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Posted: 11 years ago
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Strings of Autumn


(#3.1)


In the wee hours, a caravan snails across the sands till the sun shines through and lights up its path. In it men, both young and old walk towards home, in happy thoughts oblivious to the impending doom. Some dream of love, some dream of riches, some of glory, some hide lies while others weave simple little dreams of everyday togetherness.


But he has plans. And in that deceptive quiet of dawn, he plays a song; a song that sears her soul, rips her heart, clips her wings and leaves her to die, all alone. Except, death, her unlikely friend continues its game of hide and seek, "I'll take away everything you hold dear, will you survive?" He asks as he flies away.


Paro stands in muted horror as the bloodshed ensues. Why couldn't his name been an alias of yours?' she had asked only a day ago. Even as she stands face to face, the fierce one, Rudra, she is completely unaware. Is he the one, just like she is for him?


But at what price?


They stand at opposites separated by an ocean of loss - of lives, of dreams and of promises that will forever remain incomplete, and a rain of bullets that's knocked out tomorrow before it was even born.


And yet incredibly, in a moment of truth before prejudice takes over, You can't possibly shoot me?' Her eyes ask of him; he stands stunned and watches her fall.


In a matter of minutes, everything's changed, from a subtle and serene to the utterly harsh. From a rich green to a fleeting bright flame thats died too soon. Short lived summer thats given away to a never ending dull, an ache thats bound to spread.


Why is happiness her enemy and death her friend? It eludes her when she desperately wants it to embrace her instead.


If only yesterday had been longer and tomorrow had never come.


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Aruni. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice!! 👏 Plz write daily instead of weekly...
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Oh !! you have written a poem in prose !! simply spellbound. I loved the episode more now after reading ur lines. please write more.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aruni50218

Nice!! 👏 Plz write daily instead of weekly...


Thank you :)

Not sure I can manage a daily take but curious about this week and how things pan out. So you never know ;) 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah we got a daily post 😊Maybe this week deserves it ...
You write beautifully , do you write Fan Fictions as well ...I would love to read them.
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What beautiful prose, a pleasure to read. The episode even more enjoyable now.
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@Aria-I'm sure you know how well you write & if you don't, let me tell you, you write wonderfully!
What is bound to happen between Paro & Rudra will happen-they were destined to meet each other, find each other & perhaps, they are damaged souls, who would only fit each other, filling those spaces, but I still have to ask, like you have, too-at what cost! She has lost so much! Most of it happened on her wedding day doesn't help, either-its horrifying on any day, but how could she have expected that a day that she had believed would be the beginning of her happiness would turn into a nightmare! She has lost & grieved, now, she has lost some more, but is Rudra, finally an end to her misery-I hope he is, but the path doesn't look easy either
You have captured the essence of Paro, Rudra & what stands between them & hoe insurmountable their obstacles look at this point, it has been a lifetime of grief for her & he has made suffering as intrinsic a part of his life as breathing-hopefully, they will heal each other, even though it looks like a relationship that can implode, at this point!
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Originally posted by: Guinea

Ah we got a daily post 😊Maybe this week deserves it ...

You write beautifully , do you write Fan Fictions as well ...I would love to read them.


Thank you Guinea :) Just this week as the real drama unfolds, will crawl back to my rabbit hole then ;)

Yep, FFs! Just one though and its on hold😆


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you write so beautifully. Hope to read more from you :)
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Beautifully post , ur a talented writer

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