FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED*

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HELLO HELLO HELLO...WELCOME TO THE NEW THREAD OF THE FF TURNAROUND🥳...its all because of u...that I am here..so CHEERS 2u👏...I wanna start off with a lil something that I wrote..A lil something that justifies..my current state of mind..I dunno y I wanna share it..but since I felt it..I will go ahead n post it..

but First here is the link for the 1st thread..


INDEX

CH17b-PG1
Ch18-PG12
CH19-PG22
CH20-PG33
CH21-PG41
Ch22-Pg52
CH23-PG52
CH24-PG70
NOTE-PG77
CH25-PG82
CH26-PG95
CH27-PG102
CH28-PG110
CH29-PG117
CH30-PG125


SO now for the words that I wrote in the company of stars..

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A long day ended with a silent thought...
A long thought ended with a silent hearts distraught.
This heart lost its vision,by looking too closely..
An emotion took over,the feeling of being lonely.
I have written so many words,
Married so many thoughts
But still it feels like a wait..
To write what my heart really wants.
I want to write music..
Sing the unsung song..
I want to dance like crazy..
Feel like myself,sure and strong.
I want to write words with magic..
That transform into reality..
I want to draw my hearts desire..
Befriend my self made destiny.
I am ready to walk,willing to fight...
Just to see my true self come back in sight.
I accept that I am lost, but not that I have lost...
I agree that I am distracted,But not that disconnected.
Just want to fall in love again..
To the first step that will...
Take me back to those realities..
Where I will come back to me...

-Aashna
FIND YOURSELF;
ITS WORTH IT.


Like or comment if u feel like it..or if u relate to it..or if u liked somethin bout it..its ur choice... ..

So i'll cya in the next post..with the next update..😃

And dont forget to grace this thread with all your amazing comments!!!!
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HERE U GO PEEPS...HOPE U LIKE IT...reader discretion is adviced for some parts..17+




Ch17b

Zoya woke up to a beautiful March morning, feeling refreshed, she didn't know why but somehow she felt light and happy, the way she felt back in the day. She bounced off her bed and got ready to spend the day with ammi and Najmaa,making the best of her mini vacation. As Zoya stepped out of the room, the smell of fresh muffins and bread filled her senses. She quickly made her way to the table only to be awestruck by the variety of foods that were laid down...

Zoya-Wow ammi..such amazing food...koi occasion hai kya?? She picked up a muffin and munched on it..as Dilshad smiled and made her way to the breakfast table, setting the plates..

Dilshad-Nahi to, you just enjoy the food..o here they come, she looked as Ayaan and Najma made their way to the table.Dilshad unable to contain her smile, looking at Zoya munching away on everything.

Ayaan-Wow the food looks amazing..

Zoya-OmmUmm O ya its awesome..here try this muffin...its just wow...She spoke her mouth full of food..

Dilshad-Zoya just sit down n eat.

Zoya- Ji ammi..its just that all of these are like my favorite foods..and I couldn't resist, she abruptly stopped analyising her own words when Asad walked out of his room, looking breathtakingly amazing, in his jeans and tee..

He walked ever so close to Zoya, his hands brushing her behind as he crossed her, making Zoya jump, Asad winking at her and taking his seat.

Zoya- Did u do all this Asad??

Asad just smiled and busied himself with his breakfast.

Zoya-Asad tell me.. she demanded.

ASad- Well u know I like healthy food, and this clearly isn't...he continued with his breakfast, Zoya finally taking a seat trying to make sense.

Najma-Zoya try this bread and cheese..its just soo...just try it..

Zoya forgot about her doubt and enjoyed the food, oohing and Aaahing..with every new thing she tried..

Asad enjoyed every bit of entertainment Zoya was providing, finally standing up and making his way towards Zoya.He grabbed her hand, droping the Danish from her hand and making her stand. His free hand quickly settled on her waist and he pulled her close, a slow gasp escaping Zoya's mouth.

Asad- Well am gald you enjoyed the breakfast I arranged for you...and I see you quite enjoyed it...so?? Am I forgiven??

Zoya's eyes went wide, as she heard his cocky comment..

Zoya-What the hell..I knew it,this was all your doing..no doubt it was all my favorite food..I mean only you know what I like..she stopped swallowing her words, realizing the meaning behind them...I uh..I uh mean..ur such a cheapo..ur trying to buy my forgiveness with food...Hawww...apology not accepted...she tried to pull herself out of his grip, but in vain...He just crooked his neck and gave a lopsided smile.

Asad- Oh well how could I forget...He ducked her in his arms and kissed her hard, in front of everybody...only easing his attack when she surrendered...

It was a sweet assault and Asad knew when she inwardly moaned that she liked it..and precisely at that moment he let go..Zoya almost losing her ground, if it weren't for his storng arms..

Asad- Well does that help?? In forgiving me?? Now I did 2 things you really like...His eyes danced with mischief..as he savored the sight of a rattled Zoya.

Dilshad,Ayaan and Najma were shocked their mouths touching the ground, seeing Asad as such, his public display of affection.They couldn't look away as their eyes couldn't believe what they saw.This was a Asad they had never seen, ever.

Zoya stuttered...unable to form a sentence, her body tingling with the kiss, her tongue wanting to taste him...she finally managed to distance herself from him, still fighting for balance..

Zoya-I Uh...n..uh...She couldn't speak, Asad was doing this to her..damn it..

Asad- Well you have 2 hrs for the shoot..so give me your answer then...I gtg..he leaned in and kissed her cheek, n gently squeezed her butt with his hand as he said goodbye and walked away...

The audience gawked wide eyed...while Zoya.finally managed to say something..

Zoya-We are shooting today?? I thought our next schedule wasn't until California...

~~

Ayaan-Bhaijaan are you sure you want to do this?? He still couldn't gauge at the new Asad he was encountering. He had never seen his brother being so..flamboyant..so alive...so..he still couldn't find the right words to explaining what he was experiencing. His brother was busy conspiring against Zoya, coming up with ways of getting her to forgive him

Ayaan-Don't you think the conventional I am sorry please forgive me will work?? Are you sure you have to plan such a grand scheme to get her forgiveness?? I honestly don't know where you're going with it..

Asad laughed...the devil in him rubbing his hands in anticipation...Tum nahi samjhoge..I know Zoya..and I know what I am doing...you just play along..and enjoy the show...He patted his shoulders and walked away...leaving behind an even more confused Ayaan...

~~

Zoya walked on the sets, her resolve reworked and revamped...She knew Asad too well to fall in his trap, hell she wont forgive him even if he knelt on his knees..put 100 puppies in front of her and cried her a river..NO SHE WONT...She saw Ayaan at the corner sitting on his chair and rushed up to him wanting to know the reason behind this sudden shoot...

Zoya- Ayaan how come we are shooting?? Wanst the next shoot happening outdoors??

Ayaan looked up and got into his character..Well Zoya we don't know how but we missed a very crucial scene of the movie, and we need to get it done before we head out, so we decided on doing it ASAP, tum to jaanti ho naa that me and Humeira leave for SF day after tomorrow..So we only have today and tomorrow to get it done...Ayaan plyed innocent..hoping that Zoya bought the lie...

Zoya-Oh I see..n what exactly is this scene?? She eyed him suspiciously..

Ayaan-Uh..oh..uh why why don't you get ready..and I will send you the lines, so you can rehearse...I mmm mmujhe abhi kuch set karne jaana hai...so ya see you on the set...with that he ran...going as far from the line of fire..

Zoya- I know its all your doing Mr Asad Ahmed Khan...you just want to spend more time around me, and this is how you choose to do it..but I am not going to let you win..HA HA ..no not at all..cos Paybacks A bitch..n its sure gonna come and bite your behind...She smirked and made her way to get ready.

~~

It was Zoya's time to swallow her words, for what Asad had planned was pure cruel. They were to shoot for a romantic scene,or rather a steamy scene, where the characters make out after a fight they have..Oh and where they make out...in the bathroom...

Zoya's body shivered with rage, thinking about the eveil genius ,Mr Asad Ahmed Khan, he had very well utilized his resources in creating a scene very similar to a moment that had happened between them when they were first married.. Arrghh...she was mad...and helpless..she couldn't back off, she had to deal with it..and face that..Arrgh..she walked out of her room, dressed in a short bathrobe, not at all looking forward to the scene.

~~

Asad on the other hand quite enjoyed the sight in front of him, Zoya looked drool worthy in her baby pink robe, her hair damp and let loose, her cheeks red with anger, and her eyes, showing the nervousness she tried to mask.

He inwardly patted himself for coming up with such a plan, knowing very well what he did to her, and how she lost her restraint everytime they were close. He knew Zoya had already kinda forgiven him, but he wanted to make sure and he knew his path was a sneaky one but unless she talked to him, he wouldn't be able to express his true regret.At this point all he wanted was his old Zoya to resurface, so he could apologize to her sincerely.

Ayaan-So the shot is ready Zoya you have just come out of the bath and it goes like this...blah blah blah blah..n u both end up fighting...He just storms out to the washroom midway during the fight..making you even more angry...so after 10 minutes of huffing and puffing...n not able to take his cool disposition you barge into the washroom..only to find him in his towel...u almost bump into him as the sash of ur robe comes in ur feet n u slip...ur rob coming a lil undone and u falling onto him..so lets start from the top...he looked away..unable to keep up with his poker face...

Zoya stared at Asad, and if looks could kill Asad would have been turned to ash in an instant...She growled at the mean scoundrel, for he had depicted every detail to the T, pullin it out from their lives. Ya ya it was as filmy as could be, but thats what had happened between them, 2 months in the marriage, when they had fought over some petty household expectations...how the situation ended...she didn't want to relive...the blush on her cheek proving the end..

Asad met her eyes and held it, takin in her anger and knowing exactly where her mind was wandering off to, all visible in her eyes and when her cheeks turned red...his ego shot up..he had hit the home run...Zoya was already bothered...He winked at her and retained his position.

And action...

The first part of the scene was easy, the only inconvience was Zoya's stingy robe...but she made it through...and after around 5 takes they had what they wanted...

And Cut...Mr Khan please go change..and we'll resume with the next shot...

Zoya felt nervous as she prepped for the next scene...Zoya breathe...you are a professional..dont let him win..u can do it gal..he cannot affect you..ha ha laughed her inner self at the last sentence..swaying her confidence as she walked up for the scene.

And action...

Zoya opened the door to the washroom and rushed in...but instead of slipping she stood still...right in front of her eyes was a sight that caught her breath...her pupils turning dark..with Desire??? She didn't know but boy was the sight worthy of being the 8th wonder of the world..Asad was ...she couldn't put it in words..wrapped up in a red towel...his body was glistened with water droplets..his form..his form was a sculpture in motion..every cut, every bump was magnified, his flat sculpted core, his storng bulging arms...his clenched jaws..his protruding nerves..everything was greek god personified...Zoya didn't know when was the last time she had so ardently adored his form..Heck he had gotten better with time..glorifying the thought that men..do get better looking with time...

Zoya?? Her name jerked her out of her drooling session,making her utterely embaressed at gaining awareness..

I uh...umm.cccaaan wwee do it aagain please..she stuttered..giving in all that she got not to look at that gloating jackasss...

Sure...take 2...And Action...

This time around Zoya successfully made it thorugh the entry and slipped rite in his arms..but then..all was lost...Zoya forgot her lines the moment she came in his physical contact..her eyes..losing themselves in his...

Asad held her close...his heartbeat reacting to her hand on his chest, right above his heart...he liked it...her being close to him...Gently he blew on the loose strand of hair that was marring his view..making Zoya shiver in his arms, her eyes shutting in anticipation..Asad's face was very close, his breath..tickiling her under her ear...Zoya open your eyes, say your lines don't let him win...came a voice inside..and her eyes shot open...She tried getting up...stumbling on the dialogue..but Asad just flipped her around, caging her between his body and the wall..

He leaned in to inhale her scent making Zoya almost moan, her nail digging thorugh his bare chest..He groaned..at her gesture..closing in..gently gliding his nose on the curve of her neck...No dialogues were spoken..raw emotions turning up the heat in the room...Zoya's hands were regaining their confidence as they began to explore his body..his naked form...the only clothing of resistance..his towel..

Asad tactfully maneuvered around her body,his hands teasing her..his kisses breaking her restraint.Ke kissed her everywhere but her lips, making her long for him...he carefully avoided her soft spots...passing by..yet ignoring..She moaned his name...pushed in his body, pleaing for him to ease her of this agony, but he resisted..Slowly he kissed his way up to her ear n whispered...

Asad- Zoya...

Zoya-Asad please...she begged...

Asad-Zoya first tell me..do u forgive me??..

Zoya-Umhmm..Asad..She nodded..wanting him to take over..and her respond did just that..

Asad finally possessed her lips...kissing her..and pouring sweet nothings in between..his hands becoming desperate to feel her skin...and so they made their way to her robe,and just as Zoya felt his cold hands on her warm waist..she jumped...breaking the spell...making Zoya gasp..she had lost herself once again..that too in front of the crew...n now..OMG all that they did was not even in the script..she panicked..and she pushed Asad aside...unable to look up...OMG OMG OMG...was all she could say.. she looked around scared to face the crews reaction, but when she did...there was no one around...the room was empty..the door shut...

Zoya- What the hell..where is everybody...OMG OMG...whats happening...

Asad walked upto her and held her by her shoulder..forcing her to look at him...

Asad- Well..he promted...

Zoya's eyes went wide...as she finally registered..what had just happened...this was all a setup...Asad had set her up..this had nothing to do with the movie...she gasped her hands covering her face..her eyes wide as saucers..

Asad..smirked...as Zoya finally calmed down, her panic turning into anger..as she walked towards him..n punched him in his guts...Oww came the response, but he was quick to bounce back.

Zoya-You scoundrel..you..OMG..u did this all..this was a set up wasn't it...she smacked him on the chest...Asad enjoying her snarl...

Asad- Well whatever it takes to get your forgiveness...he winked...

Zoya didn't know what to say..she was just tongue tied...infact...if she wasn't angry for being set up...she would have applauded Asad's plan...heck he had her going..she fell for it..n no matter what it was pure genius..but there was no way in hell she would acknowledge his victory..

Zoya-Well it seems like you lost...

Asad's smile didn't falter..infact his grin got wider...

Asad-No I didn't..u accepted my apology..

Zoya-Hah...u r dreaming Mr Khan...I would never..

Asad-O yes you did...he countered.

Zoya- O please shed some light on ur delusion

Asad- Well if you say so...I asked you to forgive me..when I was caressining ur back, my lips enjoying the feel of ur smooth silky neck...n u nodded and accepted... He smirked again..confidently leaning on the wall unaffected by his lack of clothing..

Zoya's cheeks turned red...as the image replayed in her head..

Zoya- That doesn't count...

Asad- N why is that??

Zoya-I uh I umm...meri marzi...I said it doesn't count so it doenst count...she stammered..

Asad walked in closer...and leaned in..

Asad-Very well then...I'll think of something else..but be warned..this was just the trailer...He winked and left Zoya to figure his words out.

~~

The following week was nothing but torture for Zoya (in a good way but she wouldn't acknowledge that)... Asad had sent everyone including Mango to his holiday home..leaving Zoya in his mercy...

Every night Zoya would be hot and bothered...angry at him..but more angry at her..for not being able to stand her ground...Asad worked in such a way.that by the end of every encounter she had with him..she would open her eyes to find herself in his arms...she just didn't know how..n the worse things when she accused him n he countered..Zoya having no answer to his question...Did he initiate anything?? N she would be stumped..She was no way going to tell him..that is was him..flaunting his rock solid body..walking in nothing but shorts...that made her swoon..she was no way going to tell him..that..even his unintentional touches were leaving her craving for more...his closeness making her sink in his presence...NO WAY...NEVER!!! Well no doubt he did other sweet things for her...starting with her favorite foods,..dvd's and cd's of her favorite movies and shows...professional messages at home...all the gadgets she needed to play with...flowers, chocholates..everything she liked doing was ready for her when she woke up...Asad had gone above and beyond her expectations for getting an apology...but it all faded in comparision..the way it all ended...her in Asad's arms..

AAA...Zoya screamed..grabbing her head n squeezing it...her body screaming for release...she was frustrated...she didn't know what to do..her anger becoming more and more volatile...as she failed in controlling herself...Damn that jackass..

And right then Asad walked in...wearin his shorts an a loose ganji...and before he could say or do anything..Zoya snapped..

Zoya- Just stay away from me...I don't want you near me...I don't want to talk to you..or see your face..stop with all this nonsense...and stop playing with me..I don't like it at all...so just leave me alone...I forgive you..if that's what you want...but just get out of my face..I've had enough of you..I still remember each and every word you said..n getting me all ooo I want Asad.Asad kiss me...Asad..take me...its not going to get you anywhere.hell..this way you'll only get my body..and not my heart n soul...so if u want my body..n that's wat u care bout..than I applaud u...u won...u won my apolgy...coz guess what MR ASAD AHMED KHAN...you can sleep with me rite now..n I'll let u...she snarled..

Asad stood still...taking in every word Zoya said..finally walking in to put her dinner on her night stand and walking out..without saying anything.

~~

Asad and Zoya didn't talk after that...the past 3 days went in dead silence...Asad busied himself in his work, while Zoya spent most of her time with Nikhat..

Ayaan and Humeira were already in SF...while Dilshad and Najma were on their way back..



~~

Asad had finally decided let go...he no longer expected forgivness from Zoya...it was hers to give..not his to snatch...he felt that with time..his Zoya had changed and she was no longer the same girl that forgave him for the biggest mistakes of his life.He had to deal with the fact that they were no longer in the same place..Zoya no longer his wife...a truth that hurt him the most...but the sooner he accepted it the better his future would be.. he loved the Zoya he knew in his past..but he wasn't sure about the Zoya today... Love would happen if it was meant to be ,he had left it all to Allah to steer him in the right direction and he knew that he will give him a sign,in which direction to move...With that he grabbed his bags and made his way to the airport..He and Zoya were flying to San Fransisco, the city where they first fell in love.


Ahem Ahem...so??? did u like Asad n his tactics for forgivness?? did it make it up for all the sadness n the hate for his behaviour??? Well u know the drill...COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE.

. COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE.. COMMENT..LIKE..

n ya the end is not sad..as its just gonna get better with the next updates..I promise..😃..


Chalo I gtg now..

BTW THANKS TO ALL OF U..FOR ALL UR COMMENTS IN THE OLD THREAD...N I HOPE U DO THE SAME HERE..N EVEN FASTER THIS TIME..😃..


Also..I guess a request was granted and I did input some filmy scenes in this update..U know who u are..😉..i'll let u knw wen u comment😉..n everyone else..u'll knw soon also..LOL...or u would already knw if u read the comments..or my response to those comments..SO YA I DO RESPOND TO EACH N EVERY COMMENT..FYI


Also..DO READ THE PEOTIC BABBLE IN MY 1ST POST ON THIS THREAD N LEAVE A COMMENT..would love to read ur POV...


Chalo enjoy..n cya soon...😃

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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congratulation for new thread
update soon
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Congrats 🥳 🥳 🥳

Please update soon 😊
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Congrats for the new thread.. 🥳 [:D/]

Nice update... I liked it when Asad steps down n makes a resolve that He'll wait for Zoya to forgive him not pester her anymore.

They should fall in love again as I think they're not in love anymore but just physically attracted and they remember what they both can do to each other's bodies.

Please update soon n pm me for it.
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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congratulation on your new thread
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i want to know what asad is going to do next

to win back zoya
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Originally posted by: Linsie

i want to know what asad is going to do next

to win back zoya


Updating in 15 minutes..so wait upp😃
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I have send you a buddy request. Accept karo. 😊
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Congrats for new thread🥳
update soon😊

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