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Entry 13. A nice one :) I especially liked how at the end without realizing he actually said his feelings in the form of a poem. But I wished it had more of the comic element :)

Thank you. Yes, that was the idea. I wanted him to say those lines without him realising that they formed a poem. I agree the comic element was limited. I tried to create a light hearted story, so didn't bring in any crazy moments. But thanks for the suggestion, will try to bring the house down next time. 😊

Entry 14. When I was reading this one and Khushi answered during Rakhsha Bandhan, I mentally screamed a 'NO!!!!' But of course, Khushi was wrong :) It was after the guest house one. A mistake undone and I loved it :)

Thank you for loving it. Of course, it was the guest house incident, how could we forget those scenes of Khushi sitting with him in the car, resting her head on his shoulder and him taking care of her with so much love. The same morning he had refused to give her a lift in the car even after Nani had asked him to. And here he was, handling her so delicately as if she was the most precious one.