the unforgotten dream....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys! this is a poem written by me sometime back..it might sound little childish but i hope its ok😳

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once i had a wonderful dream
not usual one as ever
i'll cherish this rest of my life
and will remember forever

that night i was feeling very sad
my eyes dropped a silent tear
the thing i wanted wasn't big
just some1 who culd hear

sitting there down n out
i heard a deep kind voice
HE askd me to come closer
i went as i had no choice

i culdn't see his face properly
his words gave me a big shock
he said he came from heaven
i guessed he was Almighty God

i asked was this what i deserved?
was this my only prize?
he wiped my tears and said
"No,it's not that,My child!"

i felt so nice on hearing this
he called me his own child
i felt i was special to him
for the words he said were kind

i had my say in front of him
now it was his turn to answer
i asked if i'll b happy
will i get happiness ever?

he continued his speech by saying
i want to give u more
but people who jealous ur smile
pray for ur bad more n more

my eyes were popping out
i knew who those people were
tears rolled down my eyes again
i askd if they'll b punished ever?

he said,"don't waste these precious pearls
as they will just go in vain
learn to b a little strong
or it will just continue to pain"

"i will myself take care of u
u just try to b at ur best
Me n TIME have equal share
so he will manage the rest"

he finished his speech n blessed me
i felt as if my sorrows were gone
he looked at me n made his way
leaving me with my questions solved

neither i find out who he was
nor do i wish to
just remember what he spoke
because the words he said were true

even now when all r cheering
a little heart is broken
it still continues to hurt
some words r still unspoken

but now i've seen the light
just need to see all over
to differentiate b/w right n wrong
because its not all yet over

the fight still continues
the battle is going on
with my heart to make it understand
that it needs to move on

~Amrit

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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Simply AWESOME poem yaar Amrit....it's really very well written!! 👏 But just at a curiousity, did you really have that dream?

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
no anju 😆it was just my way of symphathising myself 😳
thnx 4 ur compliment 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh thats a wonderful creation dear
very sincere attempt
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice one Amrit...very nice...and it wasn't childish at all... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg dis aint childish, its wonderfully written yaar 😛 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx lotty , sapna and moon_uk 4 ur appreciation 😳 😃 😃

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