ViSa OS: Life Spent In Each Moment (Ending Edited)

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: lfc2010
great until the last part 😡

Lo ji, ek aur 😆

Sorryyy.

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MidnightMusings

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Do u expect flowers after that part or what? :P

U killed Vikrant -__-

Telling u, he went abroad and Sarita can't handle his judai. Pyaar main missing like crazy is a normal thing.

Edit the last part and i'll forgive u.

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Liashna
Do u expect flowers after that part or what? :P

U killed Vikrant -__-

Telling u, he went abroad and Sarita can't handle his judai. Pyaar main missing like crazy is a normal thing.

Edit the last part and i'll forgive u.

awww i edited the ending ;) check that out now ;)

And i apologize from evwryone for the sad ending. Now i edited it, you can enjoy a happier ending with vikrant there ;)

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MidnightMusings

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Okay, so am overwhelmed, having happy tears :3

Thank you sheetal <3 Like really, i really didn't expect it :$

So Mr. Suryavanshi went to dubai without informing his wifey, oh good he had it from Mrs. Suryavanshi :p

When he says am not a ghost 😆 I was seeing that so clearly ^_^

Just too beautiful, and i must say, i loved the happy ending <3 Sorry i can't handle sad ends :p

And since now am all happy and smiling, i can add that you should keep writing whenever possible 👏

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Finally you wrote a happy ending, chalo accha hain members wont throw eggs/tomatoes on you😆

But honestly I loved the tragic ending, (call me sadistic) the flow of scenes was intense, emotional and perfect for the sad ending. The intensity you feel in tragic love is overwhelming and it haunts forever💔

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Finally you wrote a happy ending, chalo accha hain members wont throw eggs/tomatoes on you😆
But honestly I loved the tragic ending, (call me sadistic) the flow of scenes was intense, emotional and perfect for the sad ending. The intensity you feel in tragic love is overwhelming and it haunts forever💔

i actually second you here. i do dread sad endings, but i personally feel that emotions are quite expressive in sad parts 😉

but chalo, you got two endings, now you can imagine in that way or this way 😉

Edited by --Nisha-- - 11 years ago

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Elita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

You just made my day dear...though emotions run high while one's feeling sad...somehow couldn't accept visa moments with Mr. Suryavanshi being a thing of past.
Thank you for editing and ending it sweetly. 😃

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jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I liked the tragic ending better it gelled beautifully with the story

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
I liked the tragic ending better it gelled beautifully with the story

i knoww, the original story was what made me write this. But maybe sad endings are quite difficult to come in terms with.

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Pallavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: --Nisha--

i actually second you here. i do dread sad endings, but i personally feel that emotions are quite expressive in sad parts 😉
but chalo, you got two endings, now you can imagine in that way or this way 😉

I ditto both your posts. Love the emotions that spill out when there is a tragic end. But I do hate the tragic endings..I enjoy all the angst, MUs and disagreements amongst couple, but in the end I am a sucker for emotionally charged happy ending. hehe😃

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