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Posted: 11 years ago


THANKS😊

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum upddate...thnks..luvd it...


THANK U😃

THANK U VERY MUCH😊




Originally posted by: awesome

awesome update👏



THANK U VERY MUCH😊


Originally posted by: bulou2013

omg i loved it totally awesome update my dear...just loved the last part oh how zoya was so surprised with asad's answers i would loved to read that soon and thanx for the pm...hope you update very very soon


THANK U SO VERY MUCH..I REALLY ENJOYED READIN UR COMMENT...N M HAPPY TO READ THAT U ENJOYED..THE UPDATE...I FEEL U'LL ENJOYE THE COMING UPDATES TOO..SO STAY TUNED..😃
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

THIS WAS MINDBLOWING...
I DID NOT EXPECT A TALK SHOW..SO I ENJOYED IT THROUGHLY..
ASAD ABSCONDING FROM ZOYA..WAS AS EXPECTED...
ASAD LEAVING ZOYA STUMPED..WAS A TREAT TO READ..
WAITING FOR THE PROPOSAL AND THE FOLLOW UP..
THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING UPDATE AND FOR THE PM..



THANK U...FOR UR WONDERFUL..AND VERY LOVLEY COMMENT...MAZAA AA GAYA READ KARKE LIKE ALWAYS...N M SO VERY HAPPY THAT UR ENJOYING THEIR..RELATIONSHIP NOW...STAY TUNED FOR MORE😉


Originally posted by: Ramlath

wow just loved it...
Thnx fr pm...
Pls pls pls update soon... 😭



HEYA...THANK U SO VERY MUCH😊



Originally posted by: nilusoni

Gr8 part loved it
thanx for pm



THANK U 😃

Originally posted by: max_thakker

The story line is just going so well tht I wish for it to not end, such amazing mature writing I mean it's jus wow!!!!! Also reading the prequel which btw is actually really good, thank you so much for providing us with wonderful material to read!


HEY THATS SO SWEET OF U...THAT U DONT WANT THIS STORY TO END..BUT I GUESS ITS THE RITE TIME NAA..N THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR SUCH AWESOME COMPLOIMENTS..M REALLY HAPPY N FLATTERED READIN THEM😳 SACH MEIN FEELS SO GOOD TO READ THAT U LIKED THE STORY N MY WRITING...THANK U😃



Originally posted by: dewdrops27

I loved this update! It was so realistic and so damn cute.
I love the equation asad and zoya share in this! Brings butterflies in your tummy!
Update soon! Looking forward to your other ff!



YAAR THANK U...VERY MUCH...I REALLY LIKED READIN UR COMMENT...SO HAPPY...U LIKED IT...THANK U THANK U THANK U..BUTTERFLIES IN UR TUMMY😳




Originally posted by: kals82

wow...


i love the morning part..how zoya arrest asd with her body...

love it... that happens in real life too...isnt...

i guess asad is going to propose to her...infront of everybody there...


the next is wedding bells... i guess...


thank you once again for writing such a wonderfull story... and for keeping as entertained...

love u lot...

waiting for the next update... and also for ur new story to start...



LOVED READIN UR COMMENT..AS ALWAYS I MUST SAY...I LIKE U SHARING WAT U ENJOYED IN THE UPDATE...N YA...THE WHOLE MORNING SITUATION..DOES HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE..😛..N U GUESSED IT RITE...ASAD WILL ANNOUNCE IT IN FRON OF THE WORLD...
N I AM VERY VERY HAPPY THAT I WAS ABLE TO GIVE OUT A SOTRY THAT KEPT U ENGROSSED TILL THE END..N I HOPE TO KEEP IT UP...😃



Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Omg its wonderful..

Zoya ws gtng too crazy fr intervw...

asad njyd those moments

Intervw was so gud

Surprise by asad side ant grand wedding

Awww...so cute

Plz update soon..wana knw more



THANK U VERY VERY VERY VERY MUCH...I AM SO HAPPY TO READ THAT U LIKED THE UPDATE SO MUCH ..N ENJOYED SO MANY PARTS IN IT...I HOPE THAT CONTINUES WITH THE NEXT UPDATE...THANK U..N STAY TUNED😃


Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Beautiful update... Loved the morning part and the interview part. Both were so cute.

Waiting to see how Asad proposes to her and the wedding ceremonies.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.


HEYA..M GLAD U LIKED THE MORNING PART..IT WAS SWEET FOR SURE..N M ALSO GLAD THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY TO READ SO...THANK U VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTIN N LIKIN😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Forever and more..Together we'll soar..

the world knows our story,so no holding back no more.

We have found each other,Again, one more time

And Now we will be together..Felling blissful and divine..

We'll dance thorugh our worries..And laugh through our pain..

As long as we're one..The happines will remain 😊

So lets once again..Calebrate our love.. ❤️

Lets kiss and seal the deal..Lets together rise above.. 👏 👏




AWW..THANKS FOR QUOTING ME LINES..😳


Originally posted by: Linsie

Asad found his life bac... looking at zoya...
he knows his happiness ... is all zoya

looking at her his love...

thinking about her and her love...


YES YES YES...FOR EVERYTHING THAT U SAID...THANK U VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTIN N LIKING...ITS JUST A GR8 FEELIN TO HAVE UR LOVE BY U ISNT IT??😳


Originally posted by: Linsie

The innocence zoya... how she need him like the air she breath...

the childish she is... and love is so pure

she is in his arms is all heaven ☺️


Originally posted by: Linsie

They asya to do live interview...about their life story...

asad is very private person...

not sure how zoya will react... she is perfectly find...

and looking forward ...and start her shopping...

and looking forward for ayra... engagement



Originally posted by: Linsie

really beautiful interview... they look awesome...

some fond memories...

and asad have the intention to have a traditional

wedding... with zoya...

this is all surprise for zoya... she cant believe its happening...



Originally posted by: Linsie

thanks for the pm...







U KNOW WAT..U R ONE OF THE MOST HELPFUL AND SUPPORTIVE PPL HERE..U ALWAYS...COMMENT...N ALWAYS..POST SO MANY WORNDERFUL THINGS...IT JUST MAKES ME SMILE...AND VERY HAPPY...THANK U FOR EACH N EVERY COMMENT..N LINE U HAVE WRITTEN SO FAR ON ALL MY WORKS...TRULY MEANS A LOT...THANK U THANK U THANK U...N ALSO...WAT U SHARE..ON HOW THE UPDATE WAS FOR U IS SO NICE..I LOVE READIN IT...ALWAYS..😃

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

wonderful i simply loved it

thanks for the PM :)



THANK U VERY MUCH...M GLAD U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...😃

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

now waiting for the grand proposal



O YA..NEXT UPDATE..THANK U FOR COMMENTIN😊


Originally posted by: Shubh007

AWSOME UPDATE...😃


THANKS😊

Originally posted by: akaswan

Awesome part 🤗


I would really like to see their wedding 😃



THANK U VERY MUCH😊


Originally posted by: rjhr

wowww...

gr8 upd8...
i ws feeling lyk i'm really wtchng dat talk show...
jus wowww...
👏 👏


THANK U GAL..I AM GLAD...U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...N I AM VERY HAPPY THAT MY WRITING COULD MAKE U IMAGINE IT ALL YIEEE😃


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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

I know, I know I'm lagging behind in my replies, well you know it all doesn't go according to me out here, so just got stuck with things.
Well I decided instead of waiting to start replying from the 26th chap, I should reply to this one first. last one also was left due to this only..
Now now coming to the part, it was FABULOUS. Finally Asad finds the much needed peace & comfort in his life back & all due to his better half, who had taken all away with herself. Zoe's one decision of making their relationship public puts an end to media scrutiny they were put through. A very well done step by Zoe 👏.
I was smiling when Asad was cursing Zoe for spoiling his daily routine, yeah first you enjoy her presence around you, your deep slumber & later when you get hold of time you blame her, good good.
Now this interview thing was so wow, like really, just too good.
It all went very nicely. I could understand & visualize the bubble of energy that must be erupting through the whole Khan Mansion due to Zoe's chirpiness. Asad is still so smitten by her, well we can say that for the other person in equation too. Actually both are just too irresistible.
The interview was Awesome, just loved how Asad escorted her to the stage. Zoe's answers made me feel so happy. But the sudden revelation of a grand wedding & grand proposal from Asad stumped me. I was grinning like an idiot, just can't wait for you put that part up.
I'll be honest, you know when you asked few updates earlier how many parts should this ff be, I thought 30 were good enough but today when I saw the chap number on top, I stared at it or a while, I felt sad that it would end now. I know this is the best ending it could get, cause dragging it would ruin the beauty of this beautiful journey they've made till now. So yeah, this means you put your next ff with the character sketch quickly. Maybe just after the epilogue of this, so that I don't think about anything else while this is on. I'll be completing my replies soon, really, just don't be mad at me.
Love..



HUN...TAKE UR TIME..BUT LET ME BE HONEST...I LOOK FORWARD TO UR COMMENTS...SO WENEVER U DO..I JSUT GRIN..N FEEL VERY HAPPY READIN IT...SO NOW FOR THIS...EVEN I AM LATE IN RESPONDING...BUT HELL I AM HERE...SO LETS GET STARTED...

SO YA...ITS HAPPY TIMES NOW..FIANLLY..ASAD IS FREE AND READY FOR IT ALL..N LIFE IS NOTHING BUT A FUN AND HAPPY AND LOVE FILLED JOURNEY WITH ZOYA..N I GUESS..THAT JUST COMPLETES THE CIRLCE OF THEIR JOURNEY..THE INTERVIEW..THE TEASING..THE MORNING CLOSNESS..EVERYTHING JUST SEALS IN THEIR RELATIONSHIP... THE HAPPY TIMES FINALLY COME..N TOUCH THE HEARTS OF EVERYONE...SO...I GUESS...ITS THE RITE TIME TO LET THIS STORY..END...N READERS AND SUPPORTERS LIKE U..JUST MADE IT...A BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY...THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR THAT...I HOPE..IT COINTUNES WITH THE NEXT AS WELL😃

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Back Again,

Actually I just remembered that I forgot to mention about the wedding pictures. I just loved it. You know I could just feel that moment, how it must have been, a sort of mushy, giddy feeling going through your most precious moments once again & sharing them with the world. I am so glad about the love that is showered on Asad & Zoya, they deserve every bit of it.


YA THE WEDDING PICTURES...I GUESS..ITS JSUT A WAY OF SHARING THEIR LOVE STROY..WITH THE WORLD...N THEIR APPLAUSE IS THEIR ACCEPTANCE OF IT...😃

Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217

OMG lady..you are hell-bent on making me fall in love with LOVE all over again😳Asya were sooo cute in the interview..awwwllleee😳😳and I simply loved that bit of a 'quick encounter' just before the interview..if you know what I mean😉that was just so adorable😊

Hey,I am supposed to be mad at my bf,bcz that dumbo forgot to bring me chocolatesbut now after reading this,I feel like forgiving him and giving him a hug😕thats sooo not fair I tell you!


Superb update as usual hun👏



WELL WATS WRONG WITH LOVING LOVE..ITS A BEAUTIFUL EMOTION..VARIED..AND VERSATILE.. 😉..N THEY WERE ALL THE LOVE THEY FELT...IN PERSON..WITH THEIR QUICKE..N THEIR PUBLIC PROCLAMATION..
N GUSSA HONA BANTA HAI..ITS FUN..FIGHTING AND MAKING UP...N LOL..FOR CHOCHOLATES...I DO THAT TOO...I MAKE MY HUBBY RUN BACK N GET THEM😛😆..SO MAKE HIM..N THEN MAKE UP...MAYBE EVEN A KISS ALONG WITH THE HUG...TAKE HIM BY SURPRISE😉😆


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I have a lot to catch up on nai? *sigh* I'm sorry I'll get around I promise but first let me go read the updates I missed!


O YA...VERY VERY LATE...I AM NOT HAPPY AT ALL😛...LOL...CHALO...QUICK..READ N COMMENT...U DONT WANT ME TO BE SAD LONGER NOW DO U 😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Chapter 28 -


OMG, for me the highlight was the press conference. And didn't I tell you I have another intelligent thought in my mind, it was exactly this - Public declaration of their marriage but I thought it would be Asad who would do that since he can't bear anything questioning Zoya's character but it was a pleasant surprise to have Zoya being so confident and fiesty. I love my baby 🤗

I absolutely loved the press conference, I don't know why I really like such stories about actors and press conferences and talk shows and Interviews *dreamy mode*

Chapter 9 -

Haha Zoya really is messing with his routine nai? LOL this part was so cute and had me gushing about AsYa. They are so adorbs, I love them.

You know I had read this Twilight FF once even in that Edward bella are actors, co-stars and in love (not married though) and they give an interview, that part was so mushy just like this one.

A grand wedding? Yes Yes Yes I would love to read that! 😃
And an unexpected grand proposal? Yes Yes Yes I would love to read that too!

I'm loving all the updates! 😃


SO MISS...INTELLIGENT BRAINS..I KNEW U KNEW THAT THE PUBLIC DECLARATION WAS HAPPENING..BUT AGAIN..I TWISTED IT A LIL..N ZOYA DID THE HONOURS..BUT NONETHELESS..IT HAPPENED..N HIGHLIGHTED...N SEALED THEIR RELATIONSHIP IN FRONT OF THE WORLD...N U LIKED IT..YIEE👏
N YA...I FEEL I SHOULD WRITE MORE OF THIS FILMY BACKGROUND STORY..COS I LIKE IT..A LOT..😃

NEXT

O LOVED WRITING THE MORNING PART..COS LOVE DOES THAT TO U...IT KINDA MESSES UP UR ROUTINE..BUT U STILL LIKE IT...
INTERVIEW..ANOTHER PUBLIC DELCRATION...FUN PART..MUSHY..TEASING..AND FILLED WITH LOVE AND ACCEPTANCE..CHALO...U LIKED THAT TOO...AASHNA KA TO DIN AUR BETTER HO GAYA BOSS..😉
AB GRAND PROPOSAL..N A GR8 WEDDING IS ON ITS WAY...WOHOOO😃

THANK U GAL..FOR UR..FUN FANTASTIC..AND LOVELY COMMENTS...I JSUT HAVE A BALL..READIN THEM😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_asya

Wow nice update...do pm me for the next part



THANKS😊

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

As usual superb part... So nw they r living together... N living as a madly in love husband-wife...Everything in todays update was beautiful... N the best part was they agreeing 4 d interview n enjoying it with being their usual...
I m seriously confused as to be happy that u r gonna show AsYa's marriage:):) OR be sad their beautiful journey is gonna end...:(:( I m badly addicted by this n u r one of my favourite writer here on Forum...
but Asad n Zoya's marriage in traditional way was a sure surprise for me... If possible while writing the nxt part show their bridal dresses n the whole family being dressed up...
Yes, i want u to start ur nxt ff soon n update their marriage...




LOVE
~JAZ~


SACH MEIN I ENJOYE READING YOUR COMMENTS A LOT...N TI MAKES ME VERY VERY HAPPY WHEN I READ ALL THE PARTS THAT MADE U SMILE..N U ENJOYYED READING...THANK U THANK U THANK U..N GAL..BE HAPPY..THE STORY IS ENDING AT THE RITE TIME...N GAL..I PLN TO WRITE MORE...SO UR SUPPORT THERE WILL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED..N I HOPE THAT U GET ADDICTED TO THAT AS WELL N I GETTO READ UR AWESOME COMMENTS...SO GAL..KEEP EM COMIN..N I'LL DO WAT I CAN..TO GIVE U A GR8 UPDATE..😃


Originally posted by: Asyalover

wow...it was in awesome and funny update...thanks 4 pm and accepting my buddy request



HEY THANK U SO VERY MUCH M GLAD U LIKED IT..N I HAVE ACCEPTED UR REQUEST..😃

Originally posted by: anopama

yay we will be having an big fat indian wedding
awesome update
was a bit scared about the interview thought they would have
dug up their bad times...but everything went great
loved how she looked for him in her sleep too cute she cant sleep
without him so how did she survive those 5 yrs.
continue soon



HEY THERE..THANKS FOR A WONDERFUL COMMENT...M GLAD U ENJOYED THE INTERVIEW..N ALL WENT WELL...N ALSO THE SLEEPING PART...ALL'S GR8 NOW...SO BAD TIMES ARE FORGOTTEN😊

Originally posted by: Applef

that was really one of the best..


love asya..❤️

they are there in front of everyone with their love..👍🏼

asya cozy moments were so lovable...😳

morning part, zoya's reactions were so cute..😃

their preparations for the interview and ayaan's engagement..😃

the interview was so so awesome..

one chance to share their past and those sweet memories with their loved ones...

asya interaction was the best..

they showed their wedding photos..😊

wow!! there were a surprice..

asad's proposal and his indian styled wedding with zoya's wish..❤️

I'm super curious..

update soon..


AWW..THANK U SO VERY MUCH..,..ALWAYS A GR8 COMMENT FROM U...THAT MAKES ME SO VERY HAPPY...N WOW..U LIKED SO MANY PARTS OF THE UPDATE...YIEEE😳 THANK U THANK U THANK U...N I HOPE U LIKE THE NEXT UPDATES..N MY UPCOMING FF...HOPE TO READ MORE OF UR COMMENTS..😃


Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

i m in love with ur story...fab job...



THANK U SO VERY MUCH...M SO HAPPY THAT U LOVE MY STORY😃😳

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Hey tis is superb...
Its beautifull...
Asya are too cute..
Luv it...
Eagerly waiting fr the next part...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...



THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR A LOVELY COMMENT...I LOVED READIN IT...N WILL UPDATE SOON..FOR SURE😃


Originally posted by: asyafreva

it was d most romance filled update i've read...! Too sweet...! loved d way zoya needs asad when sleeping..! i found dat way too adorable...! I still cant gushing over the fact how asad must hv looked when he woke up at 11'O' clock...! bt its coming to an end...? i mean soo soon..! well i guess at sm point u wud hv had to end it...! so its k...! bt excited to c how asad proposes to zoya again...! I really want to c them getting married again...! dat would be truly exciting...! bt i fr a moment i thought he was really gonna propose her on d show itself...! especially when he said i plan to propose her when she least expects it..!



HAAAII...😳...KYA COMMENT...I AM FLATTERED...YES IT WAS ROMANCE FILLED...WITH ALL THE HAPPY EMOTIONS..FROM THEIR SLEEPING LATE TILL THE INTERVIEW..THEIR LOVE...CARE..TEASING..QUICKIES..EVERYTHING..FINALLY ASAD AND ZOYA GET THEIR HAPPY...N YA GAL..ITS THE BEST TIME TO END IT..THEY R FINALLY HAPPY..N THEIR MARRIAGE..WILL BE THE BEST PART...N U WILL KNOW HOW HE PROPOSES SOON😃

THANK U SO VERY MUCH


Originally posted by: --Mahima--

clearly the end is near


and I'll miss this story

love your work


AWW THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR UR LOVELY COMMENT...IM GLAD U ENJOYED MY STORY.. SO MUCH THAT U'LL MISS IT..😳


Originally posted by: kritz4ever

thats good surprise

so we r going to see asya wedding



THANK U SO VERY MUCH M GLAD U LIKED IT..😃

Originally posted by: jawria123

awesome update. cant wait for next update

continue soon😳



THANK U SO VERY MUCH 😃

Originally posted by: Shubh007

UPDATE SOON

UPDATE SOON
UPDATE SOON
PLZ UPDATE SOON...😊



FOR SURE..😊

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

wow...i loved the update!!!
asya in a talk show...their answers made me happy!!!
asad planned for a grand proposal n wedding ...too romantic
now...is it really ending??? i cant believe that...i just love this story...
start ur new story soon...
continue soon


HEYA..THANK U FOR A WONDERFUL COMMENT...M GLAD U ENJOYED THE UPDATE..THE INTERVIEW..THEIR ANSWERS...AND WAIT FOR THE PROPOSAL...IT WILL BE A GR8 WAY TO END THE STORY...😃

N YA THE NEW STORY IS ON ITS WAY..SO DONT FORGET TO COMMENT THERE ALSO..



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Here you go peeps...the last chapter...😭


CH30

Amazing!!


You're like a storm against the window
Follow me 'round just like a shadow
I'll swim a never ending ocean
Until you bring back your devotion

It's like I live a thousand lifetimes
Still looking for the one that feels right
See, moving on just isn't working
You lit the fire that I burn in

And all I've been doing is protecting
A lie for the sake of my pride
While all the others set me thinking
We could be more than just amazing

I guess I'm holding on to my faith
A solid hope, I'm heading your way
And crawling over is so tempting
We could be more than just amazing

And all I've been doing is protecting
A lie for the sake of my pride
While all the others set me thinking
We could be more than just amazing

I couldn't see it
I must have believed a lie
If I admit it, would you let me make it right?
Is it all gone? Oh no, say it all

We could be more than just
We could be more than just amazing



(dont even ask...its westlife..Duh😆)

Zoya walked in a cautious daze, reeling from what Asad had proclaimed on the interview, to the whole wide world.It wasn't the fact that he planned of getting married again, or the plan that he had a paln to propose to her that bothered her..infact it didn't bother her at all...or was it the case?? She was confused, she didn't know what bothered her...making her feel frustrated..her punching bag becmong , none other than Asad...She had thrown a fit, asking him how he had decided on their marriage without her consent and instead of sharing his thoughts with her he had decided to put it out in front of the world. Asad had just looked at her and smiled, taking all her brunt and kissing her senseless after her last word..

Asad-Meri jaan aage aage dekho hota hai kya..he winked..and walked away..riling Zoya even more.

~~

The coming week turned out to be the biggest challange for Zoya, Asad being very aloof and secretive about his actions. The only time that he actually spent with Zoya was during the dance reharsals, talkin very little and always confusing her with his signature smirk.

Zoya-Asad just stop with all this...she blasted out..unable to take the stress of his secrets anymore...I am just tired overthinking about this situation, can you please tell me what's going on in your head?? You've honeslty stretched that lie a bit too long don't you think?? I mean just daybefore, in one of our movie promotions you once again brought the topic of this fantasy wedding and proposal..I mean come on...why are you doing this..u know..I don't like to be kept in the dark Asad..

Asad just held her by her waist maintaining the posture of his dancing, looking into her eyes and smiling deviously. Zoya..dont lie..I know you love surprises, to be swept off your feet...I've had endless days...and particullarly nights where..you have accused me of being a very unromantic and an uninnovative lover...and have ordered me to go learn something from the likes of all the romantic heros you soown upon, the art of sweeping your lover your gal off her feet...and I am doing just that..

Zoya...fought her urge to look away...her blush..not in her control..as she remebered the moments in time..when she did compare his romance to the ficticious characters of the movies..She could clearly remember the times when she would whine and fight and poke and accuse him..of being unromatic..dramatising her need to be taken off her feet..and now when things were happening the way she always imagined...she was fighting against it...She truly was one confused dame...but that she wasn't going to accept...I uh..I like to be taken bu surprise..and not by shock..and at this point it all seems to be some sorta unwanted shock...she mock complained...

Asad-Don't you worry meri jaan...trust me..you'll be taken by surprise and not by shock when I do what I do...

Zoya-No...atleast give me a hint..as to what you plan to do?? I mean..tell me atleast somethin...so ..she didn't know how to sell her idea to him...as he saw him shake his head in disapproval...

Asad-Well if I tell you..it wont be a surprise anymore now will it??..so please..stop thinkin bout it and concentrate on the dance...we are to perform in the next 4 hours...

Zoya-FINE...do what you want to do..but be well aware..that I wont let you have your way...you will pay for keeping secrets from me...I WILL BE AVENGED..MR ASAD AHMED KHAN...she declared..

Asad-Well my love..if you avenging yourself..is anything close to the dance we had at the studio...where you savoured me...and ravished me with ur kisses and your body..then by all means..Mr Asad Ahmed Khan awaits to be taken revenge on...he winked...starting to twril her around..as he hit play on the remote and swept Zoya off her feet with his dancing...

~~

The engagement was the most precious day for Ayaan and Humeira and everone in the family..It was an intimate funtction..with close friends and family, and it was very well arranged and implemented by Asad.He was the man in charge, making sure that everything was in its rightful place, whereas the ladies helped out with the dcor and the performances for their engagement. As Ayaan and Humeira finally slipped on their engagement rings, the crowd cheered...with loud applause and lots of warm wishes...finally paving way for the entertainment of the night...Everyone contirbuted..from the parents to the siblings...Asad and Zoya being the last and the best performance. They did it exceptionally well, their dancing well coordinated..their moves..drool worthy and their chemistry...burning the floor and making people sigh in arodartion. They came they performed and they won everyone's heart, not letting their harmless banter..ruin anything...But as soon as the song faded out..Zoya pushed Asad aside...turning up on him..her nose held high...as she walked out..making very clear that she was mad at him...Asad just watched her walking away in her black saree...and grinned...his wife was more than a handful..and her innovative mood swings were the most enjoayble challenge...he had ever had to face in his life...He decided to bug her a little more..as he followed her to her room..not worried about the receeding crowd...knowing very well that they were well taken care of.

He picked up one of the roses from the flower arrangements and sneaked into her room, Zoya lost in her thoughts..her back facing him as she continued to stare out of the window...Slowly making his way behind her..Asad used the rose to his benefit, making it a tool in his foreplay...he gently glided ther rose on her bare back..making Zoya stand still in shock...she felt a shiver run down her spine...as the soft petals of the rose..teased her skin...but before she could react she gasped..feeling Asad's fingers retracing the route of the rose...his mouth coming closer to her neck...His fingers..added on to the sensation..escalting the havoc in her senses...making her burn from within...He pulled her in.thorugh her waist.his hands..grazing thorugh her smooth velvety skin ...making Zoya surrender, her neck leaning back closer to his lips inviting him to explore...Asad kissed her on the curve of her neck..as his other hand..brought the rose in front of her face..and caressed her face with it...

Asad-For you..meri jaan...her whipered in her ears..his voice..the most potent form of his seduction...making Zoya...maon...ummm ...her hands making their way on his, one by her waist..and one..holding the hand with the rose. She kept her eyes closed..as Asad gently swayed her side ways..planting..lustfull kisses all the way from her earlobe to her..thin strapped blouse...teasing her as he reached the strings of her bluse and took it in his mouth..pulling them free..her blouse merely held by the bottom strings...

He bent her forward..as he trailed kisses down her back...his hand by her waist making small secudtive circles...taking Zoya's senses on an overdrive..making her forget everything and just drown in his magic.She moaned his name...as Asad finally turned her around..and kissed her with passion.

Asad-Zoya?

Zoya-ummm..she responded..hugging him after the kiss..enjoying the heat radiating from his body..

Asad-I guess..I thought about it..and I think I should let you in on some details of when and how I plan to..

Zoya-'Really she looked up..her daze washing off...

Asad-Yes...he sounded sincere..

Zoya-Then tell me...

Asad-Zoya..its gonna happen when you least expect it..and its gonna happen the way you always dreamt of..with all the madness and all the filminess and all the love of your friends and family...

Zoya looked at him...angry and appreciative at the same time...Why don't you just tell me what you plan to do..why this...it will happen when you least expect it...I mean..I also have the right..after all meri bhi to shaadi hai...

Asad laughed..letting her go...Hey I told you..what you asked of me..now you're getting greedy Mrs Khan..thats not fair...he started to walk backwards..one step at a time..his smiled teasing Zoya...and I told you it will happen when you least expect it..the proposal..is going to happen..and I have it well planned...I just need some time alone...he winked..and walked out...saving himself just in the nick of time..as Zoya threw a pillow at the door...

Zoya- Arrggh...what does he think of himself...propsal..marriage..whatever...I have every right to be let in on it..bas..she muttered to herself..taking the rose off the bed..and fighting the urge to rip it into pieces...Arrgh..you Mr khan..are going to have to deal with me...and along time huh..so that's what you plan to do..propose to me..in seclusion..Ha so predictable..but be warned...Mrs Zoya Asad Khan..knows all your tricks..and she will make it a point that you don't succeed..in your plans...not unless I am ready and as involved as you are...she conspired..her reason for defience nothing other than pure ego...making her think in cirlces...How was she to be involved in plans of being proposed to..that by any logic was meant to be a surprise..but who was to make her understand..when the one person that could was having a ball...getting her all riled up.

~~

Days became weeks...and still no move from Asad...and how could he ...when Zoya took every necessary precaution to avoid any time alone with him. She kept herself busy with helpin out Dilshad at home, or running errands with Najma..or spending time with Nikhat and Humeira... Asad knew very well of her plans..and let her play around..enjoying her tactics...they were truly entertaining.Infact he had all the time in the world..cos what he had planned was truly something she couldn't expect. He just kept himself busy with his work...and in the sidelines prepping for his 2 important plans..the proposal and the wedding.It was only a week...and he would propose...and in a matter of the next month they would once again tie the knot,in a wedding ceremony they always wanted...

~~

Zoya was getting tired of running away, was tired of staying distant from her husband, She needed him around and he was not letting that happen. His lack of effort was starting to frustrate Zoya..Hell she had tried so much to rain on his parade, but he seemed least bothered by it.He remained his usual charming self, kissing her hugging her and loving her every chance he got, but he was not doing the one thing that Zoya had started to expect out of him, proposing.So instead of sitting around and sulking she went up to the cause and garbbed the problem by the ear..

Zoya-Asad why arent you proposing..I mean its been 3 weeks...and still nothing..I mean does it not bother you that I have been avoiding being alone with you..that I have been giving you no chance to be alone with you, hence ruining your plans of proposing..Damn it..why isnt it affecting you, coz hell its bothering me...she went up to him lazing around on the bed with his laptop.

He looked up and smirked.He put his laptop and the side and folded his hands...And I thought you knew me...Tsk Tsk Tsk..I am disappointed in you Zoya...he shook his head...containing his laughter...

Zoya-What do you mean by that...enough with this bull...just get it over with..I am here..Alone...and you are here..so..go ahead propose...I mean I very well know that you are not worried about getting a no from me so then whats the wait...

Asad laughed...So I already know it's a yes hmm..maybe I wont propose after all..he said..standing up..enjoying the array of carzy expressions on Zoya's face...

Zoay-No you cant do that...

Asad raised his eybrows..standing in front of her...

Zoya-I uh mean...I mean..you have to what if the media asks??

Asad-I'll lie...I can lie...Zoya..he winked but I guess since you so desperately want me to propse to you once again..I guess I will...he winked..oh and let me remind you what I said ...it'll happen when you least expect it...with that he walked away...Zoya as always standing there stumped.

~~

Tonight was the night, the night when there movie was being premiered. The biggest names of the indusrty were present at the premiere, the media all over the place, every moment being captured and telecasted. Asad was looking every bit a star in his Armani suit, the basic black and white 3 piece suit..slick, handsome, and magnanimous, his lady by his side, hand in hand, mathcing up to his charisma, in a long red gown, hair in a feminine bun, face glowing in the light and her smile and her dimples leaving the crowd mesmerised. They walked together...happy, and in love, waving at the crowd, greeting the guests. It was a special night for the family,Ayaan excited for his debut movie, eagerly anticipating the reaction of the crowd. There was glamour there was glitz..and it was a star filled night...with flashes going off every second.

Once they walked down the red carpet they stepped inside the theatre and seated themselves waiting on the movie.

After 2.5 hours the theatre broke into warm applause...compliments flying all over...everyone loved the movie and couldn't get enough of it.

The team made their way to the front and expressed their gratitude and thank you's earning more applause. It was a success and Ayaan Asad Zoya and the entire team was ecstatic. They made short speeches and said their thanks, by the end of which only Asad and Zoya remained. Asad had stopped Zoya from walking back to her seat, earning him a questioning look..

Asad-Well as you all might already know by now, that I have made this movie with my family, with the people that I love and that's what seems to reflect on the screen, and I have already thanked you for your appreciation. Then you might me thinking why am I still staning here...Well the reason why I am standing here in front of you, in front of everyone that's watching, is to take this moment in time and seal it in history. I want to take this time and ...he turned towards Zoya..who was still very confused...as to what was going on...Her eyes went wide as realisation finally dawned on her...as Asad knelt down...and took out a black velvey box from his pocket...I wanted to take this moment..and ask once again to the love of my life, my girl, my wife, my companion to give me her hand to me once again..and agree upon our lives together...I want to take this moment and tell her that I love you, that I love you so that I want the whole world to know, and I want the whole world to experience this love and be a part of our celebration. I want you,my love to accept this ring and give it its rightful place along with your first ring, sealing this second chance that we were given. I want you to accept this ring and accept my proposal to once again tie ourselves in the bonds of marriage and reaffirm our commitments to each other...Zoya...I love you..and I want you to be by my side..through it all..I want to wake up to your smiles and your silliness..your joy and your warmth..so without making me kneel any longer accept this ring... he said..his voice filled with emotion, his eyes filled with love..and his aura filled with deep rooted joy.

Zoya smiled..her tears not marring the moment...she smiled..her happiest smile..as she knelt down besides him...and kissed him...offering her hand as he slid the single solitare of a ring in her finger...And as he did she hugged him tight...and whispered..

You kinda lied...she said..making Asad laugh...shaking his head...you told me you needed some alone time...well this surly is the exact opposite...

Asad-Well I also said when you least expect it...he laughed...and I also mentioned I can lie..so...he broke the hug and stood up...completely oblivious of the silent crowd...

Zoya- well Mr Asad Ahmed Khan..I guess I still have a lot to know about you huh..she teased...

Asad- O yes..Mrs Zoya Asad Khan..likewise...and that's the very reason why...I am marrying you...on the 17th of August 2014...7 years after the very day I married you the first time...Call it the 7 year itch if you may...he winked...satisfied to see the acceptance in Zoya's eyes, follwed by her mischevious smile...They were getting married once again...

The crowd cheered...as they turned towards them...happy beyond words to see a real life romance flurish in front of their eyes...

Life was truly good and truly...a Turnaround...for these two lovers.

~~


THE END😊



LOL...Just kidding...I got a lil somethin for u in the next post..so chk it out😉



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Epilogue...

Evergreen...

Happy are everydays..

Your smile..your hand in mine..

We are one, together..

Walking away..to the divine..

What we went through..

Made us strong..showed us utopia...

Makin the love we share..

A golden spell...free of any fear...

I love you ,you love me...

What else can we ask

We have the memories of yesterday, dreams of tommorow...

In which we can bask..

And so now holding hands..

We smile and rejoice..

Our hearts are evergreen..

We choose to be happy, its our choice..

It was a grand celebration...of the reunion of Asad and Zoya..a wedding of all weddings...their familes came together..in celebrationing this union...blessing them with all their heartfelt wishes..and showering upon them the quenching shower of love..

Their dreams were finally fulfilled as they sat in front of each other...resealing their love as they embraced ther traditions of their marriage and said Qubool hai...to each other...They were once again..husband and wife...looking glorious in their traditional outfits, Asad in a cream and gold sherwani..and Zoya in her red and pink lehenga..Dilshaad, Najma, Zeenat aapi, Anwar jeeju, Aryaan, Ayaan Nikhat Humeira and Mango...were besides them, through it all..participation in all the functions, mehindi, Sangeet, nikaah and the reception to follow.

It was known to the world that today was their wedding and they eagerly waited for their reception, when they would finally be granted a glimpse of their favorite starcrossed lovers.The reception being a social announcement of their marriage.

They both shed the veild that obstructed their views of each other and smiled...their hearts soaring at what had just been,rejoicing in their long lost dream seeing the light of reality. Asad and Zoya had fought through it all and they deserved it all, they deserved the love, the adoration and the appreciation.

With hands held together, Asad and Zoya finally stepped out, 6 hours post their wedding, ready to host one of the biggest and grandest reception of the year. A private affair of a wedding and a public celebration of their union was their reception.They were welcomed with warms applauses...love painting their surroundings. Finally it all came a full cirlce as life tunred around and made things right.

~~

It had almost been a month and autumn was on its way, once again bathing the city of New york with its allure. Asad and Zoya walked together, hand in hand in central park, enjoying the glow of the city.

Their movie had been a success, and Zoya had been welcomed into the industry with open arms and multiple offers, but she had declined wanting to pursue her passion in photgraphy and spend her time with her family.Asad was by her side supporting her in her decision,giving her the confidece she extrated from him.

Everything was where it needed to be, a welcome surpriseon its way.Zoya's aapi was expecting another baby in 2 months the very reason why Asad and Zoya had decided on a 3 month long Hiatus from all the glitz and glamour and spending their time in casual everydays, tallking long walks together, spending time talking with each other and exploring new facets of each other.

Their love remained a constant strength in their lives, their families adding on to it and with it all Asad and Zoya walked ahead...ready for the coming chapters of their life.

These two souls met and knew instantly that they belonged with each other. They accepted it, and took it further, nurturing their connection with love, passion and care.Even in times of turbulence, these 2 souls always held on to the invisible string that tied them together, giving them silent courage to face it all. And just because they believed in their love so deeply, were the given a second chance, a chance to turnaround and rekindle the dormant flame of love. And once again they accepted it, their second chance and nurtured it with their love, passion and care, making their connection stronger then before and unbreakable.Asad and Zoya now stood besides each other ready to face it all..and in this journey of life..live with love, love and only love.

THE END❤️

Sigh...I need to take a minute...not cos I am emotional..but because I feel..content...content for the fact that I started something and I took it along with me and gave it a good run..and hopefully a better end...It will truly leave me feelin a lil void inside..as it was a story close to my heart...but I am happy it got to see the light of day...and it was welcomed by all of you readers with positivity and acceptance..I truly and genuinely thank you all...I mean each and everyone one of u...for taking the time..and giving my story a chance...for liking it...or disliking it...for commenting on it..regulary..or not at all...but u gave my story a glimpse..and Iam appreciative of that.. All I hope that it left postivity in your hearts and some love and laughs..and some tears..I just hope u'll remember this story...a lil..and smile...thinking ...it was a gud story wasn't it... and my heart will be happy...

I leave you for now...only to see you soon with my new story..hoping for the same support...and encouragement...the past 2 something months writing this story has been a new journey for me...a journey that allowed me to express and to realise..a lot of things...so I hope...my new story..opens new doors of discovery for me and hopefully for you...So until later...

Be blessed..love lots...and always believe..you are worth it all...never allow ur mind to say otherwise...cos ur heart knows your worth...

Cheers..😊

Aashna-

Be yourself;

It Suits you;

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Congratulation on having completed such an amazing story and you gave an epilogue too...thank you for sharing that with us...a perfect ending to a perfect story...

Hope you start up with something new soon

Saima
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Wonderful ending to a lovely story Aashna I'll never get tired of saying that I loved it.
Hope to see you very soon with your new story...
I will miss this FF
Edited by mariam1368 - 11 years ago
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Hey Aashna. It was a beautiful story no doubt in that. I have loved this story from the start to the last word on the epilogue. It wad a very good piece of work and trust me it has been one of those stories that I have always looked forward to for new updates.

Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful story with us. I'm so looking forward to reading more of your work. Please start updating soon n as usual pm me for all your works.

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