FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED*

Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

I just realized I'm so late that now its time for the next update 🤣

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Well...Hello everyone..🥱...Cutting to the chase...my week has been nothing but an uphill climb with piles of work on my back and a weiredly all over the place personal life......(If this were bitstrips...I would be gettting crushed between a rock and a hard place..😳 LOL...) But anyways..Im getting no time to sit back n think...leavin me no ideas or words to write...I just hope u guys will be okay with me posting next week..I'll try to be on top of things by then...but still my frequency depends on my work load n my free time😕...Darn it..I have so many ideas running in my head..n I just cant seem to stop them long enough to take them n write them down...SO Peeps..please bear with me for a week..n will respond to ur comments along with some updates (will try on multiple ones😳)..

Apart from that I have a few queries I wanted to throw out there and get ur responses on that..

1. Do u want a SS a prequel to this story?? How Asad and Zoya came about...uptill their Las Vegas trip?? Lemme know...n if I get enough response on that I will..try to pen it down...The idea of their past is very colorful indeed...😆

2. As for a new FF...I have this story in mind..which is kinda..umm..nt straight forward...is all I can say as of now..do u guys suggest I should give u somethin leanin towards..umm..a lil...not dark..but..findind love at the wrong time..and with the wrong person kinda thing?? Again lemme know..ur responses will determine..if I should invest my brain cells in this story's conception...

3. Bout this FF now...how far do u wnat me to stretch this..cos m thinkin another..umm 5-10 chapters max...my ideal plan is to end it at 30..but the way I write...it ends up to be very long updates for starters..n then the storyline..adds on more chapters..so pls suggest..if my chapters need to be more compact rather than long...n will try to work around it..

4.Lastly..🤓😆.. I wanna try this concept I have in my head...n would make a post on it...depending on ur response (once again) and ur support to be onboard n contribute...

I dunno if ur aware of this kinda game..

you are to write a sstory...as a group.. 1 person starts..is allowed to speak/write one sentence of the story..n then the next one speaks/writes another sentence..in continution..and so...on...the story gets built..the end result unxexpected...n the journey of the story a fun one to read...so I was thinking...I start with a one shot...the intorduction of the story...and then...then next person..writes their bit...could be a para..could be a full 1shot..u decide...n then the next one adds on to it...leading up to an unexpected story...Kya kehte ho?? I hope m not confusing u?? Well lemme knw..bout this one..without fail..n accordingly..will create a post...

Now m gonna let u go...n thank u for readin all through my babble..😆..I'll cya next week...with an update or more...(fingers crossed on the more😳)

n thank u bein ur awesome selves...u all r my rockstars..🤗

O n hey...so leave ur comments on my points..LOL

Cheers!!!😃

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

1. Do u want a SS a prequel to this story?? How Asad and Zoya came about...uptill their Las Vegas trip?? Lemme know...n if I get enough response on that I will..try to pen it down...The idea of their past is very colorful indeed...😆 .. hmmm sounds good if you have the time and depend on the number of vote😆 😆

2. As for a new FF...I have this story in mind..which is kinda..umm..nt straight forward...is all I can say as of now..do u guys suggest I should give u somethin leanin towards..umm..a lil...not dark..but..findind love at the wrong time..and with the wrong person kinda thing?? Again lemme know..ur responses will determine..if I should invest my brain cells in this story's conception... ... why dont you come up with a trailer...promo for your new story which way it leads and see the respond...from readers...

3. Bout this FF now...how far do u wnat me to stretch this..cos m thinkin another..umm 5-10 chapters max...my ideal plan is to end it at 30..but the way I write...it ends up to be very long updates for starters..n then the storyline..adds on more chapters 👏 👏 👏 ..so pls suggest..if my chapters need to be more compact rather than long...n will try to work around it.. haas a writer... your write base on your imaginations.... why dont just write them completely finish it... then divide it to chapters base on the length

4.Lastly..🤓😆.. I wanna try this concept I have in my head...n would make a post on it...depending on ur response (once again) and ur support to be onboard n contribute...

I dunno if ur aware of this kinda game..😲 😲

you are to write a sstory...as a group.. 1 person starts..is allowed to speak/write one sentence of the story..n then the next one speaks/writes another sentence..in continution..and so...on...the story gets built..the end result unxexpected...n the journey of the story a fun one to read...so I was thinking...I start with a one shot...the intorduction of the story...and then...then next person..writes their bit...could be a para..could be a full 1shot..u decide...n then the next one adds on to it...leading up to an unexpected story...Kya kehte ho?? I hope m not confusing u?? Well lemme knw..bout this one..without fail..n accordingly..will create a post... interesting... for fun... will increase the forum activity ... every one have something to say... 👏

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laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Firstly a prequel sounds like a very good idea and exciting if it a SS...

this FF can have an ending at 30 as you planned,bcoz now both the lovebirds are back in action there is nothing much to write abt..well I still feel Asad should know Zoya's sacrifice for his family...

We as sincere fans of your writing support you and love your work..So pour in your thoughts..

Lastly I wish you have all the strength to fulfill all your work..dont worry abt updates and concentrate on your work dear..we can wait...take care

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Hey 😃

Firstly about this FF i just want to know who Asad will react when he will know about what Dilshad did before, but seriously take your time we love this story and i think that everyboby will reat it no matter when you will have the time to udapte it 😎😊

And i'm okay with all you ideas and i will love to read another FF from you 😃

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Applef

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

hey, that was an awesome update..

zoya's birthday..

and finally they are being all themselves..

that was hot..😳

and I am really glad that if you write more..😃

or new ff..

I'm all set to read those..

update soon..

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

I want the prequel asap n also a promo of ur new FF😃😃...as for this FF,u can end it wenever u want-I just love it🤗

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Its k dear take your time and take decision what you feel is right
thanx for pm

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Young And Horny!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Dude! this one is for Sadie,

Why does Aashna get the best of your stuff.

I also suffer from Asad-i-tis.

What do I have to do, Beg borrow or steal.

Love this one. Hotwa! My loins on fire wa!

On a serious note - Love all your banners. You are very creative. Most like a professional.

Love

Juliet

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Young And Horny!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

Dear Aashna,

Here is some constructive criticism, Don't kill me just yet:

1. Do u want a SS a prequel to this story?? How Asad and Zoya came about...uptill their Las Vegas trip?? Lemme know...n if I get enough response on that I will..try to pen it down...The idea of their past is very colorful indeed...😆

Ans: Darling it is your story. Why do you need approval. Say I say yes great but don't like it when you post or I say no and you don't and tell you lose out on creating an amazing epic. A reader never knows what is in store it is upon the writer to grab attention. I would go with my gut. And I will read anything you dish out.

2. As for a new FF...I have this story in mind..which is kinda..umm..nt straight forward...is all I can say as of now..do u guys suggest I should give u somethin leanin towards..umm..a lil...not dark..but..findind love at the wrong time..and with the wrong person kinda thing?? Again lemme know..ur responses will determine..if I should invest my brain cells in this story's conception...

Ans: I will love dark or tortured, There is FF on IF called the Dark Passion, I am an ultimate fan of that. I count days for the update. So yes Dark can be good But if you show" Punar Vivah" or turn Asad into Akbar with his ballerina skrits in a harem. Count me out. This whole married to someone loving someone else or male got ballistic in the heat and sleeps around in hundreds and woman sulking at home. Not for me.

Also if you still care to read my feed back, then there is more. I hate Asad Crying. COme On! why should a man cry. Be a man not a wuss. So the day you have any update that says "And tears rolled down his eyes" - blah blah blah... I will roll on the floor and will not comment on that update.

3. Bout this FF now...how far do u wnat me to stretch this..cos m thinkin another..umm 5-10 chapters max...my ideal plan is to end it at 30..but the way I write...it ends up to be very long updates for starters..n then the storyline..adds on more chapters..so pls suggest..if my chapters need to be more compact rather than long...n will try to work around it..

Ans: Go for it! From what I know every one likes😃 your long. Me included.

4.Lastly..🤓😆.. I wanna try this concept I have in my head...n would make a post on it...depending on ur response (once again) and ur support to be onboard n contribute...

I dunno if ur aware of this kinda game..

you are to write a sstory...as a group.. 1 person starts..is allowed to speak/write one sentence of the story..n then the next one speaks/writes another sentence..in continution..and so...on...the story gets built..the end result unxexpected...n the journey of the story a fun one to read...so I was thinking...I start with a one shot...the intorduction of the story...and then...then next person..writes their bit...could be a para..could be a full 1shot..u decide...n then the next one adds on to it...leading up to an unexpected story...Kya kehte ho?? I hope m not confusing u?? Well lemme knw..bout this one..without fail..n accordingly..will create a post...

Ans: That is a great idea, I have seen that play in IF before but more like a question and answer. But you should know every one is on different time zones. So give it a shot and see how it works.

I may not be very active but will drop in from time to time.

I have this song stuck in my head:

Na na na...Na na na...Na na na...Na na nana na...

Give me some sunshine
Give me some rain
Give me another chance
I wanna grow up once again

Love

Juliet.

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