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Posted: 15 years ago
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wooooooooooooooooow that was really sweet part i just loved
thank u soooooooooooooooooo much for ur hard work janu

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i hope krish doesnt break her heart
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Tht was a nice chp.Krishna is really annoying and is a flirt.Anyway,looking forward to the next one.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Wooow!! Loved It!! Hmmm Wonder Wats Gnna Happen At Uni...
Thanks For Updating =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
pratigyas dress
http://i34.tinypic.com/5xu4q8.jpg
krishna clothes
http://cdn.buzznet.com/media/jj1//2008/09/nick-mustang/nick-jonas-ford-mustang-02.jpg
komals clothes
adrash clothes
arushi clothes
Part 8

adrash: uni is here

komal: v can c

krish: like adi ur juz too much we all got eyes

adrash: adi..?! well im sorri krishna

krish: gosh adrashh

adrash: thank u

all four get out of the car and are going towards thier classes

krish: okay so u two nerd go off to ur classes while i show ptayigya around

adrash makes a face and is about to say sumthing wen pratigya tawks

pratigya: sure krish, bt 1st i need to get my addmission done

adrash: yes and for that i'll go wid pratigya... you can go to ur class

krish: why, wot do u think i cant get prats admission done?

praitgya: its pratigya

krish: u too (poiting @adrash and pratigya) hate nick names rite

pratigya: yes cuz we like r real names

krish: i would like my real name as well, if it would sumthing like raj, ruhal or or or or orrrr (and gets lost wen he looks at arushi who is looking veri veri stunning) wot da-- happened to arushi she is lookin hawtt (and looks around) i mean she is looking gud for the 1st time, i think she cut her hairs or sumthing

adrash: yea and look @rolly she is also luking gud (looks at komal) i mean gr8 (still staring at komal) i mean she looks okay... like not to gud or gr8 jus chill pill :P

komal leaves 4om there

adrash: hey krish do me a fvour and get pratigya admission done plzz...

krish: fi9 fi9, bt for w/e reason komal is mad at you, u beta fixed and adrash u nevaa evaaa praise another gurl infornt off ur gf

adrash: she is not my gf

krish: fi9 ur would-to-be wife

adrash: god, im going

krish: so lets ma'am

pratigya: lets go

on thier way to the principals office

pratigya: so is arushi ur gf?

krish: WOT no ways... where did u get dat 4om

pratigya: well u were prasing her and all

krish: yea bt if i say u have soft hairs or preaty eyes, would dat mean dat your my gf?

pratigya: no, bt i was just asking

krish: oh so u wanted to nw if i hve a gf rite nw?

pratigya: no its ur life, i dont care

krish: realii,, oh look princi's office is here

pratigya: prici?

krish: yea dats my nick name for him

pratigya: doesnt he get mad wen u call him dat?

krish: noo

krishna opens da door: HEY princi wazz upp my main man??

pratigya get scared thinking: im neva going to get my admission done nw

princi: oh krish.... plz cum in, plz hev a seat, would u like sumthing to drink

krish: no, i jus here for a friends admission

princi: well v r veri full

krish gives a bad look at the princi

prinsi: bt offcourse we can do anything for UR friend

krish: dats gr8, so get the paper work done and we'll cum bac

princi: yes bt can i just get ur name

pratigya: it pratigya sexsana

princi: oh r u adrash's sister

pratigya: yes he is my brother

krish: lets go, we will cum bac in 15mins

and they both leave

krish: so how did u like it?

pratigya: scary, why was the "princi" being so nice wid yew?

krish: well i m sajan singh's son

pratigya: wot, bt wot does dat have to do wot any of this?

krish: heloww, huge person around here

pratigya: i nw

krish: well forget all this, cum i'll take u to my favorite class

pratigya: u hve a favorite class?

krish: well yea, its my onli class dat i actuly go to... well i go two classes

pratigya: reali, dats a schoking news, i thot u just came for uni for the fun off it

krish: yea, well dance and basketball r my favorite things

pratigya: i think basketball and dance arent reali classes thier r jus options

krish: and ur point

pratigya: nuthing, lets just go and check around the classes

while krish and praitgya r walking around they both bump into arushi

arushi: hii krish

krish: helo

arushi: whos this?

krish: this is pratigya she is adrashs sister

arushi: so wot is she doing wid yew

krish: wot do u mean

arushi: i mean she should be wid his brother and nt wid u?

pratigya: ummm... i'll be going

krish: no - and hold pratigya's hand, yougo 4om... i mean ur probally getting late bye

krish and prats go 4om there

arushi: new gurl huh,, i'll tell her

pratigya: dat was rude

krish: tell me about arushi is stupid

pratigya: no i mean yew

krish: wot?

pratigya: yea arushi was also mean bt you were plain rude

krish: well dats how I roll!!

pratigya: dats nt nice

krish: yea yea lecture me later, oh luk we are here

pratigya talks in a sad voice: wow the gym

krish: yea i just lubbb the gym all the sprots and all the games I have won for my team

pratigya: lub?

krish: yea the things i reali reali love... i say lub to them

pratigya: so why is the gym empty

krish: oh cuz today we have a game @7 so probally ever1 is practing

praitgya: and u r nt practing?

krish: i dont need practice im always ready for everything and ever1 (gives pratigya a checking out look)

pratigya who is sad cuz she is nt interested in the gym ingornes the look and just says: yea yea

krish: wot worng why are u sounding so down?

pratigya: nuthing woh i just didnt wanted to c sumthing other den the "gym"

krish: oh ur like those gurls who are nt interested in sport... (in squeaky noise)- oh im gonna break nail... oh i'll hurt my leg... my hairs will get drity... blah blah blah... this and that

pratigya: oh plz i like sports infact in canada i played in the basketball team, and our team would alwasy win as well

krish: wot r u challageing me?

pratigya: no, i was just saying

krish: well to bad, cuz i challage you... dont worri i'll easy on u

praitgya: no need... cuz i mite go easy on you

krish: fii9 then they 1st one to score three basket wins

pratigya: fi9

both krish and pratigya run for the ball, bt sadly krish gets the ball before her

pratigya: wait wait

krish: wot happened?

pratigya: im wearin a dress

krish: oh shit

pratigya veri quickly steals the ball from krish hand and run for life and scores her 1 basket

krish: heyyyyyyyyy u cheated

pratigya: no i didnt

krish: u said dat u were wearing a dress

pratigya: yea... so i didnt say the i wont be playing or anythin like dat, i just dat im wearing a dress

krish: bt that means

pratigya: blah blah blah... wot r u scared?? u wana quit

krish: loose to a gurl i dont think so, lets starts

pratigya bounces ball, krish again catches the ball fast,

krish: nw watch the pro

pratigya: yea yea im watching

as krish is jumping the ball up and down, pratigya cums and steals the ball and score

pratigya: BU-YEA, i think that after all u need pratice sweety

krish: just watch

krish cums and moves his hands around pratigya's wasit trying to get the ball which make pratigya uncomfortable and she looses the ball, and krish score

krish: 2-1...

pratigya: hmm

pratigya has the ball 1st rite nw, and again she is running wen krish cums infornt of her and puts his arms all around tryin to block her

krish: oh oh

pratigya: wot

krish: the belt on ur dress

pratigya trows the ball away, and throws: wot worng wid my belt it is fi9

krish: wen did i say there is sumthing worng wid it... and krish scores

pratigya: 2-2... next one to score wins

😳i hope u guyz like it and do comment, i just love all of your comment!! <3😳😳
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
i'll update 2morrow, so do keep checking! thnakss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Sooooooo Goooood!!! Wonder What Aarushi Will Do Next
Scenes Between Kriya Are Sooo Cutee!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
nicely written...looking forward to see who wins😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
aweeee. the kriya scenes are so good....... i juz ssssoooooooooooooooooooo like this flirt , careless krish☺️ can't wait for next 1
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
thank you soooooooooooooo much 4 updating it soo sooon
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that awsome, cute i just loved it soooooooooooooo much
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u r such a great writer
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
great chap
loved the basketball game between them, it was so cute!
I liked how u put pics of what the characters were wearing at the beg
waiting eagerly for the nxt update
Edited by cloud123 - 15 years ago

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