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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
From the first letter ..tothe last letter..
Awesome reading..
But thoda confusing sa hogaya hai..
Am not able to corelate the three chapters..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
i read it today only...adorable story!!
continue soon n pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Ab story thodi complicated hogayi

update was nyc

Asad & Zoya r married
yippee

memory loss problem
Asad determined to bring his Zoya back!!!

thanks 4 pm
do update soon




Thts the reason why its called Complicated Love lol 😃
Thnks will do 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rajnid68

<font color="#990000">From the first letter ..tothe last letter..</font>

<font color="#990000">Awesome reading..</font>
<font color="#990000">But thoda confusing sa hogaya hai..</font>
<font color="#990000">Am not able to corelate the three chapters..</font>
<font color="#990000">Thanks for the pm..</font>



Sorry for the confusion about the parts you
Can check the index on first page soz again
And thnks! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful
Continue soon
Add me in ur PM list
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awesome update..

asya were so adorable together..

asad was so concern about zoya..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
ok I am confuse
so first chapter is when she now move into their
house and slept in his room
second chapter they r married and she cant remember
and third chapter she is having nightmare ok clear it up plz
continue soon and pm plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: anopama

ok I am confuse
so first chapter is when she now move into their
house and slept in his room
second chapter they r married and she cant remember
and third chapter she is having nightmare ok clear it up plz
continue soon and pm plz


Basically in the first part they are acting normally becoz she lost her memory
and she has forgotten evrythin and they cant force her to remember so they are acting
like they met her the first time but i didnt say tht she lost her memory in the first chapter becoz
i wanted it to be a surprise so yh

And in the 2nd chapter Asad is talking to Dilshaad and the fact is revealed tht
Zoya has lost her memory and she is married to Asad

3rd chapter is tht Zoya gradually remembers some memories in her dream and
asad is happy she is gradually remembering everything

i no its confusing no wonder its called ' Complicated Love ' 😃😆
sorry for the confusion 😕
hope i explained properly ⭐️



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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Omg I luv the story
I was shocked when I found out zoya forgot everything 😲
I thought u were starting from beginning
And when I found out they were married i was in asyalicious land waiting
Edited by rosyluck - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Hey long time no see guys! soz was very busy and i was gonna to the update on 12 jan but then i realised Zayn Malik ( One Direction ) bday how could i forget? love him ! so got busy drooling over his cute face and amaZAYN hair !



Zayn Malik !!!

Dedicated to him and only him love him sooo much !



Ok on to the story ... sorry i know the storyline was a bit confusing 😕

Chapter 3 :



NEXT MORNING :-

Zoya freshened up and went downstairs. All were there eating breakfast . Zoya was still tensed as she couldnt figure out who Tanveer was and also who that man was who had saved her from Tanveer.
( Asad basically, but Zoya doesn't know )
* If only i knew * She thought feeling down .

Dilshaad sensed her tension and asked her
Dil : "Are you okay beta ? kya hua ? itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho ?
tell me beta are you feeling fine ?" Asked Dilshaad

Zoya : " Nahi kuch nhi Ammi ... kya mai apko Ammi bula sakti hoon ?

Dil : " Why not beta ? You can . " Dil felt very happy

Najma : " Come bhab..." Najma called out unknowingly , Zoya looked confused " i mean Zoya come sit down . " Najma hesitated, but sighed as she had sat down without asking anything .

Asad smiled behind the newspaper , but soon that smile faded and eventually changed into anger when he heard the next few lines ...

Zoya : " Mr.Khan do you know someone called Tanveer ... i dont know why...

Everyone's faces turned pale and they were speechless

Asad : " I dont know !! 😡 " he said angrily interrupting her while he slammed his newspaper on the table and threw his coffee cup off the table.
"Dont ask me ever again!!😡😡" he continued as threw his coffee cup off the table.

Zoya stood up and gasped loudly as the cup broke in pieces and she shivered in fear.
She hadn't got a clue why he reacted like that , but she knew something was wrong .

With that he stomped off the dining table , out of the house and slammed the door shut, leaving for work .

Dil and Najma who were now standing up due to the chaos . Suddenly Zoya felt a reassuring hand on her shoulder . She turned around to see Dil .

Dil : " Don't worry too much beta . Its nothing . He's just tired and he's stressed because of loads of work and he vented all his anger here."
She assured Zoya while Dil plastered a fake smile on her face .

Zoya knew something was wrong and Dil wasn't telling the truth but she had to know, she had to know who Tanveer was and why Mr.Khan had reacted like that .

IN THE EVENING :

Asad had returned back home but he went straight to his room , and didn't come out of there .

While Zoya in her room was thinking how to find out everything , an idea popped in her head

Zoya : " YES!! " She said to no one in particular.

IN NAJMA 'S ROOM :

Najma : " Bhab... i mean kya hua ap yahan ? "

Zoya : " Najma ! Yeh kya subha se' Bhab-... Bhab -... ' lagaya hua hai ? tell me what is ' Bhab ' ? Is it a new word or something ? Anyway mein yahan tumhare saath game khelne ayi hoon do you want to play ? " Zoya replied in her same cheerful manner.

Najma : " What !!! Game ?! 😲" She replied confused

Zoya : " Yes!! 😲 G..A...M...E " She said dramatically while spelling out every letter and imitating her shocking voice . " Come on Najma now don't be like your bhaijaan ; Akdu and Boring " She said while entering her room, while pulling her along with her , towards the bed .

( Just to let you know its been about a week since Zoya is in their house and Zoya thinks Asad as boring and stuff )

Najma : " Thike! 😊What kind of Game ?😃 " Said Najma while they sat on the bed , legs crossed , facing each other .

Najma felt happy that she was starting to communicate with Zoya after what had happened . She thought now they will be best friends again .

Zoya : " Okay !! So i will say a word and you will have to say another word that comes in your mind , really quickly , without thinking , just anything that comes in your mind " She replied , hoping this would work.

Najma : " Okay im ready . Start 😃 " She replied

Zoya : " Sky ? "

Najma : " Blue "

Zoya : " Love ?"
Najma : " Friendship "

Zoya : " Friendship ? "

Najma : " You . " Najma replied while giving a huge smile and Zoya also returned a smile .

Zoya : " Tanveer ? " She hoped that Najma was engrossed in the game. And she was .

Najma : " Wicked Witch ! 😡 " She blurted

Zoya : " Kyun Najma ?" * So far , so good * Zoya thought .

Najma : " Because she tryed killin ... - "
Asad : " Najma ! Ammi tumhe bula rahi hai " , Asad interrupted Najma hoping she hadn't told everything . He came inside the room and stood beside the bed .

Najma was so engrossed in the game that she hadn't realised the reason why Zoya had asked her to play the game and what she blurted out .
* Tanveer! no wonder ! * Najma thought as she tried making sense of it .

Najma stood up and gave a apologetic look to Asad , while he nodded assuring her he would handle it .

Najma : " Oh haan !! sorry maine suna nhi hoga " She said as she tryed covering up for what happened .

Thnx hope this was a long update pheww!!!
finished !



Edited by masteruni6 - 11 years ago

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