dont u go to ur class as well

krish: yea, im in the same class as u...4242

pratigya: reali

krish: yea bt i dont go... and mostly wen im late i neva go

pratigya: yea bt i want to go

krish: i'll get bored

pratigya: den y dont u go and hang aorund arushi

krish: gosh dont even say her name... u nw rolly

pratigya: oh rolly, then y dont u hang around rolly

krish: juz hear me out... arushi has a crush on me eva scince... and rolly has a crush my ur brother... they both r veri anoying sister

pratigya: oh dats y komal got mad, wen adrash bhai prasied her in the morning?

krish: duh

pratigya: fi9 then im going

krish: okay then i'll c u @lunch

pratigya: yes okay then bye tc

krish cums and gives a tigth hug to pratigya and pratigya pushes him away

pratigya: wot r u doing

krish: im giving a gud bye hug

pratigya: no thanks

and ptatigya leaves, and looks back at him seeing krish staring at her starigth back, and pratigya luks away

after two three mins she goes back where she was wid krish, and sees krish standing thier wid his friends

pratigya thinks: well it be rude calling out krishs names? like wot would his friends think of me? or wot if krish gets mad?

krish: HEY pratigya, u came back i knew u wouldnt leave me alone

pratigya: well ur nt reali alone rite nw, and plus i jus wanted to nw where this class is?

krish: oh cum i 'll show you, bt 1st mite my friends chandu and tunna, and this is pratigya, adrash's sister

pratigya: hi

chandu and tunna: hey

pratigya: shall we go, im already veri late

krish: lets go

krish takes praitgya to the car which adrash was driving earlier

pratigya: wot u said dat we r going to the class? where have u taken me

krish: to the rite place, sit

praitgya: NO, i m going

krish: wait wait wait WAITT

pratigya: wot?

krish: look

pratigya luks at the piece of paper krish is showing her

krish: read read... room 4242 flied trip may 12th

pratigya: bt why didnt u tell me earlier?

krish: i forgot... actuly i didnt nw, my friends just told me and just then u came there

pratigya: oh

krish: so ma'am lets go to the flied its sum park

pratigya: bt

krish: wot

pratigya: i should tell adrash bhai or papa

krish: here use my cell, txt adrash,, or call ur dad

pratigya goes away calling her dad

while pratigya is away chandu and tunna

tunna: so krish lets go to

krish: where?

chandu: flied trip, like im x-cited for the park... rides and poor gurls who like to hold on tight on riding rollercoaster!

krish: take a taxi

tunna: why krish, its choo hawt and most taxis dont have a.c

chandu: most... none of the taxis dont have any AC

tunaa: krish why cant we ride in ur car

krish: cuz im going wid pratigya

chandu and tunna: pratigyaa

krish: its nuthing like dat

chandu: oh weneva u say its nuthing like dat, it is always like dat

krish winks: cum'on guyz im nt dat of a playa

tunna: why are u scared of adrash?

krish: huh adrash... oh plzz

chandu: well we are still riding wid yew

krish: no u arent... and dats final, nw go away cuz pratigya is cuming

chandu: bt--pratigya cums

krish: okay den bye guyz, i'll c u later

tunna: pratigya ur going to the flied trip?

pratigya: yes, is there a problem?

krish: no, no problem... bye chandu and tunna

chandu: fi9 we wont be the hadi in the kabab

and chandu and tunna leave

pratigya: why did da say dat?

krish: nuthing they are stupid

pratigya: just like thier names

krish starts to laugh

pratigya: wot im serouis... wot kind a names are chandu and tunna??

krish: ur to much, cum lets goo

praitgya and krish go and sit in the car... and krish being a gentlemen opens the door for pratigya

krish: my lady

pratigya: im nt ur lady

krish: fi9, my gurl

praitgya: im nt ur gurl

krish: okay then how about, my bff's sister

praitgya: nw u dont have to be so formal

krish: then how about my praitgya

pratigya: how about just pratigya have a sear

krish: plz pratigya ma'am have a seat

pratigya: thanks you!

both laugh and sit in the car

while krish is driving he keeps on luking at praitgya

pratigya: we are going to get into a accident

krish: wot?

pratigya: yes i nw

krish: wot r u saying?

praitgya: well abousily if u keep on luking at me and nt the road we will meet up wid a accident

krish feels embrassed

krish: i was just...

pratigya: just wot?

kirhs: waiting for u to say sori...

pratigya: wot?

krish: yes, for this morning wen u trew water at my face

pratigya starts laughing, and once again krish gets lost into her smile and beauty, just wen a huge truck is cuming thier way... pratigya is busi laughing and krish is busi luking at her...

pratigya: OMG luk krish...

krish truns the car rite at veri speed which makes the car skid... and they get of the road and go down the hill...

pratigya: breakss use ur breaks

krish: i cant use them... i dont nw wots worng

pratigya: OMG

just wen thier car bumps into a tree, and pratigya's head was abou to hit the cars dashboard which was rite infornt of her... wen krish puts his hand on pratigya's shoulder making sure that she'll be safe, and in the shock of wot all has happened she hugs krish veri tightly like as if her life depans on it

i hope u guyz like it... and these days im veri bveri busi, as most of u guyz i live in canada... in about 11 days i'll be going to pakistan for a vaction mayb about 2-3months... so my updates may nt dat be long, and i may not update dat often, bt i'll still try to at least update a paragraph or two veri other day... or sumthing like... cuz i have alot of packing and shoping to do... i hope u guyz understand and plz comment, gud or bad any kinds... Thanks for all the pervios comments from all of u guyz! <3

P.S mimmsjaan or can i call u mimms... its neva too much to hear from yew, and dat u like my ff choo much, thankss chooo much, ur a total swwetheart... and i hope u understand dat 4om nw on my ff's update may nt be that long, even nw my mom is calling me to give her my clothes, which i want to take or leave here!! so im outie... tc <3 (i hope u like the specails colours dat i did specailyy did just for yew)!!

Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
It was a very nice chp.I hope KriYa are ok since their car bumped into a tree.Looking forward to the next chp.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1st thank u sooooooooo much 4 great part that was really nice &sweet
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and i do
understand dat ur busy
so can update wenever is the right time 4 u sweetie😳 and enjoy ur shopping😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 10
Recap: just wen thier car bumps into a tree, and pratigya's head was abou to hit the cars dashboard which was rite infornt of her... wen krish puts his hand on pratigya's shoulder making sure that she'll be safe, and in the shock of wot all has happened she hugs krish veri tightly like as if her life depans on it

Praigya is scared and nervous... so much, dat she cant even open her eyes

krsih: wot da hell has happen

pratigya opens and relaizes how she is huging krish, and lets go, pratigya feels uncomfortable

after few mins

praitgya : this is all ur fault if u hadnt, stared at me while driving we wouldnt be here

krish: WOT, my fault ur da 1who said we are going to get into a accident this is why all this happened

pratigya: gr8, all men blame womens, i dont belive this... just answer one question who was driving me or u?

krish: bt dat doesnt matter

pratigya: yes it does, and iin angry pratigya opens the car door and gets out of the car and starts walking

krish: where r u going- krish also steps out of the car

pratigya: home

krish: and do u nw, where home is?

praitgya: no bt i'll find it, i nw i can

krish: look ur new here, and even i dont nw my way aorund this place, then how can u?

praitgya stops, and even those she is veri mad, krish is saying the rite thing

krish: look dats where v go

pratigya: bt the car came 4om the other direction see...

krish: i nw it did, bt we were reach after this way... i knw

praitgya: lets gooo

krish foward followed by pratigya... they had been walking for more then 20mins, wen praitgya's dress gets caught up by the tree and it rips 4om one side which has made the dress go small and praitgya drops down on her knees and starts to cry, and krish turns around to see her crying and he goes to her

krish: wot happened pratigya? why are you crying like i nw wots worng bt dont worri ill get u back hme safe

praitgya starts crying more

krish: look sshhh pratigya dont cry, im telling yew

krish wipes pratigyas tears 4om her face, and pratigya looks at krish both have a eye lock, pratigya stops crying

pratigya: im hungry

krish: wot... krish starts to laugh, ma'am wot can i get for.. pizza, buger, ice cream or sumthing traditinal

pratigya also starts to laugh

krish: cum lets go, b4 it gets dark

krish starts to walk and sees praitgya still sittin

krish: cum pratigya lets go

praitgya: i cant

krish: wot do u mean?

praitgya: my dress

krish: yes ur dress

pratigya: its torn form the bottom side

krish: how much?

pratigya umcomfortably: alot

krish: nw

pratigya: nw?

krish: wot do u wana do... like how about u stay here while i go and get help

pratigya: no, i feel scared, alone

krish cums to praitgya and sits down as well

krish: look pratigya... i wont say anyting or.. u get wot i mean... likee

pratigya: bt

krish: do u trust me

pratigya after a long pause says: yes

krish: gud then... i'll walk ahead and u can follow okay

pratigya: bt

krish: dont worri... for nw we need to find the road and after that, we will see then wot to do

pratigya: okay

both again start walking for another 20-25mins

pratigya: krish... krishna

krish: yes im listening

pratigya: im tried 4om walking and still hungry

krish: i nw.. im tried as well, bt we need to find a way out b4 the sunlight is gone

pratigya: i knw same here

again both walk for more time, pratigya catches up to krish

pratigya: im veri tried

krish: yes i nw i said dat as well, krish looks at pratigya and her torn dress which had becum even more sexier

pratigya reliaizes at wot krish is luking at and she get mads at him, and snaps her fingers

pratigya: look im here... nt down there

krish feels embraced: well i told u stay behind me... ur the one who came infornt of me

pratigya: gr8 everything is my fault... we end here my fault, we are hungry my fault, we are lost my fault, my dress got torn my falut

krish: look i didnt mean to say dat

pratigya: then wot did u mean

krish: i mean nuthing

praitgya: gr8, dats just gr8

krish: look we both are lost.. .and i have a idea

pratigya: nw u hve a idea

krish: look ur going cranky... cuz ur hungry

pratigya: wots ur idea

krish: to climb a tree

pratigya: ur a genuis

krish: thank u

praitgya: oh shut up how will climbing a tree help?

krish: look this is the highest tree so far.. if i climb this tree to the top, i'll mite be able to see if any kind road or sumthing is around here...

praitgya: dat seems to be gud idea

krish starts to climb

pratigya: be careful

krish: dont worri i'll be fi9, just as he says dat he falls down

pratigya starts to laugh at him: omg krish u cant climb a tree

krish: well sorri im nt a monkey

pratigya laughs even more

krish: quit laughing... cum a give a hand

pratigya gives krish a hand... bt krish keeps himself down

pratigya: oh cum'on krish

pratigya again pulls on krish hand, bt he still holds himself down... and pulls his hand which makes pratigya go down on him, krish moves the hairs 4om pratigyas face and pratigya gets off him and still lying on the wid krish pratigya says

pratigya: i take my words back

krish: which words

pratigya: dat i trust yew

krish: hahaha veri funni... look dont worri ill try again

krish reaches more far on the tree again, wen he sees a monkey family up on the tree

krish: ahhh-- and cums falling down

pratigya: omg r u okay... like u had a long fall

krish: yea im fi9 i just hurt my back... gosh there was a monkey family up there which had freaked me out

praitgya: lets walk.. b4 the sun goes away

krish: okay

back at home, adrash and komal go to adrashs house to find pratiyga and krish

komal: i wonder where they r?

adrash: i nw

shyam: arey, u guyz are home, where is pratigya?

adrash: i dont nw

shyam: wot do u mean?

adrash: like she was in school and even got her admission done

shyam: oh dont worri, pratigya phoned me in the morning

komal: wot did she say uncle?

shyam: she said dats she is goin wid krish to sum uni flied trip wid krish

adrash thinks to himself: krish beta not do sumthing stupid wid my sister

thanks for comments...plz comment more, thanksss i LUB u all!!!!

Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Urgh!!Krishna is such an idiot.Staring kahinka!!!Anyway tht was a sweet chp with cute KriYa scenes.Keep up the good work.Looking forward to the next one😊
Edited by shruthiR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 11
recap: adrash thinks to himself: krish beta not do sumthing stupid wid my sister

pratigya: we have been walking and walking and more walking

krish: i nw... bt this place is so congusing... we have even lost where our car got hit

pratigya: yea all this is so anoying

krish: i nw wot u mean

pratigya hits her knees back at the dirty ground and starts to cry

krish: oh my gosh, u cry so much

pratigya: i dont cry at all times it is just that i miss my home, its not even been 48hours and im lost and plus im getting more hungryer

krish: hungryer?

pratigya: go away

krish: fi9 and krish starts walking away 4om pratigya

pratigya: hey, where do u think ur going?

krish: to find help, look i nw ur tried, so stay here and i'll get help

pratigya: no im scared

krish: off?

pratigya: wot if a loin cums or tigger

krish: there're no loins or tigger our here

pratigya: how do u nw?

krish: cuz the population of loins and tiggers in 0% here

pratigya: reali dats awsum.... wait a min, u people killed poor anmails

krish: if we hadnt killed them, they would have eaten us by nw

pratigya gets scared: even the sun is starting to go down, wot would papa and bhai be thinking of me

krish: nuthing

paritgya: wot

krish: i mean nuthing bad

After another 20mins walk, the sun goes down, and the nite is about to cum in wid darkness

pratigya: krish im scared

krish: i dont say this often bt me too

pratigya: reali?

krish: NO, im just jking-- krish thinking to himself says im shivering in the inside

pratigya: wot do we do nw?

krish: i think that we should go back where the car is

pratigya: the car... we have been wallking since morning... and nw go back, to where the car is, dats sumthing i cant do

krish: u have got a point even i cant walk anymore- wid dat krish collpase on the floor and pratigya as well sits rite by krish

krish: can u move over a bit

pratigya: no a frigthened pratigya says

krish moves over, pratigya again goes closer to krish

krish: wot ur problem i stare at u im a pervert, bt u sit next to me... dat fi9 rite??

pratigya: i m scared, it getting darker by veri sec

krish: plz dont tell ur going to cry agian

pratigya: mayb just a lillte bit

krish: okay fii9 u can next to me

pratigya: bt im still feeling scared

krish: wot u wana sit in my lap?

pratigya: i didnt say dat--pratigya gets tears in her eyes

krish: look im sorri, im just mad

pratigya: it okay-- and pratigya starts to laugh

krish: r u going crazy.. u cry and then u laugh?

pratigya: no its just dat, u wanted me to say sorri , bt u said sori!

krish starts to laugh along pratigya

after a while, both are quite and feelin uncomfortable

krish: look, there is a tree lets put our back agasint the tree

both go and sit there and krish sees pratigya is feelin uncomfortable... and krish puts his arm around her neck so she can feel comfortable

pratigya: uhh no thanks... krish its okay

krish: it fi9 prats, unless u feel more uncomfortable

pratigya: no its dat it feels gud, bt

krish: i nw... dont worri abou anything and have a gud nite sleep

pratigya: yea a veri gud nite sleep as if im on my bed

krish: excatly

pratigya starts to droze off while wid her head towards krish, and even krish falls asleep

GUYS IM SAD NOT MUCH COMMENT, LIKE EVEN THOES I DONT HAVE MUCH TIME TO UPDATE BT I STILL LOVE TO READ UR GUYZ COMMENTS SO PLZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT... IT MAKES ME FEEL REALLL GUD AND THANKS FOR UR COMMENTSS!

Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweeeeeee......... u know what ......... i am so liking this FF of your's😊 everyday i keep checking to see new update.😉 & pahleezzzzzzzzz don't b sad hunny 🤗we really appriciate how u take your valuable time out for this FF . plaese do continue😃 we all love it ya.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Nice Chap!
Loved the scenes between Kriya
Update soon

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