Tango Amour Swaron OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Sweetheart...🤗

I cant express my happiness to see you ...healthy and happy ...i was the 1st person to post my feedback on ur very 1st OS on SwaRon...reading this piece of write up just made me think about ur tremendous journey as a writer...u have come such a long way...the maturity to handle a plot ..executing and expressing an impressive idea with equal brilliance is truly a quality of an amazing writer..and u have been versatile as well...

Coming to the OS...it was sensuous yet it touched me...it grew on me with each passing line...two strangers meeting each other over a dance and the unavoidable attraction ...so beautifully described through dance... i could visualize their dance though ur words...loved the usage of language..the flow..the pace...it was just PERFECT ...


Beautiful write up swthrt..keep writing...all the best for ur exams..take care of ur health 🤗

Love
Deepika

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

yeh kya tha !!!!!! 😲 yet once more m blowed away my heart earged to read ur write ups , they r soo brilliant kya karu mai likhna chod du , muh chupa lun or lets get inspired n write something more sensible n mature 🤔 gosh it flowed wid everyline of choreography , i was hungry when i was reading this os coz i ust came from skool n saw this on my phone maine story chalu kia n socha aab jaake kuch kati hun fir continue karungi but i couldnt resist every line made me so engross into it ki full pdhke fir khaneko liya 🤣 . m shrt of words yeh jo bhi likha yeh kuch bhi nahi hai missed u too much di .🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Firstly welcome back.. I good to see you here hale and hearty.. 🤗

Talking about the OS☺️

It was way sensuous and believe me I could actually imagine their dance with each line I read and I was just shooing of the imagines as the intimacy was making the atmosphere HOT!! 😳

I watched the video after reading the OS and I could actually picturize Swaron as you had described them and believe me the video looked great because your words has build up the entire atmosphere

And yes not to forget the amount of creative thinking that came into it like just from as dance video you managed to picturize a complete story out of it in such a MARVELLOUS way I mean

Hats Off to that!!!! 👏

You are a great writer and there is NO DOUBT about it

Way to go dear 👍🏼

Keep writing just the way you always do 😉

P.S Thanks for the PM 😃

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

OMG Harshu.. Your Os made me blush so much that they have been damaged due to the constant heat..😳.
I was smiling lost in your write up like an idiot.. I was lost in swaron magic all over again it was like a breath of fresh air for me..
You're freaking awesome at writing.. I totally loved the way you penned down their graceful and sensuous moves.. There is a thin line between sensuality and vulagrity which you did'nt cross.. Your Os remained sensuous right from the beginning to the end but not in one place did I feel that this is vulgar.. It was simply wow..
Awesome job harshu keep writing more..
Love,
Kashmi..🤗

Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan

Its superb harshu...
The way u penned it down...it ws dam sensuous...
The way u described the steps...m jst speechless yr...
Realy ur cming up with unique n difrent concept n its refreshing to read thm...