AsYa FF - Complicated Love (UNCONTINUED)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys im back !! Im gonna start a new series called ' Complicated Love '
and i might start it today or tomorrow i dont no lets see hope you like it
im starting where Zoya runs from her nikah with Akram and when she enters the Khan Villa and coincidentally lands in Asad's room .
It will be different story 😃
and the background is same Zoya's Father - Gaffur
Asad hates Rashid
Gudiya Factory - Razia and so on like in the serial just the situation will change thnks wish me good luck and im looking forward to your feedbacks !ā­ļøšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ƒ So it is an FF 😃

Hey guys as i said i will be doing an index so here it is :






Chapter 8 : Coming Soon !


I had also made a banner but i forgot to add it in my chapters but now i edited it so here it is :



So hope you like it thnx !


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good luck šŸ˜‰
I'm looking forward for updates 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good luck with it...look forward to reading it
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Great start.. šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼
good luck...
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looking foward to reading it pm me wen update
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its interesting
plzzz pm me for next parts
continue soon
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Great start..
good luck... šŸ‘šŸ¼
Looking forward for it...!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1 ( Complicated Love ) :

Zoya slept peacefully in which she thought was ' her room ' . Asad walked in his room and didnt notice Zoya . He freshened up and slept next to Zoya.
After a little while Zoya felt something on her waist . Then she realised it was a hand . She didnt no what to do so she turned around and saw a handsome face , but she got in her senses and pushed him and he fell off the bed . He woke up .
Zoya : ' Chor !! Jaldi ayi ! Najma ! Phuppi ! Chor ! '
Asad was shocked and he got up ( the lights are off )
Asad : ' Excuse me ! Aap kaun hai aur yahan kya karrahi hain ? ! ' he asked her angrily.
Zoya : ' Allah miya ! Whats wrong with this country ? ! ' she shouted . Asad had heard this voice before . ' Ek insaan chori chupe pehle mere room mein ata hai aur phir mujhse puch ta hai ki main yahan kaise ? ' she continued .

With all this racket Dilshaad and Najma came into the room .
Dilshaad : ' Kya hua Zoya beta ? Tum yahan kaise ? '
Zoya : ' Phuppi aap bhi ! Najma ne kaha right wala room '
Najma : ' Zoya par ' while she was saying that she turned on the lights .
Asad / Zoya : ' Aap !!! Yahan ! ' They said at the same time.
Zoya : ' Aap yahan mera picha karrahen hai . Phuppi inhe abbhi iss ghar se nikaliye aap janti nahi hain yeh itne battamee - ' she was interrupted by Dilshaad
Dilshaad : ' Zoya beta mein isse ghar se nahi nikaal sakti hoon yeh mera beta hai '
Zoya : ' Haan toh kya hua - wht !! hes your son! Lagte nahi hai ' She said
Asad : ' Dekhiye aap yahan kya karrahi hain aur aap meri ammi ko kaise janti hain '
Dilshaad : ' Beta yeh humare ghar mein mehmaan ban kar ayi hain '
Asad : ' Haan toh mehmaan hai toh apne room mein jana chahiye na yahan pe kyun ayi thi '
Zoya : ' Woh Najma neh kaha right ko jana hai '
Asad : ' Toh aap left ko agayi right ? '
Zoya : ' Right - i mean no Najma ka right mera left toh maine socha ki left ana hai '
Asad : ' Please ab aap soch ne bhi lag gayi '.
Zoya : ' Excuse me ! a- ' Once again she was interrupted by Dilshaad
Dilshaad : ' Okay okay tum dono ab bas bhi karo plz ' with that Najma took her to her room . While she was going she whispered
Zoya : ' Akdu Ahmed Khan '
Asad : ' Kuch kaha apne ? '
Zoya : ' Yes! ' 😔
Asad : ' Jee ? '
Zoya : ' Jee !- i mean jee nahi 😲kuch nahi kaha ' Najma chuckled at their convo .šŸ˜†

IN THE MORNING :
Zoya woke up and went downstairs to have breakfast . Asad was already there.
Zoya : ' Good morning Phuppi ! Good morning Najma ! '😃
Naj / Dilsh : Good morning Zoya .
Najma : ' Come sit down ' Zoya sat down in the chair closest to her ( which was next to Asads.
Asad called Najma to clean his cup properly and Najma did so .
Seeing this Zoya was shocked😲 and soon had a smile on her face.😊
She purposely dropped her food on the table šŸ˜‰ which made Asad bonkers

Asad : ' Irresponsible !'😔
Zoya : ' Sun liya maine ! ' 😔
Asad : ' Haan toh main aapse dar ta nahi hoon '😔
Zoya : ' Oh Really ! 😔Aap samajte kya hain ki mai apse dar thi hoon . You know what aapki problem kya hai doosron tang kare aapko chain nahi ata ' 😔
Asad : ' Aur yeh aap keh rahi hai 'šŸ˜† Aap se baat karna hi bekar hai ! Subhe subhe mood kharab kardiya .
Zoya : ' Toh kya maine aapko specially invite kiya tha ki tring ! tring! Mr Khan mujhse baat karne ka waqt ho gaya . Aur aapka mood kab kharab nahi hota . Akdu kahin ke !

Najma and Dilshaad watched hopelessly as they could do nothing .

Thanks ! Hope you like it. Will be updating soon !





Edited by masteruni6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update !
it was so funny !
loved it !
continue soon !
and thanks for the pm (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome update
Waiting 4 next part can u pm me tht
😃
And plz keep writing their cute fights
I just loved it ā¤ļø

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