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Mathi

@mathimathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Catching up the last 2 chapters Ramya..Jaya's leaving was emotional and you hav picked such an apt song for the situation and her dialogues ..so touchy.. loved them.

'nammaloda oru porul.. nammala vida innoruthanga kitta bathramaa irukkunu therinjaa.. adhu avangale paathukidattum nu vittidalaam' ..

'Raji uruvathila.. un koodave dhaan iruppen'..

IF frnds in neyar viruppam song...semma..

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Nice update ramya...👏

ethnic day song sequence is nice..👏

Something fishy...karthik's mom enna sonnaanga...

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Devi

@Devino

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Ramya first you deserve for this 🤗

Chance illa pa. superb... ⭐️

Karthika ninaicha 😭 varudhu, romba paavam pa...

Waiting for the next update ...

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: anithu
Thanks for the quick part ramya...😛

I liked onething in this ff..

Even though karthik was in love with angel...and he finally realized angel is his past..Now he is slowly moving and not started romancing or showing deep love something like that..This would definetly look artifical after showing some lovely dialogues of how karthik love angel..I love this...sequence..

Waiting for next..

@ Ani... I'm happy that what I wanted to tell is conveyed to the readers... Thats the reason why I did'nt show KR more closer... bcoz drastic change will not look good ..

And also thank everyone who keep me motivating me with ur comments.. As said.. I'm trying my best...

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HemaG

@HemaG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

ramya akka,...super...

karthi...🤔

paavam...

seekaram update pannunga...

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Superb Ramya.. Karthik paavam he hasnt got close with Raji but adhukula marriage topic vera varudhu.. Eppadi samaalipano therila... Ramya suspense vachi engala verupethradhula ungaluku apdi enna sandhosham???

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ababab

@ababab

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#297

ramya good update.. last 2 chap...
but.. it seems.. raji is not thinking about angel.. but rather using the opportunity..here jaya's character is more sympathised than raji's suicide..
u could have shown raji's character little bit matured and make karthik realise her love..
U have portrayed karthik's confusion well between jaya and raji..but this is same as serial.. karthik accepting susan when raji had problem, rather than waiting for raji.. and jaya part is very good.. but u could have waited to unite karthi-raji a little bit..but not making karthi-raji too close.. is really good..
Ramya the feedback is just the impact of yr FF.. so pl take it as constructive suggestion..

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

@ ababab... thanks pa... I'm taking each and every feedback as a positive one..

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

CHAPTER FORTY

Karthik and Vishnu @ coffee shop :

Vish : sollu machi.. enna problem ? ammaa enna sonnaanga ?

Karthi : solren daa..

Phone conversation between Karthik and his Mom :

K Mom : dei.. Jo vandhirukkaa Bombay la irundhu..

Karthi : vaalu.. ippo dhaan time kedachadhaa.. Jothika madam ku..

K Mom : neenga inga vandhu evlo naal aachu ? modhalla namma side la eppadi irukkom nu paathuttu pesanum..

Karthi : sari sari.. avakitta phone kudunga..

K Mom : ava thoongittu irukkaa..

Karthi : pagal nerathula enna thookkam.. ? yerkanave.. bublymass dhaan.. thoonguradhukku dhaan anga vandhaalaa ?

K Mom : illa daa.. nethu evening shopping poiyirundhom.. adhaan tired ah irukkaa..

Karthi : oh.. sari apparam ?

K Mom : adha pathi dhaan pesanum nu nenachen.. shopping pona edathula oruthara paathom.. guess pannu paappom..

Karthi : velai irukku maa.. neengale sollunga..

K Mom : un kooda college la padicha Jaya va paathom..

Karthi : oh.. appadiyaa..

K Mom : unga office la dhaan work panren nu sonnaa..

Karthi : hmmm.. aamaam..

K Mom : enna..? silent aagitta..? enakku ellaam theriyum..

Karthi : enna solreenga.. ?

K Mom : Jo enkitta ellaam sollittaa daa.. un love, apparam pirinjadhu.. Jaya thirumbi unna thedi un office ke vandhadhu.. ellaam..

enga kitta sollirukkalaam la..

Karthi : adhu vandhu maa..

K Mom : nee onnum solla vendaam.. ellaam naan pesi mudikkuren.. unnoda sandhosham dhaan enakku mukkiyam..

Karthi : konjam naan solradha kelunga..

K Mom : first naan solradha nee kelu.. haan.. main ah solla vandhadha marandhutten..

unakku indha varushame kalyaanatha mudikkanum nu josiyar sollirukkaar..

seekkiram ponnu paakkanum nu nenachitte irundhen.. kadavule correct ah en marumagal ah kaattittaar..

Back to present :

Vish : enna daa nadakkudhu inga ?

Karthi : enakkum adhaan daa theriyala.. yerkanave sonnene.. en life la ellaame.. wrong time la dhaan nadakkudhu..

Vish : sari daa.. nee enna panna pora ?

Karthi : enna panna poren naa ?

Vish : adhaan daa.. enna mudivu panna poren nu ketten..

Karthi : ethane dhadava daa mudiva maathikkiradhu.. ? avangalukkaaga.. ivangalukkaaga nu..

Raji kooda naan life lead panna num naa.. idhellaam face panni dhaan aaganum..

adhuvum illaama.. Jaya vum adha dhaan virumburaa..

Jaya enakku verum friend mattum dhaan nu naane enakku sollittu irukken..

Vish : appo.. eppadi unga ammaa va samaalikka pora ?

Karthi : adhaan naanum yosichittu irukken.. yerkanave avangalukku Raji ya pidikkala.. age difference irukkuradhum theriyum..

Vish : year end vandhaachu.. innum oru vaarathula.. pudhu varusham vandhudum.. 2014 aavadhu unakku nallaa irukkum..

Karthi : ennadaa josiyam ah ?

Vish : illadaa.. nambikkai..

Friday @ office :

Raji : appaakitta pesinen Karthik.. avaru naalaikku inga vandhu unnoda appaa ammaa kitta pesa ready ya irukkaaru..

Karthi : hmmm.. sari..

Raji : enna Karthi ? kavalai yaa irukka maadhiri theriyudhu.. ellaathayum pottu kozhappikkaadha.. ellaam nallabadiyaa nadakkum..

Karthi : hmmm.. naanum adhaan vendikkiduren..

Raji : aanaa.. adhukku munnaadi enga appaa un parents kitta phone la pesanum nu solraaru ..

Karthi : yen ?

Raji : adhu vandhu.. chummaa.. arimuga paduthikkidalaam nu dhaan.. avanga number thariiyaa ?

Karthik gives his Mom's number.

Raji's father calls Karthik's mother :

R Dad : vanakkam.. naan yaaru nu modhalla solliduren..

en ponnu unga payyan Karthik oda office la dhaan velai paakkuraa.. ungallukku indha vishayam theriyumaa nu enakku theriyala.. avanga vaazhkai pathi konjam pesanum ungaloda..

K Mom : oh aamaam.. enakkum ippo dhaan theriyum.. dhaaraalamaa pesalaam.. naanga unga edathukku varattumaa ?

R Dad : Karthik thambi neenga Madras ku vareenga nu sonnaaraam.. naanum anga varren.. anga sandhikkalaangalaa ?

K Mom : nalladhu.. paakkalaam..

R Dad : saringa maa.. mathadha nerla pesalaam..

At Karthi - Lakshmi home :

Lakshmi has gone to see her mother that weekend.

Karthik is waiting along with his parents.

Meesai calls Karthik and says he is on the way and that caught up in traffic..

Karthi : ammaa.. innum konja nerathula Raji appaa vandhiruvaaru.

K Mom : ennadhu.. Raji appaavaa ?

Karthi : aamaa. ungakitta phone la pesunaaraame..

K Mom : ponnu kalyaanatha pathi pesanum nu sonnaaru.. naan Jaya voda appaa nu la nenachen..

Karthi : enna maa.. ippadi kozhappureenga..

K Mom : naandhaan yerkanave Raji unakku set aaga maattaa nu sonnen la.. vayasu vera adhigam..

annaikku Jaya va paathadha sonnen ne.. adhaan avanga appa pesaraaru nu nenachen..

nee dhaan confuse panra..

Raji's father enters their house.

Karthi : ammaa.. thayavu senju avarkitta prechana pannaadha.. medhuvaa pesunga..

K Mom : eppadi pesanum nu enakku theriyum..

Raji's father greets them. Karthik gives introduction.

K Mom : oru nimisham.. Karthik.. ippo dhaan nyabagam vandhadhu.. Jothika ava friend oorkku poittu ippa vandhittu iruppaa.. nee station ku poi avala pick up pannittu vandhiru..

Karthi : ammaa..

K Mom : po paa.. naanga pesikkurom..

R Dad : aamaa thambi.. neenga velai ya paarunga.. periyavanga naanga pesikkurom..

Karthik is much worried as what would they speak and what's going to happen..

Karthi : (mind voice) ammaa.. purposeful ah dhaan enna velila anuppuraangalo ?

--- to be continued -

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ HAPPY NEW YEAR ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago