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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
that was realy cute 😊 😳👏 ❤️👍🏼🤗
😳thanxx alot plzzz update soon and
plzzzz make longer parts if u can

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
really cute!
plz make them a lil'le longer.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
thanks guyz... bt i want more commenttzz!! hehehe, i think i have turned lachi for comments so plz comment! 🤗😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Krishna is such an idiot!!anyway,nice chp.looking forward to the next one😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Loool!! The Scene Between Kriya Was Soooo Funny!! Please Update Soon =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon i'm dying to read it 😭
it's such a sweet ff🤗 ❤️👍🏼
❤️thanxxxx alot 4 ur hard work dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooon
cant wait anymore
😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
this is such a cute ff


😊 😊😊😊😊😊
thanxxx alot 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 7
Precap: And they both hear a scream and run for the roavesom, where the scream is cuming form

adrash: get off my sister RITE NW, and pulls krish off of pratigya

komal: bhai wot r u doing?

praitgya starts crying, and gets off the bed, while komal gives her water to drink

krish: oh god u gurlss

adrash: shut up krish

krish: well it is not my fault, i was sleepyy and--

adrash: juz cut it

krish: fine - and jumps back on pratigya's bed wid face towards adrash, komal and pratigya!

adrash: ur so insensative

krish: thank you, nw plz go so i can get my beauty sleep back

komal: pratigya cum wid me, lets get you freshned up for the day

as pratgiya is leaving wid komal, she looks krishna wid a scared, wid tears in her eyes while she is going... and krishna blinks at pratigya and pratigya looks away stunned!

adrash: not cool, she is my sister

krish: yea yea i nw... bt she iss

adrash: i dont wana hear ITT

adrash leaves the room as welll

komal: how about u go the bathroom while i make sumthing for you to eat

pratigya: okay... bt cums bac out for a towel and hears komal and adrash having a tawk

adrash: gosh ur brother

komal: yea i nw, bt im sorry on his behalf

adrash: oh plz komal you dont have to say anything like dat, like i nw how he is rude, indecent... and etc etc, bt he is gud at his heart

komal: ya dats

adrash: bt... his sister is gud 4om the inside and the outside

komal blushes

pratgiya who hears all this, also blushes dat she is going to get her bff as her bhabhi, and goes bac to the bathroom (she finds the towel all by herself)!!!

pratigya cums out for the breakfast, in her nitesuit

komal: u havent changed ur clothes

pratigya: well krish was sleeping sooo, i didnt nw wot to do

pratigya bite into her sandwhich

adrash: oh dats bad

komal: not reali, bhai is a heavy sleeper

pratigya: u sure...

komal: yes

adrash: finish ur food, dem you can go change ur clothes

komal: yea and do a favour try to wake up bhai for uni

pratigya: i'll try

pratigya finishes her fud and goes to her room

pratigya: gosh this gud for nuthing... bt he looks realii cute sleepinngg

praitgya ratles through her clothes, and finaly finds sumthing usefull... and goes back to the bathroom to change and cums back to wake krish up

pratigya: krish.. krish, krish, krishnaa, krishnaa... KIRSHNAA-- no response

pratigya sees a jug full of water on her side table and picks it and drops all the water in the jug on krishna's face

krish:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

pratigya also gets sacerd by krishs screaming so she starts to scream as well

praitgya: aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

komal and adrash both run back the praitgyas room

adrash: HUSH down guyz

krish and prats stop screaming

adrash: wot happened NW???

krish: ur bloodd-- i mean freak guys... i hate water thrown at my face, y did u throw water @my sexi face??

pratigya: well komal wanted me to wake you up

komal starts to laugh: and dat was the best way to wake up bhai!!

krish: dis anit funii

adrash: yes it is

komal: gud one pratigya

krish gets angry, and more angry as the laugther off pratigya, komal and adrash cums louder and louder

krish: GET OUT EVER1

ever1 becums quite and leave...followed by komal, adrash and pratigya is also about to leave them she hears krish tawking to her

krish: where do u think ur going?

pratgiya: well im going outside as uni is going to start soon

krish puts his hand infornt of pratigya which makes prats back up, and so krish stands infornt of her

krish: i dont think so

praitgya: wo--wot-- what do u meaan- and trys not to make any eye contact

krish: well u owe me an apolazie- looking drictly into pratigya gazing down eyes

pratigya: wott why.. again not lookin at krish in the eyes

krish: is it must u look down? and starts to walk forward, as pratigya backs up more

pratigya: no wot r u talking about-- still looking down

krish: this... just this look up and walks agian towards pratigya who is still backing and finally hit the wall behind her

pratigya: move a side

krish: no- and puts both of his hands on pratigya wasit so dat she cant move

pratigya looks up into krishs eyes: wot r u doing move ur hands

krish: NO - and moves his head back and fourth which make him move his hairs and the water also goes on pratigya's face

pratigya: stop and covers her face wid her hands, krishna moves his hands off of pratigya wasit on hold on to pratigya wrist

pratigya looking straight into krishs eyes says: look we are going to get late... and ouch ur hurting me

krishna loses his grip on pratigya's wrist

pratigya: gud, nw let go- looking deep into krishs eyes

krish: no

pratigya: why not?

krish: cuz u havent said sorri yet

pratigya: sori... for

krish: for throwing water at my face

pratigya: oh my gosh..., im nt going to say dat

krish: wot

pratigya: sro-- heyy im nt going to say, wot ur asking me to say

krish: who said im asking.. im TELLING

pratigya: bt i dont take orders

krish: oh.. u dont take orders... bt no one says no to me... for anyting

pratigya: well there is a frist time for everything... ouchh, again ur grip, just let goo

krish: im a thakur.. and once a thakur says sumthing he doesnt leave dat thing till its done

pratigya: well boo-hoo

krish: boo wot?!

pratigya: boo you

krish: i like da way u tawk

pratigya: well i dont like yew/ or the way u tawk or act or anything

krish: ur the first gurl to say that

pratigya: as i said there is a frist time for everything

krish: reali and moves his face closer to pratigyas

pratigya ducks down a bit

krish: what happened

pratigya: look i dont like all this

krish: ever1 likes it.. and mostly wen the guys is handsum as mee!

pratigya: oh plzz... and gets lost into krishs eyes

adrash: PRAIGYA, KRISH we are going to get late hurry upp

pratigya gets sacred and krishs hands also losen up on pratigya wrist and pratigya let go of her hands quickly, and just b4 leaving she say to krish: hurry up we waiting

krish: we are waiting or ur waiting

praitgya doesnt say anyting

krish: it okay

pratigya: huh?

krish: dat u didnt say sorri yet, u can say it in uni!

pratigya leaves the room and krish goes to the bathroom to fresh up

adrash: god u too took for eva... wot was the delay for?

pratigya: wot delay, we still have tons of time to reach uni

komal: yea pratigya is rite

adrash: fi9 gurls dont team up on me, i'll go and start the car.. okay hurry upp

adrash goes and krish cums about 2-3mins later

krish: lets go gurl...

komal: bhai ur tawking as if u were waiting for us

krish: im nt da mood for the slibing jagar!

pratigya: lets go, komal u can lock up as i nt sure where the keys are

komal: yea no prob u go wait in the car

pratigya goes and sits at the back seat

komal locks up and sees krish also going to open the back door of the car

komal: bhai why arent u sitting in the fornt...

krish: wohh, da sun is so bright dat it hurts my eyes, plus i mite sleep for a bit

adrash siting at the drivers seat says: krish its a ten min drive

krish: yea and in ten mins a man can sleep alot, or vasey bhai komal wots worng wid u, why cant u sit at teh fornt, after marriage dats where u'll be sitting

komal and adrash both together say: marriage?

krish: nw dont get shocked

adrash: komal just cum and sit, i think ur brother is going crazy

komal sits in the fornt while krish sits at the

adrash: seat belts ever1

krish: yea yea, just shut up and drive!

komal plays sum radom music... so dat no one can hear any1
Pratigya looks at krish who is looking at her
pratigya: can u look away
krish: why?
pratigya: cuz im getting anoyed
krish: no.. and plus why did u think dat i sat in the back?
pratigya wot do u mean u sat for me
krish: YES😳 and looks the pratigya
up in the fornt komal and adrash also have there moment
adrash holds on to komals hand while driving
komal: let go bhai will c
adrash: its okay we dont have to worry about him, im ur brother approved
komal: bt den wen bhai said marriage why did u get shocked
adrash: will u also got shocked
komal: onli cuz u said marriage like dat
adrash: r u naraz?
komal: yes and lets go off her hand 4om adrash
adrash thinks: god wot to do nw?
pratigya: gosh ur getting anoying... i thot u said u'll sleep
krish: if u knew me longer u would nw dat how much i lie😃
pratigya: oh god
adrash: uni is here ever1
hope it is long enough, i'll try to make all the update as this long veri time😛! and thanks for the reply🤗 and sorri for the late update😳.. i was not feeling gud🤢, bt im nw im fi9😊... so plzz plzz watch out for my new update.. which will be on pratigya forum by 2morrow!!! 😉😛
P.S. A veri veri veri veri HUGEE thanks tomimmsjaan who stayed soo loyal to my ff, thankss veriii berryy much!!!
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey i just read ur whole ff its really good please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i lke your krishna. he is a flirt. well lets see what happens next. hope he doesnt break her heart.
nice chapter. update soon.

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