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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER FORTY ONE


Karthi goes and picks Jo and returns home. Meesai was about to leave waiting for him.

R Dad : vandhuteengala thambi.. ungalukkaaga dhaan kaathittu irundhen.. sollittu polaam nu

Karthi : oh.. romba neram wait panreengalaa ? vazhiyila traffic la maattikkitten.. adhaan..

R Dad : adhellaam onnum illa. paravaa illa..

K Mom : iva dhaan en ponnu.. enga annan veetla dhaan valarndhaa.. Bombay la irukkaanga. leave ku inga vandhirukkaa..

Jo : vanakkam Uncle..

R Dad : vanakkam maa.. sari.. apparam naan kelamburenga.. (he leaves)

Jo : travel pannadhula romba tired ah irukku maa.. konja neram rest edukkuren..

K Mom : iva oruthi eppa paathaalum thoongittu.. enga kooda time spend pannalaam la..? annan romba chellam kuduthu somberi aagitta..

Jo : adhaan innum 4 days irukka poren la.. fresh up aagittu 1 hour la varren..

K Mom : ennavo pannu..

Jo goes inside.

Karthi : sollunga maa.. enna aachu ?

K Mom : enna aaganum ?

Karthi : Raji appaakitta enna pesuneenga nu sollunga..

K Mom : enna pesunom nu theriyanumaa ? illa.. enna mudivu pannom nu sollanumaa ?

Karthi : sari.. first.. enna mudivu panneenga nu sollunga..

K Mom : un kalyaanatha confirm pannittom.. sandhosham dhaane ?

Karthi : ennaala namba mudiyala. eppadi ?

K Mom : engalukku OK.. ippa vera edhuvum kekkaadha.. 4 naal kazhichu.. office ku ponaa unakke ellaam therinjidum..

Karthi : 4 days ku apparamaa ?

K Mom : aamaa.. Monday, Tuesday rendu naal leave podu.. New Year ku leave dhaane ? budhan kizhamai night dhaan kelamburom.. indha varusham New Year ah Jo voda um unkoodavum serndhu dhaan start panrom..

Karthi : adhu OK.. but munnaadiye sollirukkalaam la ?

K Mom : yen.. ennaachu ?

Karthi : illa.. leave ah konjam munnaadiye plan panniruppen..

K Mom : naangalum edhuvum plan pannala. Jo vandhadhum.. dhideernu dhaan plan pannom..

Karthi : sari OK..



Jothika comes to living room to after sometime and sees Karthi sitting alone and in deep thoughts..

Jo : enna daa ? dull adikkura.. appave kekkanum nu nenachen.. pick up panna vandhappa irundhe ippadi dhaan irukka.. Josh eh illaama..

Karthi : adhellaam onnum illa..



Jo : chummaa vidaadha. rendu perum onnaa pirandhavanga. nee eppavaadhu romba down ah irundhaa.. ennaala adha feel panna mudiyum..

Karthi : enna cinema la varra maadhiri kadhai vidura.

Jo : unmai dhaan daa. TWINS ku ippadi sila samayam feelings irukkum.unakku appadi thonnadhe illayaa ? sollu daa..

Their mother comes there.

K Mom : enna idhu.. ? mariyaadhai illaama..vaadaa podaa nu sollittu.. ANNAN nu koopidu..

Jo : no chance.. enna vida 2 nimisham dhaane munnaadi pirandhaan.. idhu onnum pudhusu illaye.. china vayasula irundhe ippadi dhaane kooppiduren.. ippa enna dhideernu ?

K Mom : yaenna.. unakku ANNI vandhadhukku apparam ippadilaam kooppida koodadhu.. adhaan ippave pazhagikko nu solren..

Jo : enna ? eppo ? eppadi ? yaaru ?

K Mom : kelviyaa adukkikittu irukka.. ? periya manushi iva.. ellaathayum sollanumaa ? innum 1-2 months la avanukku marriage.. ellaam avanukku pudicha ponnu dhaan..

Jo : Super.. Congrats Karthik.. aanaa adhukku yen ivan ippadi sogamaa irukkaan ?

K Mom : adha naan pesikkuren.. nee po.. edho friend oda velila poganum sonne la?

Jo : sari sari.. I'm happy from my brother.. as long as his wish is fulfilled..

Bye daa.. sorry . Bye ANNAA..



K Mom : sollu paa.. yen ippadi surathe illaama irukka..?

Karthi : onnum illa maa..

K Mom : naanga enna pesanum nu unakkum theriyanum.. adhaane ?

Karthi : adhilla.. yen ivlo seekkiramaa ? rendu maasathula nu sonneenga ?

K Mom : adhaan sonnen la.. un jaadhagathula appadi nu..

Karthik is still not convinced. His Dad comes and joins them..

K Mom : paarunga.. ivan namba maatturaan.. neengale sollunga.. (she leaves from there)

K Dad : yes my son. un ammaa pathi theriyum la ? un mela avalukku avlo affection.. first ennamo.. age difference laam paathu Raji veettukku vandhappa sariyaa nadandhukkalai

But ippa avanga appaa vandhu pesunadhum..othukkittaa.. infact ellaarukkum thirupthi dhaan..

worry pannikkaadha.. cool..



Monday morning :

Karthik gets ready.

K Mom : naandhaan sonnen la.. leave podu nu..

Karthi : maa.naan poittu.. inform pannittu vandhiduren.. naan complete panna vendiya task onnu irukku.. seekkiram mudichittu, naalaikku leave sollittu, permission la vandhiduren.

K Mom : sari OK. poittu vaa. adhukkulla.. naanga engenga polaam nu plan pottu vaikkurom..

Karthi : hmmm.. sure..


He comes to office and sees Raji who seems to be very low with no spirit.

Karthi : Raji.. enna dulla ah irukka.. ennaachu ?

Raji : yen nu unakku theriyaadhaa ?

Karthi : sonnaadhaane theriyum..

Raji : unga ammaa sonnadha dhaan nenachittu irukken..

Karthi : enna sonnaanga ?

Raji : nejamaave unakku theriyaadhaa ?

Karthi : adhu vandhu.. (mind voice) avanga dhaan onnume sollalaye.. enkitta

Raji : kandippa idha naan edhirpaakkala Karthik.. eppadi avanga ippadi pannalaam..?

Karthi : (tensed) enna nadandhadhu nu sollu ?

Raji : romba disappoint aagitten Karthik..

Karthi : enga ammaa edhaavadhu thappaa sollirundhaanga naa.. avangalukkaaga.. naan sorry kettukkiren..

enkitta.. ellaam nallabadiyaa pochu nu dhaane sonnaanga ? unga appaa enna sonnaaru Raji..

Raji : (turns and smiles) hey.. thoppi.. yemaandhuttiyaa ?



Vishnu solra maadhiri..ALL IS WELL.. Kalyaanam nichayam pannittaanga..

Karthi : naan konjam kooda edhir paakkala.. enga ammaa kitta irundhu green signal varumnu..

Raji : aanaa enakku theriyum.. enga appaa pesunaa othukkuvaanga nu..

apparam.. un twin sister vandhirukkaalaame ?

Karthi : aamaa..

Raji : naan avangala paakkanume.. unna maadhiri ye irukkaangalaa nu..

Karthi : adhukkenna ? paathuttaa pochu..

Raji : eppa ?

Karthi : eppa venumnaalum.. New year night dhaan kelambuvaanga..

Raji : but mudiyaadhu Karthik.. appaa oorukku vara sollirukkaaru.. New Year avangaloda dhaan.. innaikku evening porom..

Karthi : oh.. naanum naalaikku leave.. enga veetla.. 2 naalukku plan pottuttu irukkaanga.. ponadhaan enna nu theriyum..

Vishnu who was silent till then says..

Vish : dei.. appo New Year party illayaa ?

Karthi : adhu irukkume.. nee pogavendiyadhu dhaane ?

Vish : adheppadi daa.. nee illaama naan poradhu.. ?

Raji : Vishnu.. Lakshmi yoda celebrate pannunga..

Lakshmi comes to their place.

Raji : unakku nooru vayasu lakshmi..

Laksh : adhu irukkattum.. naan edhukku vandhen naa.. neenga rendu perum leave kettirundheenga la..

approve pannittaanga.. idhu US la holiday time.. most ah indha period la work avvalavaa irukkaadhu..

so.. naama leave edukkuradhula oru problem um illa..

Vish : ennadhu naamalaa ?

Laksh : aamaa.. naan.. oorla ammaa voda NEW YEAR celebrate panna poren..

Both Karthik and Raji laugh at Vishnu..

Laksh : yen ippadi sirikkureenga ?

Vish : en nelamai ya nenachu dhaan sirikkuraanga..

Laksh : ennanu sollunga.. onnum puriyala..

Vish : puriyaamaye irukkattum.. (gets up and leave in disappointment)

Lakshmi also moves.

Karthi : Raji.. enga ammaa enna exact ah pesunaanga nu sollala..unga appa sonnaaraa ?

Raji : hmmm.. ellaame sonnaaru..

Karthi : enna nu sollen..

Raji : adhu edhukku.. ? adhaan final result vandhiruchu la.. adhellaam NEW YEAR leave mudinju vandhadhum solren.. perusaa onnum illa..

Karthi : sari OK..

--- to be continued ---


Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update ramya..
Ennadhu posukku poisukunnu bulb kodukereenga..What messai told and how karthik mom accepted..Sema dhaan..Cant wait for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the lovely update ramya...

A big hug 🤗 karthi amma vai OK solla vachadhukku...

love you darling for that...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
karthik mom ok sollitangala enna???namba mudiyalayae...
neenga edhavadhu twist vechu irupinga nu ninaikiren...Until you tell the deatails of karthik's mom and meesai convo fully...I doubt it..😉😆
Karthik marriage pathi..except him everyone seems to know everything ..pavam karthik...I think karthik is still in confused state...
Waiting to know about K mom and meesai meeting details...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ennathu K mom "ok" solitangala???
Sumthing is fishy😉
Sikiram antha ragasiyatha solunga akka!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ramya...enakkum doubt ..namba mudila avunga amma sari nu sonnadha ..
edhum condition potturupangalo 😕?
waiting to know abt their convo..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super ramya yeppadiyo karthi raji ya serthuvaikka poreenganu ninakiren.

Adhu yenna pa twistu, seekiram sollunga pa.

I am waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Na edhirpathadhu onnu but nadakradhu ennamo different'ah iruku 😕. K's mom accept panadhu namba mudila. Karthik'ku marriage but avana thavara meedhi ellarum sandhoshama irukanga 😭..
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER FORTY TWO



Scene continues..

Karthi : sari...apparam naan kelamburen Raji.

Raji : adhukkulayaa..?

Karthi : naan... ammaakitta poi sollittu vandhirukken work irukkunu... actual ah unna paathu... unga appa enna sonnaarunu ketkanum nu dhaan vandhen.. aana neeyum complete ah solla maattengura...

Raji : edhaavadhu problem irundhaa dhaan worry pannikkanum... namakku dhaan line clear aayiduchu la.. apparam yen kozhappikkira ?

Karthi : sari ok.. new year ku apparamaa paakalaam... bye Raji... Bye da Vishnu...

After he leaves...

Raji : yen Vishnu sogamaa irukkeenga ?

Vish : indha new year party illa la... adhaan.. Karthik kudikkalanaalum.. avan company irundhaadhaan nallaa irukkum..

Raji : oru change ku.. indha dhadava... family yoda spend pannunga...

Vish : hmmm...

Raji : eppavume Karthi kooda dhaan iruppeengalaa ?

Vish : aamaa... naanga close aanadhula irundhu... eppavume onnaa dhaan spend pannuvom...

Raji : appo... college time la irundhu new year karthi kooda dhaanaa ?

Vish : aamaa... aanaa oru dhadava...

Raji : hmmm... sollunga...

Vish : adhu vandhu...Jaya voda ponen..

Raji : appadiyaa.. ?

Vish : aamaa... appa.. avanga rendu perukkulla misunderstanding irundhappo.. en kooda vera yaarum illa nu... Jaya va koottitu ponen.. but andha edathukku... Karthik solo vaa vandhu... engala paathu.. gaandaayittaan..



Vish : neenga ketteenga nu dhaan sonnen... plz avankitta sollidaadheenga...



New Year : 12 AM

Vishnu calls lakshmi and wishes her new year... Lakshmi propose vishnu and vishnu is too much surprised by her "I Love You" and tears in his eyes in joy and lakshmi says she likes him how he is and ready to come along with him and in return Vishnu says i am ready to change my attitude , character for you..Lakshmi again says the three words and cuts the call in shy...

(Credit to Anithu - this part taken from her Tuesday update)




Karthi tries calling Raji. Her phone rings but she did not pick up.

Jaya thinking if she can call Karthik and wish him. But then decides not to call him @ 12 o clock as he might be in call with his special one.

Karthik keeps trying Raji's number and after some time.. he receives ...switched off message.

He then goes to bed keeping his mobile beside.

Jaya now thinks... 1 hour passed, let me call him now and wish. She then calls Karthik.


Karthik who is sleepy, on hearing the ring, thinks it should be Raji, picks up the phone without opening his eyes. He did not expect it to be Jaya. But both of them exchanges New year wishes.



He then puts his mobile in silent mode and goes to sleep again.




Next day @ office : Thurday

Karthi : I tried calling you many times @ 12 o clock... but you did not pick. thoongittiyaa ?

Raji : illaye...

Karthi : appo ?

Raji : kovil la irundhen... new year ku special poojai 12 manikku...

adhaan pick pannala... thirumba thirumba adichitte irundhadhaala... switch panna sollittaaru appaa..

Karthi : oh... atleast message pannirukkalaam..

Raji : aanaa... naan 2 mani ku mela unakku call pannen... ring poitte irundhuchu...

Karthi : thalavali yaa irundhuchu... adhaan silent la pottuttu thoongitten...



Lakshmi comes to their place.

Laksh : so... new year eppadi pochu...?

Vish : indha dhadava... romba special new year enakku... ( he smiles)

Lakshmi feels shy remembering their talk in the midnight.[/COLOR]

Laksh : neenga rendu perum family yoda nallaa celebrate panniruppeenga.. dhaane ?

Both Karthi and Raji nods..

Laksh : apparam.. Karthik... few days munnaadi ye sollanum nu nenachen.. naama irukkura veettoda lease innum 1 month la mudiya pogudhu.. so.. alternate edhaavadhu yosikkanum nee..


Karthi : oh.. actual ah.. naane adha pathi pesanum nu nenachen... enga ammaa... marriage ku apparam... thani veedu ku move pannanum nu sonnaanga... family man aayiduven aam...

neenga eppadi thaniyaa iruppeenga ? kooda stay panna yaaraavadhu thedanum la ?

Laksh : hey... not a problem.. naan romba sandhosham ah irukken.. enga ammaakku transfer kedachiduchu.. so.. naanga rendu perum oru veedu rent ku eduthu onnaa staty panna porom...

Raji : hey.. super Lakshmi..

Laksh : hmmm... ippo dhaan confirm aachu nu sonnaanga... innum 1 month la inga vandhiruvaanga...

Lakshmi then leaves...

Vish : apparam Raji.. neenga innum meesai yum Karthi ammaa vum enna pesunaanga nu sollave illa.. ore... aarvamaa irukku... enna nadandhuchu nu therinjikka..

Raji : Karthik eh summa irukkaan.. neenga ennadaa naa...

Karthi : illa Raji.. naanum kekkanum nu dhaan irundhen... first unga appaa enna pesunaarunu sollu...

Raji : pesunadhu unga ammaa dhaan..

Karthi : ennadhu...?

Raji : aammaa... chumma onnum avanga udane othukkala...

Vish : appo.. usual payyanoda ammaa maadhiri... demand pannaangalaa... ? any conditions ?

Raji : correct Vishnu... kandupidichitteenga...

Karthi : nejamaa vaa ?

Raji : but adha.. conditions nu solla mudiyaadhu... obligation nu vachikalaam...


to be continued...
Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb ramya...
semma fast aah current track oda merge pannitteenga...

mmm... K-mom & R-dad convo la enna suspense vachirukkeenga?

suicide attempt naala ingayum Raji kku edhum health issues undaa?

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