Cross Connection SS #2 : A KriYansh and SwaRon story ch10+epi, pg17 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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as usual lt
litrly jumping
reading its updat aftr ags
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awesome...kriyansh kitna jhagda kartha hai...
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amazing as always
kr scenes were tempting and d ss scenes were hot
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You didn't put the banner yet?
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Originally posted by: -Marium-

You didn't put the banner yet?


Nahi,, I will be posting it in a day. It always slips out of my mind. But anyways I am gonna do that for sure,, before I put up an update.

Sorry 😔
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Banner updated on the first page!!!
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And the banner is updated. Banner credit goes to blush. aka Marium
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There's one, there's two, there's three!!
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You all would have seen such a thing previously. Yes, I have now come up with replying almost all the reviews on a single post, with this quick and short reply method. Just due to time constrains, I am unable to reply individually. *shrugs* cant help it.


Short and quick replies::

Marium - Well I dont mind you skipping KriYansh part until and unless you review SwaRon. I am really glad I was successful to get a grin on your face during the first SwaRon scene. And I am sorry to have disappointed you with the second. But I am happier to learn you found KriYansh realistic.

Snigs - I am glad to have received a review from you. And it seems good to kwow that you found it good.

Maumita - I just hope layer on you dont knock me off for anything that I update in future. But I am glad you liked it. But you never know what's next ;P

Abhilasha - I cant assure you when would Kria realise that she is feeling something for him. Or may be she never would. Or may be she already does. :D

Aishu - I think elevator ka kamaal hai. As it is elevator is something I love to write on.

Isha - No rey. Dont get crazy with this much. Abhi there's much more to go. Kya pata kya ho inka? Thanks anyways.

swaronlove001 - Its absolutely fine, if you dont read KriYansh part. Anyways hereon, the two leads life wont be related, at least not much. And thanks. I am glad you liked it and moreover you unreserved the comment. :)

Rashi - Tell me what do I do with you? Matlab when you unreserve you always have that 'ehsaan dialogue'. Puh-lease, I am the one bugging you day and night. I am the one who threatens you of not posting the works you want me to and its then that you finally do the honours of unreserving your post. Hadh hi hogayi matlab.
Anyways coming to, Kria well she can let Rey or any other guy kiss her. Big deal. A kisa never gives the certification of feelings. And moreover you just dont know whats cooking in my head ;D

Mannu - Well I am really glad that you are loving them more. And intense. Iss baar toh nahi hai. But next wale mein ho sakta hai. As it was getting really long, so I would update the next KriYansh intense wala in the next update. #hopefully. Look I couldnt finish this SS with this chapter. I need to post one more.

Divya - Hope that they wont fight? Well KriYansh ka dusraa naam hi Fights and arguments hai ;D

Vaish - I agree tera review zyada important hai irrespective of from whose ID do you review. But mere update pe mere hi ID se. Astonishing. Party? Party means their last day trip partying ;P Aa toh gayi party. Go check. And moreover thanks for the genuone review. I will keep that in mind.

Yogini - I know I had updated after ages, apologies for that. And guts woh toh har ek character mein kut kut ke bhara hai. After all they are SwaRon and KriYansh. Plan kiska tha? Sharon ne execute kar waya. Par dimaag mera tha :P And Kria ke sone ke antics toh puch hi mat. I have seen people doing so. Isiliye yeh idea aaya. But Rey hasne se zyada kahin aur concentrate kar raha tha ;)

Madhu - Itne egarly wait karegi toh yeh end hone pe bhi tu mujhe dhunte hue aayegi, to strangle me to death.

Neha - Glad you enjoyed it. Anyways there's, hopefully, more fun on the way. ;D

Sanskriti - Thanks. I am glad you liked it.

Anushka - Thank you so much. And the next update is just a post away :P

zina.92 -Dont worry, their emotions and thoughts would be cleared soon. I will make sure I leave no confusions at your end.

Sonia - Why shocked? Shouldn't I update this one? Anyways SwaRon and their ideas are hell out of the world. And yes writing such a thing makes me feel better than watching them on D3. Of course she would face a hard time fulfilling the promise. But it indeed would be a pleasure. Trust me on this. KriYansh ka. *well I need to keep my lips sealed* And about your confusion. It was her day-dreaming scene. :P



Thanks to each one of you all, who have liked, reviewed and even the ones who reserved the posta and the unreserved and not to foeget the reserved comments yet not unreserved. Thanks to all of you all. :) Thanks to all, even the ones whom I couldnt mention in the list as well as the ones in the list, above.

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Banner credit goes to blush. Aka Marium.


||Chapter Nine||


Sharon looked at her phone, and instantly a smile crept across her lips, Meet me near the reception, have a surprise for you. Yours' Mr. Flirt.'

He has gone insane, she thought. And within some time she reached the reception just to receive another blow, he was waiting for her with a bouquet of flowers, that had all her favourites- Roses and Orchids. She passed a lovingly look to him but less she knew he was half dead the moment he saw her in the gorgeous green gown with a high slit- giving a proper access to her long, slender legs yet composing himself and his growing desires, he smiled at her, "For you, Love." He handed over the bouquet to her and the other went swirling back, placing his palm on her spine- her revealed back gave him the benefit of lingering on her smooth back. She was puzzled, "We are going out tonight."

"What but why?" She was utter confused. "Because it's the last night for our stay here at this place, so I decided of something special." His husky voice seemed to be troublesome to her. "Should we get Kria along?" To which he just nodded in negation and said, "It's our time. Only ours." His voice was laced with feeling of desire, want, passion and LOVE. She kept staring at those deeply emoting eyes of his. And soon they were out in the cab.

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Kria was finding it hard to get down at any conclusion, she was highly frustrated- she has banged things and people in the past few hours, anyone who came her way at the point was endangering his/her life. The only thing that could make her calm was work, so decided to head over to the work stations.

"Hey! Rohan." She tapped on his shoulder just to be avoided. "Rohan!" She exclaimed much in amazement, "SO Miss. Busy Ghai finally remembers she has friends too." The sarcasm in his voice made her bit her tongue and soon mouthed a sorry. "Anyways what brought you here, to me?"

"Nothing much, just tell me how are the preparations going on?"

"Not much, just checking onto the food." He was going through the menu when she suddenly screamed into his ears, "Have you checked for groundnut contents in the dishes, the mushrooms and a few spices? You know there are people allergic to things. And what about Vegetarian and Non-Vegetarian food arrangements, have you check that?"

"Kria, cool down. One question at a time, okay? Anyways, I am just cross checking the arrangements for veggies and non-veggies, now. And about the allergic ingredients well I was about to check that."

"If you don't mind can I handle that? Please!" she pleaded with utmost cuteness and with a deep sigh he let out with great difficulty, "Then you will have to ask him." He pointed at Rey and her world came crashing down. But she had to; this was the only way to keep those disturbing thoughts away.

"I needed to know the list of dishes in the menu and some other details." She spoke blankly in air. He wasn't listening to her; in fact he gave a cold shoulder to her. "Excuse me, I am talking to you." Her pitch rose. He signalled one of the volunteers and moved a bit ahead, "Madam, please don't disturb him. He has already worked on it." The volunteer bowed in front of her with respect. "And how does he know that I am talking about what? What have I asked to check is not even known to him, I didn't state that. So!" She looked at him with his head tilted in her direction, eavesdropping the conversation. "What has got on to you that suddenly you need someone else to put forward your views to me?"

"It never mattered to you. Did it?" his eyes mirroring hurt, she gulped the lump still stuck to her throat. Unable to handle it anymore she hurried out of the party hall. And Rohan followed her back.

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Sharon was awestruck with the beautiful ambience she was witnessing- feeling loss of words to describe the beauty of the place she stood in front of. "Surprise" the husky whisper into her ears made her jump in her place. Holding her arms, he made her look straight into his eyes, reflecting his heart. Overcoming the shell-shocked state she tried to utter thanks to him but in return he placed his finger at her trembling lips. "I just wanted to convey you, what you mean to me. How grateful do I feel to hold you in my arms? It's just a way to convey my feelings and emotions to you." He gently placed a kiss on her forehead, mesmerising her more. Gaining back the real self she crossed her arms across her chest and asked, "So what is up next?"

"Lovely dim-candle dinner." Making her shiver with the melodious husky tone, he led her to the table. Having some light, hearty talks she enjoyed the new environment, it brought freshness to her life which currently was in disarray.

"Just a dance." Forwarding his hand he smiled at her, as he approached her for dance after their food. And she gladly slid her hand into his. She was determined to give him his share of happiness, he deserved to have. After all what he does for her, he deserves to be served with happiness in his platter of life.

He pulled her, crashing her more pressing his palms at her back. She looked everywhere else and not him, trying to hide the redness of her cheeks. Swaying to the softly playing violins, he lifted her chin yet she refused to match his gaze, the intensity of which was killing her. Tilting a bit forward he whispered, "Sharon, Look at me." She just drew her head to the other direction, making his grip tighten, clutching the delicate mere flesh at her bare back making her curves go flat crushing into his chest. The sudden gasp made him alert of the proximity and the effect it had on her, a smile crept on his skeletal lips. He gently rubbed her back, while his breathe mingled with hers. As soon as his lips found access to her skin, she threw her head back giving him more access to her skin, access to explore as much as he could. Kissing her all over he reached the much awaited spot, her tender lips, shivering with each breath of his that hit them. But the very next second he inched back, leaving a shell-shocked Sharon, she was waiting for his lips to meet hers and he stepped back.

Her eyes widened at him, while he pouted. "I won't until you say it to me, looking straight into my eyes." She was exasperated yet she had to make up something to get it. Giving an approved reaction, she got onto her toes reaching his ears and mustering up all the courage she said, "Swayam, I" his hands snaked around her waist pulling her closer and asked, "Yes, Sharon I am listening"

"Swayam, I. I am"

"You are"

"I am going to"

"You are going to"

And with a thud he had reached the floor being pushed by her and she stuck her tongue out infuriating him more "I am going to run away."

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"Oh come on, Kria. Let's just get on the dance floor." Rohan had literally dragged her to the dance floor. "Rohan, just let me go. I don't feel like dancing yaar." Inspite of her repeated denials, he drew her to the floor and swayed her suddenly, "Kri, it doesn't matter? Just let it go and you will feel better." His words made some sense to her and she finally gave in, Dancing as there is no tomorrow. Seeing her finally distressed, he joined her. The two didn't care as to where were they heading but the world seemed to have not existing for them.

She with a twirl landed into Rey's arms, Rey had a different layer of emotion dominating in those reflective eyes of his.



That's it for the day. Apologies for any error, haven't proof read.

I hope you all remember Rohan,if not then let me remind you he is Friends with Kria and Sharon. He was there during the fest where girls fought with their respective boys and also during KriYam's engagement.

Guys, please make sure you don't put up reserved posts.
And I so wanted this to be the last chapter of this SS but things don't work as i plan them out. So I have another chapter coming up, well I don't know by when. Prior to the end of this year or in the next year.

Please do leave your valuable reviews and not to forget suggestions are always welcomed. And criticism, I am all good with it. So put up all that you feel about this. I surely won't eat you up.

Don't forget to check the works gallery of mine for the ideas I might plot on for the upcoming OneShots {{for both KriYansh as well as SwaRon}}. Please check out the entire page as its unsorted. Do leave suggestions there as well, if time permits.
Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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