Originally posted by: prateek.007
A very very Beautifull work..The whole concept was amazingly build and brilliantly described...Though i am not ur regular reader..Its very first time that i am reading ur work..But trust me,i just loved it..The idea of SwaRon Dance and the whole write up was perfectly executed..No queries,no error..it was damm perfect..Now the writing was OOosum..Two strangers meet and attracted to dance with each other..I can easily imagined swaron and their emotions with each N every single step of dance..All thanx to ur video link..It was sensuous and the intimacy on its peak..Which i like most...Loved the way u explianed their dancing moves,their steps with ur writing..
Now loved the ending..Beautifully done..Keep it up
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And yeah Enjoy
Prateek
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