A Silent Beginning (OS)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys m new to this forum and this is my very first OS. Please do comment and give your feedbackJ. I'm writing after Ragna left to Mumbai. There are no romantic scenes in it but I hope you guys would still like it. It might be little lengthy but please bear with me and forgive my mistakes. All characters are from the show only & I don't own any character. So here we goJ

A Silent Beginning

Due to heavy traffic Ragna took the different route to Mumbai and both have hardly spoken to each other since then. "Don't worry hum pahunch jayenge & everything will be fine", said Raghav just to break the silence and bring Kalpi back from her lost state of mind. Kalpi looked at him while he drives faster than before. This was the first time when Raghav has spoken to her softly, and she don't know why believed every word he had said. Even Raghav could see her lil relaxed now.

"You should eat something", Raghav said sternly adding that I don't want any trouble of taking u to hospital before we reach the chawl... so eat (in commanding tone). Kalpi with confused looks on her face thought what is this man hamesha apni hi chalata rehta hai.. "Koi jabbardasti hai kya I told you I am not hungry", replied Kalpi in the same tone "aap bs please mujhe jaldi se ghar pahuncha dijiye". Raghav could see the pain in her eyes which somehow was making him uncomfortable.

"Are you a super girl", Kalpi was taken aback by Raghav's this statement. "Sorry??", she said after recovering from the his untimely statement. "I mean either you have to be a super girl or have some secret that u don't feel hungry even after not eating anything for two days", said Raghav with a smirk on his face. "No I had breakfast yesterday", said Kalpi only to realise that wt she had said without thinking. I mean i don't feel like eating anything right now she supported her statement but could see a lil smirk on his face. Oh gossh how can this man smile in a situation like this she murmured.

They have now entered Mumbai. Aai kahan hai tu, phone kyun ni lg raha, sb theek to hoga na wahan pe, she was getting restless about thinking of all this. "Do you have some proof to prove the Kapoor's wrong", asked Kalpi. Raghav gave her a tough look and she kept quite but repeated the question the very next moment. Raghav didn't say anything so she decided to ask yet again but this time lil apologetically, " I'm sorry if I'm annoying you but we do need to have some documents to prove that Kapoor's has forged your dad's signature". Raghav was still quite and focussing on the road. (Whyyy this man has to be so difficult she felt a lil short from cursing the arrogant man sitting beside her.)

They were about 30 min away from the chawl when he said, "we have to go to office." Sseeing a questioning look on Kalpi's face he completed his sentence, "to get some documents". He stopped his car in front of his office. Kalpi saw a man, the same man (Sammy) who told her to go to Pune to meet Raghav, carrying something in his hands, approached the car. As soon as Raghav opened the window, the man gave him the parcel and said, "this is everything u have asked for or u may require." "Okay", was the only word Raghav said. The man gave quite a stare to Kalpi and spoke slowly only to be heard by Raghav, "amazing isn't it, she did find you". Sammy looked at him curiously. "What????, said Raghav. "You let her sit in the front seat of your car", chuckled Sammy. The statement was more or less of a question. "Kyun tumhe baithna tha kya", replied Raghav in tough tone "will catch u ltr" with these words they drove off. Sammy was still standing their shaking his head, Jawab to tujhe dena hi padega.

Klapi asked Raghav, "who is he?" To this he questioned her back, "Why are you so interested in him (grinned)?" He could see her expressions changing from soft to anger but he liked irking her.

It was almost 7 pm when they finally reached the chawl. Some people were throwing their stuff out of the houses; Kapoor trio (Sahil, Neetu & Prem) was also standing there. Raghav and Kalpi was walking towards them when Pakhi noticed him. "Sir!! ye Kalpi ke sath kya kr rahe hain", she said to herself.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyy harshna u done a terrific job that too in a first attempt👏
Woww dear jus an amazing 👏👏
I second u 👏
I loved each & every bit of this OS 😳
Keep it up...& give us ur more writings 😳
Truely would love to read...!!!
Thanxxx a ton dear 🤗
Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it,..😳.Well done👏.Eventhough there is no romance phir bhi it had something special,i enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nebu

I loved it,..😳.Well done👏.Eventhough there is no romance phir bhi it had something special,i enjoyed it...😊



thanl you so much yr :-) For the first time i tried my hands on writting a soft piece n m glad u liked it :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry yaar bt m literally clueless what 'res' means 😕 mujhe sahi me koi idea nahin hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really an awesome OS👏Do write more on RagNa 👍🏼 I wish it happens in Monday episode RagNa scenes in the car were beautiful ^_^ ^_^ and Sammy teasing Raghav about Kalpi was too good :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdollphin


Sorry yaar bt m literally clueless what 'res' means 😕 mujhe sahi me koi idea nahin hai

res mean reserved the person who writes res mean he will coment latter or fill the place latter as saw from other forums
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome yaar loved reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancyshroff

res mean reserved the person who writes res mean he will coment latter or fill the place latter as saw from other forums



Hahaha thnks swthrt for solving my prblm :) u know wt u saved me from going through horrible vocabulary lessons all over again 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice os ...
Continue soon 😊 😊 😊

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