ViSa OS: Life Spent In Each Moment (Ending Edited)

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Sarita entered the room to see it all messed up. She stared at everything

lying on the floor, and remembered how vikrant used to throw his belongings

in the room:

"Mr Suryavaanshi, whats this. For your one file, you have messed the room

completely" Sarita angrily shouted at vikrant. Vikrant hugged sarita from

behind and said, "I will look for my file, and you clean the room. Thats why

we are married naa??" Sarita was annoyed to hear this. She broke the hug,

faced him and said," That means i m here in this house only keep your house

clean??" Vikrant was shocked at the meaning which sarita derived from his

words, but he decided to tease her further, "Yes, because all day you are in

kitchen, in abhi's room or cleaning the house. You never get time to talk to

me". Sarita tried to defend herself,"But you always come late from office".

Vikrant was shocked at the blame, he profusely said," Did you Mrs.

Suryavanshi that since last week, i m coming early only to spend some minutes with you. But you...You never get time to even sit beside me". And with this,

vikrant angrily started looking for his file. Sarita went upto him, hugged him

from behind and said,"Mr Suryavanshi is now angry from me. So how should

i make it up for him". But didnt pay any heed to her. She went to face vikrant,

cupped his face, planted a kiss on his cheek and said, "I think this would do".

Sarita turned to leave, but vikrant held her in his arms and said,"A kiss only on

the cheek for ignoring is not at all enough". Sarita asked, "Then what else do you

want, Mr Suryavanshi??" Vikrant came closer to kiss her, but sarita mischeviously

took file from the table, placed it infront of his face and said,"Mr Suryavanshi,

your file. Now you can go to office. Please Go".

Sarita snapped back to reality. She hated the messed up room, but since the

day when vikrant left, She didnt dare coming back to her abode. Her only

place, which reminded her of vikrant, which had vikrant entwined in everything.

She saw vikrant's coat lying on floor, she picked it up and remembered how much

troublesome vikrant was:

Vikrant was getting ready for the office, when he saw sarita getting ready infront

of the mirror. He was mesmerized to see her so fresh. Her wet hair always made

him lost his senses. He thought of a plan and faked like he is talking on the phone.

He asked sarita," Sarita please bring my coat from the cupboard i m getting late".

Sarita took his coat from the cupboard, and tried of making him wear that. Vikrant

instead of wearing the coat, hugged her, which made sarita consious of his plan,

she said," Godd, Mr Suryavanshi why you look for excuses to hug me. Leave

me, you are getting late for your office". Vikrant replied," Who said, i m

getting late for office, i have all the time in the world when i am with my wife".

Sarita replied," Mr Suryavanshi, you wanted your coat naa. Leave me annd wear it".

Vikrant replied,"I know what I want, because I have it in my arms right now. You."

This made sarita remember how much vikrant liked being there with her.

She picked up the alarm clock from the floor and remembered:

Sarita closed the alarm and she turned to wake vikrant up. She said to him

," Wake up Mr Suryavanshi, Your alarm rang to break my sleep not yours".

Vikrant opened his eyes to see sarita there, he took sarita in his arms and said,

" You know why i everynight put this alarm??" Sarita replied," i want to know

that actually". Vikrant replied," Becauseee i want you to wake up with the sound

of this alarm and then wake me up". Sarita replied," Ohh, so you ruin my sleep,

so that i could wake you up. This is selfishness Mr Suryavanshi" Vikrant replied,

"I always want to see you in my arms when i wake up, if this is selfishness,

then i am selfish". Sarita teasingly said," One day, i will ask this alarm

to wake you up. I wont wake you up that day". Vikrant replied," Then that

day, i wont open my eyes".

Those words made sarita come back to her senses, she said to herself,"

Vikrant ji i m still here, but you arent. You said you will be there till the day

i will wake you up in the morning. I will do that for the rest of my life, but

please come back soon.

She sat on the bed, and clutched vikrant's pillow. She remembered the fight

due to this pillow:

"Sarita i told you several times not to give my pillow to abhi. How will i

sleep now". Sarita was annoyed with the obsession vikrant had with his pillow,

she replied," Godd,, Mr Suryavanshi, you dont need a pillow to sleep".

Vikrant replied," Sarita please i m not in mood of a psychology lesson. I m

really tired and i dont have my pillow". Sarita found it the right time to treat

vikrant with a good news. She took a spare pillow from the cupboard and said,"

Mr Suryavanshi you are so impossible. God knows how will I handle three kids".

Vikrant corrected her," Actually Sarita we have only one child Abhi".

Sarita exclaimed," Have you noticed your behaviour. Sometimes even

you act like a child". Vikrant asked her in a confused way," Okay, if i behave

like a kid, then that makes two. Wheres the thrird one". Sarita was tired of

giving indirect hints to Vikrant, She replied," Leave it Mr Suryavanshi.

You are very sleepy. You should be sleeping". And then sarita closed the nights.

Vikrant finally got what sarita was trying to say, he opened the lights and said,

" Wait Wait third child that means..." Sarita asks," what??" Vikrant replied,

"That means i will be becoming the father again. Miss Suryavanshi naa".

Sarita nodded her hand in approval. Vikrant immediately hugged her.

Sarita realized how much her life was incomplete without vikrant.

She made her way towards the mirror to see how much messed up she looked.

She remembered how much vikrant liked her when she smiled:

Sarita was going through the pictures of their wedding, when a tear fell from

sarita's eyes. At that moment, vikrant entered the room, to see sarita crying.

He want upto her, sat beside her and asked, "You regret married to me?!"

Sarita assuredly replied," You are the best thing, that has ever happened to me".

Vikrant wiped tears from sarita's face and asked," Then why are these tears still

in your eyes??" Sarita hugged vikrant and said,"Mr Suryavanshi, I was going

through the pics. Everyone was there except..." Vikrant completed the sentence,

" Except your parents. You are missing them naa" Sarita replied, breaking

the hug, " Yeah but they dont miss me, it seems like. They never came to meet me".

Sarita then, remembered how next day, vikrant gave a suprise to her:

Vikrant shouted,"Sarita, Sarita". He found sarita in the kitchen. He dragged her to

the garden, and said," I want you to meet them". Sarita looked to see her parents

there, she hurriedly went to them and hugged her mother. She had tears in her eyes.

Vikrant came there, and said,"Sarita, yesterday you were crying because

you were missing them. Today you are crying because you met them.

Auntyji your daughter cries so much". Sarita's mother said," Shes just emotional

seeing us here". Sarita broke hug and asked her parents to accompany her inside.

She made her parents sit on the sofa and was about to go to bring something for

her parents, when vikrant made her sit beside her mother and said," You sit, i will

ask the servants to bring something". Vikrant also made him comfortable there.

He was happy to see the content on sarita's face after meeting her parents.

Sarita's father said to vikrant,"Thank You for taking care of my daughter and

keeping her so happy". Vikrant replied," She isnt your daughter only,

she is my wife. And you dont worry, i will be there with her till my last breath".

Vikrant made sarita's parents stay in there guest room. Sarita found vikrant in the

kitchen and said,"What are you doing here. This is my territory". Vikrant replied,

" I was just looking for the magnet in this kitchen which keeps you hooked to it".

Sarita hugged him and said," ThankYou Mr Suryavanshi, for doing this for me".

Vikrant replied,"I did this only because i hate tears in your eyes, and i dont

want you cry in my presence or in absence".

"I know i shouldnt cry, but i cant help it. i miss Mr Suryavanshi, he left for dubai without

informing me. I m bound to miss him". Sarita aaid to herself.
In the night she made abhi sleep in his room. In her room, even she soon drifted into a deep

sleep.
In the morning, vikrant came and stood infront of her. He said,"Wake up, sleeping beauty. Your

patidev is here".sarita woke up to see vikrant there. When she went to hug him, he

disappeared. She realised it was just her imagination. She said to herself,"Sarita you should

stop missing him and sleep". Sarita slept again. Vikrant entered to find sarita sleeping. He

slept beside her while hugging her. Sarita said,"I know you arent here, i know you would

disappear". Vikrant chuckled,"Sarita i m not a ghost, that i would disappear in an instance".

Sarita replied,"But you just did, and you again would". Vikrant tightened the grip around her

and said,"you still i think i would disappear". Sarita became consious of vikrant's presence,

she turned around and hugged him even more tightly. She broke the hug, and hitted him hard

on his chest,"How can you go to dubai like this without even informing me", and she sat on the

bed after saying this. Vikrant tried to convince her," I m sorry sarita". Sarita replied,"But you

always do this". Vikrant took a ring from his pocket, and slipped it in sarita's finger,"I m

genuinely sorry. I promise i wont do that again". Sarita hugged vikrant saying," i hate you for

going like this, but still i missed you. And i love you even more". Vikrant teasingly said,"If you

missed me, then you obviously would have missed the times we spent together. The fights,

the nok jhok, anddd..." sarita asked,"andd". Vikrant replied," and the suhaagrat". Sarita

blushed hearing the word suhaagraat. Vikrant replied,"Sarita its so early, lets sleep together"
.
And with this sarita and vikrant slept together in peace.

P.S Sorry for the tragic ending earlier. Edit credit goes to liashna πŸ˜‰

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wupa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am crying! 😭 😭

Seriously, Nisha! You made me cry. It was so intense and emotional that I am crying like a baby now! 😭

Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work, dear! Awesome job! πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Leave rotten tomatoes am ready to throw everything i get in my hand right now :'''''(

Not fair! This made me miserable, cudn't u put a warning that it's so sad :'(

And i thought u'll help me not miss ViSa :(

You better make up for it Sheetal or am not talking to u. Hmphh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sheeetttaaalll😭

why why why?????????????? did u hav to kill vikrant he anyways is gonna stay oly in our memories now and so is sarita
nooo
loved the cutie cutie scenes bt would never wanna imagine this happening thank God

Bt good JobπŸ‘

Bt u better run before the andas n tomatoes hit you
Me gonna be the first to do the honors πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
MidnightMusings thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay before i stop talking to you, i wanna add that the way you presented was beautiful.

The way she remembers the moments which happened related to the small small things like alarm clock, pillow, coat. Sigh, it was just breathtakingly beautiful ! Was dreading the last part as i was reading and nearing the end.

πŸ€” Now i can go back to the mute mode with youu :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is just beautiful...intense, emotional and heart touching❀️
Thanks for sharing the awesome OS πŸ‘

P.S.Don't worry I'm not gonna throw andas/tomatoes, better I' use them in kitchenπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: wupa

I am crying! 😭 😭

Seriously, Nisha! You made me cry. It was so intense and emotional that I am crying like a baby now! 😭

Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work, dear! Awesome job! πŸ‘

Thanks but i m sorry for making you cry πŸ˜†
Edited by --Nisha-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Liashna

Leave rotten tomatoes am ready to throw everything i get in my hand right now :'''''(

Not fair! This made me miserable, cudn't u put a warning that it's so sad :'(

And i thought u'll help me not miss ViSa :(

You better make up for it Sheetal or am not talking to u. Hmphh!

and i am ready to catch each and every thing you throw at me, so bring it on πŸ˜‰
arey you have a photographic imagination naa, so i thought you would have fun imagining this πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Liashna

Okay before i stop talking to you, i wanna add that the way you presented was beautiful.

The way she remembers the moments which happened related to the small small things like alarm clock, pillow, coat. Sigh, it was just breathtakingly beautiful ! Was dreading the last part as i was reading and nearing the end.

πŸ€” Now i can go back to the mute mode with youu :(

hahaha thanks for the apreciation eventhough you are not talking to me πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

acha okay, i m sorry, i have another is, happy one πŸ˜‰ but i dont know when i will complete it πŸ˜‰

*again runs to escape from dandas this time*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

Sheeetttaaalll😭

why why why?????????????? did u hav to kill vikrant he anyways is gonna stay oly in our memories now and so is sarita
nooo
loved the cutie cutie scenes bt would never wanna imagine this happening thank God

Bt good JobπŸ‘

Bt u better run before the andas n tomatoes hit you
Me gonna be the first to do the honors πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

hahaha even i was dreading to write this os πŸ˜‰ but still sadness is a part of life πŸ˜‰
hahaha you throw your andas and tomatoes, i will catch them and then cook them πŸ˜†

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