ARAKSHI: KUCH UN KAHA COMPLETED

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LOVELY READER THIS IS MY FIRST STORY
I MADE MISTAKE TO MAINTAINING THEM IN ONE THREAD
SO MOSTLY READER DON'T READ IN FULL
SO MANY REQUEST ME TO SEND THE LINK
SO I DECIDE TO SHARE THIS WITH YOU
MY FIRST THOUGHT
PLEASE DO COMMENTS,
THANKS

PART 1

Its a beautiful morning, sakshi just wake up, she feel her self very fresh and energetic. today is going to be very busy. she is thinking lying on her bed. so, where we have to start?
SUDDENLY PHONE RINGS AND DISTURB HER THOUGHT she pickup the phone and smile cheekily, Hello specky, how are you ? other side shree hear specky and angry sakshi ki bacchi tu bhi liza kay saath rah kar uss jesse ho gayi hai jao main tum say baath nahi karta and disconnect the phone.
SAKSHI feel sorry she quickly sit and dial shree promptly. After some bells shree take a call ,
Sakshi said: hello and than sorry hay shree dekho main kaan pakar kay maafi maang rahi hoon other side shree imagine her hold her ears and laugh hearing his laughing she feel relax , ok kiya baat hay shree itni subha subha kuyn phone kiya thaa kal to sara programme set ho gaya tha phir ab kiya hua?
shree haan main nay sirf yeh kehnay key liyay phone kiya tha kay main pehlay doctor ko dekhaon ga phir hum exhibition per chaleen gay
sakshi said: , theek hay jab doctor ko check up karwa lo tu call me
ok bye.
shree hang up. Sakshi start thinking again
first go exhibition after that we go to ETF office yesterday he already tell Arjun that both of them come a bit late
Come on sakshi you have to got up and make ready your self thinking this she leave her bed and way to bathroom
while she having her breakfast shree call her
haan kiya hua? sakshi ask
yaar doctor sahib aaj abhi tak hospital nahi aayay main un kay ghar ja raha hon tum aaisa karo kay waheen aajao un ka ghar tumharay ghar say kareeb hay time safe ho gayay ga Shree explain sakshi and sakshi agreed
she finish her breakfast, check her things and finally check her self in mirror, lock her house and leave
while she saw the address she know oh yeh ye tu dr bhardauj ka ghar hay oh kaafi din ho gayay hain meri bhi aunty aur un say mulaqat nahi hui chalo main bhi un say mil lo gi
Thinking this sakshi got auto and after five minute she'll standing in front of doctor house
She saw shree bike also there
she feel relax and thought Thank god shree also comes so he finish his checkup on time and we leave on time
thinking this she approach on front door and ring the door bell
amazing no one comes
she try again and again but in vein
she try to call shree but his phone is out of range
strange what happen? where are all the people gne?
she go and check other side and found the back door was open
she go inside and saw the blood drops on the floor
now its getting scared her, first thought comes go back and runaway, but thinking of shree she try to brave and go inside, in confusion she bump with small table and fall down so many things this make a very big noise and scared her as well, She compose her and continue make her walk
suddenly she hear some one running outside and also after that hear car start
before she approach out side she saw in sitting room floor
scream comes in her mouth and she quickly reach to shree
shree shree kiya hua ? kasay hua ? kuan tha ?
but shree not in position to give her answer
is he died? thinking this sakshi shocked for a moment but quickly check his pulses which she can't find she start crying no shree, no no no it can't be happen
than she remember her first aid training
and she start giving him breath and push his chest as well
after some time she feel shree start breathing but heavily
she immediately call ambulance and than call arjun
Arjun is in office and discuss this door bell killer case with chotu, ayesha and liza
He really need shree on his side but he try hard but can't reach him
suddenly his phone ring he saw number and pick up the phone angrily and said
Hello, sakshi tum aur shree kahan ho koi zimaedaari ka ahsaas hay ya nahi kab say shree ko aur tum ko try kar raha hoon kahan ho tum? he just blast on sakshi
but after hearing what sakshi said he stand up quickly and said: we are on our way

saying this he quickly start moving and tell the team that someone attack on shree
when they arrived there ambulance already take shree and sakshi
team check the scene and realizse that this is also door bell killer work because door bell missing
check the rooms they found family with their daughter killed very brutily
they start collecting evidence
liza and her forensic team busying Arjun walk here and there than he feel something comes in his feet its a gold bracelet he saw in detail that bracelet and found a sakshi name on it.
AS he see sakshi name he remember how much she crying while she call him and tell about shree he feel something pricking corner of his heart, he feel his heart quite heavy hearing her crying
He quickly call her and ask her about shree condition but she still crying and not in position to tell any thing to him he decided to go and check her and shree it self.

so how you like it
my very first try
i am waiting for your comments
thanks
rehana25



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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

I read ths b4 its amazing



yes you are right actually
some people PM me to ask this story others part
so I submit again
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HERE IS OTHER PART
PLEASE READ AND DO COMMENTS
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PART 2
Arjun call ayesha give her instruction and hurridely leave the scene. Now he start worried about shree, soon he arrive hospital and quickly go to see sakshi and suddenly his feet like glued.He saw and not believing on his eyes is it really sakshi he thought he always see her with beautiful smile, making fun, cracking jokes but this way he never think that might be some day he see her crying like this. she is standing near the room door and crying

She is wearing beautiful off white colour choori daar pajama with frock which has so many kaliyan and panel and maroon, bottle green and off white border work. she drape her duppatta around her both her palms join and she saw sometime inside and other time up on the ceiling( off course try to call her bhaagwan)

Sakshi very scared because she know shree injured very bad and may be some of his bones also broken specially his back bone
suddenly she feel someone gazing her and tapish of his gaze she saw that way and see Arjun standing there like statue
she see in his eyes and their eyes lock for some moment , she just break the eye lock and start walking toward him no , not walking she run toward him and hug him with brust of crying and try to buried her face in his chest.
This action, back him to in his sense , he shocked when sakshi hold him tight and start crying with bureid her face in his chest, he feel her body shivering , he feel her heart catching fragrance
he feel her soft chest and warm body and automaticly his hands comes up and hold her around her waist with little squeeze her , like assure her he is there for her.
After some time they aparted, he patted her shoulder to console her, then he see doctors coming,
he tell sakshi and both walk quickly towards doctor

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Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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PART 3

Doctor come to near them and tell the situation of shree which is critical but not dangerous, hearing this sakshi feel a bit relax and give thanks her bhagwaan promptly, arjun see her with impossible glare and ask doctor to meet shree, after get permission they both enter in the room .

shree got cover his self for bundle of bandages, but his eyes smiles when he saw both of them coming inside. sakshi held his hand and patted with her crying face,
shree said,"hey sakshi, tum roo rahi ho bikul churail laag rahi ho, tumhara sara kajal beh gaya hay jo tumhay aur bhootney ka look day raha hay.

sakshi hearing this and smile, seen her smile arjun feel that after rain sun comes, and rainbow comes he is thinking and shree tell her,"wow ,it's look sun comes out after heavy rain. sakshi only smile suits u if u ever again cry i might got heart attack comes to see your bhoot jessa face.

Now arjun interfere he saw sakshi start blast on shree but his interfering stop her and shree give answer to arjun question
i am sorry sir , i can't catch him.
shree feel shame his self...no, you not be sorry your self shree, its not your fault, but i assured you that i am not let him to say sorry as well." saying Arjun in angry mood
After sometime he was about ready to go because he have to solve the case, he call the artist to make a sketch of that killer, than ayesha, chotu and liza entered
They all are happy to see shree and shree also feel happy to see them
they all are sitting and talking and arjun stop for a while and asking any improvement in case
While ayesha notice sakshi dressing and some stain on her clothes
wow," sakshi, you look awesome in this dress but what about this stains?
Than chotu asked,"hey sakshi , kiya tum roo rahi thi ?

Arjun hear these comments and saw sakshi, her beautiful and broad eyes look pinkish and bit swollen, her nose tip and cheek are also look pink ,its clearly visible that she were crying a lot.

Sakshi feel embarace in front of all before she clear her self, doctor comes inside check shree and patted his soulder and say you must have to say thanks this young lady who give you breath( as a first aid ) you are very badly saffocated and if she did not do this you are in grieve danger,
they all shocked to hear this and seeing sakshi with great love, respect and proud.
when doctor left they all discussed, now they knew why sakshi dress have stain?

she just straighten her dress when her eyes wide open and she almost scream , oh no, my bracelet, she start searching here and there.
All of them asking the detail of bracelet and searching with her, even go out and check where the possible area but could not find, she feel shame her self why are you so much worried? is it more expensive? ask liza
I am not worried about its cost, sakshi said". its important because my mum give me that was a last gift of her."

everyone very upset listen this, shree said, "it's all my fault, na main tum ko wahan bolata aur na tum itna important bracelet gum karti"

But we check crime scene verykeenly we haven't found anything like this there. "said ayesha and liza also nodded

Arjun stand angerly and said, "she is a habbit to make a trouble her self, ayesha and liza you stay here artist just come any minute, make sketch and spread every where, call every chewck point to check throughly, any information comes ring me.

Ayesha nodded, in the mean time artist comes in and arjun and chotu go out but before leaving arjun give sakshi a hard look, she is confuse by his suddenly change behaveiour and looking him for disbelief what he said.

Artist start his work, Ayesha and liza console her and wishes her that she find her bracelet soon
Ayesha , liza and sakshi spread the sketch as quickly as possible

sometime pass, they drop liza at office and ayesha and sakshi together, than they recived call from chotu that Arjun behind killer who in one of that bus who's go out from the city.

Hearing this ayesha race the SUV and they catch that place quickly where killer hit Arjun.

Seeing Arjun hit by the killer sakshi come out quickly and scream,"ARJUN"

killer stop hearing scream and look her, ayesha also comes and standing near her.

killer start laughung telling that little girl ( he catch her for his saftey ) oh oh, he is Arjun, ha ha ha.

With this he start hit again but this time Arjun hold his hand with one of his hand he tried but he can't release his hand, seeing this sakshi and ayesha come forward and pull that little girl for his hold, Arjun start hitting him hardly and finally shoot him.

Police comes in the guidance of chotu, they take action and clear the scene, check the bus, sakshi took that little girl to her parents.

Thank god this case finish, sakshi think.

Ayesha busy with chotu and police, Arjun get his SUV and stop near sakshi and look her hard glare she try to ignore him but ayesha tell sakshi to go with arjun sir we might be late, do and die position she has no choice to go with him.

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PART4

He drive very rash, Sakshi don't know why he is angry on her? She try to call her memory and try hard to remember anything, but its vein, she can't remember anything, she just start praying in heart.

I want to go to hospital, she said to him he said nothing even not nodding
she a bit confuse is he take her their or not.
He take her to her house when he stopped, she seeing his with enquiringly eyes, he ignore her glare, close the engine, come out and reach her side, open her door and allow her to come out.

She get no choice take a deep breath, she come out the vehicle but surprise to see that he also follow her, NOw she start more confuse but continue walking towards her house while she open the door they both enter inside and after lock the door he turn to her side with his same angry look.

Now, she fade up for his angry look, she look him return and gather her courage and said
"Meri samajh main nahi aa raha kay main nay kiya kiya hay jo tum itna gussa ker rahay ho"

Arjun said, " tum aapnay aap ko kiya samjhte ho, koi tarzan ho ya hercules, ek chipkali say to tumhari jaan nikal jaati hay, how dare you enter that house? auto wale say bachnay kay liyay tum sindoor and mungle sutter ka sahara layti ho, magar tum ko zara bhi andaza hay kay tum nay uss ghar main dakhil ho kar kitni bari bewaqoffi ka saboot diya hay, tum ko kuch bhi nahi nahi pata, bus ghuss gai under wo to sukker karo kay tum boli kuch nahi aur wo jo kuch table dhaka lagnay say gira uss ki wajah say wo bhaag gaya, uss nay socha kay sayed koi aur aaya hay jessay shree aachanak pohach gaya tha iss liyay uss nay bhagnay main hi aapni baqa samjhi
Arjun just blast on her with anger and every word he say she feel goose bump

He is absolutely right she never think about it she just go inside because she worried about shree, she try to tell this but he continue

"Do you know in that house he killed husband and wife and their teenage daughter," and daughter not only killed but before killing her, he raped her, two three times, the death timing of her parents and her difference is 10 hours, so 10 hours he torture her and raped her we find that innocent girl dead body tied up with ropes on her bed in very bad condition. do you know?

Saying this Arjun saw in her eyes, which is wide open for this sudden information, she just start stepping back in shock, What she hear she have no idea what happen there, she think nothing just make her self fool and go inside. Arjun is right if she speak or if she just try to call shree and killer hear her voice and catch her sooo

she just hit her back for wall and stand still, Arjun keep looking her shock position, this is very important for her to realize what a big mistake she already done? He knew that time she just think about shree but in future she has to be careful, she is beautiful, gorgeous and innocent, He can't take risk anything happen with her, why, he don't know? HE feel his heart is heavy while seen her crying badly and when she came to him and hug in hospital, he assure her but after a while ayesha and liza comes and give him complete report than he feel cold run goes in spine and that's time he think if killer saw sakshi there and catch her as well what happen next ?
This question mad him, and when killer attack him and she scream his name and the way killer look her, that look make him angry and with anger he didn't allow that killer to survive hew just shoot him straight.

But now, HE seen her shock and thought he need to be relax her otherwise she living life under a fear may be for sometime but because of that fear she lost her magnetic smile who give him energy yes he admit this in heart that her smile give him power.

Arjun comes toward to her put his hand on her shoulder, she feel his hand and her eyes start filling with water its look beautiful her big eyes soon fill and start pouring on her cheek, he wipe her tears, under his touch she just burst her crying and telling him
You are right Arjun i am such a fool; before she say more he pull her and hug her tight,she need this, she just buried her face in his chest, he don't want to stop crying her, just stand still and waited to calm her down.

After sometime she quite and understand that she is in his arms, he held her very gently like she is very precious thing for him, she feel shy and her face become pink, she try to apart for him.

HE also feel her silence so he loose his hold and bent himself to look her face which is become pink for their close intimacy, he like her this way of shyness, looking her in this condition, his heart want to do some more, all his desire come in front of his and appeal do something.

Her body start trembling under his graze, she also like stand in this way her heart beat in different way and soon it increased, she feel melt down her self than suddenly she feel his breath on her cheeks she bent her face more but he chin up and see straight in her eyes and whispered
"i can't bare if something happen to you? sakshi i don't know why but its true i can't see you crying
so, promise me that you take care of your self and always take care of your beautiful eyes as well"
Saying this he kissed her eyes softly and make her shy and she hid her face in her palms. He smile on her gesture.
HE release her and said, "sakshi go and change than we go to see shree"
She about to go than he again pull her she is not ready so result fell on his arm.

She looked at him like ask him why he do this?
he smile and open his hand in front of her she surprises to see her bracelet place on his palm
He hold her hand and make to wear that in her hand very lovely way
she seen him like fall in love with him, she give him smile and said THANKS ARJUN I AM VERY HAPPY THIS IS MY MUM LAST GIFT

She go inside to make her self ready and arjun sitting out side thinking, she is gorgeous and innocent and her smile also energetic, she had a soft heart as well. he want to become her friend .
Faith smile on his thinking because they don't know friendship is the first step of love and after friendship love comes

WE KNOW AND BELIEF THAT

PYAR KIYA NAHI JAATA HO JAATA HAY
DIL DIYA NAHI JAATA HO JAATA HAY


THE END


Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Lovely
Please keep writing stories like these

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