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shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Aww........tht was such a sweet chp with a cute KriYa scene.😳It was very nice.For the first time Krishna is being decent😆.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
thank u sooooooooooooooooo much 4 ur hard work lovely 😳
that was realy great part i just love it❤️
so keep the good work and this comnt is part 10 sorry 4 the late rep;y u no i'va been to visit my sis in othere city so thats y .by the way i live in uk london
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey mina sweetie thanxxx alot 4 ur pm that was realy sweet of you😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
i loved part 11 it was awsome yaar i cant wait 4 the next prt
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but u take ur time so take care of urself mimms😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
aww.....such a cute kriya scene.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Such A Sweet Chapter(s) Loved It!!! The Monkey Bit Was Soooo Funnnyy! Love This FF

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice chapter. pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 12
recap; pratigya starts to droze off while wid her head towards krish, and even krish falls asleep

as kriya fall asleep together...around 2:30-3:00 am

a storng breeze of wind starts to sway around kriya.. and on wind turns into a wind strom plus rain storm

pratigya: wots happening? a frigthened pratigya asks a wide awke krishna

krishna: finaly u woke up

praitgya: yea the rain.... i m wett :(

krishna: im also wet... its raining, wen it rains people get wet

praitgya: i nw dat... yuckk i hate all this

krishna: hmm

pratigya: hmm?

krishna: just shut up for gods sake u tawk and talk... either ur hungry... u cant sleep or ur rain or ur tried 4om walking

pratigya doesnt say anything

about 5mins pass by and pratigya starts to shiver 4om the cold

krishna: ur cold

pratigya is quite

krishna: gr8 wen u need to tawk u stay quite

pratigya still doesnt say anything... and tears roll down her eyes

krishna is about to wipe them off wen praitgya moves back

krishna: look pratigya im sorri, all this is making me go mad plz tawk to me, i like to hear ur nagging about things

pratigya is still quite, krishna turns his head around to look @praitgya again and sees pratigya's eyes are closed wid her head tilted towards the tree

krishna: pratigya... pratigya, pratigya

no answer krishna gets worried

krishna: pratigya, pratigya aaa, oh shit wot to do nww...**** godd

krishna puts his hand on praigya;s wrist to feel her pluse... and he doesnt get any, and he gets more worried the rain has stoped nw and onli the wind blowing pratigya's hairs everywhere, krishna bends down and give pratigya cpr (mout to mout)

pratigya gets up and starts yellin at krish: wot hell do u think ur doing?? like wot u think im dead? like how dare

krishna: i saved ur life, u werent breathing it was jus cpr

pratigya: cpr or w/e... u would have let me die

krishna: just shut-upppp pratigya

pratigya starts teary eyes, and again krishna goes forward to wipe off her tears, pratigya backs up, bt krish still wipes her tears off

krishna: look it was just cpr, nuthing more... and plus wot matters is dat ur alive... or where would have i found a doctor for u in the mid-nite... and wind and plus we are lost...well thank god rain has stoped bt this windd

pratigya: sori i think i over reacted... its just that wen i was around 14yrz i get reali sick cuz i used to ove the rain... and so i was playing in the rain wen i fell unconsious and the doctor told me neva to go in the rain again as ill get unconsious, bt i neva thot dat this kinda sitution would eva cum up again

krish: np... u said sori and i said sori, and krish cloes his eyes

praitgya doesnt sleep and remaining of the nite pratigya stays up

it is morning and the sun is shining bright (time 10:30 to 11:00ish)

krishna gets up wid a sleepy face and a stiff body and turns around to see pratigya... bt finds no one, krish gets worried, he gets up the starts to luk aorund, pratigya pratigya krish says in the loud vocie, wen all of a sudden a apple falls on krish's head

krish: wot da F***

pratigya: its me

krish: omg how da hell did u get up there

pratigya: simple

krish: simple

pratigya: yes i nw how to climb on trees, and u dont...so its simple

krish: okay u can mock me later, nw cum down

pratigya: yea, just hold these other apples

pratigya throws about 3more apples down which land straight on krishs head

krish: u can climb and play basketball bt u SIMPLY cant throw porperly

pratigya: i can throw... i was aming for for head... and so i got 4 out of 4 rite- praitgya starts to laugh, and she cums down

krish: tasty apple

pratigya: mmmm i nw, it feels like as if im eating pizza, burger or chinses... mmmmmm

after a ahile both finish thier apples and...

krish: lets walk

krish walks the the rite side

pratigya: oh i think i for got to mention, bt if we walk towards the left side, we will end up n sum kinda highway

krish: y didnt u tell me dat b4

pratigya: i was busy eating the apple, nw lets go

kriya walk together .. and in abou 10mins they reach a highway

pratigya: yes we did itt

krish: yupeee i have neva been dis xcitedd

pratigya: same

both out of excitement hug one another... just wen a car stops

adrash: KRISHNA

krish and praitgya let go of one another

pratigya: bhaiyyaa

adrash: omg where hve u to been, i have been out all nite tryin to find yew...

krish: yea we got in a accident

adrash: are u okay pratigya-- totally ingorning krish

pratigya: yea im fi9 cuz of krish, he helped me alot

adrash: ur dress?

pratigya trys to cover up her leg: oh it got stuck to a branch

krish: bt im soo happy to see.. . and he goes and hugs adrash bt adrash doesnt hug krish back

adrash: yea yea lets go

all three of them go and sit in the car on their way back to thier homes (krishs and praitgya) ever1 was quite bt adrash had a angry face😡😡

hope u guyz like it... so as i have said b4, my fligth is on the 23rd of this month (pray i reach safely... im sacred of the plane)! :S my internet will be cut on this friday, so i mite not be able to update till at least the 28th or 29th on this month.... bt i'll try to update one more time b4 i'll leave 4om calgary! okay guyz... and thanks for the lovely commentss mhawzz to all <3 and plzz do comment, i just love to read ur commentss 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
i am startin to like ur sooooooo much u should diff at least update once more i will be wating ps this part was really cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
pratigya's clothes
krishs clothes
(Ill put up adrash and komals cothes later)
PART 13

as pratigya, krish and adrash were tried 4om the past nite, all three fell asleep, so next morning (meaning that they miss a day of skool cuz they sleep through the dat and nite)

adrash: praitgya... pratigya, lets go

pratigya: yes bhai im cuming

adrash: u are wearing this...

pratigya: yes, why?

adrash: no.. like this is gud in canada bt in india... people and mostly guys have bad eyes... so can u go and change

pratigya: bhai if people have a staring problem, then wot can i do? and plus i have you and krish to save me 4om any loser ritee, nw lets goo

adrash thinks to himself: dats the problem pratigya... ur so inncocent and dont nw wot kind of person krish is... the only person im worried about is krish... wot if he.... :(

pratigya: bhai shall we go nw... bye dad

shyam: bye kids now hurry up b4 u get late

adrash: bye

shyam: and tc kids

adrash and pratigya: bye

pratigya reaches school and is shocked to see wots happening

pratigya: bhai wots all this??

adrash: this is krish

pratigya: wot?!

krish is dancing to the song break ur heart by taio curz ft ludacris

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_SI2EDM6Lo

(copy and put this in the place.... or youtube break ur heart by taio curz)(guyz plzz listen to this song... i just lubbbbb ittttt)!

during the whole the song pratigya cant get her eyes off of krish... as in the video... even krish is dancing wid tons of gurlss including arushi

pratigya feels as if her stomic is in a bunch of lockes... and she cant breathe... she feel stfucated(sori guyz i have treable spelling skills!) just wen krish sees praitgya and brings her to the centre and starts to dance wid her to the end of the lyrics which go like

Im only gonna break break break break your heart

im onli gonna break break break break your heart

adrash sees this and gets reali mad seeing pratigya dancing so close wid krish

krish grabs pratigya back wid his hand and brings her closer

aurushi sees this and gets angry and leaves and sees adrash standing thier

arushi: adrash wot kind a brother r u... wathcing ur lil sister dancing wid krish... whose is a onli one nite stand kinda guy... who is onli going to break your sisters heart as he has done wid many gurls

adrash get angry and leaves 4om thier and walks towards were kriya are dancing

arushi thinks to herself: that will get pratigya away 4om my krishu, she gets happy and leaves

adrash is walking in total angry and grabs pratigya's hand so he can make space b/w them

krish: wots up my main mann

adrash: nuthing, pratigya ur classes are starting in 4mins so cum let me show u the way around

krish: i'll take her

adrash: no she is mine sister so u go and dance okay

krish: okayy buddyy

krish resumes his dancing

and plzz comment... ill be waiting....thanks ever1... i mite make a short update again
and thanks khushboo16! for liking my ff 😳 and guyzz plzz comment! 😳 mhawz to all
oxox mina
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
i dont why i cant make krishs clothes big... sorrii guyzz😕

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