FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

That was really good

Hmm dont see things going so smoothly as Pratigya and her family think they will

Look forward to the next part

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#32

Love the positivity of ur fanfic😉. that is , Pratigya's and her family's positive attitude towards each other, like: no blaming on each other when the truth is told, and their belief in each other, even the dadi is quite like-able😆!!! Thanx for updating and hope to read the next chapter v.soon😃😃

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#33

Awesome!! Cant Wait For The Next Chapter! :D

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ANANYA ROY

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#34

Thanks to all readers and silent readers..😃

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ANANYA ROY

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Part 5

Nitin was coming back..it was almost 8 o'clock in the night..Pratigya and Nitin had a short phone chat,Pratigya is in Banaras now..it might be Dadi,who was calling her..that was why she cut the phone..he had to stop his car too,middle in the road ..some guys were there..Nitin was stunned to see their attitude..one of them came and said,"Bhaiya bula rahe hain..chalo..".."Who is Bhaiya?How can you stop me middle in the road.."..Nitin said..

"Zyada bol bachan mat jhaar Beta..Bhaiya bula rahe hain..chal sarafat se...varna abhi toh raste k beech me roke hain..kahin kone me le jaa k tujhe kharcha paani naa de de hum log..chal..baahar nikal.." he said threatfully..Nitin had to come out..the guy led him to the Leader of the Gang..Nitin looked at him..no sense of fashion,odd colour combination,undone hair,unshaven face..

"You are Nitin..right?"..The Leader asked..

"Yes..I am Nitin Jagmohan Shrivastav.."..Nitin said..

"Karta kyaa hai tu?"..again a question from the Leader..

"I am a Computer Engineer.."..Nitin replied..

"Mahapandit nikla tu toh..Prof. Saxena aise hi kisiko chunenge..andaza tha..par tere jaise langoor ko kaahe lia pasand kie be?"..A very harsh tone striked in Nitin's mind..

"Excuse me..I am getting late..if you want to say something,come to the point.."..Nitin said..

"Pratigyajee..you were asking about her that day right?At Civil Lines?To Adarsh.. bol na..tujhe sharam nahi aai..parai ladki k baare me usike Bhai se puchhta hai?" ..Again a harsh voice..

"Jisse puchha woh humare honewale Saale hain..jinke baare me puchha woh humari honewali Patni..tumko beech me bolne ka hak kisine dia hai kya?I don't think so.."..Nitin said firmly..

"Krisna khud apna hak lena jaanta hai..aur woh jo hain honewale Saale..yaa honewali Patni..tere honge nahi..bhool jaa usko..duniya me aur bhi achhi ladki hai..uska khayal chhod.."..Krishna warned..

"What rubbish..who the hell are you?"..Nitin asked angrily..

"Hum hain..Prof. Saxena k honewale Damad..Pratigyajee k honewale Pati..Adars ka honewala Jeeja..jisdin se Pratigyajee ko Sangam ghaat par dekha hai..tabhi hum faisla kar lie the..k saadi unhise karenge..aur tu beech me aa raha hai? Dekh, Munna..baat ko samajh..dil ka maamla hai...tere lia aur bhi mil jaayengi..humare lia Pratigyajee ko chhod de.."..Krishna said..

"Are you sick?Ek ladki ko ek din dekha aur bina yeh jaane k usko kaun pasand hai ..tumne faisla kar lia..aur aaj mujhe dhamka rahe ho?Tumhe Pratigyajee se puchhna tha..agar unki taraf se aisa kuchh hota toh humse shaadi karne k lia woh
kabhi haan nahi karti...bakwas bandh karo..humara rasta chhodo.."..Nitin said angrily..

"Bhaiya pyaar karte hain na..haan bass..kaafi hai..baaki Bhaiya aur Pratigya Bhabhi khud maamla apas me nipta lenge..tu beech me se hat..zyada bhashan mat de..tu kahe to tere lia dulhan hum dhoondh denge..bas Bhabhi par se najar hata le.." ..Chandu suggested..

"Aur waise bhi Pratigyajee gharwalon k dabav me aakar saadi k lia haan kahi hain..tujhse pyaar nahi karti woh.." Krishna added smilingly...

"As per my thinking..she doesn't love you either..look at yourself..your look..your attitude..any well mannered and sophisticated girl like Pratigyajee will not give a mere look at you ever..so..better you come out of your dreamland..you are wasting my time as well ass your time.."..Nitin was about to leave..and then Krishna grabbed his collar..." Kaa be..sarafat se baat keh rahe hain..samajh me nahi aa rahi toka?Tu beech me se hat Munna..baaki Pratigyajee ko humse pyaar karva lenge hum khud hi..tujhe jyada sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai..seedhi tarha samajh ja..Pratigyajee se saadi ka sapna chhor..Pratigyajee keval humari hain.." and Krishna pushed him back..and said.."I am giving you one week..after that if I ever see you around her..you will be debarred from your life..and I mean it..now get lost.."

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"Uncle..now what we should do?Thank god..Pratigyajee is in Banaras now..that goon has threatened me ,I came here to inform you and then I knew that he is threatening you too.."..Nitin said worriedly..

"That scoundrel had seen Pratigya when he had come to threat Papa ..for some favour in GS Election .."..Adarsh said..

"Kyaa hoga jee?"..Nainajee became pale..

"When Pratigya is not here..then why should we bother?Nitin ,you just don't mess with him if you meet him again..let him think that everything is happening as per his choice..maamla thanda bhi ho jaayega..and after one month,Pratigya will
come,then marriage..isn't it Adarsh?"..Shyamjee suggested .."Nitin..these are nothing but the result of the chaos by the GS Election,poor Pratigya should not suffer for that.."

"Of course.."..Nitin said..

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Almost ten days later, another Mafia leader, Gagan Singh was bailed out from jail.. Gagan Singh and Sajjan Singh used to have cold war between them..but to grab the Railway contracts ,Gagan Singh's back up was neccesary..Sajjan Singh
realised it when Gagan Singh was put behind the bar..it was Sajjan Singh who made constant effort to bail out Gagan Singh..

In Bihar,Chhapra,Madhepura,Patna,Munger,Bhagalpur and in UttarPradesh, Balia, Deoria,Gorakhpur,Daudpur, Mujjaffarnagar..these places had a tag of Gagan Singh's terror and his possession..over one year Gagan Singh was in jail,he indeed knew what Sajjan Singh did in his favour inspite of being a rival,he was obliged.He invited Sajjan Singh to Banaras where he was about to take some rest and the blessings of Baba Vishwanath..

Sajjan Singh clearly was eager to go there,but his old leg pain was in a dominant mode..Krishna went there reluctantly on behalf of his father.." Jada naatak na karbo..seedhe seedhe jaao..varna maarenge dui jhaapad..behooda badtameez.." ..Krishna was remembering his father's word..

"Aajaao Beta..tohar Babujee aa nahi paaye..par koi baat nahi..tumhi ho unke waaris..tumhi se jaan pehchan kar leb..batao Beta..kaa socha hai jindagi k baare me?Tum aaj kal launde..jigar naa hi hai..ek tho goli chalate hue haath kaanp jaate
hain..humka dekho..20 se upar murder charge hai..kidnapping,extortion..samjheho k naahi?Apne Baojee ko dekh leo..Thakur Saab..yaa hum agar apni jawani me darr jaate..to kaa aaj itna aage jaa paate..?Samjheho k naahi?"..Gagan Singh was giving his lecture..Krishna was feeling to throw him in the Ganges..they were seated in a large boat adjacent with Manikarnika Ghaat,mild air was blowing, prayer,chants were coming in the air..the scenario was eye soothing..and Gagan Singh was giving a crash course on crime..bloody pompous ass..

"Ee leo Beta..sarbat peeo..ee humar Betia hai..Manorama..sarbat issi ne banaya hai..ghaat tak yehi laai hai humare lia..badi gooni ladki hai..Manorama..ee hai Krisna..Thakur Sajjan Singh k Bete.."..Gagan said with a curious smile..

Now the whole thing got cleared before Krishna..why Baojee got his leg pain and why instead of Shakti,he sent Krishna..to meet this..Manorama.."Peeo na Beta.. sarbat bahut achha bana hai.."..Gagan insisted..Krishna looked at Manorama..she looked too demure..she face was well shaped,but so lifeless..and she was over dressed,excess jewelary,excess make up..it was horrible..

Krishna said,"I would like to have a visit in the temple..please.."

"Sure..come..let Manorama show you the way..Mano..go sweet heart..."..Gagan Singh instructed..

"No,she is not my sister,not my relative..nothing..roaming around with her..is not acceptable as per the social norms..she better stays here..I will find the way.." ..Krishna said and left..

"Thakur Saab and his family values and culture..what a decent boy..isn't it Manorama..?"..Gagan Singh asked..Manorama just bent her head..she was also trapped like Krishna..

Krishna was going to the Vishwanath Temple,he saw a foriegn tourist was talking to an Indian girl,the girl was talking in affluent English..she was giving informations about Varanasi and it's heritage..the voice was familer for Krishna..he can recognize the voice among million voices...and surely he can recognise the face among billion faces..he can feel her presence among trillion people as if she is the only existing human being in the whole wide world..he was amused by her words ..at Sangam she was praying with total faith,now she is talking with the foreigners with full confidence..Krishna doesn't understand English,but she was talking in English and it was like music to Krishna's ears..

Pratigya was talking making several faces,giving many expressions,bowing her hands..pointing by her fingers..she was smiling..grinning..in short she was the live portrait of Krishna's dream..

But suddenly she became invisible..she was lost in the crowd..Krishna tried to find her..but he failed..when he was scratching his heads in frustration,his mobile rang.. "Kaa hua Baba..ladki pasand aai?"..Sajjan is calling from Allahabad..Krishna gritted his teeth.."Aapko tabele k lia gaai ya bains chahie..yaa humar lia dulhan? Chhee..Baojee..aisa sochna bhi mat..."..Krishna cut the phone...

The more Krishna was thinking about Pratigya,the more he was feeling to throw up by the thought of Manorama..yuukks..Manorama?No way..Pratigya and only Pratigyajee,no one can take her place in Krishna's heart and life..Krishna felt really irritated because of the thoughts of Manorama..she was like a puppet..no..no way...and Pratigyajee..she is really nice..so lively..so natural..so confident..

Krishna was roaming around the local market..again he found Pratigya..she was with some other girl,may be her friend..or her cousin..they were having pani puri.. "Bhaiyajee..more chilly..and more salt..it's so tasteless..put more green chillies.." ..Pratigya was demanding.."Bahenjee..muh jal jaayega aapka..itni mirchi..."..the stall owner advised.."I like lots of spice and chilly in pani puri.."..Pratigya said..

Krishna was staring at her from a short distance..he was stunned to see the amount of spice and chilly she was asking for the pani puri..no wonder why her tongue is so sharp..because of the chilly..why she is so hot tempered..of course for the chilly ..Pratigya's nose tip became red..her eyes started to drop tears ,her face was perspirimg enormously..Krishna was feeling like to go to her and give her some cold water to reduce the effect of chilly..Krishna was feeling bad..he was smiling by seeing her expression..

"Didi..itni mirchi khaane ki zaroorat kyaa thi?Khaa k fir toh mithai khaaogi..."..her cousin said..

"Arre..teekha khaane me jo maza aata hai..tu nahi samjhegi...aankhe,zuban sab jalti hain..aur kaan me se dhuan nikalta hai..I can't express my proper feeling yaar.."..Pratigya said while she was hissing constantly because of chilly..they crossed Krishna...Krishna was watching Pratigya with a constant glance..

"I love her...more than anything,more than anyone..she is mine..she is bound to be mine..no one can stop her to be mine..she will have to be mine..I love her..." ..Krishna took his ultimate resolution ..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago