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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

That was an awsome update.. Loved to see that both Asad and Zoya have a special place in their heart for the flat which they were staying.. Very sentimental... Also loved the confused Ayaan and his happiness... and the way ASYA are catching up on the lost time is just incredible...

With reference to the note , please do not take it to heart if readers comment or not.. You love writing right ?? so please continue to enjoy doing that.. These things should not affect you... You are a wonderful writer ..!!


I truly loved readin ur comment n ur likes from the update..I am glad u enjoyed their lil home part..and Ayaan's confusion n happines..n Asya's time together..n thank u for ur encouraging words..I do write for my self but sometimes u wish for some gratification...😃...but no matter wat I'll still write..for the love of it..😃...thank u once again..😃



Thank u😃

Originally posted by: rjhr

love it...

awesome...


Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Loved Ayaan happiness and joy and hug..

Zoyas suprise was awesomeness..
Thanks for the pm..


Hey there thank u for a wonderful comment..m glad u liked it😃

Originally posted by: ...1234

amazing update dear..loved it

sorry for d late comment
continue soon n pm me


Hey there..dont worry bout the late comment m just glad u enjoyed the update n commented..thank u
😃


Originally posted by: vinita459

Hey, I am sorry that you are feeling low due to lack of comments and likes. Don't be disheartened, just remember you have some loyal readers who never fails to encourage you. Please keep writing, we look forward to your update.

Please update soon. 😊


I knw..I have some amazing readers that boost up my morale with their amazing comments including u..n I will for sure keep writing..thank u so much for ur kind and encouraging words..😃

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Awesome update, loved the
romance, do update soon


Thank u so very much..😃


Originally posted by: princess101

I loved the update it was sooo cute thanx for the PM and update soon😃


Thank u so very much..😃



Thank u 😃

Originally posted by: Applef

this is so beautiful...


asya are fully in romantic mood..😉

they are filling up those 5 years gap by their immense love...

ayaan's reaction to the news was hilarious..😆

loved this protective asad..

their flashback parts were so lovely..😳

the last part about the house was so amazing..😃

waiting for the next update..

about their life in that house...

update soon..



Hey there..ur comment wa a treat to read..jsut made me smile..n readin that u enjoyed so much frm the update just made my day..n ya..they r making up for lost time...their love and care apparant..n m glad u liked the house part..n the flashbacks..shows their relationship😃

Thank u for a fantastic comment😃


Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Update soon pls pls😃😃...can't wait to read more😳😳


Will be updating soon..😃

Originally posted by: Alveena12

AMAZING!! I love it, it just gets better and better


Aww thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: kals82

hi... update soon... i am looking for their first hot session in their house once agina...update soon


Updatin very very soon..n hot session..hmmm😆..lets c..😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

This was absolutely awesome. well I just read this & will get back to you with my comment later, okay na?
sorry I tried a dozen times yesterday to read & reply to ur reply to my comment but well my net had planned on killing me. So I couldn't.
Just wanted you to know that you are in no way supposed to Thank me in any way, it's me who should be, because of the beautiful & awesome writings you give me. I am honestly glad that me comment made your day well your reply made mine too. I hope this continues & we can become good friends, like really.
Okay for now,
Lot of Love..



Thanks gal..I truly look forward to ur comments..but I understand that u gotta a lofe beyonf=d this forum so get that taken care of...n I''lwait for ur comment..n hey..I will thank u cos u do give me such awesome commemtns to read n respond to...n I hope so too for us to become good friends..so lets carryon with this..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale

Would you be happy if i say that this is the first thing i read in the morning?😃 will you be super happy if i say that the happiness in your update made my day and helped me to be happy throughout the day?😳 well, thats the truth❤️

I love you soo much for this🤗 AsYa are really naughty i must say😉😆 Poor spot boy😆 will everyone comes to know about them?😳

I loved ZOya's surprise

Do i have to say more, UPDATE SOON😆


Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes ..is the answer to all ur questions..bas mera to din hi ban gaya tha..tumhara comment read karke sachi..n mujhe to bahut khusi milti hai..tumhare happy comments read karke..n bout everyone comin to knw..well I owe u a shout out..for wen I reveal the idea u gave me..so keep readin..n look out for ur shout out..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

wait u say you dont get enough comments? ok lets rectify that!


Please do..😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

res


unres

Gah i loved it so much!

it was so romantic haaye main marr gayi

thanks for keeping your promise and giving me not only some shooting scenes but also romance. you always take my demands seriously *wipes khushi ke aasun*

haww the spot boy saw them :O and then he blasted at him! i have a feeling that the spot boy might tip off some journalist or someone that he saw them in a compromising position just to take revenge. Ha, Im so intelligent *smirk* 😆😆

i loved it when he shouted when zoya got hurt! I so love this Asad!

haww aashna no1 comments here? 😡😡 koi nahi now ill spam here 🤗
no fear when sadie is here *smirks again* 😆

i knew it that the surprise was the house they lived in. I'm so intelligent right *smirks yet again* 😆😆

Ab main apne muh se apni tareef nahi karti, you must have seen that 😆😆

do you promise me to update soon if i spam here? yes ofcourse you will 🤗


NICE...Aashna likes...n hey gal..wen Aashna promises..Aashna delivers..n ur happiness is reward enough for me...bas u liked it..n mera din ban gaya...
N gal..U r intelligent no doubts..😉😉..U knw wat I mean rite.😉😉...I guess u knw what I mean..after all ur intelligent..😃..ishare samajh lena..I mean come on..u were rite in 2 places here..👏...Bravo Bravo..n gal...I would be honoured to have Miss sadie spam my thread...😳😃...Aaa I am so so so happy...*runs around the house..like a maniac happy*😆..n gal I am updatin as soon as I am done collectin all ur posts n commentin on them😃..Hope that makes it all worth..😉



Yup yup..😆


Aww...I need a bucket to collect me...cos I just melted..😆(PJ i knw😆)..thats cho cute..forgot her name from Despicable me!!😳


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

you are such a superb writer 🤗


👏..Yieee..mee...😆


Dancing on the song Im the best...Wo hoo

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I love all your updates 🤗


..aur tareef karo..😆



Hmm😲


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I keep waiting for your updates!


On its way hun😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I've been following this fiction from day 1 and i love it! 😃


Bas...mein kya kahu😳


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

It was autumn in New York and the whole city was immersed in the warmth and glow of the season

This one line and I fell in love with it already! 🤗


Haai...u took me back to my first day on the forum...thank u thank u for all ur fantabolous spamming..😃




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smmm

1st before anything I want to tell you the title of this part is sooo apt , it fits perfectly to every bit of the chapter.

Coming back to the part well where do I start ,
To begin with it was truly worth the wait , I read it like 3 times :P

Ayaans point of view , his inquisitiveness is sooo adorable and asad annoying him was even better
I loved this line " Dekhiye bhaijaan...I have the right to know..you know what I do when you don't tell me your secrets...he acted all innocent...earning a smirk..and a disapproving nod from Asad."

Ayaan-OMG bhaijaan...what are you trying to tell...me...did you ...OMG don't tell me you guys went to Vegas and got married..that too without me or anyone else..he looked at Asad..his eyes wide with despair..
And this had me completely in splits

I don't know why but I feel that the constant hints towards the crew noticing and the little incident with the spot boy is going to lead to something big , but it's just a wild guess

And talking about Zoya and Asad every bit of this part made me wish I had a boyfriend

I loved seeing a very bold Zoya , I can't believe she seduced the Asad Ahmed Khan
And her transition to a shy Zoya was also cute ( in my option it is like the transition from the young naughty teenager to the mature woman who gave up the man she loved just for his mothers happiness ) 👏


Asad , where do I even begging with him , he seems so alive ,happy, jolly , Playfully, carefree . 👏
As usual I am falling in love with this character of yours .
The way he ran for her when she was hurt I was going all gu-gu-ga-ga . Why don't they make guys like him anymore :( 😭
Then came the hospital scene which was again tremendously sweet 👏 ( he reminded me of SRK in Veer-Zaara )

And last but not the least the house I don't want to say anything. About it coz as much as I do it's going to be less
All I want to tell you is " was the very same feeling, the same moment in time...the 18th of August 2007. Zoya and Asad had been married, Zoya was in his arms...as he opened the two very doors and lifted his first step and crossed the threshold of the house..entering into his new life with Zoya...and today...again...after almost 5 years...on the 18th of March 2013' he was at the very same spot his wife in his arms..a step away from crossing the threshold..of the very house he and Zoya had lived in..when they were married..He looked at her..and she smiled..."

This paragraph stole the show in today's chapters it kind of summarized the essence of your fiction

Well that's about it . Thanks once again for the pm :)


Ps : don't ever get dishearten by the lack of comments coz they don't even do half the justice to what you write
Ps: I'm sooo glad to have finally found someone who didn't like the 50 shades of gray . Lol


Pls continue ASAP I'm dying to know what's next ❤️




LOVE LOVE LOVE..every bit of ur comment...Haaai..u quoted my lines..that u liked...😳...made me so very happy..I agree with ur..that Vegas line was funny.😆


N wow..u liked it that much that u read it 3 times..😳...n hey thanks for liking the tittle I thought it was quite apt..😃

hmm crew..spot boy..only time will tell😉

I am just so happy I dont knw wat to write back...well I wish u get an amazong boyfriend soon😃

n bold Zoya..well ya it is a reverse transition..but u'll c that going around soon😃

n m glad ur enjoying my take on the characters..esp Asad..he is an interesitng character in his own rights..making Zoya run for his money😆..

The hospital part..hmm..glad u liked that too..havent seen veer zaara in 1 go so i dont remeber..
n now for the home part..it was the true essence of the update..n u quoting the very lines..jsut made it all the more awesome..I am so happy to read ur comment..
n will be updating rite away..

N hey thank u for ur amazingly encouraging words..and I intend to keep writing...no matter wat...thank u😃

n now for Fifty shades..I dont mind the book..I just dont appriciate the BDSM part of things..I thought there were times when the gal in the story..was treated wrong..but over all I dont mind the lovestory..its an easy read..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Here you go peeps...

PS..I didnt edit anything..so please ignore the errors..


CH22

Welcome home

My first step in my new life

Welcomes me home, my soul rejoices

My friends are here, my love is here

This is the place I hold so dear.

You took my hand and brought me back

Back to those the days I could never forget

It was the best gift you gave to me

Thank you so very much, for making me this happy!!

Their moment of reminiscing passion was broken by a knock on the door, their eyes opening up to a familiar figure...

Lana their neighbour was standing by the door flashing her gorgeous smile...Seeing her, Asad gradually placed Zoya on the floor holding her by her waist to support her.He smiled nodding his head in acknowledgement, while Zoya somehow shimmied out of his hold and limped her way to Lana, hugging her and greeting her.

Zoya-OMG Lana I cant believe ur still here...its been so long...and look at you ..you like gorgeous as ever...Zoya expressed her joy...looking Lana up and down, while Asad closed in the distance and accepeted Lana's hug, his hands finding his way around Zoya's waist and pulling her close..

Lana-Look at you guys...It been like what 4 years??? And here you are both looking so great, and still...her smile grew wider as she said...And still here you are making out like a newly married couple so much in love...so unaware of the world...Aww...you guys I am just so proud to see you both so much in love even after what 6 or is it 7 years??? She asked again

Zoya-Ummm..

Asad-Its almost 7 years since we first met, and almost 6 years since we got married...he filled in the details with ease, both the ladies looking up at him...Zoya in awe of him for saying it out loud, he was married to her.

Lana-O ya and now I love you even more..you are the first guy that seems to remember his dates and years...you must really love her...O well need I even question that...She shook her head..laughing at her own words...You know what...The duo waited for her to finish...You should give some pointers to Riley...my son I tell ya, he just got kicked out by his girlfriend for forgetting her birthday..and now he has been bothering me, crashing on my sofa for the past 3 days...OMG lemme call him...he would be so happy to see you guys...she ran off to her house by their side..leaving the two utterly confused...

Riley came running from his house, wearing nothing but his basketball shorts n vest,taking Zoya for a tight hug...Zoya enthusiastically hugging him back, not caring about Asad's escalting glare...

Riley-I missed you Zoya so very much...he just stared at her..his smile making Asad mad..

Zoya-I missed you too, and honest to god we were just talking about you the other day, she turned back to look at Asad, winking at him, knowing very well, Asad's unwarranted dislike for Riley, enjoying the green on Asad.

Riley-O hey man I didn't see ya, I mean I just got so excited seeing Zoya..O well nice to see ya again...he offered Asad his hands, and Asad firmly shook it, Riley wincing a little as he pulled his hand out..

Lana-So guys tell me what are you doing here...I mean..I never know anything, I came back to find this house empty and on sale, and then after 2 months someone bought it, but never came to stay.And now here you are..

Zoya-Well Lana it was me who bought the house..

Lana-You? Then why didn't you come visit?

Zoya-Oh well..she felt a little uncomfortable not knowing how to answer, looking at Asad for help.

Asad-Well I guess we just got busy with our lives, I was in India..and she was in New York..

Lana-What you guys werent together...I don't believe that, I mean...I have seen you guys for almost 2 years, and you both were inseprable..I mean..

Zoya-O don't you worry Lana, its all good...U know what tell me whats going on with u, and Riley I wanna know all about u too ...

The 4 talked for the next bit, sharing their lives and experiences, happy to see success in everyone's life. Lana was still an elementary school teacher and Riley was working for a reputable software company. Both of them were equally happy and a little surprised to know that Asad was a big superstar back home, and were ecsatatic to know that even Zoya was walking down that path, and both of them were here for the next month to shoot for their movie together. Asad and Zoya even invited them to come see their shoot and they gladly accepted.

Lana-Well I'll definetly come by especially when you shoot your dancy sequences, I just love the bollywood dance numbers in the movies...but hey you guys are coming to my house for dinner tommorow night and that's final.

Asad-I uh umm...

Zoya-Well Lana that sounds like an awesome idea, infact I am moving in dayafter so maybe you can cook me some dinner then.

Asad who had been politely adding to the conversation stopped, completely taken aback by Zoya's annoucement.He didn't know what to say, especially around company...

Lana-You mean the both of you are moving in day after rite?? I mean why would you move in alone...well that's awesome news...don't you think Riley..

Riley-Ofcourse mom, now that I am crashing at her place I finally get to spend some time with you, that is if your husband leaves you alone for a second..he laughed...unaware of the akwardness between Asad and Zoya..

Zoya-Umm..actually Asad...is ...

Asad-Well you got that right Riley, I am planning on having Zoya all to myself, but I guess you can come by once in a while..Just call in advance,so that we are decent, when we welcome you in...Asad smirked, Zoya gasped ,Lana laughed and Riley turned crimson.

Lana-Well then that's settled, dinner at my place day after, once you both are done moving in..and hey feel free to call us up if you need any help...

Zoya nodded,..

Riley-Well that's awesome..I cant wait to tell the crew that you're here, we've all been wondering where you disappeared, infact,some of us are even in touch with Andrew and Rohit,Asad's friends..

Zoya-That's so awesome..right Asad.. He just shrugged, not liking the proximty in which Riley was standing.OMG you know what..my birthday is in less than a week..How bout you go gather the crew up and I throw them a birthday party..We all can catch up on old times and have a good time...What say?

Riley-Sounds cool, I'll get to it right away..Omg everyone's gonna be so psyched.

Lana-That sounds exciting for you guys, but are you sure he is going to like it...she getured towards Asad who was glaring from a corner, his dislike to the turn of events apparent.

Zoya-You know he is not much of a party animal, but he wont mind, after all he'll get to meet his old friends too rite Asad..

Asad-Sure whatever..his answer making Lana laugh out loud.

Riley-Mom why are you laughing?? Whats so funny??

Lana- O nothing I just remembered Zoya's 20th birthday party, that you threw for her...I mean..there we were all having an awesome time,n suddenly Asad blasted on you for being too close to Zoya, ending up in their fight, and soon after they cooled off, Asad grabbed Zoya and carried her home. I mean everyone was so shocked...and then we all burst out laughing, knowing very well that Asad was making it up to you, and how... she just continued laughing..but Zoya could feel her blush resurface, gaining that cocky smile from Asad.

Asad-Well..I guess I shouldn't worry bout Riley having a lil crush on my wife anymore rite?? ..Asad stared into Riley's eyes, him turning red in embaressement...

Zoya-Asad just..

Riley-Well it was just a harmless crush and you know it...he spoke looking down sheepishly...while Zoya stood their in shock..

Zoya-What Riley you had a crush on me...she delibretaly didn't look at Asad, not wanting to boost his ego anymore..

Riley-I uh...ya...he answered sheepishly...but it was just that a crush...I uh I knew very well..that you love Asad...I uh..I dunno..he stammered...

Lana-Well too much of old stories...I gotta rush...its time for my show..I'll see you guys for dinnner day after alright.Take care my loves..she gave them each a hug and a peck on their cheeks, ...Zoya..its the first time I saw you blush..and it suits u she winked...and walked away...Asad gloating in Lana's words, winking at Zoya as she looked at him.

Riley-I guess I'll get going..I'll keep you posted on the list...Cya..he walked away..and Zoya and Asad were left alone..to deal with each other...

Asad without bothering to ask, grabbed Zoya and locked the doors and kept the keys in his pocket.

Zoya-Hey those are my keys..give em' back

Asad-I will once I make a copy of these, afterall I'll be living in the house too.

Zoya-No you wont be...you cannot...

Asad-And why might I ask??

Zoya-Coz, uh..ummm..she didn't know what to say..as she struggled to get out his damn grip...coz its..coz its not right...

Asad-And why is that??

Zoya-I don't know but its not right...

Asad-Well tough luck Zoya I am moving in with you whether you like it or not, and nothing can be more right than a huusband and wife living together..

Zoya-Bbbut there's only 1 room,I uh mean..we dddont have an extra bed...and ...

Asad-Well why would we need more than 1 bed...

Zoya's eyes popped out ...NOOO you are not sharing the bed with me...not a chance..No No No...

Asad-Honey...you cant stop me, I am your husband afterall and I have full rights on you...He smirked..

Zoya-Asad please try to understand...its been 4 years...I uh...I ..please...

Asad-Exactly Zoya its been 4 years...its high time now...I mean way to keep your husband deprived of some TLC...and please stop acting all coy...cos you very well know, you are nothing close to being a shy girl...so stop with it already...I wish to see you blush and I am going to make the best of my time to make that happen, but I don't enjoy this OTT akwardness you're trying to potray so shut up and get in the car.

Zoya sat in the car, acting liking a grumpy child not talking to Asad.Once again as they got to the hotel Asad came by her door and picked her up, loving the glow her anger was reflecting on her face.

They made it to their floor in silence, Asad taking Zoya to her room and putting her down on the bed.

Asad-Just rest and I'll order you room service, he gently kissed her lips and walked away..

Asad-Rest up u only got tonite and tommorow night to enjoy an empty bed. he winked and walked away.

Zoya just threw a cushion at the door and dropped on the bed, god she was married to an exasperating man.

~~

Asad-Hey I am really sorry for my outburst yesterday, I was just worried about Zoya and when I saw the trunk there... I shouldn't have yelled at you.

Spot-Sir its ok I understand...I mean...Madam is special to you naa...he prodded.

Asad- That's not the point...he tried to avoid answering that question making the spot boy a little skeptical..Well anyways ..chalo lets get back to work...n hey no hard feelings...

Spot boy-Yes sir...

Asad and Zoya were back on the sets the next day, despite the crews desire to cancel the shoot due to Zoya's injury, but Zoya insisted to continue and after a lot of arguments Asad and Ayaan agreed to get some closeup shots with Zoya taken care of.

Asad finding the spot boy had made his appoligies and cleared the air of any negative vibes. He respected his crew members a lot and treated them the best he could.His only expectation was for things to run smoothly and be done professionally.Working with his brother and Zoya had made him very aware of his actions, not wanting any bad press to linger around his family or his personal life.Already he was in a lot of trouble for beating up the goons at the beach and now losing his cool with the spot boy made him overly concious of his activities. Life had put him in a very tricky situation, he was working with Zoya, doing all these romantic scenes and even after trying so hard there were times when he had blurred the lines between fiction and realtiy.And now when he knew that Zoya was still his wife, those dormant desires of love had started to take over his rationl thinking making him do things he wasn't able to control.He had to contain himself, atleast in public before anything got in the hands of the media and it all turned out to be a big ruckus.He had always been the one in the eye of the media, his life an ever growing mystery.The media had tried their best to dig up his past but had been unsuccesful,allowing Asad, a star of such magnitude to have some privacy. But with the complaint lodged against him , things had changed, his every move was now being watched, the mystery woman being hunted down, through any means possible.And that was the very reason why Asad wanted to keep Zoya out of the spotlight, to keep his relationship a secret. He sighed, silently praying to Allah to get things in the right place,making his way back to shoot the next scene with Zoya.

~~

Asad was in his room, packing his stuff for his move to the house tommorow when his phone rang,Mom highlighted on the screen.

Asad smiled as he picked up the phone, seating himself on the sofa and wishing his mom.

Asad-Good morning Ammi, how are you doing??? Hows everything?Hows Najma, and hows Mango doing..I hope she is not bothering you.

Dilshad-Asad everything is just fine here, we all are doing great, even Mango is enjoying our company, and being at her best behaviour, no doubt she misses the 2 of you a lot, infact har raat tumhare kamre mein jaake soti hai.Zoya talks to her everyday...its just funny to hear them talk...Anyways..you tell me beta how are you doing? Hows everything with Zoya.

Asad couldn't help but smile hearing her name, his heart feeling happy and content.

Asad-Its going good ammi he said,the happiness in his voice clear to Dilshad..

Dilshad-That's great, I can hear it in your voice that you are happy, so I believe you resolved your issues with Zoya??

Asad-Ji ammi, actually a lot has happened in the last few days, and I have been wanting to tell you but never knew how...Ammi..

Dislhad-Asad you never have to think twice in telling me whats in your heart, I am always here to listen to you to give you support..so please tell me whatever you want to tell me.

Asad-Ammi..Zoya is still me wife, ammi, Zoya never filed for divorce...

Dilshad couldn't believe her ears,

Dilshad-What do you mean Asad...

Asad told her everything, from the fight, to the airport, his letter to her, the passport incident, how she finally told him everything and how he realised that what he had thought to have lost forever was alwayes there for him,a little out of sight, but waiting patiently waiting for him to come an recalim it.

Hearing Asad just brought a wave of happiness in Dilshad's heart, she had tears of joy in her eyes, as she silently thanked Allah for giving back his sons happiness, giving him his love back and making him want to live his life again.

Dilshad-Asad I cant even express how happy I am for you, I thank Allah for bringing back the joy in your life, My son I am so happy, and I wish that you both stay together forever.

Asad-Ammi I cant tell you how much weight has been lifted off my chest, I feel like a new man, and I want to spend the rest of my life with Zoya, making up for lost time.

Dilshad-Asad my blessings are with you and Zoya, I wish you both all the happiness in the world.May Allah always look after you.

After about an hour of talking, Asad finally put the phone down after letting Dilshad know about their move tommorow morning.She was overjoyed at their first step together, wishing them all the best and giving them all her love an support.

It had been the best 24 hours of his life, and as he lay on his bed, reliving the past moments, he couldn't help but smile,his life was finally getting back on track, and he was finally happy. slowly drifting off , in anticipation of tommorow.



Before anything..some SHOUT OUTS are in order..


--starstruck--

..for ur funny and cute and entertaining spams..

U r a ⭐️...n cheers to u👏👏.



Linsie

for ur consistent support..n comments..

U r awesome..n u have been of gr8 support always...👏😃



Now...I guess I wont say much..as I have somethin for u..in the next post..so chk it out..😉


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And here's one more chapter..Hope u like the bonus😃

PS..I didnt edit anything..so please ignore the errors..



CH23

Colour My World!! (yes once again it's a Westlife Song LOL)


Everybody needs affection
Looking for a deep connection
So put a little bit of love in my life today

Everybody needs some shelter
Spend a little time together
Come into my arms, let them tell you what I want to say

Colour my world, draw on my heart
Take a picture of what you think love looks like in your imagination
Write on my soul everything you know
Use every word you've ever heard to colour my world

I've had enough of not believing
Living life without a meaning
I want something real and I feel it when I'm next to you

Let's build a house full of love and devotion
A window to my heart's emotion
Until the very end it's the place I'm gonna keep you in
Baby please just

Colour my world, draw on my heart
Take a picture of what you think love looks like in your imagination
Write on my soul everything you know
Use every word you've ever heard to colour my world

Let's make a world for you and me, yeah
That we're never gonna leave
Won't you do it, won't you colour my world?

Westlife-Colour My World

Asad-What do you think you are doing??Didnt I tell you to go easy with your leg, and here you are dragging you luggage, now move...I'll take care of it..the Bell boy is on his way already.

Zoya made a face and moved out of his way, admiring the bulge of his muscles as he lifted her bags and kept it by the door.It was early in the morning and they were checking out to move to their new home.Only Ayaan was to know where they were living.Not wanting the crew to know that they checked out together, was the only reason why the 2 had chosed to check out at 5 am in the morning.

Once their luggage was taken care of, the 2 made their way to the looby, chekcing out and ready to get to their house.

It was a ride filled with happy anitcipation, they were going to be living together, not sure how that was going to work out, but they were going to be living together.

The stage was set, the luggage waited patiently, unlike Zoya as Asad pulled out the keys and opened the gate, followed by the door. A bright and clean house waited in anticipation of their entry.

The joy on their faces were clearly visible,Asad moving closer to Zoya and lifting her up in her arms..

Asad-May I ?? he asked...Zoya nodding excitedly

Asad stepped in...and they both smiled..

Asad-Welcome Mrs Zoya Asad Khan to your new,old home..

Zoya-Welcome to you to Mr Asad Ahmed Khan to your new,old home..she kissed him on his cheek her arms wrapped around his neck,enjoying being in his arms... I see that you have gotten the house cleaned up, now was that the reason why you took away my keys?? So that you could feed your OCD and confesticate every single dust spec??

Asad-Well what can I say..I like my place to be immaculate. Now will you please care to stand up on your own feet, I have to carry in your bags and I am already tired...girl youre getting fat..I guess I need to build you a diet chart soon...he pretented to stretch his arms as Zoya stood up.

Zoya-Haww...you...I am so gonna get you for this remark...Mr..Akdu Ahmed Khan..I'll show you...now stop grimacing and go grab the luggage,..she ordered...

Asad-As you wish my lady..he bowed down, Zoya's scowl turning into a smile as she walked into to kitchen.

The kistche was stacked with everything she would need, and would have forgotten to get.Damn but Asad had managed to make this house that had been sitting there barren, a warm, livable haven in less than a day.Everything was the way she was used to seeing.Thefurniture, the groceries, everything. She couldn't help but fall in love with Asad all over again for such a perceptive gesture.

Asad-All done maam' Can I get you anything else?? He walked into the kitched, dusting off his hands, heading towards the sink to wash them.

Zoya just stood there and stared at him, Asad looking so at ease and so much in his element, walking around the house making her feel the deep stirring of old emotions. Looking at him reminded her of all the time she had spent in this house, together, fighting, loving, laughing, arguing, making love, making dreams of their tommorows...Every corner of this house was reflective of their love and had its own unique story to share.She looked around just as Asad wiped off his hands, her eyes tearing up at the overwhelming amount of memories in this house.

Asad saw her and he knew what she was thinking, his heart feeling the same, as he made his way towards her and gently turned her around to face him..

Asad- I know was all he said..and Zoya's smile was back...She lifted herself up to reach her lips to his and gave him the sweetest love filled kiss.

Zoya-Thank you...she looked around..

Asad-Thank you ...he just looked in her eyes..

They both knew the reasons for their thank you.Zoya's thank you was for the home Asad had made out of this house, and Asad's thank you was for this house he thought he had lost.

Together they settled in their house, sitting in their balcony, having their breakfast as they saw the sun come up...filling their house with light and colour.

~~

It had been 2 days since Asad and Zoya had officailly moved into their house.Zoya for some unknown reason felt very uncomfrotable around Asad when it came to her personal routine.Back when they were married, they had no barriers between them, Zoya had always been comfortable in her skin, confident in her sexuality. But the same Zoya that walked around the house in her undergarments, enjoying the ardor of her husband, was now feeling all the shades of shy for the first time in her life..and the only way she knew how to feel secure and safe from the overwhelming emotions was covering up herself in more and more clothes..She would sit and think hard trying to understand how suddenly, his closeness was making her nervous,even looking at him made her heart jump, wanting to run to him and run away from him.This feeling was very new to her, even when she first fell in love with him, she had always been very confident about her feelings, not running away from an intimate moment.And here she was completely out her element, confused as hell,not knowing the solution.

On the other hand Asad was being Asad, completely uninhibited and very comfrotable in reversing back to his old self.

His old self being, walking around the house in nothing but his boxers, munching on his guilty pleasure, Jalepeno Chips..and unconcioulsy flaunting his ridiculiosly sculpted body.He enjoyed everything about this arrangement,his desire to see Zoya blush was fulfilled quite often.He sensed her unease, but decied to igrnore it, trying to figure out a solution.

Zoya had made all the attempts to keep him at bay, even when he had made no moves towards her, starting with distributing the queen bed in 2, pillows eating up most of the space.Asad obliged not asking any questions, but somehow her need to distance herself from him was very rapidly starting to bother him.In the 2 days together, Zoya had done everything in contradiction to what she used to when they lived here before.

It was a constant battle between the 2, one fighting for getting close while the other ran away at any initiation towards intimacy.

Having had enough of it Asad finally made his way towards Zoya, who was sitting on the balcony, lost in her lala land...He sat besides her giving her one last chance to be herself.

Asad-Sup...

Zoya literally jumped hearing his voice, shrinking in her hoodie as she felt his proximty.

Her actions just got Asad mad, as he stood up and literally threw her on his shoulder and procedeed to their bed.

Plopping her on the bed he towered over her, blocking her way of escape. He ran his hands through his hair in frustration, not knowing what was going on with her.

Asad-What's going on Zoya why are you acting like you're living with a stranger, I mean come on...I am your husband god Damn it...I don't bite...Just tell me what the hell is going on in that head of yours...he pointed towards her head, Zoya just too stumped to respond.

Asad-ZOYA..

But rather than responding to his questions she just jumped up the bed and hugged him tight, her heartbeats erratic..worrying Asad as he held her.

Asad-Hey whats going on, please tell me..I didn't mean to..

Zoya looked at him...her eyes..utterly confused...

Zoya-Asad I honestly don't know whats going on..I mean..I...she didn't know how to say it right...Asad your presence makes me feel nervous, my heartbeats get frantic, my palms sweating, my breath ..I cant breathe Asad when I see you in your boxers..when you get too close...I just OMG..I cant believe it...Asad I feel shy when you're around...I mean I've never felt shy every with you...For crying out loud we made out the first day we met..I mean where did my boldness go..Asad...I dunno whats going on with me...Zoya's face was red...by the time that she was done with her confession.

Asad was truly amazed by the woman in his arms, she had the art of taking him by surprise.Just when he thought he knew everything about her she surprised him.He had always known Zoya to be this strong confident girl, not afraid of being herself and expressing herself, very confident in her skin, and here in his arms today was the same girl, being so fragile, so delicate, so coy.She was a sight that made him fall in love again, today with another facet of her being.He loved the strong confident side, but seeing her shy demeanor just made her even more endearing...

He smiled, as his hands slowly unzipped her hoodie, his eyes holding her gaze, not allowing her to break the contact...Once the hoodie was off...he leaned down and removed her sweats, only to find her wearing leggings underneath..Asad shook hi head and laughed...Her socks came next, and then her Xlarge teeshirt, covering her actual teeshirt.

Asad-Zoya it 25degree C out here and your were covered up as if you were living in Alaska.

Zoya just looked away still feeling extremely shy, but allowing Asad to move her around as he, discarded one clothing after the other.Finally she was down to her tank top and her running shorts, a sight that relaxed Asad.

Asad-Now that's better...I am used to seeing you like this..so please, no more hiding under unnecassary clothes...you r not completely fat yet...He winked..

Zoya-How dare you...Zoya pounced on Asad only to be grabbed mid air and thrown off to the bed.

Asad was now weighing down on Zoya, her hands frimly clasped in his.

Asad-1st hurdle conquered, now lets work on the next..

Zoya furrowed her eyebrows trying to understand what he meant by then, but before she got a chance to think it through her question was answered, as she felt a sweet burning sensation course through her body.It was Asad's touch, it was his warm lips op hers, that were the cause of the fire within.

Asad, kissed her uapologeticaly, not concerned with her hesitations, His lips were dominating, but he didn't move them, he just toughed her lips and stayed still..his hands, caressing her arms, with featherlite strokes...

Zoya waited in anitcipation for him to end the inertia, but he didn't, she ever so slightly rearranged herself, such that her lips crushed into his a lil more, but still he resited, continuing with his touch, warming her blood, getting her bothered..Zoya wanted more, Zoya wanted him to move, Zoya wanted him to invade her lips, tango with her tongue, touch her to oblivion, but he was leaning on her, barely putting his weight on her torturing her with his closeness but depriving her of the touch.

Zoya was losing her cool. The 30 seconds of his passiveness felt like an eterntiy,leading her to take matters in her own hands.Frustrated by his nonaction Zoya grabbed his face with both her hands and kissed him hard, his hands falling on the side to support himself...She kissed him raw, she kissed him wild, she was domintaing the kiss taking it to a whole new level..Her lips assualted his warmth, her tongue pushing through, finally meeting its mathc , challenging him to play.His restitance made her bold, his apathy made her fierce.Gone was the shyness, gone was the nervousness, this Zoya was savouring her prey, totally incharge of the situation...This carnal kiss lasted until there was no breath in her lungs...until she had exhausted every bit of her frustration.She broke the kiss and opened her eyes, Asad's brown orbs dancing with mischeif.He had conquered the second hurdle and his Zoya was back...He smiled at her, melting her resolve pulling her out of ardent stupor.She closed her eyes and let out a laugh, the knot in her chest finally detangaling as she pulled Asad on her and hugged him tight..

Zoya-You know that you are a mean mean mean man...you and your tricks I don't know what to do with them..she whispered in his ear, biting his earlobe as she hugged him tighter..loving the feeling of being played by your own husband for your own good.

Asad lifted himself on his elbow and brushed off her hair off her face..He just looked at her and smirked his sexy smirk.

Asad-Wahtever it takes to get my Zoya back...As much as I enjoy your blush, and your new bride like akwardness around me, I prefer my fiesty lioness over anything else.So now that we are over this unwanted phase of our lives..please get up my sexy wife, go get dressed up real nice and meet me in 20..I gonna take you out for a pre b'day dinner, followed by some midnite musings of your birthday party tommorow,some chocolate cake cutting at midnite and some pillow talk wen we get home..

Zoya-Hmm and wat about wat u started a moment ago?? Is it right to leave your gal high and dry like this???

Asad- High o for sure...Dry..I highly doubt it...he winked as he stood up...pulling Zoya along with him...and Meri jaan..enjoy the tease...Coz the lion is yet to hunt for his prey...He gave her a chaste kiss and walked out of the room, allwoing her to get ready.

~~

Asad treated Zoya with a lavish dinner by the oceanfront, ordering in her favorite dishes and desserts.Afet dinner they walked about the piers and stood by the dock, enjoying the cool evening breeze. Zoya felt reformed after the events of the evening her passion erupting at constant intervals, making her hungry for more.She greedily eyed her husband, wanting to rip off his blazer and teeshirt and eat him up raw. She couldn't control her emotions, not wanting to hold on..She just wanted to rekindle the intimacy they shared.She wanted to make love to her man, wanted him to possess her, to svaour her, and make her his once again. But instead of making a move and making her his, he stood their lazily and ejoyed the breeze, content with holding her in his arms.She sighed, this moment had its own charm, and allowed her to enjoy the now, the view, her huband and the warmth of their love.

~~

It was 12am offically the 23rd of March.It was Zoya's birthday and she was having the time of her life, as she cut her most favorite Chocolate cake from the Italian baker down the street. Everything was just perfect, she was with her love, under the moonlit sky, welcoming the new year with joy.

Asad fed her the cake and she moaned, making Asad smile..He slowly pulled out a box from his jacket and placed it in her palm..

Asad-Its your birthday present..Its nothing much..but it means a lot to me..

Zoya opened it with eager anticipation..only to find her own wedding band tied together with his..

She picked it up and looked at him..her eyes tearing up with joy..

Zoya-You kept it with you all this time??? You brought it along with you here?? She couldn't believe it..

Asad-Yes..I just couldn't part with it...and even when we fought my heart always wanted to make things work..so today..I want to put this ring back on your finger..and recalim you as mine..and me as yours...Will you allow me???

Zoya nodded her tears blurring her vision...

Zoya-But I will put yours first...

Asad agreed..and Zoya happily slipped the ring in his finger..a plain white gold band.

Asad did the same..and slipped the exact replica of his band but slimmer in her finger and kissed it...Reciting the his vow he made when they got married at the court.

I'll love you ..Simple...its meaning deeper than these 3words..I'll love you no matter what..


So so so...double updates..for all ur awesome readers..for taking the time and commentin...for ur encouraging words..n ur constant support..No doubt I write for myself..but ur words..do mean a lot to me..they r like food for the soul...U have truly made me happy with ur support...thank u so very much...

Another reason for double the update is cos I am not happy with Ch 22..I am a lil iffy bout it..so I thought of moving past it n writing further...I have nothing more to say as of now..as I am OMG exhausted..my eyes r burning n my fingers r cramping up...I'll cya on pg 70 with my next update..so its upon u guys to get me there...so like and comment away..the next update is only 18 pages away..yaar 2 updates pe 18 pages to bante hai naa...😳..well bear with me for being a lil greedy😃


Cheers...


Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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Hey Aashna,

So sorry for being this late in posting my comments. actually all isn't really getting well at my end, so just caught up with everything. I didn't want to post a one liner to such a beautiful update, that would have been unfair, so this delay. I hope you'll understand & not mind.
Chap 21:
A confused Ayaan was so cute. Just loved it how he was getting bothered at not being able to understand the cause of such a drastic change in his Bhaijaan & Zoya just in a single night. Waisey it's not his fault really, it does get hard to believe seeing Asad so carefree & mischievous. Ayaan's response to his hint made me roll. he though they got married without taking him along, aww. then the hug, it was adorable. Asad & his remarks about him being a girl. But I know Asad could feel Ayaan's happiness in his own. the brothers do love each other dearly.
The walk around the golden gate park was so sweet & warm because it reminded them of their past associated with it & this place. Okay now the concert thing is really cool. I never thought Zoe would have been this bold initially. I mean initiating a thing in the open. Gosh Asad does know v well how to corner her get her tongue tied. Aww I just loved how she tried escaping him when she knew he was right & there was no further thing she could say about it. but the best part was the price of freedom, who would want to get free from such a gorgeous looking man. oops so the spot boy saw them together?
Now the action sequence part was really cool. I mean being a girl and doing it so professionally despite it being her first time was marvelous. ooopsie, I felt bad for the spot boy cause he had to face Asad's rage. But he wasn't really in proper state, of course after seeing Zoe hit herself, how could he. Now he decides to hide his relationship but his actions are a clear give away.
Asad was being filmy or Zoe? I mean pagal, she knows he wasn't really happy with the outcome of the scene and still her comments. But I just love it when Asad gives in to her whims. He's such a darling.
Oh goodness it must have been such a beautiful feeling to be at the same place from where you started your journey of love once again, in the same way. I felt sad for Asad, poor thing didn't like the idea of staring at the house. it didn't give him any joy to be standing & remembering their times as he thought they had lost it. But the smile on his face & the sealing kiss when Zoe told him it was theirs, was just too good to explain.
The initial lines that you've quoted here are yours? I just loved them like every other.
Okay see you in next post.
Love..
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago
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Hey Again,
Chap 22:
Aww is their anything more cuter than AsYa 😳. I know they forget the surroundings when they are together. their interaction with Lana was really nice. it was good to see someone else from their past who knew how much in love they were in & still are. I could feel Zoe's hesitance in discussing their past 5 years as she doesn't want to share it with people. but I was glad when Asad said about the time they've been together. It must have been a surprise to Asad as Zoe spoke of moving in. What was she thinking that Asad wouldn't move in with her? Riley is nice. I like it that cause of him Asad still gets bothered due to his proximity with Zoya. OMG he had a crush on her & Asad knew of it, wow. I couldn't stop laughing when Lana mentioned about Zoe's b'day party. Asad really didn't approve of the idea of the party but well he really can't say no to Zoya.
It'll be cool to see them around on sets. Won't the crew staff question or think how people know them?
Hmm so Asad keeps the keys with himself to get a copy of it. Okay I know Zoya is a bit hesitant or shy now after a huge gap of 4 years. but Asad's right too, it's been too long to deprive your husband of some love. She really can't argue with him much once when he decides something. But it's al good.
It's really nice of Asad to apologize to the spot boy for his harsh behavior but he dodged his question, so is all this building up to disclosure of their relationship in front of all?
Asad's emotions while being around Zoya and that too now that he knows, she's still his wife, must be real difficult to hide. After all it does happen at times that you do cross the limits you've set for public spaces despite how much ever you control. I understand all he's doing is to protect his family name & from dragging Zoya in the lime light. He is a superstar after all, everyone would want access to his life's events.
The conversation between Asad & Dilshad was really nice. you could just feel happy vibes emanating from Asad while he mentioned about Zoe being his wife. the man really suffered bad. his anger was justified that he was left without an answer but still he loved her with his entire being all this while, pining for her & sulking for losing her. but now that Allah has been Merciful on him by blessing him with his love, he just can't be happy enough.
I know Dilshad would be relieved & happy indeed for her son & Zoe too. because she really feels guilty of what she did to them. I hope that time comes & goes away without much of a damage when Asad gets to know about the reality behind Zoe's decision.
See you in next post once again.
Love..
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago
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Hellooo,
You know what, you've made me fall in love with this song. I had never heard it before but now that I did, I'm in love with it.
You know I was really lost reading the introduction. I know how it feels when you re-visit the place that has been a witness to some of the most important moments of your life. & here in AsYa's situation, this house was a sole witness of their blossoming love & relationship. I was touched by Asad's gesture of getting the house fixed & ready to live in.
I know anyone would fall in love with the person who took so much care as in getting all the required things & getting them arranged as earlier with no changes. Asad deserves lots of hugs & kisses for this. Their thank you was heart touching. Both had their reasons for it & it was so good to see them finally stepping in their new old home, ready to step into the future together, once again.
Hmm.. so Zoe facing the shy phase now after being so close to him earlier. but I sort of understand but may be I'm wrong. I think earlier she was so bold, confident about her appearance around him as it all was falling in place. she had fallen in love with him, loved his shower of affection on her & enjoyed being close to him but gap of years has just made her insecure. she loves him the same or maybe even more than that, she wants to be near him as well but her inner conflict is causing trouble. she just needs a push to be back to herself & that's exactly what Asad did. I must say he really has been a true gentleman & a loving husband towards her, otherwise no one would care so much about the feelings of the other.
It is extremely sweet of Asad to take her out for her pre b'day celebrations. See now she wants to eat him up. Oh it must have been a heavenly feeling, just standing, staring out at the sea with your love & the warmth of your love.
Now this last part just touched my heart. This is personal favorite. Despite facing all the bad phases in life, the will to rectify the wrong & claim her again, never died from his heart. I seriously was in tears seeing the amount of love Asad holds for Zoe. who would carry the wedding rings around when there was not a slight chance of reconciliation? but he did, his heart made him do so & destiny has really been kind enough to grant him the perfect moment to slip it back into the fingers of the owner of the ring.
Just tooo good. Yaar I seriously can't tell you how happy I was after I read these parts, that too two together. Double Dhamaal plus they were happy ones, all the more good.
Okay I know I'll be taking a lot of your time once you settle to read these. So yeah, see you on page 70, hope that's soon. i'm gonna start spamming the page now. I didn't earlier cox my own spots were res.
Lots of love..
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago

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