finally my comments for chapter 17b:
Zoya-Wow ammi..such amazing food...koi occasion hai kya??
yeah occasion toh hai...firstly tat this is an happy update and secondly its on a new thread😳😆
Dilshad,Ayaan and Najma were shocked their mouths touching the ground, seeing Asad as such, his public display of affection.They couldn't look away as their eyes couldn't believe what they saw.This was a Asad they had never seen, ever.
well im shocked too...is this really the same Asad we saw in all the previous chapters...such PDA by AAK😲(anyways good for us😉)
i just loved the whole update...finally a very happy shappy update...it definitely did TURNAROUND as u had said earlier😉
Zoya- Just stay away from me...I don't want you near me...I don't want to talk to you..or see your face..stop with all this nonsense...and stop playing with me..I don't like it at all...so just leave me alone...I forgive you..if that's what you want...but just get out of my face..I've had enough of you..I still remember each and every word you said..n getting me all ooo I want Asad.Asad kiss me...Asad..take me...its not going to get you anywhere.hell..this way you'll only get my body..and not my heart n soul...so if u want my body..n that's wat u care bout..than I applaud u...u won...u won my apolgy...coz guess what MR ASAD AHMED KHAN...you can sleep with me rite now..n I'll let u...she snarled..
😲😕 dint expect her to react like this😭
Asad had finally decided let go...he no longer expected forgivness from Zoya...it was hers to give..not his to snatch...he felt that with time..his Zoya had changed and she was no longer the same girl that forgave him for the biggest mistakes of his life.He had to deal with the fact that they were no longer in the same place..Zoya no longer his wife...a truth that hurt him the most...but the sooner he accepted it the better his future would be.. he loved the Zoya he knew in his past..but he wasn't sure about the Zoya today... Love would happen if it was meant to be ,he had left it all to Allah to steer him in the right direction and he knew that he will give him a sign,in which direction to move...With that he grabbed his bags and made his way to the airport..He and Zoya were flying to San Fransisco, the city where they first fell in love.
truly this part was my favourite coz here our character has grown...he has realised a very BIG thing...
SAN FRANSISCO...yipeee...its where they are gonna fall in love all over again...SECOND TIME!(i hope im not wrong)😊
p.s since im stalikg ur ff...i guess u accepted @starstuck ki request😆
p.p.s arreee i forgot...A BIG HUG FROM ME TO YOU!❤️😆😉
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