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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awesome os...luved the way u described swayam's n sharon's emotions...n a perfect confession by sharon...even liked rey part as a best frnd in this os.

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

amazing OS yaar...loved it...aisey kab hoga show mein????

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Awesome one himi...loved it...

thanks for the pm...

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

aww himu...u never fail to impress me...dont u?😊

firstly let me say the plot was killer...ghosh when i was reading the part where they were supposed to identify the body,i was hell sad...and oh my u just made me grin after that...😊

sharon showing her true feelings and i really liked her confidence when she was trying to comfy herself by saying that "he wont leave me"...though loved the slapping part more...😆

and about the final confession...what shud i say...just heavenly...her dialogues and the impact u made on we readers after reading them was just amazing...

u are a prolific writer...🤗

PS: i know i m very late in commenting this one...but better late than never...😃

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Himi that was sooo goood yaar
Its ma first time that am reading ur work
And i.m so glad i did
And u r telling me u r nt so good writer, i dnt knw why all writer says that
I .love it to bits, so deeply emotional that was.
What an amazingly written OS
U knw just loved sharonz breakdown bit infront of ray wen she hear abt swayam and she loses control
And last bit was just too awesome awesomly ended
Now i officially started reading ur gallery(ur work)
And proud to say that now i have yet another frnd after deep whoz so bloody good
I knew u work wud be fantastic as its quite evident from the kinda person u are
Love u lots keep on writing