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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

awesome update..


asad was so sweet..

making breakfast for zoya..

and his confession to aapi and jeeju was fantastic..

he was so guilty..

and asya's moment were so hot..

update soon..



hai,

thank u so much..

update is here...

thank u..once again for ur comments...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Awesome update
Waooo nice storyyy
Your storyy is a imaginery dreamland
Waooo nice
With fulll of emotions love care nnn on the whole packet of entertainment
Great one
Plzzz do continuee soon


thank u so much sweet heart,

ur comments are are actually boosting my ego...😉

thank u..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

when you will update?


in 5 minutes...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Update Soon n pls pm me


thank you... i will send u a pm soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamagvl45

Update soon yaar pls pls pls
pm me pls pls pls pls pls pls pls


yeah here is the update.. enjoy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Congratulations on the completion of the research for 1st year. My my intelligent physicist.

Loving the update where ever I catch it. Still haven't read the earlier once but I feel like I am not missing out on the experience.

Love making session. Asad guilty is so cute.

Jiyo mere lal.
Every update is equally entertaining.


hai juliet,

thank u for ur wishes... nice to know that u r loving the update...

and i am loving ur comments too...

hopefully i am as intelligent as u r saying...😉 and finish my work in next 2 years...


love

kalyani
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Posted: 11 years ago

hai guys,


belated pongal and sankranthi wishes guys... and apologies for the late update.

here u go

Part 43:

As their passion ended, they both were holding on to each other in their bathroom, with closed eyes. Zoya was kissing asad heart and her hands were drawing random patterns on his six pack, and it looked like they were getting ready for one more round of passion. Suddenly asad eyes opened as he remembered,

A: zoya get ready fast, appi is waiting for u..she sent me inside only to wake u.. when I move out now, she will tease me to death...

Z;ofcourse appi will tease u to death... i.e what saali do...ok

A: ok..but u know me.. I am not comfortable in the tease..

Z; ofcourse u r always akdu ahmed khan..now take a chill pill.. and relax... baby..

A: ofcourse sweety... now u brush..and get ready I will have the water running,

Asad was filling the bath tub with warm water as zoya was brushing her teeth, and then she looked at her naked form in the mirror, felt a bit shy, and she removed the bathrobe from the cupboard, and passed on a towel to asad. She saw asad filling the tub with hot water and mixing some oil inside the water.she was curious to know and as asad looked at her, she asked him with her eyes.

A: these oil will relive u from ur body pain..and smiled...😉

Zoya understood the meaning behind his words and gave out a shy smiles.😳.as asad caressed her red cheeks. Zoya was checking out her husband as he was busy in the shower. She was so happy to see a tension free face of asad. As asad saw her, he winked at her😉 and she winked back on him..hespinkled water on zoya... as the water was cold..

Z: asad...

A: sorry sweety...

As he came out and dried his body..and he was above to move out... zoya held his hands...

Z; asad..

A: ????

Z: let it go..

A: I am trying... but the guilt is killing me inside...zoya...

Z: asad we didn't want any of this to happen...we suffered enough...now... it is the time to be happy... there are few things which we can't change..Past is not in our hands..But the present and future is... I want as to lead the rest of our life happily in each other's arm... we never know what life will spring on us... I want just to cherish out time together...

A: zoya don't talk like that..

Z: asad.. I .e the reality life... That life is uncertain..and also the beauty of it.. we never know what will come next... and this is what keeps our life interesting..isnt..i.e why... we should lead a happy life... as long as we are here.. yeah.. we are humans.. we do have mood swings.. but at the end of the day.. all I want to is to sleep in peace in ur arms.. I want nothing more ..asad... and I also want you to be in peace... u r carrying burden.. since childhood.. it is time we let our past go...and welcome our present..

A:.hmm...but it is not easy ... zoya...I just cant forget them..

Z:asad...it is very simple... I know no one can forget the past..look at me... she removed the bathrobe.. and showed him the scar... .this scar...reminds of my sorrow filled past...asad... whenever u make love. To me... I visibly see my scars... but I don't hide behind.them..bcoz my present is u... u accepted me.. as I am... so I let it go...WE CANT FORGET OUR PAST.. ASAD... ALL WE HAVE TO DO IS... NOT TO REMEMBER THEM... Just let it slide away.. Even if it pops... replace them with a happy memory...ok..i.e my secret... of my life.. Which I am sharing with u.. Will u do the same..

A: yes dear.. As long as I see ur happy face.. I will let the past disappear...

Z: now that is like a good boy... And peeked him on the cheek..

A:..but how come my zoya is mature only for sometime.. and then she goes back to her playfull self..

Z: i.e is bcoz my akdu..is serious enough for both of us.. and I love being the immature spoiled brat.😆. to be spoiled by u...where is the fun being all serious.. come here...

She took asad and showed his face in the mirror...

Z: look at our faces...both of us have cute dimples when we smile... but the sad fact is I can count the times I have seen yours... hence worth I want to see them as often as possible..ok... Deal... and zoya showed her thumb up signature..

Asad was just standing and admiring his mature yet kiddish wife..only to be nudged by her..

A: hmm..

Z: asad..u have to show the sign and u have to say Deal... say it now...

Asad accepted her demand and showed the sign..

A: deal..and took her for a breath taking kiss... as the kiss ended..

Z:asad I am yet to wash my mouth...

A:it is ok sweet heart...

Z: oih..oih.. ocd ahmed khan.. became shameless ahmed khan... Kudos to u zoya... After mrs zoyaasadahmed khan can do anything... and patted herself, and asad nodded his head looking at her... and made his way to their room.

After solid one hour zoya entered the living room in her usual white kurta and blue jeans.to see the family in the living room, and dilshad calling them out for breakfast. She entered the kitchen and helped her MIL..in the breakfast..the whole family sat in the dining table, when ayaan was about to take the chair to the right of asad..

Z:..ayaan that is my place.. so u go sit next to ur wife there... and look after her needs ..ok..

A: sorry mona darling... here I come humeria begum... And went and sat next to humi..

As zoya was serving breakfast...to all..

Z: humi..what did u romeo.. said to u last night.. in his drunken state...

H: appi...

Z: arry... Don't shy..we are just family...

H: who..actually...

Z: u also ..humi... I am so tired of this word...

H:he said... he loves me a lot and our kid too.. and he said sorry for keeping me waiting...

Z: wow..ayaanmaiyaa.. u also said sorry... Just like how urbhaijaan said in the morning..kya tuning hai.. tumdono me...

Ze:... asad... u took solid one hour to say sorry to my sis... is it really takes that much time to convince my sis... is it so...?

Asad made a uncomfortable face..and looked down... as he didn't know what to tell her... and was feeling so..embrassed...

Z: appi... U really think I need an hour to be convinced...

Ze:..no... but u only said that naa...so what else he was doing for one hour...

Z: he did what a newly married husband will do to his wife... ok... Appi he is already complaining that u r pulling his legs... so please...

Ze: arrey... If not me... who else will ... humi looks at asad as a father figure...so I am the only saali to pull his leg... so u don't want me... ok.. with a sad face... asad looked up hopefully...

Z: appi when did I said no.. I am just saying... u r not doing a good job..u need to tune a bit further..

Ze:..ohh... done don't worry... I will refine further..asad was stunned.. looking at his wife taking a straight u turn.. he wanted to do a damage control now..

A: zoya u come and sit here..

As zoya sat next to asad, and he served food in her plate and asked her to eat..

Ze: asadmiyaa... my sister is not a doll..she is very strong .. but I thought u know my now...u know naa..

Asad was once again speechless...

Z: appi good one...

Ze:sozoya always sit to ur right.. is it so..

A: haa. Appi ..shealways..sits there.. it is her place... was relaxed to see a normal line coming from her mouth...

Ze:..so that u can play footsie under the table with her.. isn't..

Asad had that thought running in his mind already, as they started their morning in a naughty way..only thing he didn't realize was that he is voicing his thoughts..

A:how do u know that...

Z: asad...

Only on hearing zoya words..and the loud laughter that erupted in the table... made him recognize the fact that he said it out loud...

Ze: wow asadmiyaa..nice improvement...

A: appi...please...

And looked at anwar..with a face ..whichsaid..please save me...

An: zeenat..come on...now leave the bechare... free for him to finish his breakfast...

As soon as zoya heard the word bechara..her eyes twinkled a lot to the discomfort.. ofasad...

Z: jeeju... who..becharanahihai.. and laughed out loud and high fived at dlishad across the table.looking at the happy face was zoya.. asad thought he will never mind being the scapegoat in the tease.. if he could see his wife laughing like that.

An: ok now..eat everyone...

As everybody started to focus on their food, the door bell rang, as asad was above to get up ,zoya stopped him as he had asya in his lap.. and she moved to answer the door.. and then she came inside carrying a kid dinning chair.. in which the sitting is placed at height compared to normal adult one..

As: abbu this chair is mine..

A: ofcourse princess..specially for u.. u like it..

As: yes abbu..butwere will I place it.. the table is already full... and pouted she just like her mom...

A: here..she will sit with me.. and adjusted his chair so that asya small chair is parallel to each other.and then made her sit on her chair..

Z: ammi..this is not fair.. he never allowed me to sit in his chair... look now.. all special service for his princess.. and she pouted like her daughter..

A: zoya if u want u too can sit... here..

Z: where ..there is no place for me..

A: here ..u can sit in my lap.. I am strong enough to hold ur weight...u know..assson as he said the words out.. he bit his tongue... to hear the words.. ofzeenat,...

Ze: oh really asad. U strong enough ... To hold her weight..after all u r her jahappanah six packs...and everyone laughed at asad expense.. andasad just accepted it instead of whining around it.. as they continued their breakfast..

All of sudden zoya shouted..

Z: ammi..please save me daughter...

Dilshad and the whole family looked at asya leaving their food and asad was also looking around asya and questioned zoya with his eyes..

D: zoya...

Z:..ammi.. trust me.. we can handle only one ocd... at a time... two will break our back.. ammi.. look at ur son...he is spoiling ur grandchild too..

As they looked to see asya plates are neatly arranged..and it was just a carbon copy of asad...arrangement...

D: asadzoya is right... now don't make asya like u..and she is child.. let her spill.. and be a child now..

A: ammi I really have a doubt...

D: what...

A: am I really ur son...

D: asad. Why r u asking like that..

A: bcoz u never support me..u always support zoya

D: no asad.. I support u too..

A: ok..tell me one argument when u took my side against zoya..

D:...???

A: see...no..from the moment zoya entered our life.. u always support her...only her...

D: asad...

Z: ofcoursemr.khan..i.ebcoa I am always right...

Asad looked at zoya lovingly..

A: ofcourse u r..dear... And they had their famous eye lock...and got lost in their asya world...

Ay and Ze:..kyapyaarhai.. kyamohabbathai... and kya family hai...

And brought them back to the real world..

Ze: zoya I planned to visit ajmerdargah with u all befor we go back to NY..r u free for next 2 days..

Z: appi..can u confirm tomorrow.. we have client meeting tomorrow.. once we finish we can take a break I think,...

Ze: ok..done we can leave tomorrow evening .. then..

Z: yeah done...

A: jeeju..why don't u shift back to india.. asaadil is also growing.. up.. now we are also fast developing country,. As per economic predictions. We will be No1 country..Pretty soon...we are at par with the world now...

An: yeah asad.. I am also thinking the same now... we will discuss the plan later..

Z: really jeeju... i.e gr8.. I wont miss u anymore as u will be in the same city..

Ze: oh really beta...even when u were with us in NY... ur heart always belonged here... And now u say u will miss me...

Z: appi...

Ze: ok tell me what isur plans for honey moon...

Z: we haven't decided anything..yet.. as we are waiting to hear from u Navi55.. she promised as a honeymoon trip.. rememberher offer to babysit..asya..

Ze: yeah..i remember..

Ze: so any hints about honeymoon...

Z: that I can give u... I am guessing it is going to be one hot affair to remember..

Ze: how can u be sure..

Z: ok..here is the proof.. read the link below for u an idea.. by the way it is mature😉...so...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3879929/asya-ss-18-in-the-heat-of-the-moment-part-five-pg112

Ze: zoya that is really hot...

Z: I told u...

Ze: now I am eagerly waiting for ur honeymoon...

Z: not more than me...

Note:.

I find the Ze-asad conv above very humorous..hope u guys feel the same... I think I kind of got influenced by yes boss- by goinggreen... It is really funny... and I am not updating as frequently..is also due to the wonderful writers of the forum.. I end up reading them. Instead of updating...

Even after 43 chapters.. I am getting some new readers. Of late... thank u guys..for reading it.. and appreciating.. looking at the number makes me feel. Maybe I am dragging the story... Let me know..


Love to know ur comments... and ur likes are liked...

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME AS ALWAYS...I LOVED THE TEASING PART...HEY WHO TOLD U THAT U R DRAGGING...U R UP TO THE MARK...NICE WRITING...I LOVE IT...😛
ASYA HONEYMOON...OYE HOYE...😳...AND WAITING FOR AFZAL...

DAD'S TATTOO BOY...







Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
R
Such an amazing part dear

Full of teasing

M loving it so much
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kalyani,
This was a lively and fun filled part...Loved reading all the teasing around..

Good job... 👏


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