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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Geet ke dil aur dimag me ladai suru ho gayi hai...dekhte hai kuon jitata hai...!!
Maan ke liye wo apni feelings ko mita dena chahati hai...lekin geet ye nahi janti ...yahi to pyaar hai!!
Pyaar me hi logo kurbani dete hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am sure lot of people will love ur ff. Update in daily updates thread
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Part-108:-
Mansion
Maan is waiting for geet , he is looking again and again to the watch and door, pata nahi aaj itna der kyu horaha hai aaneme?
Male nurse came and gave sponge baath to him. he was wearing dress to maan when he got an emergency call , maan told him , that he will manage and asked him to leave ,and he went.
Maan is trying to wear his shirt , he was now only on his track pant and no shirt all bare upper part with one hand in bandage. He is trying hard to wear it ,but it is difficult.
Suddenly a hand came and hold his shirt stopping his attempt. He looked up "Geet".She took shirt fr. him to help him when she looked at him all bare upper ,...well toned and curvecious abs and chest, biceps. Her heart and mind stop working at once. Generally they [heart and mind]dont agree with each other, fight with each other,.. kal raat bhi wo dono fight against each other, heart always wants him ,...and mind warning her placing all the problems in front of her, but now they both came to be a team as they both want to feel him making her condition more vulnerable and weak taking command on her body, demanding it to feel him. She totally got weak by this team work,... all heart, mind ,and body working together in great co-operation, and without knowing wat she is doing she placed her left hand on his abs slowly moving upwards to his chest feeling lightly in a caraasing manner giving him goosebumps and currents passing thruogh out his body. He felt blessed by her touch. His wish for long he is waiting to have her that near ,he felt he was in heaven in which he never want more than that .
Her state of mind, her turmoil fr. the night,.. more over her want , need for him all taking toll on her demanding his nearness and she kept her head on his chest finding some solace and peace .And she got what she want. All her pain dard ,dukh all vanish fr. her at that very moment. She felt peace and solace. she felt that it is her real place where she belongs to. its hers and only hers.
Maan felt he was on cloud nine,... yes,... he got it,.. his dream,... his dream,... fr. long has now came to real. his want to have her in his arms, to cocoon her, to hug her came ni real and he snacked his arms around her cocooning her, hugging her as if his life lies in her. Tightly hugging her he closed his eyes feeling this feel, cherishing this blissful moment.
Dont know how long they r like that but a shreek call of his ph. brought them fr.their bliss ful world to this bitter world.She opened her eyes slowly trying to part fr. him, he looked at her fearing to see regret in her again like that day[which day? do u remember anything,..remind me]
But thanks to god this time she didnt regrete not a single pinch of it showed on her face. dont know why? she also dont know and dont want to think about it. She took his shirt and helped him to wear , not to trouble his hand much.
Maan sighed in releif as she didnt regret. He now understand her love to him and also understand something is botthering her. Of course who else on the earth would trouble his geet other than his own family. He deffinitely can sence that it must be related to his family especially this pammi and party.
Maan:_ Geet,... thum thik tho hona? kya hua? kuch pareshaani hai kya? kuch hua kya? aur aaj itni der kyu hua?
Geet:- nahi,.. maanji ,. kuch nahi hua,.. mai bilkul thik hu,.. aaj subha mujhe uttneme der hogayi isliye late hua.
Maan sighed,he know she will not tell him , i have to find out it in nsome other way ,i have my own ways, Geet,.. mai jaantha hu tum kuch nahi bathaogi, per kisibhi tarah mujhe jaanna hoga geet mai tumhe isa nahi dekhsaktha, jarur maa ne tumhe kuch kahahoga, mujhe patalagana hoga,aur unhe ruknahoga, mai tumhe kuch nahi honedunga geet.
Geet brings his b.f. maan expands his hand to take it but geet didnt gave it to him and sat near himstarted to feed him
Maan looked Pammi going to store room, that just two rooms away fr. maans room.
Maan:- Geet,... waha store room me pichle do haftheka akbaar pada hoga jara jaake lavona, mujhe kuch bussiness news dekhna hai.
Geet:- ji,.. store room kaha hai?
Maan:-yahi,.. mere kamre se do kamere baad.
Geet :- thik hai,.. and she went to bring them.
Maan followed her slowly picking up himself and limbing on one leg to observe the thing, making sure that she is not observe him
Geet went in side the room without knowing pammi is already there.
Maan stood behind the door and slowly peeped in to it making sure that they could not see him
Geet is searchig for papers pammi saw her.
Pammi:- tum,..? yaha kya karrahe ho?
Geet shocked first for her voice then seeing pammi there.
Geet:- mai,..mai,.. maanji kuch papers maanga tho mai wo lene ayithi.
Pammi looked to the door to confirm nobody is there, Maan moved back to the wall side as he senced it.
Pammi:- thk hai,.. per kaha tak agayi mera kaam? kya tumhe maan se baath hui? wo maangayi vicky ko chudwaane keliye, aur sameerake saath shaadi karnekeliye?
Geet:- nahi,.. maaji,.. maine abhitak baath nahi ki,... maine aapse kahana mai karlungi aapka kaam, pehle maanji ko puri tarah thik hone dijiye baad me mai aapka saari sharat pura karungi.
Pammi:- kitne di lagega tumhe? koun jaantha hai,ki tumhe mujhe tokra nahi denge? kaise mai tum per yakeen karsakthi hu? ,.. dekho geet,... tum accchi tarah yaad rakhna,.. agar tum Maan ko manake meri beta ko chudwaliya,... aur maan ko manake sameera ke saath shaadi karneka manaya tho,... bhul jao tumhari family ko. mai sab ko mardalungi,.. kisiko bhi nahi chodthi,.. samjhe tum?
Geet:- Maaji,... with chock in her throat,.. aap isa kaise karsakthe? meria bachha aapse kya bigada hai? aap kyu unhe marna chahtheho? meri chode aap aapki bete ke saath isa kaisa karsakthe? Maan ji aapko bahut pyaar karthe hai,.. aap ko bahut izzat dethe hai, aap unke saath isa kaisa karsakthe? ye galat ha imaaji,.. bilkul galat karrahe aap.
Pammi:- tum koun hotha hai ki mujhe galat ya sahi sikhaneki. kya mai bevkoof hu ki apni southeli beta koapna manneka?mai acchi tarah jaanthi hu ki , mai bevkoof nahi hu ki meri sag bacche ko chode ke southeli ko apnaneka.maine unke saath natak karke usse apni kabje me band karneki pyaar dikhaya,.. taaki ye saare jyayadad doulat sab ko mera sagi bacche vaaras bansake,... unhe hi ye sab milna chahiye maan ko nahi isliye mai itni saal tak unki shaadi ki baath nahi ki,. kyu ki aga runhe shaadi hue,.. bachhe honge tho merabacche ko kuch nahi milne waali isiliye mai unki shaadi nahi karnachahthi,... per ab unhe shaadi ki jarurat hone lagi,.. ek aurat ka jarurathi mehsoos honelagi,... ye sab tumhari waje se hua,...mera saari kiye per tum ne paani pheka,...isiliye mujhe sameera ko lanapada ,.. wo mera bhai ka beti hai, aur wo wahi karegi,jo maine kaha ,.. isiliye tho mai maan ki shaadi sameera se karna chahthihu. tum sirf itna kar jo mai kaha,.. agar is baath ko tum maan se kaha tho dekhna ussi pal mai tumhare family ko khatm kardunga,.. mera aadmi hamesha aap ki family mems ke peeche hai, mera ek ishara kaafi hai ,wo sab ko khatm kardega.
Geet:-maaji ,.. please aap isamat kijiye,.. ma iaapka kaam karunga aur mai maanji ko kuch bhi nahi kahungi,. please aap meri bacche ko chode dijiye unhe kuch math kariye.
Pammi:- ye sab tum per depend hotha hai, jaldi maan ko manao sameera se shaadi karneka aur vicky ko chudwao nahi tho mai tumhe bhi nahi chodungi.


note:yaar sab log chahthe hai ki kahani thoda age badhao,... isiliye tho maine ek hi step mai maan ko saare sachaayi patachaladiya,.. mera plan tho alag hai aur wo kuch aur parts legi tho maine socha yahi sahihoga jyaada draag karna thik nahi hoga,... so here it is ab age kaise karna,... mujhe bhi pata nahi koi plan bhi nahihai,... socha,... geet trying to convincemaan to marry sameera ... and maan trying make geet confess her love to him yaar koi idea do na badly wanting yaars.


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum part
wow ab maan ko patha chal gayahai pammi ki assaliyath
i am eagerly waiting for next part
wat will be maan s reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago


yaar Anuradha 108 parts nikal gaye hain and u r saying ki sabne jaldi Maan-Geet ko paas laane ko kaha...kisi bhi cheez ko jyada lambe time tak kheenchte rehne se boring ho jaata hai...we are reading this story as Maan-Geet story so it is natural we will love to see them together...aakhir kitne updates tak tum unn dono ko sirf social work karte rehne dena chahti thi...

u know I was loving this update Maan-Geet hug and then Maan listening Pammi's truth but after reading end note my all happiness vanished thinking that u wrote this update just we forced u to write...ok we will now not force u but please tell clearly that whether it is any social-worker story or Maan-Geet love story then it is up to us to decide...

really yaar...we are not telling u to showing them having S*X everytime but what is wrong if we want them to acknowledge their love or have feelings for each other...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan aur geet ka hug...!!! Loved it!!!
Dono ek duje ke mann ko samajne lage hai...ab bas izhaar karna baki hai..!
Ab to maan ne pammi ki baate bhi sun li hai..
Uske samne pammi ka real chahera aa gaya hai aur wo unki bend baja dega!

Tufani rat me maan ne geet ko kiss kiya tha...tabhi usne regret kiya tha..sayad...!


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...how about maan telling about his love for geet to her family members?
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry di for being late

i had exams..but read all the uds on time...
now ofor comments


part 104

loved it ..i just hate maan's family..except annie...
loved the emotions to the core

part 105

that was so gud... geets care and untold love says it all..i hope maan bhi keh de...

part 106 , 107 , 108

awesome amazing ...

loved it

di plzzz do something to make maneet realise and plzzz unko ek saath le ao... i am waiting for that ud since the ff started... and to tell u frankly i loved that tour sooo sooo much...

aise tours aap aur likhna
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the updates
finally maan ko pammi ki sari sachhai pata chal hi gayi
ab dekhte hai maan kya karta hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting update to know maans reaction after knowing truth
update soon

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