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Hi everyone!

As promised, I am back with another fanfic after a very long break. Hope you like it just as much as the last one if not more. 😊 Like always, if you want a PM every time I update, then please add me as a buddy!


Enjoy!
Archi



Index

 
Introduction - Prologue
Chapter   1 - A Strange Family 
Chapter   2 - No Place for Roses
Chapter   3 - Prisons
Chapter   4 - Still at the Door
Chapter   5 - The First Sight 
Chapter   6 - Adamantly Steadfast 
Chapter   7 - Blood, Sweat and Tears 
Chapter   8 - The Truth to Charm 
Chapter   9 - Prove Me Wrong 
Chapter 10 - Off Limits 
Chapter 12 - Hammered 
Chapter 13 - Unfinished Business 
Chapter 14 - Damsel in Distress
Chapter 15 - Unforeseen
Chapter 16 - Parks of the Past
Chapter 17 - The Shrink
Chapter 18 - Kiss it Goodbye

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Silent Whispers
-PROLOGUE-

The Indian system of justice was known for it's soft-heartedness. Or so they said.
 
Why else would the court not place a death penalty on a murder? Or a rapist and for that matter a kidnapper? Once a criminal will surely always be a criminal.
 
At least that's what a young boy of twelve thought as he anxiously paced in front of Delhi Supreme Court of Justice. Being tall for his age, there was nothing about his appearance that made anyone think he was a child. Whether it was his neatly ironed dress shirt or a serious expression on his rather handsome face - all of it screamed maturity.
 
It was as he checked his watch for the umpteenth time in the past ten minutes that he was finally interrupted.
 
"Bhaiyya... Why are we here? I want to go home!"
 
The boy turned to see his little sister - a girl of just eight - seated on the stairs in front of the court.
 
"A few more minutes Meeti."
 
And then he was back to pacing, simply because there was no other way he could handle the worry creeping through him. No other way to push the scary thoughts coursing through his mind.
 
Interestingly, the reason for the boy and his sister to be at court on a bright Monday morning, instead of attending school was not a case of murder or rape or kidnapping. It was an ordinary case of divorce. And yet, it meant the world for the two siblings. One knew it, the other didn't.
 
"Bhaiyya?"
 
"Hmm..."
 
"Why did they tie up that man?"
 
The boy turned to see his sister point to a middle-aged man in handcuffs, being escorted into the courtroom by two police officers.
 
"Because he is a bad guy and needs to be punished."
 
"Do all bad guys get tied up like that? Because then Pranav should be tied up too! He makes fun of my ponytails all the time."
 
For the first time that entire day, the boy cracked a smile. "Yes, Meeti... all bad guys get tied up like that, but only when they do really bad things like stealing or hurting people."
 
"But making fun of my ponytails is a bad thing too right?"
 
"Yes, it is. But I have a better solution than tying Pranav up. Next time he makes fun of you, tell him you have a big brother who knows how to fight, okay?
 
The boy smiled at his sister as she began to giggle at his suggestion. But it was short lived for the court doors suddenly opened and spectators of the hearing slowly began to file out.  The boy watched in anticipation, his heart thudding in unknown fear, for the one person he knew would have all the answers.
 
He let out a small sigh of relief when he finally spotted him.
 
"Babuji..."
 
But it was useless, for his father disregarded him and swiftly walked to the white Mercedes waiting at the bottom of the stairs. He turned speechlessly back to the doors to see his mother standing with a pale face and bloodshot eyes.
 
It was at that moment, that he knew it was all over.
 
That people had it all wrong right from the beginning. The Indian system of justice wasn't softhearted - it was wrong.
 
And it was as he grasped his mother's hand and pulled her out of the court along with his sister, that he vowed to make it right. All of it.
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I know it was short, but it was just an introduction to the setting of the story. I will post chapter one very soon!

Please do like/comment! 😊

Archi



Edited by -Archi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back Archie..lovely concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing start
glad that yu are back
wonder what has happened? and why they have divorced?
and where does khushi fit in?
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great start.. wonderful concept...  is it shyam and khushi as siblings shown? waitin for the story to unfold...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back Hun,

Thank you so much for this lovely treat for Christmas, 

I'm so excited to read your new story, 

The prologue was quite sad and emotional however the concept sounds very intriguing and interesting, 

I'm assuming the siblings were Arnav and Anjali and there parents have got a divorce, awww poor Arnav as he was aware of the fact. 

Can't wait to read how this story unfolds further,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the first part,

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year xx

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Posted: 10 years ago
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simply amazing
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start. waiting to read further
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back! It is intriguing. Look forward to your updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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an interesting concept...continue soon