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Alright so I saw this Tango Video on YT and I just Imagined Swaron and this plot popped into my head and even though i am busy with exam preps I just could not get it out of my head so i decided to get it out of my system by finally writing it.
The OS will be sensous (at least thats what I feel) anyways enjoy and ignore the Bak Bak
PS. Not a phenomenal piece of writing but definitely doesn't suck and please leave reviews as they are precious to a writer.OK now ON with it

Before I start here is the link of the video please watch it and then read you will find it more appealing

Alright ladies and gentleman its time for the final round of the ultimate Dance championship.Last round will be impromptu Ball room Dance with Random partners.After this round the dance king and queen will be decided by tallying the total scores of the competition so break a leg people.Oh and the dance style for this round will be chosen by the judges randomly.

The announcer took a bowl full of folded chits to the judge and he picked one of them.The announcer took it

Alright the dance floor is about to get hot and heavy because we will get to see Argentine Tango in this round.

The hall erupted with loud claps from the enthusiastic audience who were dying to witness the awesome Dance coming up.

All right contestants go and get your dancing shoes on and lets get the show going.

all the contestants scattered to the changing rooms and prepared themselves for the ultimate battle.A chit reached to everyone which had a number on it.All the contestants scurried off to the polished floor and took the position alloted to them in the chits.

Lights were off and the hall was silent.Soon music started and the lights were switched on and each couple had a spotlight on them.
No.7 that's where most of the girls were looking.There he stood as tall and handsome as ever.His posture was perfect and his face showed nothing but confidence.Suddenly a hand creeped from underneath his arm and reached to caress his chest.surprise was written all over his face.One touch from his random partner had him shivering to his toes but he composed himself and covered the hand with his but she removed it in such a teasing manner caressing the inside of his palm as well his chest.He was stunned but impressed too.He turned a little and she came from behind him and thats when all the men were looking at the No.7 too.There she was as gorgeous and voluptuous as ever.There eyes locked for the first time and they knew it right then they were going to win this.She stepped in front of him with such grace that it looked as if she was gliding on the floor.He held her petite waist while his other hand went under her arm and rested just below her breast line.He shifted his weight to one leg and swayed to one side with her swaying with him as her feather lite body was supported by him.His nose nuzzled her cheek and that's when he inhaled her heavenly scent for the first time.She smelled divine.Good enough to eat.She was aware of his proximity yet she was confident and full of attitude and grace.He slowly came back up and twirled her around but pulled her close within a second.Now they were nose to nose.Their breath hitting each other faces.That is when she inhaled his intoxicating scent.He smelled ineluctable.She just wanted to keep inhaling his alluring scent till she was high from it.Her hand at the Nape of his neck was playing with the soft hairs hair there.He had the softest hair.She reminded herself of where she was and resumed the dance.She slid her hand from the crook of his arm down to his hand but he suddenly twirled her around and her hand went back to clutching his bicep as he twirled both of them around in perfect circles.he then twirled her and now they were side to side.His eyes never leaving hers.these motions slowed down and almost came to a stop as he had his hand on her back while the other placed just below her breast line.His touch was making her knees weak.His hold was not rough or commanding It was gentle and teasing and just pure sin.he took and step ahead and she moved with him.He turned and that's when her body melted into his.They were so close yet he pulled her closer ever so gently.He ran his hand up her sides till he reached her underarm and continued his journey dragging his hand in an agonizingly slow motion towards her palm and finally clasped her hand in his.Her skin was soft and creamy and it was taking every ounce of his strength to restrain himself from feeling each and every curve of her scrumptious body.They were nose to nose again there eyes locked while the rest of the world blurred.They moved together as if they had been rehearsing this same routine for years.Their dance picked up pace and their footwork became more intricate.They moved all around the floor with such ease and grace that it was looking like a child's play.He moved and she moved along with him.They were like magnets. He twirled her and then picked her up an turned and then placed her back to her feet.The audience was in awe.Their eyes never lest the magical couple that danced like there was nothing else that mattered to them except each other and the music.The way they were moving the audience felt as if they are invading someone private moment.Their movement were so intimate and sensuous yet far far away from looking Vulgar.They looked absolutely perfect.he was moving with her and Stared at her without blinking.Noticing her Big Olive green Eyes that spoke volumes .Those eyes held so many emotions and spoke volumes like right now her eyes were downright seducing him sucking him into a never ending abyss of temptation.He Curls held up in bun while a few tendrils escaped which teased his cheeks and neck every once in a while.He plump glossy pink lips were pursed in such a way as if they were begging to be kissed they they were swollen and red.It wasn't just her that had an effect on him.She was right there with him.She looked at him closely and wind was knocked right out of her.He was the definition of perfection.His face was carved in such a way that nothing else seemed more innocent while his eyes his chocolate brown pools held all the emotions which were far from innocence.The lust,the passion and the naughty glint that she was seeing right that moment just almost had her collapsed but he held her and she held on to him.His long hair were her undoing.She was looking at him for the first time yet she could just imagine her raking her fingers through his wet locks while they are making passionate and sweaty love to each other.She cleared the sinful images from her mind and concentrated on her Dance and he did the same.He turned her around and now they were Back to chest.His one hand held her waist delicately while his other arm held her outstretched hand his fingers teasing her skin and leaving goosebumps all over.They moved and then he twirled her while she leaned her weight on one leg and then he turned her around and dipped her.Their eye contact broke.The intensity of the moment became to much to handle so he dipped her ever so delicately and faced the other side while she just let him lead her.He pulled her back up and she started moving away as if to just take a beat but he kept his hand on her hip while the other held her arm from the elbow.A second ago he wanted to escape the intensity but as soon as she started to walk out of his personal space.Its like he was tormented.His body ached for her.He moved behind her and held her outstretched arms at her sides and bought them in front almost hugging her from behind.Her scent as if intoxicated him while his closeness was making her dizzy.Her eyes almost rolled back with the pleasure of his touch while her breathing got heavy.She slowly moved her hips back while outstretching her one foot ahead and he followed her the same.He was too close she moved one step ahead but he moved with her.She caressed her own face imagining as if it was him while he just stared at her with passion and intensity enough to burn a house down.He quickly spun her around and held her waist with both hands while her harms were stretched above her head.He was too close now.There lips were just MM apart.One lean and they would be kissing.He was tempted to do it.Just taste her once but he relented.She was ready to give herself to him.Her arms came down and he started guiding her again.There dance again slowed down and it was more sensuous and intimate now.They completely forgot where they were and just danced as if they were alone.Their steps became more bold.He spun her around ever so expertly and then they were side to side again.She shifted her weight to her her back feet while he went a step ahead and turned and placed a led in from with his knee bend.She leaned forward and lift her other leg up and bent it from the knee and kept it on the top of his thigh.Their labored breaths were heating each others faces.Audience was staring with their mouth wide open.They again started moving.Hand in hand they moved to the beat as if their life depended in it.He then dipped her ever so slowly.He back arched making a delicious curve while he held her arms in his.Their lower bodies still in contact.He left her one hand while she came back up dragging her hand from his torso up his chest in a seductive motion and then moved it up his neck to his cheek while he held her shoulders gently.He looked into her eyes and he knew he had to have her or he would die but he knew that he cant right now but he was also sure that if he keep looking into her lust filled eyes he would lose it so he twirled her so they were back to chest again.She understood too and just went along with him.He twirled her and then held both her hands while she went down on one leg and stretched the other leg backwards and arched here back a little.He pulled her back up and they started moving again and their footwork was flawless as they moved on the floor.He was like the wind while she was the twig.He moved her and she went wherever he took her.He spun her around,Twirled her,lifted her,dipped her and she just went with it.Their moves picked up pace and they were setting the floor on fire.He spun her around then dipped her sideways.They remained like that for a second or two but to them this separation was like a century.He pulled her back up and his nose grazed her neck.She was putty in his hands and he just wanted her.He knew that he can't take it no more.She was the same it was like as if they were drugs to each other.The high they were feeling just by dancing so close was so tempting that it made them want more.He held her back while the other hand held her hand while she lifted her leg in the air and made a T with her body.The competition did not matter anymore they just wanted the dance to end so that they can have each other.Their moved became fast and rushed but they never lost their grace and poise.Their dance was still flawless.They moved close to each other fearing the other might disappear.Its like they were soul mates destined to find each other through this passionate dance.The song finally ended and the lights dimmed again.The crowd erupted into a fit of claps and cheers and hoots.When the lights came back again.The hall was filled yet two people were missing the Dance King and the Dance Queen.Well lets just say they did not recieve their prize or maybe they did but it was too personal too share.This is how Tango brought a King and his Queen together and this is how Sharon Raipraksh Became Mrs.Sharon Swayam Shekhawat.


OK so finally wrote this.I have no Idea how it came out.Sorry for any typo errors and comments most welcome

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sweetheart...🤗

I cant express my happiness to see you ...healthy and happy ...i was the 1st person to post my feedback on ur very 1st OS on SwaRon...reading this piece of write up just made me think about ur tremendous journey as a writer...u have come such a long way...the maturity to handle a plot ..executing and expressing an impressive idea with equal brilliance is truly a quality of an amazing writer..and u have been versatile as well...

Coming to the OS...it was sensuous yet it touched me...it grew on me with each passing line...two strangers meeting each other over a dance and the unavoidable attraction ...so beautifully described through dance... i could visualize their dance though ur words...loved the usage of language..the flow..the pace...it was just PERFECT ...


Beautiful write up swthrt..keep writing...all the best for ur exams..take care of ur health 🤗

Love
Deepika
Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Harshu...that was brilliantly conceptualized and beautifully penned down...it has all the ingredient needed for the os...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Harshu...that was brilliantly conceptualized and beautifully penned down...it has all the ingredient needed for the os...loved it...

Really yes.I had doubbts about this as utna accha nikal kar nahi aaya jitna sicha tha but anyways thanx for the sweet comment bhai🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey you are writing again😃 here goes my res
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: austen4ever

hey you are writing again😃 here goes my res


well all my other stories are still on hold but this idea was just messing with my brain its like i could not concentrate on anything else.So i just wrote this but rest of my work will be resumed after my exams are over
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh kya tha !!!!!! 😲 yet once more m blowed away my heart earged to read ur write ups , they r soo brilliant kya karu mai likhna chod du , muh chupa lun or lets get inspired n write something more sensible n mature 🤔 gosh it flowed wid everyline of choreography , i was hungry when i was reading this os coz i ust came from skool n saw this on my phone maine story chalu kia n socha aab jaake kuch kati hun fir continue karungi but i couldnt resist every line made me so engross into it ki full pdhke fir khaneko liya 🤣 . m shrt of words yeh jo bhi likha yeh kuch bhi nahi hai missed u too much di .🤗🤗🤗
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Firstly welcome back.. I good to see you here hale and hearty.. 🤗
Talking about the OS☺️
It was way sensuous and believe me I could actually imagine their dance with each line I read and I was just shooing of the imagines as the intimacy was making the atmosphere HOT!! 😳
I watched the video after reading the OS and I could actually picturize Swaron as you had described them and believe me the video looked great because your words has build up the entire atmosphere
And yes not to forget the amount of creative thinking that came into it like just from as dance video you managed to picturize a complete story out of it in such a MARVELLOUS way I mean
Hats Off to that!!!! 👏
You are a great writer and there is NO DOUBT about it
Way to go dear 👍🏼
Keep writing just the way you always do 😉

P.S Thanks for the PM 😃
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no words to say
beautifully penned
I can imagine them dancing
so passionate
every feeling towards each other was very well included
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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OMG Harshu.. Your Os made me blush so much that they have been damaged due to the constant heat..😳.
I was smiling lost in your write up like an idiot.. I was lost in swaron magic all over again it was like a breath of fresh air for me..
You're freaking awesome at writing.. I totally loved the way you penned down their graceful and sensuous moves.. There is a thin line between sensuality and vulagrity which you did'nt cross.. Your Os remained sensuous right from the beginning to the end but not in one place did I feel that this is vulgar.. It was simply wow..
Awesome job harshu keep writing more..
Love,
Kashmi..🤗

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