Cross Connection SS #2 : A KriYansh and SwaRon story ch10+epi, pg17 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Shenz

Yeh kya tha ????😕

Tune update kiya...
OMG
M so happy...

Par Rey ignoring Kriya...
So sad...
N fir Rohan n Kriya
Ka dance = jealous Rey...

Dats my fav...☺️
Kyunki Jealous Rey ke
Baad he toh milte hai hume
Passionate aur Aggressive KR encounters...😉😆

Loved it...

Thnks 4 updating...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
swaron part was lovely, swayam did this much for sharon, dats cute...bt last me sharon ne jo kia na🤣...maza aaya...kria is a very confused soul...restlessness nd all, nice...bechara rey
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
awesome update...
loved kriya's restlessness...also possessive wala rey...thanks 4the pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
too good !!
wow - ie update !!
the way kriya's behaviour was defined..
and her anxious nature 👏
and possessive rey 😳
i like it 😳

thanks for the PM di
update soon and do PM me
waiting 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
yeh ek chunnu munnu update tha...not fair :/

Swaron moments were too good..

aww Rey hurt and kriya tryin to calm down...

hayee she landed in his arms...

so yeah I liked it...

abhi update sooonnn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
both the swaron and kriyaansh parts were equally good.
rohan part--was a bit of a lagger though according to me that is. and i guess it was needed to push the story forward.
you got a really different writing style shehnaz---
it makes me get glued to your works like fevi kwik.

chutki mai chipkay.: D

loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
swayan and sharon sure have fallen for each other and but are try to retrive back
to confess the love and rey is get irrirated by kriya because she is tell about the
food take fault out and rohan who is this??????????? i have a question
who is friendship is stuck rey and kriya or rohan and kriya...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
first of all wao yaar !!!
as a writer you never fail to surprise me
ur piece always is so clear n seamless
tis update definitely came as a delightful surprise to me
luved the small portion of kriya n rohan they were adorable
coming to swaron wat to say about the date ☺️
it was very romantic n passionate
the whole description was very picturesque n quaint
starting from the cute lilttle message in the beginin to the roses, candle lite dinner to tat passionate dance it was a good blend of everything
sharon toh bohot naughty nikli poor swayam ko beech meih hi chor kar bhaag gayi 😆
looking forward for ur next update .

rosy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
loved d update...swaron date was quite romantic... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Nyce update ... 😃

So swayam wanna spend some quality time with sharon...😊

Lol.. she's making it hard for him with this sexy dress... 😉

Kissi bhi chahiye.. aur demand bhi ni karni.. hadd hai..😛

Rofl.. swayam.. don't play smart..she pushed u on floor.. 😆


Ye rey bhi na full maze le raha hai kriya ke..😛

Even if she wants to remain preoccupied to avoid his thoughts... still she have to talk to him.. lol 😳

Ahem ahem.. she landed in his arms...😉

Lolzz... rey ka iraada kya h aakhir.. i hope nek na ho... bwahahaha 🤣

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