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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 134


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Ab apne ghar bhi koi inform karke aata hai? The guy said n Dadimaa rolled her eyes. He is lying, Dadimaa. I had to practically drag him to Delhi with me. You know na how these men are, always busy or rather say pretending to be busy. His wife said.

Hey... I don't fake it, okay?
The small boy-yeah smaller than Jia but way too naughty-came to Jia.Hello!! Jia didn't like him at all because he always made fun of her. She sucked her upper lip n twisted her face away from the other kid. With his small legs he came to stand before her. You didn't frow up even a bit.
It's grow not frow. Jia said. You can't speak?
I speak right.
No wrong.
He pulled her hairs n Jia cried out.
Your boy is irritating my girl. Maan said coming into the room. May be he is taking my revenge. The other guy said. And just like that they grinned n pulled each other in for a hug. I missed you Prem. Maan said patting his back.
I missed you too yaar. They parted and looked each other from head to toe as if assessing for some damage on other one while they weren't together.
I am telling you Dadimaa these men are sappier. We women are falsely defamed.
Yeah right. Both, Maan n Prem, said together sarcastically n then smirked at their coordination.
So howz you coping up with this bozo head, Sana?
Maan, you ass, changed side so soon. Prem complained.
Sana laughed. Aah, don't ask me. They all went to sit while Maan placed Jia on his lap. Daddy, I don't wike him. Jia said hiding her face in Maan's neck. Aarav, Prem and Sana's son, did some slurping-tongue sticking to mock Jia. Prem twisted his ear from behind. Aarav, tumhe kitni baar kaha hai dusro ko pareshan nai karte, specially girls.He twisted Aarav's ear harder n the small guy yelped in pain. Prem, leave him. Sana scolded n pulled the poor kid towards her. Baby papa bahut bure hai. Chalo Jia ko sorry bolo. Wo apki friend hai na.
Sorry Jia. Aarav apologized lowly.
It's otey.
Jayiye Jia Aarav ko apne toys dikhayiye. Dadimaa said.
Jia made a face. However when she looked at Aarav's puppy face n remembered how he had been tortured moments ago by his father, she felt pity n decided to grace him with her company. Chalo. She said springing off Maan's lap. Aarav grinned big, came forward, they held hands n jogged off as bestest of friends. The elders smiled at the instant patch up.
Sorry Maan we couldn't attend your wedding. We both were out of country. I was at my parent's house and Prem- At Prem's very obvious clearing of throat Sana stopped then realized what she had said. Prem n Sana clearly thought that Maan's second marriage had been forced too which was truth since they both knew how much Maan was into Geet and that no other girl could ever take her place in Maan's life.
I... I meant- I didn't want to bring it up. Sana apologized. I am sorry.
With work, family and miles of distance between them, Prem n Maan got busy in their own lives. After Maan's marriage they had talked only once or twice n that time all was not well between Maaneet. Also Maan had broken all links with his old friends, only Prem was one with whom he was in contact. But their friendship wasn't as it earlier used to be. With time Maan had changed, he kept all his miseries, pain n problems to himself. So when they talked on phone Maan didn't speak even once about the marriage n Prem didn't pry either. He didn't want to piss his best friend n lose that last tie with him. Same no-pry' instruction went with Sana.
It's okay. Maan told.
Prem n Sana got surprised when Maan actually smiled, a secretive tint mixed in it. You guys are going to get the shock of your life.
As if on cue Geet descended the stairs. Maan, who is the cutu with Jia, never saw him before.



The guests saw Geet n blinked to make sure they were seeing correct.
Geet. Prem whispered while Sana screamed with her mouth now hanging open. Geet froze on the last step as the two people turned their heads to look at her. They seemed familiar. After two seconds she actually recognized them. Sana had cut her hairs shorter n she looked fuller while Prem appeared too matured.
By the time Geet ended her scrutiny Prem was before her n as she mulled over how to greet him he pulled her down in a bear hug. You are real. He spoke softly. Geet's stiff body loosened n she returned his hug. He was still the same, the feel was same. You want another punch, huh? Maan, who was now standing beside them, reminded of his presence in a firm voice. Prem still in half shocked state beamed n released Geet n just as soon Geet was in Sana's tight arms. Sana, I can't breathe. But Sana was beyond any comprehension, she hugged, jumped n sniffed at same time. I can't believe I am seeing you again. Geet felt her eyes burning. Me too.
Prem leaned towards Maan. She was calling us sappy.
Sana parted n stared at Geet. Suit? That's more unbelievable, you know?
That cutu is our production. Sana exclaimed once they all settled down. Geet switched her gaze between Prem n Sana. When did this happen? You guys got married. I mean... tum logo k beech pyaar ke phool kab kheele? Humme toh kuch pata bhi nai chala.
Pata hota agar tum saath hoti. Prem kind of accused n Geet lowered her gaze. Maan shook his head, confused though understanding Maan, Prem nodded. Sana handled the situation. Tu kitni badal gai hai re? Aur yeh sab kaise hua? Tu thi kaha aur Maan ke saath... tu Maan ki wife hi hai na? Kahi koi filmo wala complicated chakkar toh nai? Geet smiled. Sana's imagination was always wild. Aisa kuch nai hai. Maan hi mere pati hai. Dadimaa ne humari shadi karayi aur Rajendra uncle ne bhi.
Aur nai toh kya sab hume hi karna pada. Inn logo ka ek city me rehte hue bhi kuch nai ho pata. Even after marriage they behaved like strangers n whenever they talked it was to fight only. Wo toh Rohan ne inhe farm house- Dadimaa... Maan interrupted. Haan haan thik hai hum kuch nai bolenge. Making a baby face Dadimaa stood up. Hum nashta leke aate hai.
Mai bhi aati hu.
Nai aap apne dosto se baate kariye hum leke aate.
Buttering your MIL? Meri saas toh ekdum khadoos hai. At Prem's sharp glare, she mouthed a baad me batati hu' to Geet. They talked a bit more before Sana grabbed Geet's hand. Chal hum tere kamre me chalke baat karte hai. Mujhe tujhse bahut saari baate karni hai.
Mujhe bhi usse baat karni hai. Prem objected.
Wo pehle meri friend hai. Sana said.
How come? Mai usse bachpan se jaanta hu.
Phir bhi. Sana pulled Geet towards the stairs.
Sambhal kar, she is pregnant. Maan told anxiously n Sana looked behind, then at Geet giving a knowing smirk. Same here. She said.
Phir se? Maan glanced at Prem. Not bad. Prem raised his collar.
Arre beta nashta toh kar lijiye.
Baad me Dadimaa. Sana shouted.
Where are you guys staying?
I am not telling you.
You should have thought that before only. Why come here to meet me when you had planned to stay in a hotel. Maan said authoritatively.
Who said I came to meet you. I came for Geet.
Yeah yeah. I will ask a servant to get your luggage.
Prem knew it was a lost battle so he didn't argue more. I am so happy for you Maan, that is, if it's not a dream. So how did this miracle happen? That's a long story. I am in no hurry.
Tujhme itna change kaise aa gaya? Tu Madonna se Paro kaise ban gai. Sana asked sitting on the bed, legs crossed ready to gossip it all.
Geet laughed. Tu bilkul bhi nai badli. Toh tu kyu badli? Geet tucked a strand of hair behind ear. Wo chod na. Mujhe apne aur Prem ke bare me batao. Now thinking about it I remember him asking about you once or twice but then I told you were already committed. Wo Alex tha na. Aaah... uss kutte ki baat na kar tu. I caught him kissing a girl in library. Can you believe it? We broke up after that. It happened before you left. I thought I would tell you but didn't get the chance. Geet recollected that Sana was indeed down with something. In her own problems Geet couldn't dig it out. I was really depressed that time n Prem was the one who gave me a shoulder to cry on. Geet smiled. Dreamy na?Absolutely. Sorry, I wasn't there. It's okay. Tere life me toh aur bhi badi problems thi.
Aur baki sab... jab mai gai. Geet asked. She always wanted to know how her friends reacted to her taking-off. If they missed her or if they wanted to forget because she left without informing, ditching them all. She wouldn't blame them if they all hated her. Our group scattered. There became two troops-one who blamed Maan n other who thought it was some misunderstanding. I was one of those who thought it was a misunderstanding when Prem explained me everything with so much belief. And I became closer to Maan as I was with Prem so I saw everything with my own eyes. Armaan n Rids and all thought it was Maan's fault so I kind of drifted apart from them. Yeah, Mahi also thought it was misunderstanding, maybe because she lived around both you guys.
Just after you left there was a fight. Armaan kind of passed comments on Maan quite a number of times n deliberately provoked him. You know how protective Armaan was of you, we all were. One day it got beyond limits n the fight broke out. Both ended up with bruised faces. Seriously, that was hell of a scene. I am glad the year ended fast n Maan always ignored those who taunted him, that was a wise move.
And Meera, you know. She stopped talking all together. Always buried in books. On top of that, she took part in all college seminars n this n that. I agree, she was always robotic n a recluse but that was the limit. It was like we all were her enemies or something, she ignored us all. I think it's because you were her link to everyone else. You balanced her out and when you left she lost that link n became an outsider.
Geet kept her hands on face to hide the tears. She regretted leaving like that so much now. All her friends suffered because of her and Maan n Meera were the worst case.
Sana pulled Geet's hands down. It was immature Geet. We brought it all on us. Don't think the fault was only yours. We could have done things differently but young blood run on its own course. Waise mujhe toh pata hi nai tha tu roti bhi hai. Sana said wiping Geet's tears. By now she had noticed the change in Geet. She wasn't the same Geet, Sana had known years ago. Chal bata tu hum sabko aise hi chod ke kyu chali gai?
Kiya told me that Maan loves n was getting engaged to Shreya.Bitch. Sana cursed. I didn't believe her but then Maan's dad told me his engagement was finalized n I saw Maan n Shreya, selecting a ring. It was all too much. I was heartbroken n acted in haste. Geet told Sana everything that happened later from her wait in London to her knowing that Maan never loved Shreya after her marriage with Maan, an edited version with just the outlines yet sufficient nonetheless.
Oh Geet you went through so much. Sana hugged her friend then cupped her face. But the good thing is that you n Maan are together at this moment happily married n expecting junior Khurana. Tu bhi toh mumma banne wali hai. Sana blushed. Haan, Prem wanted another child. Wo toh chahega hi ab usse thode kuch karna hai. Wahi toh baat hai, moron.
What does he do now?
Animal breeder. A big smile came on Geet's face. Kya hua?
Tujhe pata hai jab hum chote the na toh Prem ke saath hamesha ek rabbit hota tha.
Yes, he loves animal. Kabhi-kabhi toh lagta hai wo apne kutte-billi ko mujhse zayada pyaar karta hai. Geet giggled. Aur tu kya karti hai? Fashion designing re. Tujhe pata hai kapde ke piche-Tu pagal hai. Mujhe pata hai. Teri baki sab se baat hoti hai. Howz is Ami n Ridds doing? Abhi recently toh baat nai hui but last jab baat hui thi Ami se toh he was in Rome. Ami n Ridds got divorced. You serious? Haan. Soon after marriage. They got married in a hurry after college n I guess things didn't turn out that fun for them. Raddima was with someone else after that. Now I don't know. Arre, lemme me tell you about Kiya.
I don't want to hear about her. Geet said with anger and distaste on her face. Nai sun toh. She married thrice, tujhe pata hai? Two died n the last one left her. Sana told merrily n Geet too felt good, without an ounce of regret. She was an alcoholic earlier only after her third husband left her she got into drugs n currently is in some rehab. How you know? Dushmano ki puri khabar rakhti hu mai. Sana joked then told. She tried her hand in designing na so we had some common acquaintances.
Mommy, Aarav ne meri drawing kharaab kar di. Jia came into the room with drawing book in hand n big fat tears in eyes, whole face was red.
Geet took Jia in her arms n tried to pacify her. Meriii... Drawing. She cried sucking her upper lip. Aarav... hates me.
No baby he doesn't. He irritates you because he wants your attention. Jia stopped, staring at her mother bug-eyed.She cocked her head. Tension?




Attention Jia. Wo chahta hai tum uspe dhayan tabhi tumhe pareshan karta hai. Sana told as Geet wiped Jia's face. Geet jab yeh bade ho jayenge na toh hum inki shadi kara denge. Sana whispered n Geet grinned at that. Wow that would be awesome yaar. We would become relatives then. Both of their eyes sparkled with the idiotic plan in mind.
Jia darling aap bade hoke kisse shadi karoge? Sana asked aivayi.
Daddy se. Jia said as if it was most obvious thing in the world. Wo princess ke prince hai na.
Awww... Sana spoke pinching Jia's cheek. Only she is going to be my DIL. I am telling you.
When Aarav came into the room with a smug expression on his baby face, he got a good scolding from Sana. It adults' discretion, Jia n Aarav's patch up happened again n the kids went to Jia's room to play or fight. You spoke of Rajendra uncle. Rajendra uncle as in Meera's dad?
Haan. Meera is in Delhi only. I was with her before marriage.
Of course. Jahan Geet hogi waha Meera bhi hogi n vice-versa.
Aisa nai hai. We have not talked for ages. We... had a fight. And you didn't talk to her after that? Why? Because she has had enough of me. It's better like this. You don't know how much I have troubled her. But- leave it na. Sana nodded getting her cue to not poke more.





Geet entered the room after taking bath. The early sun was warm outside the window n soft, cool air breezed inside. Geet smiled feeling as if over the days a new life had been blown into her. It must be their baby growing rapidly in her cocoon or it could be Maan's love. Maybe the reason was Jia or the new company. There were just so many things that made her happy.
She glanced at Maan who was still asleep. To wake him up she settled on floor beside the bed. Utho... He just moaned n shifted. Januuu uthooo. No response. She shook him a little but he was sleeping like dead.
Maan. Geet cooed lowly caressing his rough cheek. Utho na, dekho deer ho rahi hai. Geet flapped her wet hairs over his face. Her fresh aroma flooded his senses at once. Maan took a slow, deep breath in. She surrounded him in ways impossible, totally flooding him n taking over.
When Maan still didn't wake up she kissed his cheek, then dragged her cold lips down across the column of his throat. Her stomach fluttered. God! She was getting aroused by her sleeping husband, but who cared? Slipping her hand under the duvet she flattened her palm over his bare back tracing the lithe curve of his spine. Maan gritted his teeth as his naughty wife licked the corner of his lips. He forgot to breathe when her hand went lower under the waist band of his boxers to glide over the flesh of his hips. Forgetting his drama he opened his eyes n then closed them again when she raised her head.
Too late. She had seen him. Toh yeh mujhe pagal bana rahe hai. She thought n another idea came to her mind. Uthiye na Maan. She said over-sweetly as Maan continued with his fake sleep meaning to enjoy more. Lagta hai aise nai uthenge mujhe aur bhi kuch karna padega. Maan mentally smirked n danced, what an awesome way to wake up. Geet stood up n climbed over Maan's stomach. All his dreams broke when instead of loving him she started to jump. Utho na Maan. Maaannn. She laughed when he couldn't take much n opened his eyes. You... He glared. Get off me. Arre you woke up? Thoda aur so lete. He tried to push her but she pinned his hands. Never try to fool Geet Khurana, understand? She looked so sexy like that. Maan raised his head to catch her lips but she moved her head away from his reach. Although when he made an adorable baby face she gave in to his demand.
Chodo mujhe. She said once underneath him. Maan was madly kissing her neck n both his hands were on her now half clad breasts. We have to attend two functions today.
That you should have thought before waking me up like that.
Usme meri galti thode thi. You were not getting up. Ab hatiye.Nai. He said sucking her earlobe n pushing his hips against hers. Geet whined, she knew if they went ahead there would be no stopping. Maan, abhi mujhe chodiye. After the function I will do whatever you want.
Maan looked into her eyes then got up. Before leaving for the bathroom, he pointed a finger towards her. Remember your promise. Geet looked down at her tummy. Dekho baby kitna attitude hai inme.
The first function was the official launch party of Geet's company for all business associates n media. This time Geet attended it with almost no nervousness. Her strength, her Maan stood right beside her so what did she had to fear? Next function was at KM in evening for same reason but it was more personal, for just family n friends.
Yeh wali zayada acchi hai. Geet said with a pink hair clip in hand.
Nai Geet yeh zayada acchi hai. Maan said with a white one in hand.
Tum batao kausi acchi hai? They both asked Jia who was ever-so-confused. She stared at both the clips then suckled at her upper lip. Tono.Maan narrowed his eyes. No princess you have to choose one.
Haan, choose one.
Tono laga do. I lub both.
Maaneet looked at each other then smiled tucking the clips in Jia's hairs. Maan picked his princess in arms n they all went downstairs. Everyone in hall turned to witness the most beautiful family. Arre waah Jia you look so pretty. Dadimaa said making Jia beam with delight. This clip is daddy's choice n this is mommy's. She showed enthusiastically.
Dadimaa smiled. Aap bhi bahut pyaari lag rai hai beta. She told Geet who was draped in a beautiful orange-pink saari.




Rohan agreed coming from behind. Yes Dadimaa. Geet you are loo-Shut up. But I didn't say anything. Rohan eyed his cousin irritably.It's better that way. Geet you look hot, gorgeous, super sexy n sensual. Rohan ran away n Maan went behind to catch him, his eyes on fire.




Jia started to go after them. Baby where are you going? Daddy toh help karne. She said n trotted after her daddy barely understanding what this was all about.
Where did these go? Prem asked with a sandwich in hand.
To play tom n jerry.
Sana was there with him. It had been a week since they had arrived and were to leave the next morning. Geet decided she would miss them badly. Together they'd had so much fun. They went out with kids n chatted late nights, playing cards and watching flicks. It was like old times were back. BACK. Everything was back. The 6 years of agony was nothing in comparison of the sea of bliss she was getting. Perhaps it was just a payment she had to get done with. And now no matter what she wouldn't let loose of this happiness that she had with Maan n her friends' n family. Yet, she missed Meera. So damn very much. She had always been an integral part of her life and all of a sudden she was not there.
Geet timely had chats with Karan to check how Meera was doing but that wasn't enough. Although it was necessary. Meera should get a life of her own; she had been living for her bestie's sorry self for so long. Now her life was her own.
Geet. Sana voice broke her thoughts. When Geet looked up at her face she was grinning. Look who has come. Geet turned her head in the direction of Sana's stare n instantly her heart missed a beat. Like she heard her call, Meera was standing at the entrance of the hall looking straight at her. She came. Geet opened her mouth to take a steady breath in n before she knew her legs started to proceed n she was running in no time. Geet knew Meera wouldn't open her arms like some hero but her eyes were welcoming. Just as Geet was about to practically fall over Meera, she raised her palm.
Geet stopped in her tracks, grinning like maniac through tears. You came.
You didn't call me. Not today. Not before.
You didn't call me either.
Her ego is- Meera glared at Karan n he shushed his mouth.
You were there with me in your bad time and just as you found happiness you forgot me.
That's not true. My happiness is incomplete without you. I am incomplete without you, Meera. I... love you.
Then why you didn't come to meet me or at least gave a call to tell that you were expecting. Isn't it important for you to tell me that much of a big thing?
For your own good. For years you have been obsessed with this madness of getting me back to my old self. I didn't want to be a burden on you anymore.
You were never a burden on me. Meera's eyes hardened. And by not coming to me you have hurt me.
Then why did you come? Geet asked taking a step forward. Because you came behind me from Shimla to Delhi. I thought to- Geet finally hugged her n Meera held her friend back. Geet looked so good, healthy, well fed, ecstatic n... content. Maan did what she couldn't. Yes, she had saved him but just the body. Maan brought back Geet's soul.
Her eyes were glossy n from the corner of them, Meera caught the look on Karan's face. Shit, he was going to tease her with this display of emotion for the rest of her life. I love you Meera. I really do. Never do this again then. I want a call from you every day. I will visit you daily if I can. We can live together.
Meera face went back to the neutral expressions that she was famous for.Oh yeah? What is the need of us men then with you? Karan said.Yaar Maan lets go. These two doesn't want us anymore. They can marry each other. At Maan's name Geet peeked up n there he was smiling wide... for her. His eyes were so warm n caring... full of love. No doubt he had called Meera. Her perfect husband. He always knew what she wanted, needed. I am not marrying you Meera. Plan cancel.
Karan will you stop this drama. Meera warned her face cold as ice.
Karan started to sing. Tune jo na kaha mai wo suntan raha, khamakha- Geet cut him off. Wait a sec, marrying... plan???
Yeps, we marrying 18th of next month. Everyone's mouth went slack as Meera told about her marriage as though it was a trip to mall.
And you were scolding me for not telling you about my pregnancy. What is this? Don't overreact, Geet. The marriage is next month. Sooo... Geet asked her eyes big in sherni mode and like Maan, Meera loved it too. How much she had missed it... her. It's a court marriage Geet nothing fancy. A court marriage? Are you mad? What about my dreams? Your dreams? Haan I wanted to do so much. And what about Karan? Geet made a puppy face, she knew how filmy Karan was. How he agreed for a boring court marriage was beyond Geet. He agreed. Meera said. Yeah I traded the grand marriage for a grand SR. Karan grinned while Meera just raised a brow as if she was totally uninterested in that matter. Ooohhh... Geet spoke. Then I will decorate your room. On one condition I will name your child. Geet glanced at Maan. He nodded knowing it was so like Meera to blackmail others. Okay.
Wow. Sana exclaimed. Matlab hum next month phir aayega Delhi. Arre yaar. Prem sulked.
After party ended and the two kids n Dadimaa were asleep upstairs, all friends sat in the living room with drinks in hand, most of them talli including Maan since he knew Geet was there to handle him n Jia, if she woke up in middle of the night.
Bhai am going to sleep. Annie stood up to leave n Arjun followed her lead. Where are you going? Maan asked. Sir, home not where you are thinking. The guy said scared that Maan would somehow again cancel his n Annie's engagement that was fixed after a few months.
Sir? Prem laughed n hiccupped once Annie n Arjun had left.
Because Maan the psycho has scared the shit out of him. Rohan told trying to focus his vision on Shanaya who was half drunk herself.
Whom did you call psycho? Geet giggled. Of course you. Poor Arjun, he practically trembles before you. She raised her hand for a hi-5 which Rohan missed by a long distance. Because Annie is his sister it's obvious he has to tighten the belt. Prem supported his buddy. Tighten the belt? Sana asked taking a sip from her glass. I think you have drunk too much. Maybe, but babes you are there to hold me up na. Meera whistled at that n Karan pulled her in his arms.I was thinking to get married too since it seems to be wedding season. Rohan said n Shanaya stilled. I have planned to propose Shanaya after I will come back from photography exhibit in London. It's a surprise. Shanaya found her devices back n slapped Rohan on the arm. I am also here you fool.
Rohan realized that too n bit his tongue. Maan on other hand laughed so hard his stomach started to ache. Everyone eyed him like mad. I can't wait for you two to get married.
Yeah n I can't wait to go to bed. Am sleepy Maan. Geet told. You are? But I am not. Though I will fulfill your first wish. He nuzzled her neck. Let's go to bed. Everyone hooted from behind as Maan picked Geet up in his arms n started for a random bedroom in the outhouse.Maan we'll fall. She said as Maan stumbled before entering a room. No we won't- His leg stuck some piece of furniture n they both had their asses against the floor. Told you. Dragging herself towards the table Geet switched on the night lamp. Maan on his knees n arms crawled towards her like a second of distance would kill him. He cupped her face in his hands, the dark orbs roaming from her eyes to lips falling on her cleavage. You look so beautiful. His hoarse voice made her skin tingle. I want to sleep n you should too. Geet said about to turn but Maan held her shoulder n picked her up again making her lie on the bed with him.
Geet removed his shirt n pants so he was more comfortable n Maan demanded for her to remove the saari too because otherwise it was unfair. Sighing, she unwrapped her saari so she was just in blouse n skirt. They lay together n but as Geet closed her eyes to sleep his hand crept up her bare stomach. I can't control my hand. His pout was her melting point.Maan you are a cutu when drunk. She said n Maan grinned getting the green signal. He mounted petite body. Lacing his finger with hers, he kissed her thoroughly n moaned as her whole form vibrated under his.Maan... You remember morning I told I will do anything you asked. The scheme is valid for today night only. Geet told innocently trying to take advantage of the situation. It was better to get over with it when he wasn't clear-headed otherwise god knows what he would make her do.
Maan thought n recalled. Yeah something like that had happened for sure. So what he should ask for? He looked down at his toy girl and realized he had it all. Strangely after years of being lost, now, at this point of time there was nothing more that he wanted. Just because, she was with him. I want you to love me forever, okay?
Geet hadn't expected that answer, happy tears filled her eyes. Hamesha.She vowed. He was sooo awesome n all hers.
Geet, pehle jo bhi hua sab bhul jao. Abhi mai tumhare saath hu aur mai tumhe duniya ki saari khushiya dunga. Geet nodded, she didn't doubt it at all. Pakka. Jo chahogi mai dunga. Bas ek baar kehna. Tum ek baar kahogi aur mai sab karunga. She chuckled looking into his eyes thinking he wouldn't remember any of this after waking up.




But still, she knew every word was plain truth. She caressed his perfect body with her hands n kissed his face all over. Kuch aur nai chahiye Maan siwaye aapke.
Mai toh pura ka pura tumhara hi hu jaan.
I know. She kissed his lips. Maan kissed her back with fervor n like that fell asleep. Geet couldn't help smiling at her hubby. She rolled him unto his back. Love you. He sighed in sleep. I love you too. She pecked his forehead tenderly then keeping her head on his chest closed her eyes for a good night sleep. Next morning was going to be bright just like every other that would come after that.



Kisika saath aur pyaar jab aapko mil jaata hai
Toh berang si zindagi ko khubsurat bana jaata hai...
Mujhe bhi mere Maan ka saath mila
Judayiya aayi fir bhi pyaar na kam hua...
Bachpan ki bachkani baato pe hasi aati hai
Aaj bhi Toy girl sun ke halki muskaan chhati hai...
Dosti huyi nahi to jawani ke mod pe bichad gaye
Laga ab dono ke raaste jaise alag-alag ho gaye...
Zindagi ne fir ek do rahe par mila diya
Dosti ke rishte ko fir umid se bhar diya...
Pyaar ka pankh kab dil ko chu gaya pata na chala
Is pyaar mein khushiyo ka apnepan ka ehsaas mila...
Kehte hai pyaar ko sambhal ke jeena chahiye
Vishwas usme gehra khuda se jyada hona chahiye...
Meri ek galti ne is vishwas ko tod diya
Is rishte ka rukh hi fir badal diya...
Uski saza mujhe fir aise mili
ki maut ko gale lagane gayi...
Roshni banke wo fir zindagi me aaya
Nanhi jaan ne uski dheere se mujhe sawara...
Sachai jab dono taraf se saamne aayi
Humesha ke liye hume fir ek kar gayi...
Ek nanhi si jaan humare saath thi
Khushiya leke aur ek pari aane ko thi...
Zindagi ne har mod pe imtihaan liya
Kabhi dard to kabhi judayi ko diya...
Humsafar banke unhone haath tham liya
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek bahana de diya...
Maan-Geet ka MILAN sadiyo tak bana rahega
Sajde me unke har baar ye dil yuhi jhukega...
- the awesome blossom poem by Rituja












Such a long part. Hope this ending was fulfilling for everyone. There won't be an epilogue to this cause I think there is no need for that. Maybe if someday something came into my mind I would give an epi but most probably I wouldn't hence consider it complete.

I actually don'tknow if to be happy or sad. I think m gonna miss Milan badly, like really, really badly since I have been writing it since the very start of my time here as a writer. It's my first fiction n I have been writing it for a longgg time now.
And yet, without you guys it wouldn't have reached its end. For all those who are there with Milan since start, joined or left in mid, started off recently, commented n liked or just read, thanks a lot because even if you only read means you liked it somewhere🤗. Also to the readers who contributed greatly through their comments n awesome feedback. I love you guys. You recognized all characters beautifully just the way I wanted you to. I was particularly scared about Shreya. As a writer I wanted you to see a person the way I see them. With Shreya I didn't want anyone to see her in bad light n not even a single one of you cursed or bashed her after her story ended wen I know how people get outrageous while someone has a part in maaneet separation or tries to seduce Maan. Still you understood her that brought me great joy😃.
All spammers are also expressly thanked.
@Sheen, singh24, payal, shru di, ajenn, lily n many others.
I wrote first 24 parts on first thread n despite that fact I reached 13th thread it all because of you.
All fellow writers thanks for reading n encouraging.
Everyone who has contributed thru their creations-pics, banners, poems. Love you.
@Ajeen, shoba, CutieTeju, sumaiyariya, deepa di, punam, xolfiya, flopsy, ...RIDDHIMA..., desire6
I hail you guys for the mind blowing comments⭐️.
@dipithi
ur comments are real special for me n also your feedback on fb. I m glad thru Milan I got a frnd like you😳.
@Shru di
Can't help thanking you wen I am doing it for everyone n u hav helped in ways that I cannot count. Sooo thanks sooo much, love you loads❤️. And yeah Maan is urs now, officially😉😛
@Neha512 tujhe thanks kahe bina toh mera khana hajam nai hoga😛 since you pushed me into writing.
Sorry If I forgot anyone. It's been two years so I may have forgotten someone but believe me m thankful to all. Shit, m gonna miss Milan😭. You guys miss it too. But don't miss me since I have two other ffs going on (KHUMAARI n Beautifully Flawed) and also would be starting a new one soon, look out for that.
Please guys its last time. Leave your likes n comments for me. Silent readers once please...
Love you tons❤️.









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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 11 years ago
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#17
First of all congrats for completing your first fiction ...
this was defo a big journey of maaneet... and though i know every story ends, i would truly miss milan so much.. and ofcourse the characters in here... loved their characterization.. and this maan would be one of my all time favorite... he is seriously super awesome...❤️
Coming to the update... i absolutely enjoyed this update.. it was a different one for being last part.. and its really one of a kind...
i loved the way you had pulled up the friends from the past... when geet is getting over the past and in for a new start, it would have been incomplete without the friends... and a perfect closure of what happened to all the ones with them in those times..
and it was great to read the happy times in their life.. this was their final destination -- to be together for life bound by love...
and the last part... haayeee.. Maan when drunk is really cutu like Geet said.. i absolutely loved reading the confessions of maan and his sweet antics... and ofcourse i loved the possessive hubby ready to pounce on rohan any time... 😆
Lovely update and muahzz for such an awesome story on maaneet...
and now am sad that i cant write waiting for next... am really gonna miss milan so much...
Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Dont know wat to say.. It was your story but i truly lived with it when i started to read... Though initially i did not comment but than i could not stop myself..

Sometime i thought to tell you tat you are making us wait for updates but tat wait was truly deserving.. and m still trying hard to accept tat MILAN has ended.. This was one of the few stories tat have made me cry after reading Muskaan's Truly Magical and m too much in love with MILAN.

Coming to the update..

wat can i say you have given back the best update with it.. The way you reunited each of them gave the feeling tat truly its a MILAN at the end...

Geet and Maan suffered and there was no limit for it yet they are together with each other..

The way Sana told Geet everything looked like she was waiting to meet Geet and tell her everything... Rohan as usual there to irritate Maan and possessive Daddy and Hubby over protective about his two princess who are his life.

Meera wat can i say you have portrayed her character in such a way tat i feel tat if she was a live person many would have been blessed to have a friend like her. Its hard to find one like Meera.


Maan and Geet came long way to get where they are and truly they deserve it and true tat their MILAN is the best divine and our heads will bow for such MILAN..

I know m wrong to ask for EPILOGUE but i truly wish tat you give one with their love their baby in their life...


I dont have words to appreciate this work of yours as saying a mere Thank You would not do justice but still i would say tat...


OSHEEEN.. i love you for giving such a beautiful story for all of us where we lived each moment of your version of MAANEET...


MILAN ROCKSSS😛
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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milan ended😭 with all the ups and downs that happened between maneet the physical tortures geet suffered and mental torture maan suffered during their separation but all ended with their beautiful milan.

maan made meera to come and meet geet who is the soul and everything to geet when she was in trouble.sana and prem's return in maneet's life added more joy


going to miss milan verymuch.
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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#20
CONGRATS DEAR😊 for new thread
finally everything is at its place😊
geet met her old friends and meera and geet too met after long time
sab ka milan ho gaya😊
thanks dear for giving us such a beautiful story😃

Edited by gurti30 - 11 years ago

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