han yahi pyar hai Taarey os part 9:page11

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hello guys ,please muze marna mat par kya Karun jabse Taani gayi hai aur Taarey alag hue hai mere dimag me pata nahi kahanse nayi nayi stories aa rahi hai muze pata hai ki main already do stories likh rahi hoon aur vo aap sabko achi bhi lag rahi hai THANK YOU so much guys aur vo stories main complete karungi par ye story itna dimag me ghum rahi hai so ye bhi start kar rahi hoon and I know jis story me hamare Taarey ho use padhke hum bahot khush honge hai na?
Ye story start hoti hai jab Taani nayi nayi college me aati hai
apne bhai ke college aur phir shuru hoti hai ankhi premkahani
date:14 feb Valentines day
aaj Taani ka Bombay me bhi first day aur st Louis college me bhi vo apne bhai ko surprise dena chahti hai isiliye usne Swayam ko nahi bataya ki vo aa rahi hai vo college me enter hoti hai sab log use dekhte hai kyunki itni inoocent ladki shayad hi unhone dekhi hogi ,vo andar aati hai aur puchti hai
Taani:ji aapne mere bhai ko dekha hai
1 boy:nahi ji kyun aapka bhai koi filmstar hai
Taani:nahi par bahot cute hai agar soche to film hero ban sakte hai
2 boy:oh aisa aur aap aap kya ban sakti hai
Taani:main ji main kuch nahi
1 boy:kyun aap baniye na behenji apne bhai ki vaise bhi aap ho hi behenji jaisi
Taani:sacchi thank u
(itne me vahan Sharon aati hai vo dekhti hai ki ye ladke kisi ladki ko tease kar rahe hai)
Sharon:excuse me
1 boy:lo aa gayi college ki diva
Sharon:ye kya ho raha hai ?
2 boy:kuch nahi chal yar chalte hai sara plan spoil kar diya acha khasa time pass ho raha tha(vo log chale jate hai)
Sharon(Taani ki taraf attitude se dekhti hai):yes who r u?
Taani:main main Taani
Sharon:Taani kaun Taani new admission
Taani:ji ji new admission
Sharon:to princi se milo
Taani:ye prinici kaun hai
Sharon(irritate hoke):look don't irritate me princi matlab principal
Taani:lekin main to yahan bhai se milne aayi hoon
Sharon:bhai kaun bhai
Taani:Swayam
(Swayam ka nam sunke Sharon ke gal lal hote hai )
Sharon(smile karte hue):Swayam tum Swayam ki sis ho
Taani:ji sis
Sharon:i mean behen
Taani:ji behen hoon kahan hai vo?
Sharon:vo canteen me hoga chalo mere sath
(is story Swayam aur Sharon already couple hai )
In the canteen puri gang baithi hai har koi apne me busy hai gang masti karne me itne me jor se avaj aati hai itni jor se ki sab apne kan pe hat rakhte hai
Taani:bhaiii
(sab mudke dekhte hai Taani kisi toofan mail ki tarah daudti hui aati hai aur Swayam ke gale lag jati hai Swayam puri tarah se surprise hai)
Swayam:Taani tum kab aayi I mean muze pata tha ki tum aarahi ho par aise bina kuch kahe
Taani:kya bhai main to aapko surprise dena chahti thi aap to shock lag rahe ho sitti pitti gum ho gayi
Nil:what sitti what
Taani:sitti pitti chodo aap nahi samjhoge jahan pe koi pura word nahi bolta vahan kya koi samjhega
Swayam:matlab
Taani:kuch nahi par bhai aap khush hona hum dono itne sal bad vapas se sath sath maja aayega
Swayam:han meri behen bahot khush hoon aur kyun na hoon meri ladli behen jo hai
Taani:vo to hoon
Vicky:Swayam agar ye bharat milap ho gaya ho to intro karva na
Swayam:han han Yaar Taani ye mere dost hai ye Vicky
Vicky:hi
Swayam:ye Nil ,Simmi,Rinni ,Bharat ,Amar ,Neha aur ye Sharon (Sharon kehte waqt uske expression change hote hai aur sab khanste hai lekin Taani abhi bhi nahi jan pati ki Sharon uski bhabhi hai I mean honevali)
Taani:Hi
All:Hi
Swayam:aur do log bhi hai par abhi vo yahan nahi
Nil:honge bhi kaise love birds hai na busy honge
Taani:aapke yahan birds hai
Vicky:yar Swayam teri behen to bahot sidhi hai yar isko sambhal yahan pe
Swayam:han pata hai
(itne me love birds entry lete hai Rey and Kria )
Rey:hello guys wassup?
Swayam:dude kahan tha tu
Rey:are bataya to tha aaj vo vice principal ke sath meeting thi to vahin the hum
Nil:kyun jhooth bol raha hai aur kis liye bol na sath the are yar pyar kiya to darna kya
Kria:hey Nil just shut up kuch bhi kam kar rahe the
Rey:aur nahi to kya vaise ek minute ye kaun hai
Swayam:han REy ek minute Taani(Taani neha se bat kar rahi hai )
Taani(mudti hai):ji bhai
(Kria se relation ship me hone ka bad bhi 1 second ke liye Rey Taani ki ankhon me kho jata hai )
Swayam:Taani ye mere dost hai Rey aur Kria
Taani:hello aapse milke infact aap sabse milke bahot acha laga (aur Taani ki nazar bhi kuch der ke liye Rey pe ruk jati hai )
Kria:tum Swayam ki behen ho
Taani:ji aur aap
Kria:main Swayam ki dost hoon
Taani:oh to aap meri bhi dost hui aur aap sab sab mere dost hue vaise bhai aaj se mere lecture shuru ho rahe hai to main jaoon
Swayam:lekin Taani aaj to valentines day hai hum sab bahar ja rahe hai
Taani:han to aap jao na bhai
Rey:kyun tum nahi manati valentines day
Taani:nahi aisa kuch nahi mera manana hai ki pyar jatane ke liye ya kehnke liye kisi ek din ki zaroorat nahi pyar me hone vale logonke liye to har din valentines day hona chahiye phir vo pyar kisise bhi ho aapki maa se papase behen se bhai se ya girlfriendse uske liye aapko kisi khas din ki rah dekhni zaroori nahi aur main to vaisi bilul nahi jinse main pyar karti hoon jab mera dil chahe unhe zappi de deti hoon I love u bol deti hoon jaise Bhai I love u (aur Swayam ko hug karti hai)to main jaun
Swayam:ja main thodi der bad college ata hoon phir sath ghar chalenge
Taani:ok Bhai bye guys enjoy
(ye bate sunke Rey bas Taani ki taraf dekhta rehta hai aur Kria Rey ki taraf aur Swayam Sharon ek dusreko)
Kria:kitna sahi kaha na Taani ne
Rey:sirf sahi nahi bahot badi bat kahi usne acha Kria main ata hoon
Kria:aap kahan ja rahe ho
Rey:bas abhi aya just 2 minutes (aur bhagke jata hai )
REy:Taani Taani
Taani(mudke):ji aap yahan
REy:han tumhe pata hai tumhara classroom kaunsa hai
Taani:ji nahi par main dhoondh loongi
Rey:chalo main dikhata hoon
Taani:ji aap kyun taklif le rahe hai
REy:taklif nahi main GS hoon college ka to duty hai meri (itne me samne se Vishakha aati hai jo Kria ki best friend hai vo Taani ko REy sath dekhti hai)
Vishakha:hello REy tum yahan aur ye kaun hai
Rey:ye Taani Swayam ki behen
Taani:hi
Rey:aur Taani ye Vishakha hai hamarehi group ki
Taani:oh acha
Vishkha:hello par tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Rey
Taani:vo main nayi hoon na to ye muze classroom dikhane leke ja rahe hai
Vishkha:nayi vo bhi mid term me
Taani:han kya Karun meri life me na sab kuch late hota hai bahot dhakke khane padte hai
Vishakha :oh whatever chalo REy Taani bacchii nahi vo apna classroom dekh legi
Taani:han main bhi yahi keh rahi thi par inhone kaha ki ye GS hai inki duty hai to
Vishakha:oh Really Rey pata nahi tha kabhi dekhan nahi tha tumhe kisi nayi student ko classroom dikhate hue
Rey(ghusseme):Taani tum thoda aage jao main aata hoon(Taani age jati hai)and you Vishakha tum apne kam se kam rakho got it muze mat teach karo ki mera kam kya hai
Vishakha:main apne kam se kam hi rakh rahi hoon suno REy Kria meri dost hai agar tumne uska dil toda to acha nahi hoga
Rey:what rubbish isme Kria kahanse aayi dekho Taani Swayam ki behen so main uski help kar raha hoon aur rahi bat Kria ki to tum uska tension mat lo samajh gayi I will handle it
Vishakha:you better be
Rey:get lost Vishakha (dono chale jate hai ,Rey Taani ko uska classroom dikhata hai aur bad me puri gang bahar ghumne jati hai )
precap:bahar ghum raha hai par dimag me khayal Taani ka aa raha hai samajh nahi pa raha ki aisa kyun ,yahan Taani bhi pura din Rey ke bare me sochti hai use vo acha lagta hai itne me uski dosti Shivamse hoti hai jo Rey ka dushman hai aur vohi use batata hai ki KRIa aur REy ka affair hai kuch na hote hue bhi Taani is bat se dukhi hai par samjah nahi pa rahi ki kyun?
part1:page 1
part2 :page 2
part3:page 4
part4: page 5
part5:page 6
part6:page8

part7:page9
part8:page 11
part9:page 11
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its awesome start. totally ulta phulta complicated love story
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Please update soon. Awesome concept and love triangle, maybe a foursome.
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awesome start😊
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that was simple great and nice chapter... do continue soon and pm me
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Awasum start
plzz pm me when u update next part
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superb start, i have told u earlier also, u write very very very nicely.
your other 2 OS are brilliant and this also.

if possible please pm me, as i dont come regular here after final
exit of taani, as no taarey, so if possible pm me, so that i can read
all your new OS.

update next part soon.

really liked all your OS, wonderful ideas you have and as i am a huge
fan of taarey, i miss them and get to see them in all the stories of taarey,
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This one is awsm too.. continue soon. :)
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part 2:Taani classroom me chali jati hai aur Rey gang ke pas Taani apni seat pe baithi hai aur itne me ek ladka uske baju me aake baithta hai is ladke ka nam Shivam hai Rey ka dushman Shivam:hi kya main yahan baith sakta hoon?Taani:ya sure baithiye naShaivam:thanks.vaise nayi lagti ho college me
Taani:han nayi hoon
Shivam:han pehle kabhi dekha nahi na to isliiye pucha nam kya hai tumhara
Taani:Taani
Shivam:nice name
Taani:aur aapka
Shivam:Shivam but sab muze shiv bulate hai
Taani:oh ok
Shivam:kya bat hai tumhara mood acha nahi hai kya
Taani:nahi to acha hai kyun?
Shivam:nahi muze aisa laga chodo ye sab bat tum yahan kisiko janti ho kya
Taani:han mere bhai yahan
Shivam:bhai kaun
(Taani Swayam ka nam batanehi vali thi ki Professor aa jate hai aur lecture shuru hota hai isilye Shivam ko pata nahi chalta ki Taani swayam ki behen hai )
(Yahan bahar sab ghum rahe hote hai pehle shopping karte hai phir khana khate hai aur abhi sab band stand pe baithe hai lekin ye sab karte waqt Rey apne mehi khoya hua hai ye bat Kria ko bhi achi nahi lagti lekin vo samajh nahi pati ki kya hua hai par Vishakha ko shaq hota hai )
Vishakha:kya bat hai Rey mood nahi hai tumhara
Rey:nahi aisa kuch nahi
Vishakah:nahi aisa lag raha hai tumhe dekhke
Rey:dekho aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
Vishaka:ok to itna bhadak kyun rahe hi main to aisehi puch rahi thi
Rey:dekho Vishakha itna stupid nahi hoon main ok to apne ye bakvas sawal puch na band karo
Kria:kya bat hai jab dekho tab zagda karte rehte ho Rey vo to bas aisehi puch rahi thi
Vishakha:han Kria bas yunhi sach me
Rey:whatever ab chale main bahot thak gaya hoon
Kria:kya bat hai aaj valentines day hai aur aapne muze I love u bhi nahi bola
Rey:kuch baten boli nahi jati samjhi jati hai
Kria:lekin main vaisi nahi hoon muze bina kahe kuch samajh nahi ata ok ek kam kijiye apni ankhen band kijiye mera face samne laiye aur kahiye I love u
Rey:Kria ye kya zid hai
Kria:han han jid hai bas main jo kahti hoon vo kijiye
(Rey apni ankhen dheerese band karta hai aur uski ankhon ke samne Taani ka chehra ata hai aur vo darke ankhen khol deta hai)
Kria:kya hua Rey aapne to aise ankhen kholi jaiseki aapne mera nahi kisi aur ka chehra dekha ho boliye na
Rey:nahi kria aisa nahi hai chalo chale
(sab log Ghar pe aatne ke liye nikalte hai )
Swayam:guys muze college jana padega Taani ko pick karna hai
Sharon:han Swayam hum to bhul hi gaye the
Swayam:main nahi bhula tha meri pyari behen hai kaise bhul sakta hoon chalo guys phir aap jao main jata hoon bye
Rey:are ruk Swayam main bhi ata hoon
Swayam:tu kyun aa raha hai
Rey:are yar main kuch bhul gaya hoon locker room me vo lene hai muze to chal main bhi ata hoon
Swayam:ok chal
Rey:suno kria tumhe Sharon drop kar degi aaj please
Kria:kyun main bhi aapke sath aati hoon vahanse ek sath jayenge
Rey:nahi kria vahanse muze dad ka kam hai ek vo karne jana hai muze late hoga tum jao na pls
Kria:lekin Rey main aati hoon aap muze bhaga kyun rahe ho
vishakha:nahi kria shayad Rey ko aisa kam hoga jo tum hogi to nahi ho sakta kyun Rey
Rey:dekho Vishakha ye mere aur kria ke bich me hai please u stay out of this
Vishakha:ok
Kria:Rey main aaon
Rey:yar please samajh na
(sab kria ko kehte hai aur Sharon Kria ko drop karne ko nikal jati hai aur Rey aur Swayam College ,Swayam samajh jata hai Ki Rey bahot chidne laga hai aaj kal)
Swayam:kya bat hai dude aaj kal tu kria se irritate ho raha hai
Rey:aisa kuch nahi hai Swayam
Swayam:pakka agar aisa kuch hai to tu muzse share kar sakta hai u know na
Rey:han yar Swayam I know agar kabhi aisa laga to tuzehi bataunga promise(dono smile karte hai)
(Jab dinbhar ye log bahar the tab Taani collge me thi lekin aaj Taani kuch badly badly thi)
Taani:(in her locker room with herself and with Her Krishanji) dekho Krishnaji pata nahi kya ho gaya muze aaj pehla din hai mera aur dekho to mera dil kitna jor se dhadak raha hai han aap aisa mat socho ki ye sab naye atmosphere ki vajase na bilkul nahi ek bar kya dekha maine unhe pata nahi kya ho gaya muze aap samajh rahe ho na main kinki bat kar rahi hoon nahi pehchana aap bhi na krishanji main Rey ki bat kar rahi hoon janti hoon aur samjhti hoon ki pehli bar dekha hai maine aur aisa kya ho gaya muze unko dekhke class room me unhike bare me soch rahi thi library me bhi aur canteen me bhi aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua muze kisikeliye aisa kuch laga hi nahi muze to ladkonki tang khichne me maja ata tha aur vo ek bar meri taraf dekhte hai to pure sharir se ajeeb se bechaini hoti hai sharam se ankhen zukti hai pasine ane lagte hai kuch samjh nahi ata kya ye pehla pyar hai krishanji (phit hosh me aake) chup taani pehla pyar aisa kuch nahi hota aur ye mat bhul tu yahan padhne aayi hai pyar vyar karne nahi aur kabhi aisa kuch socha na to beta teri ticket to kat jayegi sidhe jodhpur ki to dil band dimag khula aur sirf padhai samjh gayi kya Krishanji main hi apne aapko dant rahi hoon aap nahi dant sakte the please please please please aisa khayal bhi mat lana aap to bhagvan ho aapne Radhaji se pyar kiya to kisine kuch nahi kiya lekin agar Taani ne pyar kiya to sab aa jayenge danda leke tauji taiji dadi sab sorry han nahi sochungi nahi sochna hai (ghabrake uthati hai aur classroom jati hai vahan use vapas Shivam milta hai vo use uski dost se milvata hai uska nam hai Ruhi)
Shivam:hi Taani,meet my Friend Ruhi
Taani:hi Ruhi
Ruhi:Hi Taani right?
Taani:yaa
Ruhi:new admission
Taani:han
Ruhi:oh welcome
Taani:thanks vaise aap subah ke lecture ko nahi thi
Shivam:puch mat Taani ye aisehi hai lecture bunk karna iski hobby hai
Ruhi:chup re kuch bhi bolta hai vaise Taani tum to yahan nayi ho to kisiko janti nahi hogi na
Taani:nahi nahi mere bhai hai yahan
Ruhi:bhai kaun bhai
Taani:Swayam
Shivam:Swayam bhai hai tumharah
Taani:han kyun
Shivam:nahi aisehi interesting
Taani:isme interesting kya hai
Ruhi:han vohi kya hai vaise Taani ek bat to hai tera bhai hai bada cute
Taani:han vo to hai
Ruhi:par kya fayda use to Sharon ke siva koi dikhta hi nahi
Taani:matlab
Ruhi:matlab tuze nahi pata kaisi behen hai tu
Taani:kya nahi pata
Ruhi:yahi ki Swayam aur Sharon ek dusreko date kar rahe hai
Taani:what?sacchi muze nahi pata tha
Shivam:kya Taani St Louis ki hottest couple me se hai vo aur vaise bhi is college me dohi to hot couple hai ek Swayam Sharon aur dusara
Taani:dusra kaun
Shivam:is college ka GS aur AGS yani Rey aur kria
Taani:Rey aur Kria couple hai
Ruhi:han tum nayi hona sab pata chal jayega dheere
Taani:Rey aur kria couple (uska moo bahot utar jata hai)
Shivam:(tauntingly)kya bat hai Taani lagta hai tum khush nahi ho rey aur kria ko couple sunke
Taani:nahi aisa kuch nahi muze pata nahi tha na
Ruhi:han Yar vaise ek bat kahun vo kria hai na bahot ziddi aur ambitious hai vo hai na bahot alag hai Rey matlab attitude to Rey me bhi hai bu still he is cute vo na jaisi dikhti hai na vaisi lagti hai na dekhna agar kabhi uske aur uske career ke bich koi aya na even Rey bhi to vo use dump kar degidekh lena
Taani:aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho
Ruhi:sach me Taani vo aisehi hai
Taani:jinhe main janti nahi unke bare me koi rai nahi banati chaliye main chalti hoon
Shivam:are kya hua abhi lecture last vala
Taani:han par mera mood nahi hai bahot thak gayi hoon bye kal milte hai(Ruhi aur Shivam bye karte hai)
Shivam:Rey aur kria ke bare me suna to iski to avaj hi band ho gayi tuze aisa nahi lagta
Ruhi:kuch bhi aisa kuch nahi hai Taani bahot simple and sweet hai
Shivam:han janta hoon soch raha hoon uska fayda karke loon
Ruhi:han kya bolta hai dheere dheere
Shiavm:kuch nahi chal hum to lecture attend karte hai chal
(yahan Taani corridor me chal rahi hai lekin bahot sad hai )
Taani:kyun sad hoon main agar vo kisise pyar karte hai to muze bura kyun lag raha hai kuch bhi to nahi hai hum dono ke bich me phir kyun hey krishanji main kya Karun (sochte sochte chalti rehti hai )
precap:Swayam aur Rey Taani ko lene collge me aati hai lekin Taani Rey ki taraf nahi dekh rahi hai isase Rey pareshan ho jata hai next day kria ko US dance academy se letter ata hai ab kya karegi vo kya Rey khud chahta hai Ki kria jaye akhir kya hai in teeno ki zindagi me
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awesome...taani sad bcoz of k and rey...and rey saw her face...wow...interesting...

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