Tango Amour Swaron OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: nancynnv

harshu di🤗

omg!aapne kya likha hai yaar...👏

i mean story dialogues toh sab hi likh laitai hai par

writing something like this so sensous

n writing a dance in form of words is something so difficult...

u wrote it so well so beautifull...

its super se very very upar...!!!

loved loved loved it !❤️

keep writing n smiling :)

love,

nancy 😊

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

harshi---

itna hot wala write up---paani ka arrangement nahi rakkhi?

loved how the dance part was written---well it was um,mm---woven is a better word i guess---into a dance themed fairytale.

anyway, whenever u decide to write---its always beautiful.

loved the ending...

and loved the way the fairytale ended in the fairytalish manner---they lived happily ever after way.

lots of love---

medha di

ps---best of luck for ur exams. even mine ended just yesterday

Originally posted by: Suni1986

Nice story
one dance define about them nd make them together.
Dance seq was really good

Originally posted by: cenation123

Medha dii🤗your reviews are constant on each of my work and i feel like I have a loyal reader and I flatter myself telling wow i have a reader who is addicted to the crap that I write😆😆.But anyways you long review make my day.I am glad you liked this random OS since when it comes to random concepts on Swaron I am nowhere near you.Anyways as for paani ka arrangement to maine paani rakha tha but hotness ke chalte evaporate ho gaya😆.Jokes apart I loved you sweet comment.Love you diii.

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

hmm--evaporate ho gaya. clever kid huh?😉

and u dont write crap. dont say that about harshi's writing, harshi, i'm warning you.😡

and yeah---flatter ho sakti ho, i am actually addicted to it.😃

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

<font size="2">welcum back harshita
</font>

<font size="2">bang on os</font>

<font size="2">as a writer you definitely hav an art</font>

<font size="2">for writing steamy n provocative scenes</font>

<font size="2">n ur piece becums very inviting n captivating .☺️</font>

<font size="2">coming to ur os</font>

<font size="2">it was hot , enticing , sensual n irresistible</font>

<font size="2">the way yu narrated about two strangers</font>

<font size="2">connecting thru thr dance was very beautifully penned</font>

<font size="2">looking forward to ur updates</font>

<font size="2">ps : woh video ka tum pey bohot gehra asar hua hai😆</font>