Strings of Autumn - Page 2

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Oh !! you have written a poem in prose !! simply spellbound. I loved the episode more now after reading ur lines. please write more.👍🏼

Originally posted by: archana.mh17

@Aria-I'm sure you know how well you write & if you don't, let me tell you, you write wonderfully!

What is bound to happen between Paro & Rudra will happen-they were destined to meet each other, find each other & perhaps, they are damaged souls, who would only fit each other, filling those spaces, but I still have to ask, like you have, too-at what cost! She has lost so much! Most of it happened on her wedding day doesn't help, either-its horrifying on any day, but how could she have expected that a day that she had believed would be the beginning of her happiness would turn into a nightmare! She has lost & grieved, now, she has lost some more, but is Rudra, finally an end to her misery-I hope he is, but the path doesn't look easy either

You have captured the essence of Paro, Rudra & what stands between them & hoe insurmountable their obstacles look at this point, it has been a lifetime of grief for her & he has made suffering as intrinsic a part of his life as breathing-hopefully, they will heal each other, even though it looks like a relationship that can implode, at this point!

Originally posted by: golpokobita

Wonderfully written.. loved each and every line of this magical poetry!

With your words Paro's pains become even more unbearable, her loss irreparable! But as you said, he has plans.. I hope God has really stored happiness for her.. And since she is very dear to God, he must have have planned that her happiness would lie in his name 'Rudra'.

Paro's happiness with Rudra means two things - Rudra's salvation and Paro's severance from the deadly nightmares..

Originally posted by: win7

Wow. You write beautifully!

Originally posted by: munni1

Beautiful post.
If i'm not mistaken, you're the author of Liquorice burning, right. I'm a silent reader mostly in IPK forum. That was one well written arhi FF i was following religiously, but that has been on hold for some time now.
Keep writing, you're very talented.
Malini