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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jawria123

Omg it was so hot 😳



Thank u 😃



Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wow tis is hawt...

superb n amazing...
luv it...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...



Thank u so very much..m glad u liked it..😃



Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing update...loved it to bits🤗...n as I've said 'r too good in writing romance😳😳...continue soon😊😊

P.S.-I told I would spam last time but couldn't since I'm really busy these days🥱but I will do it this time...pakka😃



Thank u thank u thank u...m glad that u enjoyed the update...n hey thank u for appreciating my writing..😳

n as for spamming...do wat u can m all for it...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

thanks for the pm...




Originally posted by: Linsie

there are united... through love and passion... and by
bonding as husband and wife...


Originally posted by: Linsie

their life started... beautifully again...



Originally posted by: Linsie

totally hottt update ☺️ ☺️


Originally posted by: Linsie

Linsie..

once again..U ROCK👏 thank u for all that many comments


🤗 🤗 😆 😆


Originally posted by: Linsie

dreaming about the many possibilities of tommorow, the stars above writing their new chapter...in their novel of love..👏 👏 👏

Truly the state of their hearts..the place where they are..😳 😳

was written in the stars... 👏 👏 👏 👏


Originally posted by: Linsie

Zoya was pulsating happiness, 😃 her smile, her voice, her laughter filling the house with its long due joy. 😃 😆 But seeing her so happy pricked Asad's heart, 😔 his guilt resurfaced, making him remorseful of every insolent word he had ever directed towards Zoya. 😒 ... is high time to let go of the past and move forward ... dont miss your second chance



WOOHOOO..SO MANNY COMMENTS...FROM U ONCE AGAIN...N I DIDNT EVEN POST ALL HERE...BUT STILL M HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY...THANK U SO VER MUCH FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENTS..TRULY MAKES ME VERY HAPPY TO READ THEM ALL..QUOTING THE LINES THAT U LIKE...SO SWEET...THANK U GAL



Originally posted by: Linsie

1. Do u want a SS a prequel to this story?? How Asad and Zoya came about...uptill their Las Vegas trip?? Lemme know...n if I get enough response on that I will..try to pen it down...The idea of their past is very colorful indeed...😆 .. hmmm sounds good if you have the time and depend on the number of vote😆 😆
2. As for a new FF...I have this story in mind..which is kinda..umm..nt straight forward...is all I can say as of now..do u guys suggest I should give u somethin leanin towards..umm..a lil...not dark..but..findind love at the wrong time..and with the wrong person kinda thing?? Again lemme know..ur responses will determine..if I should invest my brain cells in this story's conception... ... why dont you come up with a trailer...promo for your new story which way it leads and see the respond...from readers...

3. Bout this FF now...how far do u wnat me to stretch this..cos m thinkin another..umm 5-10 chapters max...my ideal plan is to end it at 30..but the way I write...it ends up to be very long updates for starters..n then the storyline..adds on more chapters 👏 👏 👏 ..so pls suggest..if my chapters need to be more compact rather than long...n will try to work around it.. haas a writer... your write base on your imaginations.... why dont just write them completely finish it... then divide it to chapters base on the length
4.Lastly..🤓😆.. I wanna try this concept I have in my head...n would make a post on it...depending on ur response (once again) and ur support to be onboard n contribute...
I dunno if ur aware of this kinda game..😲 😲

you are to write a sstory...as a group.. 1 person starts..is allowed to speak/write one sentence of the story..n then the next one speaks/writes another sentence..in continution..and so...on...the story gets built..the end result unxexpected...n the journey of the story a fun one to read...so I was thinking...I start with a one shot...the intorduction of the story...and then...then next person..writes their bit...could be a para..could be a full 1shot..u decide...n then the next one adds on to it...leading up to an unexpected story...Kya kehte ho?? I hope m not confusing u?? Well lemme knw..bout this one..without fail..n accordingly..will create a post... interesting... for fun... will increase the forum activity ... every one have something to say... 👏



NOTED...I WILL TAKE ALL UR OPINION INTO CONSIDERATION..N MITE CHUCK THE LAST IDEA...N THANKS FOR THE ADVICE OF WRITING IT ALL DOWN N THEN BREAKIN IT DOWN INTO CHAPTERS..GOOD IDEA😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Wow...prfct...awesum...luvd ut...thnks



THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃


Originally posted by: anopama

awesome update
the r finally one together again
loved ur songs ,poetry at the beginning of each
chapter.continue soon
lets she their journey progress




Thank u so very much for a lovely comment...m so happy that u enjoyed the update...n my songs n my poetries...😃


Originally posted by: Ramlath

mindblowing update...loved it...😃thanks fr pm...😊 pls update soon...



Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: mariam1368

wow wonderful update
thanks for the PM :)



Thank u 😃


Originally posted by: Reyansh23

Heyy...read d last 2 updates together...
D jealous Asad n dere way back to dere new old home...
Asad bringing Zoya to her original bold avatar ...
N d last part...Itz ws Hott...so dey r one again ...waitng fr more bday plans no...



Hey there..thank u for takin the time n commentin...n m glad to read that u enjoyed both the updates...n found them enjoyable..n u like Asad and Zoya's growing relationship..😃

Originally posted by: awesome

Awesome part
Loved it



Thank u so very much😃





Thank u😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ok first of all I'm so sorry for commenting so late I'm an idiot i know but my college has started and my psychology teachers keeps talking about some shit! 😆


Second thing I'm not gonna say much about this chapter except for just one thing that this part was different than any other erotica Ive ever read, usually an erotica is hot or cold shower worthy or even pukeworthy but this one was not only hot but it had emotions too, it wasn't plain sex, it was love making and i really enjoyed reading it (obvious reasons apart 😆)

And thanks for giving me my birthday sex, i mean Zoya's birthday sex 🤣



Koi nai...I survived...on the fact that u commented...der se hi sahi...n hota hai yaar...life..n college n other stuf..all cool gal...hopefully u listened to the professors..n learnt somethin..😆

N gal m glad that it came out to be classy n not trashy...PHEW😳...cos there's a thin line n I didnt want to cross that...😕

N chalo m happy to grant 1 more ou ur whacky wishes...JK😆


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

What should i expect in the next update ^_^



I guess u already know that by now...😆




Hmmm😛...U need to talk to perfectionist2...she was really upset..😆 as to why u dont post such things for her ...so ya..😛


O here is wat she said..

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Dude! this one is for Sadie,

Why does Aashna get the best of your stuff.
I also suffer from Asad-i-tis.
What do I have to do, Beg borrow or steal.
Love this one. Hotwa! My loins on fire wa!
On a serious note - Love all your banners. You are very creative. Most like a professional.
Love
Juliet





Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I just realized I'm so late that now its time for the next update 🤣


O ya damn late...I tell ya...wat should be the punsihment for that huh???😲😆



Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ok first things first, update whenever u want i mean you would still update before i update any of my stories 🤣


now coming to your questions point by point

1 - I was going to PM you to give us outtakes of what happened pre- faux divorce so hell yeah i want a prequel

2 - Dark FF? Um, sure anything you write will be good 😃

3 - Can't this FF be like never ending 🤣

4 - I'm sorry aashna but this concept has been tried and tested and failed i mean people do take part enthusiastically n then back off when the time comes to write. we ourselves had started a collab i had even posted the first chapter but the other writers do not update any longer. But hey, if u wanna go ahead n try it then that will be great I might participate too 😃😃



Hmm...everthing noted...n considered..n will be implememnted...

prequel..or rather in ur words..outtakes..will see the light of day...😉

As for this story never ending..I think mujhe hi joote chappal padenge if I stretch too long..so I guess I'll end it where it feels rite..😆


For the new FF...I guess thats hapenning n as for the dark part bout it..it will be umm..kinda a lil offbeat..n maybe a lil towards a mystrey of sorts...so lets c...I'll come up with a teaser soon I guess...😃


n the last bit bout the idea..m gonna chuck it...I lost the fire to do so the moment I wrote it down...too much work..😆




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Firstly a prequel sounds like a very good idea and exciting if it a SS...

this FF can have an ending at 30 as you planned,bcoz now both the lovebirds are back in action there is nothing much to write abt..well I still feel Asad should know Zoya's sacrifice for his family...
We as sincere fans of your writing support you and love your work..So pour in your thoughts..
Lastly I wish you have all the strength to fulfill all your work..dont worry abt updates and concentrate on your work dear..we can wait...take care



Thank u so very much for ur feedback..n POV... I will do a SS for the prequel..n give u a new FF..n thank u so much for expressing ur support for my wriiting..means a lot...thank u once again...😃


Originally posted by: akaswan

Hey 😃

Firstly about this FF i just want to know who Asad will react when he will know about what Dilshad did before, but seriously take your time we love this story and i think that everyboby will reat it no matter when you will have the time to udapte it 😎😊

And i'm okay with all you ideas and i will love to read another FF from you 😃



I guess the recent update revealed Asad's reaction...n thank u for commenting...will keep writing n give u some new content soon😃


Originally posted by: Applef

hey, that was an awesome update..


zoya's birthday..

and finally they are being all themselves..

that was hot..😳

and I am really glad that if you write more..😃

or new ff..

I'm all set to read those..

update soon..



Thank u so very much for ur awesome comment...m glad u liked it...

n hey will surely give u a new story soon...n would love ur support..😃


Originally posted by: ap3h7u

I want the prequel asap n also a promo of ur new FF😃😃...as for this FF,u can end it wenever u want-I just love it🤗



done done done..u'll get the prequel n the teaser for a new story soon...thank u😃


Originally posted by: nilusoni

Its k dear take your time and take decision what you feel is right
thanx for pm



Thank u so very much😃



Thanks😊




Originally posted by: anopama

ss sounds great to show their journey
asya is together now so dont know how long u can stretch it



Thank u very much for ur feedback...I will make it happen...😃


Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Hy really want u to write more..or some new ff...



For sure..will come up with a new story soon..thanks for commenting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Thanks for the note.. !! This story has been very good so far.. It would definately be lovely to see the future now instead of the past... Sorry that is what I want to read in this story..



Hey there thanks for ur comment...n I agree with u on it...the prequel will only be snippets of how they feel in love and came about...😃


Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Pls pls pls Dont end this story...




Aww...thats so sweet..but wont u satrt hating hte sotry..if it stretches for too long???


Originally posted by: kals82

1.,,,,,,,,,,, perquel to this story... how they fell in love... bring it... would love to know... how they went on...in their love life...

2. up to 30... ok... accepted only if u bring the prequel...

3. straight story...with little twist... i am all for it...

4. new concept... but we can try to experiment it... i am ready to contribute... but.. someone should be a editor to that... to organise it... if not it will chaos...

take care ur time to write...eveyone understands...




Lovely...its all noted n will happen for sure..

A prequel..Check..
A new story..with twists..but happy ending😃
Last one..Umm I guess I will chuck it for now..lets c in the future...




Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

continue this story as long as u can... n if u want tp give us a prequen then go ahead...!!! i reallyyy wanna know abt everything...!! its up to ur wish... i just live this story n i am addicted to it... dont end it veryy sooon... n i love u wen u give such long updates.. plz dont make them small..!!
anyway continue sooon...
n thanx for the pm...

-fuii-



Lol..thanks a lot for ur lovely comment..N will c wat I can do...as far as u read n comment..m all game...so keep ur love coming..n m so happy to knwo that u enjoy this sotry..n want it to go on...😳



Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey if u do have time surely would luv to read the prequel...would love to know to know more...

will surely love to read another ff from u...will be waiting for the promo...totally addicted to tis ff...
thx fr the pm...



Hey there..thanks for u comment...I really appreciate it...N will give u a new FF soon...n I hope u get addicted to it also..😉


Originally posted by: vinita459

Hey,

I was little shocked to know that this story is going to end soon. I would love to read more abiut their future. I am not too much into learning about their past.

It would be nice to read a new ff from you. I love reading dark ff's. Please write dark ff.

So far, whicever dark ff I have read, writers decided not to complete them. You please don't do that if you do decide to write one. I love to read till the end.

Hope to read some new interesting ff from you. 😊

Love,

Vinita



Hey there..thanks for u wonderful comment..n ya I gotta end it someday rite...cant drag it n kill the story..😕..dont want u guys to start hating it..😕... but I will give u a new story...dark..umm kinda a lil mystery like...but with a good happy ending...n dont worry I will end it...n not leave it hanging...promise...




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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

I thought you posted an update so soon. But noppes. It's okay yaar everyone understands the pressure of work & personal life makes it hard to settle & pen down a chapter or any thing. You can post whenever you want the next UPDATES, me too keeping fingers crossed on Multiple updates. okay I'm answering to your questions, next to them itself.
Okay so I hope I get to see you next time with cool updates.
Love..



Hey gal..I did end up updating before my suggested time..so that should have been a good surprise rite??? ...well thank though for bein cool...with my timelines...😃


as for the questions...

1- Done...a short 5 ish chapters worth of a SS will be coming ur way soon...😃

2-New FF...no sadness..just a lil mystrey..n a lil untimely lovestory of sorts...but definetly will be a love story...n a happy ending..😃
3-Will try to end it by 30..n will keep the length the same..😃

4-I am chucking this idea for now..dont feel the desire to do so...😃


SO thanks gal for ur wonderful comment n POV


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Look what I have for u...an update..🥳earlier than expected...

So here you go peeps..hope u like it..




Ch25

The last strike..



Breaking free of the lies..Finally I know

The truth even though it hurts..Just pushes me to grow...

I am still fighting with myself..Wanting to react..

But my heart is wat keeps me sane..Helping me to retract

The battle is within, something I need to fight..

I don't want to lose to the wrong, I want to face the light...

So only love is what I crave...The only solace that I like

My slate is now clean..having dealt with the last strike...

It was the 23rd of March 2014-5pm, in San Fransisco. Zoya was finally given some time alone, to get dressed and ready for her party.Riley had managed to get hold of almost all her friends including a few of Asad's college buddies, along with managing all the arrangngements. All Asad had to do was to remind Ayaan to pick up the cake while coming back from the shoot. Humeira had already left for India 2 days back, ,upon her parents insistence, so Ayaan was feelin all alone.

As Zoya put on her new dress, a gift from her love, she couldn't help but notice the glow on her face. She smiled, loving the red, of the dress and of her cheeks, Asad was right she thought, the blush did suit her, and was a new part of her she herself didn't know existed. She needed a moment to collect herself, to look back on the craziness her life had thrown upon her. Laying on her bed, her dress still not zipped she closed her eyes and looked back. Her smile was the only thing that stayed, her fear, her hurt, her anguish, seemed to have run away back to their dark homes. She smiled at the thought of their first/second encounter, their first/second touch, their first/second fight, their first/second connect, their first/second smile to each other, their first/second kiss, and today, their first time making love, again. The after effects of which she could still feel...her body feeling renewed, and her spirit soaring in the clouds of ecstacy. First time in her life she was blushing thinking of his hands on her, his gentle caresses, and his possessive domination. She quivered when the memories of last night and the morning after became vivid and visual, when she couldn't stop her body from feeling the tremors of their love, their bodies entwined together, moving in familiar motions, rejoicing in the union, sealing their love with their acme.She sighed, she smiled and she opened her eyes, only to see Asad by the door, ardently adoring her, his sly smile making her melt.She blushed,as she walked up to him, nodding her head in defeat as she smiled at her state...Standing by him she looked up and gave him her best smiles...his return gift of a smile, making her heart jump in glee...

Leanin in a little, he caressed her cheeks and kissed her gently..

Asad-I like this..color on u...n so far..I have been true to my word in keeping ur blush on...he winked...Zoya looked down trying in vain to hide the redness of her cheek...thinking bout ur birthday present are you..smirked Asad...And Zoya looked up...

Zoya- Yes...she answered back boldly...stepping in closer, fidgiting with his shirt buttons, craftily unbuttoning 2. I was thinking how, your hands so smoothly took possesion of my body, feeling every inch of me, making me moan...her fingers teased his soft stuble on his chest...Asad grabbing her hands in an instant, not wanting to give her any leeway.

Asad-Zoya now is not the time...Riley and his mom are downstairs...and Ayaan is on his way...

But Zoya didn't listen...she just used her free hand to draw circles on his neck with her long skilled fingers, her lips closing in the distance to nibble on his jaw...

A low grunt escaped Asad's mouth as he felt trapped in Zoya's sweet torment, his mind telling him tobreak off,while his body bridged the gap.

Asad-Seems like you were not satisfied with your birthday lovemaking...he grabbed her chin making her look up, his free hand finally grabbing her close...you know..What they say...he smirked...What whispered Zoya, enjoying every bit of their closeness...third times the charm...he winked...my hands don't mind taking posession of your body once again..and, my lips and my libido are always eager to please...he gently bit her earlobe, her recation of a moan, feeding his male ego.

Zoya-I would love to...be charmed...husband...she kissed his adams apple..her hands unbuttoning the remaining buttons in smooth desperation.

Asad- Well then...your demand is my command,wife...with that he lifted her half way and walked up to the sofa by their bed, seating her on top of him, embracing her close,his lips taking over hers, enjoying the tease, the burn of anticipations...

Asad and Zoya forgot the world, immersing themselves in their own world of love, surfing in the waves of their lovemaking.together they conquered the intangible, their tangible selves, nothing but a medium to express and give their love to each other, reachin their peeks..together..

A ruffled Asad finally kissed Zoya...and walked out of the room, collecting and cleaning himself up, his smile the only give away of the rendezvous he just had; Zoya no longer blushing, as she got ready for her party.

~~

Happy birthday sang the crowd as Zoya cut the cake, looking breathtakingly beautiful, in her red dress, her long black hair, left loose in soft feminie curls, and her smile...sealing it all in.

She looked up at Asad, feeding him the first bite of the cake, Asad feeding her in return. Everyone cheered as they fed each other, demanidng a kiss, which Asad whole heartedly planted on her lips,wishing her a happy birthday, I love you Mrs Khan, Ayaan hooting, seeing his brother being so demonstrative and in love. It was was a happy happy time, Zoya finally met her old bestie, that she shared every part of her life with, when she was here.Julia and Zoya hugged, quickly starting where they left off, reminising on their past, the crazy times they had together.Even Asad was in a lighter mood, enjoying a beer with some friends, introducing Ayaan to his buddies and having the time of his life, With the music blaring and the happy chaos of people in the house and about.

Riley was the talk of the party his arrangements and his efforts not going unnoticed, not even by his girlfriend who had decided to take him back, allowing Asad to finally realx and let Zoya be, her friends surrounding her, asking her all about her and Asad and their lives after SF..Zoya animatedly shared all the parts of her life, laughing and enjoying with her friends...She was constanly showered with compliments and gifts and phone calls from Nikhat, to her aapi and Jeeju once again, to Dilshaad and Najma and Humeira.She was a blessed girl, her life finally getting what it deserved. But in all the happiness it was the joy of finally having her husband by her side that surpassed everything..

Julia-Awww that's so sweet, even after 7 years of marriage, you look at him with so much love...OMG I just had and idea...with that she stepped out in the centre and whistled to get everybody's attention..

Julia-Well people, as we all know that its out darling Zoya's birthday tonight, and I want to make it really special for her, I mean we don't knw when we mite see each other next...so how bout we make a toast for our birthday gal, and her man..Mr Asad Ahmed Khan...the crowd cheered as they raised their glasses to make a toast..

Julia-And now how bout a dance from the lovebirds..I mean don't you think we need to be shown all their, bollywood dance goodness???So everyone in favor of a dance...please cheer them up...

DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE

Cheered everyone...Asad and Zoya having no other option but to comply..and boy did they fulfil their desires..They gave them the best show of their lives, performing live on one of their dance numbers from their movie, the crowd in total awe of this pair, the girls oohing and aahing as they ended the dance, the guys...hi5ing, patting Asad's back, and comlimenting him...

And just like this the night went on, fun and joy not in the moods to leave just yet.

~~

Finally after around 1am the crowd started to thin, with a few close friends sticking by to help clean up. Ayaan was busy talking on the phone with Humeira, cleaning up the rooms, while Zoya was busy manging the leftover food, seeing the guests off and being a good host.

Asad finally said goodbye to his friends,as he picked up the garbage bags and made way to the garbage container by the end of the houses, only to hear someone talking behind it.Whatever he thought and started to dump the bags, when he heard Zoya's name...That got his attention, makind him stand there for a moment.

1st person-I know I feel happy for her too...I know how much she has gone thorugh in the past, I mean, she was told by her mother in law to leave her husband.How fair is that, I mean I understand that her MIL..was going through some pretty serious situation, but why in the world would you accuse you own DIL of taking away your son, of keeping him away from his own mother..I know Zoya she would never do such a thing. Infact she wouldn't even tell me anything, it was her sister that called me, needing me to help her get Zoya's things to New York.She was so distressed that after a lot of prodding she finally told me what had happened.It just broke my heart. But tell you what, now that I see them together..I am just so happy that finally Asad found out everything and made his choice..and they are back together.I just wish them all the best..

2nd person-Ya I know what you mean Julia, I understand she was your best friend afterall but I guess its time to be happy again..so forget it, and lets get home...its too late already..

With that the 2 ladies walked away, not noticing Asad standing behind them, his world on a stand still, as he tried to process what he had just heard. Not understanding anything, he made his way back home, only to find Ayaan and Zoya seated on the Sofa, relaxing with a plate of a cake slice..

Zoya-What took you so long, Riley just left 5 minutes ago...do you want some cake..she offered..Asad nodded a no..and walked up to the window, his head reeling from the conversation he had just heard.

Ayaan and Zoya shared a glance confused at Asad's silence, he had been so talkative just a few minutes ago.

Zoya walked up to him and put her hand on his shoulders, seeking his attention..

Zoya-Whats with you?? Did you see the ghost that Lana was talking about she joked...but Asad flinched, moving his shoulder out of her hand...Whats wrong Asad...comeon ...tell me...

He turned...his eyes..were filled with confusion, Zoya looked at him..her concern apparent in her eyes..What happened Asad she asked once again..

Asad- Zoya will you be honest with me...and tell me the truth???

Zoya-Ofcourse Asad I am always honest with you..whats going on..she was getting more and more confused, even Ayaan had stood up from the sofa, waiting on Asad's response..

Asad-First swear on me that you will tell me the truth in anything I ask you..

Zoya-Asad I will ..but please no swearing on anybody..I don't like all this you know..

Asad-Just do it for my satisfaction, that way I know you wont lie...

Zoya-Well if you wish...I swear on you..now will you please..tell me whats going on..its starting to bother me..

Asad-Why did you leave me 5 years ago??? What was the reason behind your decision...he looked straight up into her eyes..

Zoya almost lost her footing hearing his question..her eyes looking at Ayann asking for help..

Ayaan-Bhaijaan why r u digging the past...forget bout it n move on...

Asad-You stay out of this Ayaan...I am talking to my wife...Zoya answer me...and remember..no lies...he spoke in a low...yet stren voice...

Zoya-Asad...Iiiuh...I dddont want to talk about it...I uh...mean...we decided on not talking about the pppast...so leave it...

Asad-Zoya please don't test my patience and answer my GOD DAMN QUESTION...he almost lost his cool...holding on to the last bits of his patience...

Zoya-I am sorry Asad but I cant...

Asad lost it as he grabbed Zoya by her arms and shook her...

Asad-Zoya I deserve the truth...I deserve to know..I have the right to some closure...so please..dont deprive me of the truth...tell me I can take it...

Zoya had tears in her eyes, she was torn...she couldn't lie...neither could she tell the truth...she didn't know what to do..her tears..breaking free...I cant tell you Asad I am sorry...you wont be able to take the truth...so please...let it go...she begged...but Asad didn't budge...

Out of the blue...he smiled...he mocked his smile..as he made her look at him...

Asad-So it is true...he spit...your tears are proof that...it is the truth...it was my mother...that made you leave me wasn't it...he barked...TELL ME ZOYA...IT WAS MY MOTHER WHO TOLD YOU TO LET ME GO RIGHT...???

Ayaan-Bhaijaan...Aaappp...Ple..

Asad-Ayaaan go home...just go home..its between the 2 of us...so please respect it n go...

Ayaan looked at a distressted, broken and crying Zoya...asking thorugh his eyes if she needed him here...she nodded in Asad's approval...asking him to leave...Ayaan...leaving with immense hesitation...torn by the turn of events...

Asad and Zoya just stood there...Asad's eyes filled with..deep deep angst..while Zoya's eyes were crying nonstop...

Asad-Tell me please Zoya...it was my mother who seperated us wasn't it...

Zoya-Asad please first listen to me...there was a reason...

Asad-So it is true...he let go off her and walked up to the window again..his hands balled up into fists, his eyes..mosit with rage..as he punched on the wall..the revelation..shaking him to the core..

Zoya-Asad please... she rushed up to him and held his hands...please let me explain everything to you please she begged...

Asad-What is there to explain Zoya...the simple truth is that my mother asked you to leave me...because she thought you were keeping me away from her...Zoya...had it not been me overhearing Julia talking to someone...I would have never found out...I know you..you would have never told me..cos you love my mother too much..but Zoya what she did...was wrong...n its not frogivable...she broke her own sons marriage...Zoya...he slammed on to the wall again...his frustration and anger creating a lethal reaction in his body, making him...lose his cool...Only Zoya's hands on his, kept him from turning voilent.

Zoya-Asad she was not in her senses...she didn't know what she was talking about...it was all me...I came up with the divorce papers..she never told me to ...so don't blame her fro anything..blame me..I was the one who ran away...like you say I always do..

Asad grabbed her and squeezed her into him...caressing her hair..and kissing it..

Asad-Zoya..why are you the way you are...you know very well..how much it hurt you ..being away from me..I knw..cos I went through the same pain...then why...are you so forgiving...If I were in your place...he gritted his teeth trying to control his anger...

Zoya-Asad...I love ammi..and I knew what she was going through...I just wanted her to have his son back...n at that point I was holding you back...n Asad please...everything is sorted..so let it..go...Infact ammi wanted to tell you all about it from day one..but you never gave her a chance..and then when ...she gulped...and then..when you found out the divorce papers and disappeared into the night..she tried to tell you then..but we all stopped her...I gave her my promise...and that's why she never told you...Asad she loves you a lot...so please forgive her...

Asad-How can I Zoya...he spoke...his anger still fighting for control...how can I forget now that I know, she asked you to let me go...Zoya I was going to take you with me back home...and she...Ya Allah he prayed...I cannot forget the pain I went through...without you...I was a living corpse..and she knew all along..and she never...Zoya...he chanted her name...helping him to calm down his rage...

Zoya looked up from the embrace..taking Asad's face in her hands and looking deep into his eyes..

Zoya-Asad I am here now...and now I wont go anywhere no matter what...I am no longer that nave 21 year old girl who didn't know what to do...I have you now and I will fight through anything to be with you...I just want you to do the same..to fight through all that has been and be with me ... just like the Asad I know who love me, teases me , drives me up the wall but has always got my back. I just want you to try and slowly forget this all...forgive your mother and please if possible don't give her the pain in this age...She wont be able to take your accusations Asad...so please..lets move on...

Asad finally nodded as Zoya's words sunk in...his heart agreeing but his mind still conflicted.He wanted to forget ..but would he be able to, would he be able to look at his mother and be the same Asad...he wasn't sure...All he was sure about was Zoya, and her faith and her love...He had finally been given back his love and he was going to make it a point to protect his love and be strong for her...

He gave a small smile of reassurance to Zoya as he took her in for a hug...Zoya looking heavenwards and thanking Allah, Asad doing the same, but asking for strength to let go.

Well...wat say?? how was it??? lemme know...will add on more later...GTG for now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now this was a good suprise. I didn't expect another update so soon...so thank you.

Finally, the day I have been waiting for...Asad to find out the real reason. I am glad he found out and reacted just the way I thought. He is hurt. I am happy zoya is there for him.

The party was fun and the dance was mindblowing. AsYa love each other a lot...hope they stay togrther forever. 😛

Vinita

PS: keeping my promise, 1st one to comment. 😉
Edited by vinita459 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I LOVED THE UPDATE I AM SO HAPPY ASAD FOUND OUT THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃

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